《IELTS写作介绍》PPT课件.ppt

XiamenNOSIELTSResearchCenter,1,IELTS写作,XiamenNOSIELTSResearchCenter,2,1.雅思写作概述及评分标准,1.1课程目标1.2课程安排1.3授课理念1.4小作文基本情况1.5大作文基本情况1.6分数计算1.7答题纸1.8书写格式1.9雅思写作评分标准说明1.10语法问题,XiamenNOSIELTSResearchCenter,3,1.1课程目标,1.1.1官方信息来源1.1.2全球三大考区总体情况1.1.3中国大陆考区总体情况,XiamenNOSIELTSResearchCenter,4,1.1.1官方信息来源,/teaching-and-research/test-taker-performanceTesttakerperformance2015,XiamenNOSIELTSResearchCenter,5,1.1.2全球三大考区总体情况,XiamenNOSIELTSResearchCenter,6,1.1.3中国大陆考区总体情况,XiamenNOSIELTSResearchCenter,7,1.2课程安排,雅思写作授课大纲雅思写作基础教材剑桥系列,英国/欧盟英语雅思最低要求:,大本预科5分本科课程5.5或6分研究生课程和研究式课程为6.5或76.5分是研究生的英语资格分,XiamenNOSIELTSResearchCenter,9,1.3授课理念,动脑+动笔没有理解，练习亦是枯燥没有练习，理解亦是空白课堂互动+作业提交,雅思写作:试题结构,20ms/40ms,Part2,Part1,Task1:Thechartshowsstudentexpenditureoverathree-yearperiodintheUnitedKingdom.,Task2:Somepeoplebelievetherangeoftechnologyavailabletoindividualstodayisincreasingthegapbetweenpoorpeopleandrichpeople.Othersthinkitishavinganoppositeeffect。Discussthesepointsofview.Whatisyouropinion?,XiamenNOSIELTSResearchCenter,12,1.4小作文基本情况,1.4.1数据类图表题1.4.1非数据类图表题,XiamenNOSIELTSResearchCenter,13,1.4.1数据类图表题,39/4881%Line5Pie8Bar13Table12Combination1,XiamenNOSIELTSResearchCenter,14,1.4.1非数据类图表题,9/4819%MapDiagramFlow,XiamenNOSIELTSResearchCenter,15,1.5大作文基本情况,1.5.1议论类1.5.2说明类,XiamenNOSIELTSResearchCenter,16,1.5.1议论类,DiscussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinionDotheadvantagesoutweighdisadvantages怎样的观点“正确”？怎样写顺手？,XiamenNOSIELTSResearchCenter,17,1.5.2说明类,Problem+Reasons+Solution,XiamenNOSIELTSResearchCenter,18,1.6分数计算,分数构成,Thatistosay,Overall=40%task1+60%task2,Task1:8Task2:3Overall=3.2+1.8=5,4:6,XiamenNOSIELTSResearchCenter,19,1.7答题纸,12wordsperlineTask113linespage1-2Task220linespage3-4见好就收,XiamenNOSIELTSResearchCenter,20,1.8书写格式,XiamenNOSIELTSResearchCenter,21,XiamenNOSIELTSResearchCenter,22,XiamenNOSIELTSResearchCenter,23,1.9评分标准说明,XiamenNOSIELTSResearchCenter,24,TA:TaskAchievement(任务完成)-1TR:TaskResponse(任务回应)-2,CC:Coherence&Cohesion（内容连贯与篇章衔接）,GRA:GrammaticalRangeandAccuracy（语法范围与精确性),IELTS写作新评分标准：,LR:LexicalResource（词汇资源),语言能力,思维能力,自我定位图示,5分,5分,6分,TF/TA结构,CC内容,LR词汇,GRA语法,7分,6分和7分作文描述,6分和7分作文描述,考官考虑的额外因素,Off-topicUnderlengthNo.ofwordsMemorisedPenaltyIllegible,范文分析,分析考官写的一篇范文（9分），深入了解一下雅思作文的四个评分标准，来了解雅思大作文的题目模式和大概写成什么样子。,Itisimportantforchildrentolearnthedifferencebetweenrightandwrongatanearlyage.Punishmentisnecessarytohelpthemlearnthisdistinction.