如何写好建议信课件.ppt

Howtowritealetterforadvice,如何算是一篇好文章？覆盖了所有的要点应用了较多的语法结构和词汇有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑，行文连贯，条理清楚。,要点全,词汇,句型（高级）和语法多样化（较复杂）语言地道,连接词,根据下列要求和提示，完成审题谋篇、遣词造句、连句成篇等写作过程。MisswanghasreceivedaletterfromXiaoDong.Heisalsoaskingforsomeadvice.ReadtheletteronPage7inyourtextbookandhelpMissWanganswerit.,第一步：审题,第二人称,一封信,小东在交友过程中遇到了困难，给其建议,说理逻辑性,现在时,Structureforanadviceletter,Para1backgroundandpurposePara2advicePara3properendingAttention:bepolite.,DearBob,Imgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowto(引出主题).However,thesituationiseasytochangeifyoutakemyadvice.Herearesometipsforyou.First,whynot，whichcan.Secondly,italsohelpsto.Ifyoudothis,.Thirdly,itshouldbeagoodideato.Thatway,.(此三句不同的句式提出建议并陈述理由)Ihopeyouwillfindtheseideasuseful.Sincerelyyours,LiHua,适当运用模板,第二步：搜索相关词组或句型,1.词汇：(1).很难与他人交流havetrouble/difficultincommunicatingwithothers(2).感到孤独feellonely(3).采纳下面的建议takethefollowingadvice/suggestions(4).了解他人的兴趣learnabouttheirinterest/hobbies,第二步：搜索相关词组或句型,1.词汇：(5).积极参与beactivetotakepartin/activelytakepartin(6).耐心听他人说话bepatienttolistentoothers(7).随着时间的流逝astimegoesby/withtimegoingby(8).和交朋友makefriendswith,Beforewriting,workwithyourpartnerandthinkaboutsomewaystochangethesituation.,(1).你在信中说，你与别人交流时有困难。Inyourletter,yousaidyouwerenotgoodatcommunicatingwithothers.B.Inyourletter,yousaidyouhaddifficulty/troubleincommunicatingwithothers.C.Inyourletter,yousaiditwashardtocommunicatewithothers.,2.句式练习一句多译,(2).我相信你可以克服的，只要你能遵循一下几点建议。A.Ibelieveyoucanjustovercomeitsolongasyoucanadoptthefollowingadvice.B.Ithinkyoucangetoverit_solongasyoucanfollow/taketheadvice.,2.句式练习一句多译,(3).在班级举行讨论的时候，你要积极参加，并且积极表达自己的观点。Inaclassdiscussion,youdbetteractivelytakepartinitandexpressyourviews/opinionsactively.B.Whentakingpartinaclassdiscussion,youshouldtakepartinitandtellotherswhatyouthinkactively.C.Youshouldparticipateinthediscussionpositivelyandmakeyourvoiceheardactively.,2.句式练习一句多译,(4).这样你就可以结识更多的人。Inthisway,youcanmakefriendswithmorepeople.B.Thenyoucanmakeacquaintancewithmorepeople.,2.句式练习一句多译,(5).必要时给别人以帮助也是个好主意。A.Itwillalsobeagoodideatohelpotherswhennecessary.B.Itisalsoagoodideathatyoucanhelpotherswhennecessary.,2.句式练习一句多译,DearXiaoDong,Inyourletter,yousaidyouarenotgoodatcommunicatingwithothersandoftenfeellonely.Ithinkyoucanjustmakeitsolongasyoucanfollowtheadvicebelow.First,youshouldlearnaboutyourclassmateslikesanddislikes.Second,youshouldtakeanactivepartinthediscussionheldinyourclassandshowyourownopinionactively,andatthesametime,learntolistentootherspatiently.Thenyoucanmakefriendswithmorepeople.Third,itwillbeagoodideatohelpotherswhennecessary.Withtimegoingon,peoplewillknowyoubetterandliketomakefriendswithyouifyoucandotheabove.Ihopeyouw