基础写作之人物介绍.ppt

BasicWriting-,Characterintroduction,JustguessthemanDescribedinthefollowingsentences,Bornonthe18thofJanuary,1979inTaiwan,hewasraisedbyhismotherandwasshyandquietduringhischildhood.Showinginterestinmusic,hebeganlearningtoplaythepianoattheageof3.Whenhisfirstalbumwasreleasedin2000,hegottheworldsattention.Hispopularitysky-rocketed(急速上升),andhehasreceivedmanyawardsforhissongs.HisownuniqueChineseR社会活动家socialactivist【写作要求】使用5个句子表达全部所给的内容，并组织成连贯的短文。,HowdoyoudotheBasicWriting?,Thesuggestedsteps:,1.审题:确定文体、人称和时态,2.整合信息:把所有内容整合成5句,3.翻译句子：考虑语法结构,4.连句成篇,5.检查,费孝通是我国著名的社会学家和社会活动家。请根据下文提示，用英文写一篇短文介绍一下费孝通先生。,参考词汇：社会学家sociologist;社会活动家socialactivist【写作要求】使用5个句子表达全部所给的内容，并组织成连贯的短文。,1.他1910年11月2日生于一个富裕家庭,2005年4月24日因病于北京逝世。(dueto)HewasbornintoarichfamilyonNovember2,1910anddiedduetodiseaseinBeijingonApril24,2005.BornintoarichfamilyonNovember2,1910,hepassedawayduetodiseaseinBeijingonApril24,2005.,2.他大学时先从事于医学学习，但后来却改变主意。Whenhewenttocollege,hefirstchosetoworkonmedicinebutthenchangedhismind.,3.他19301935年于清华大学学习，之后到英国继续深造.(furthereducation)Between1930and1935,hestudiedinTsinghuaUniversityandthenwenttoEnglandforfurthereducation.4.他获得博士学位。Hereceivedhisdoctorsdegree.,5.他一生致力于社会科学(sociology)研究，促使(advance)中国农村经济发展。HedevotedhimselftotheresearchonsociologyandadvancedthedevelopmentofChinasruraleconomy.,BornintoarichfamilyonNovember2,1910,FeiXiaotong,afamousChinesesociologistandsocialactivist,passedawayduetodiseaseinBeijingonApril24,2005.Whengoingtocollege,hefirstchosetostudymedicinebutthenchangedhismind.Between1930and1935,hestudiedinTsinghuaUniversityandthenwenttoEnglandforfurthereducation，wherehereceivedhisdoctorsdegree.After1938,heoncetaughtinTsinghuaUniversityandPekingUniversity.Fei,whostudiedhardallhiswholelife,devotedhimselftotheresearchonsociologyandadvancedthedevelopmentofChinasruraleconomy.,检查(Howtocorrect?),1、是否恰好五句话？、是否每句都含必要信息？、可否自由发挥？、pants纠错原则：1)pattern2)agreement3)number4)tense5)spelling.,期中考试作文参考答案,Ayoungmancalled“BrotherLow-carbon”becameahitontheInternetin2010bysuggestingweuselessenergyinourdailylifesothatwecanhelpreducetheamountofcarbon-dioxidegivenoff.Forexample,healwayspicksupwastepaperonthestreetandusetheblanksidetowritesomething.WhileheiswatchingTV,healwaysturnsdownthebrightnesstoaminimumandturnsoffthelight.Also,hegoestoworkbybikeinsteadofdriving.AsfarasImconcerned,althoughwhatheisdoinghasnohugeeffectonglobalwarming,heatleastcanenjoyahealthylife.,请根据以下信息写一篇介绍霍英东的文章.,牛刀小试:Nowcomesyourturn!,InMay1923,DrHuoYingdongwasbornfromapoorfamilyinHongKong.Attheageoften,hisfatherdied.After1955,hewasengagedinarchitecture,shipping,petroleumandbecameafamouspersonathomeandabroad.Sincethebeginningofthereformandopenpolicy,hehaddonatedover10billiondollarstosponsoreducati