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagreewiththisopinion?Whatsortofpunishmentshouldparentsandteachersbeallowedtousetoteachgoodbehaviortochildren?,范文,Oneimportantstageinachildsgrowthiscertainlythedevelopmentofaconscience,whichislinkedtotheabilitytotellrightfromwrong.Thisskillcomeswithtimeandgoodparenting,andmyfirmconvictionisthatpunishmentdoesnothavemuchofaroletoplayinthis.ThereforeIhavetodisagreealmostentirelywiththegivenstatement.,LR：这个词是良心，道德观的意思，属于展示词汇量的表达,CC：使用限定词this，增加两个句子的联系,TR：扣题，因为这个题目讨论的是惩罚是否能够帮助年轻人分辨对错,范文,Tosomeextentthequestiondependsontheageofthechild.Topunishaveryyoungchildisbothwrongandfoolish,asaninfantwillnotunderstandwhatishappeningorwhyheorsheisbeingpunished.Oncetheageofreasonisreachedhowever,achildcanberewardedforgoodbehavioranddiscouragedfrombad.Thiskindbutfirmapproachwillachievemorethanharshpunishments,whichmightentailmanynegativeconsequencesunintendedbytheparents.,TR：使用代词指代前面的infant,CC：使用however这个连接词代表不同教育方法的对比,GRA：比较句和定语从句构成复杂句，展示运用复杂语法的能力,范文,Tohelpachildlearnthedifferencebetweenrightandwrong,teachersandparentsshouldfirstlyprovidegoodrolemodelingintheirownbehavior.Afterthat,ifsanctionsareneeded,thepunishmentshouldnotbeofaphysicalnature,asthatmerelysendsthemessagethatitisacceptableforlargerpeopletohitsmallerones-anoutcomewhichmaywellresultinthechildstartingtobullyothers.Norshouldthepunishmentbeinanywaycruel.,TR：段落第一句明确说清楚这段话的观点是“父母可以树立好的榜样”，整段话目的很清晰。,LR：sanction替换前面的punishment，体现了用词的变化,CC：使用代词指代前面的physicalpunishment,GRA：这是一个名词同位语引导一个定语从句,范文,Rather,teachersandparentscanuseavarietyofmethodstodisciplinetheiryoungcharges,suchasdetention,withdrawalofprivileges,andtime-out.Makingthepunishmentfitthecrimeisausefulnotion.Whichwouldseechildrenbeingmadetopickuprubbishtheyhavedropped,cleanupgraffititheyhavedrawn,orapologisetosomeonetheyhavehurt.Inthesewaysresponsibilityisdevelopedinthechild,whichleadstomuchbetterfuturebehaviorthandoespunishment.,CC：连接词，突出本段和上段的punishment进行转折,LR：这是“留堂”的意思，体现用词能力,TR：这里使用很多例子，让观点的论述更加具体,CC：连接词，增加句子的紧凑性,1.10语法的问题,1.Peopleworkinginbigcompanyaresupposedtobeabletousecomputer.在working前加whoarecompany变复数，或ina/thebigcompanycomputer变复数单数可数名词不能单独存在，应该加限定词或者变复数，限定词中主要是冠词,语法的问题,2.Tfoundlymeansdeeplyaffect影响；influence影响二者都是及物动词effect,influence,impact可数名词，影响on对have,exert,bringabout产生，施加，带来,语法的问题,3.Apersonwithbroadandprofoundknowledgecanhasabetterlifethanthepersonwhodoesnot.canhave英语的平行结构theperson可以改成aperson把whodoesnot去掉，改成without,语法的问题,4.Judgmentsmadeinmostofthebookarebelievable.5.Alargeamountofpeoplegoabroadtolearnadvancedknowledge.alargeamountof不能修饰可数名词，应用alargenumberof；learnknowledge不对，学