新目标初三英语写作课课件.ppt

,Writing,Describethepicture,Sheisusedtousingasmart-phonebeforegoingtobedeveryday.,Sheusesasmart-phonebeforegoingtobed.,智能手机,beforegoingtobed,Danger,bebadfor,伤身体,描述图片,Describethepicture,Manypeopleusesmart-phoneswhentheycrossthestreet.,Manypeopleusesmart-phoneswhentheyridebikesdriveacarwalk.,causetrafficaccidents,1.eatwithfamily,eatwithfamily,Describethepicture,Somepeopleusesmart-phoneswhentheyeatwithfamily.,Somepeopleusesmart-phones.Theyeatwithfamily.,Danger,influence,therelationshipwith,Opinions,1.好好利用手机。（makegooduseof）2.面对面的交流胜过网上交流。（face-to-faceconversation）,Structures:InmyopinionIthink/believe,Wedbettermakegooduseofsmart-phones.,Face-to-faceconversationisbetterthanchattingonline.,Wecanusethematpropertimeandpropersituations,Discussion,小组讨论发表你们的观点：,(firstly,secondly,besides,whatsmore,finallyOntheonehand,ontheotherhandnotonlybutalso),（2015，烟台）随着互联网的发展，智能手机（smart-phone）已被广泛使用。我们身边的“低头族(phubber)”随处可见。请根据图中所示，结合表格所提供的信息,以“Refusetobephubbers”写一篇120词左右的短文。,要求：1.短文须包含所有信息，语句通顺、意思连贯,可适当发挥；2.题目与开头已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：1.eatwithfamily2.causetrafficaccidents3.face-to-faceconversation4.makegooduseofRefusetobephubbersWiththedevelopmentoftheInternet,smart-phonesarewidelyusedamongpeople.Phubberscanbeseenhereandthere._,1.认真审题，理清思路。2.列出提纲，初步成形。,本篇文章应分为几段，每段都写什么？应选用哪种时态？第几人称？需要用到哪些句式结构？,（2015，烟台）随着互联网的发展，智能手机（smart-phone）已被广泛使用。我们身边的“低头族(phubber)”随处可见。请根据图中所示，结合表格所提供的信息,以“Refusetobephubbers”写一篇120词左右的短文。,选出每段主题句：,Inmyopinion,weshouldlearntouseoursmart-phonesproperly,andweshouldrefusetobephubbers2.WiththedevelopmentoftheInternet,smart-phonesarewidelyusedamongpeople.3.Beingphubbershassomedisadvantages.,1.现象,2.弊端,3.观点,Whilewriting,Whilewriting,几点建议：,1.注意标点和字母大小写.,2.注意句子的结构正确。,3.注意遣词造句，争取文采。,Refusetobephubbers,Youropinions(1.makegooduseof2.face-to-faceconversation,),现象Phenomenon(1.eatwithfamily2.gettogetherwithfriends3.bebusydoingcrossthestreet）,Disadvantages,Inmyopinion,WeshouldWedbetterIthink/believe,4.therelationshipwith5.causetrafficaccidents6.bebadfor/getinthewayof,Exchangeyourarticlewithyourpartner,thenunderlinethebeautifulsentencesandcirclethemistakes.,Groupwork,1.用最熟悉、最有把握的句型，短语。2.用英语思维来表达。3.语句要通顺，层次要清楚，上下连贯很重要。,Someadviceforyou!,Putdownthephones,givemoretimetoourfamilies.,Homework,A