九年级写作公开课

Howtomakeyourwritingbetter,Howtomakeyourwritingbetter,FreeTalk,Lookatthepicturescarefullyandanswermyquestions.,01,HowmanyChinesefestivalsdidyousee?,02,Whatarethey?,03,Whenarethey?,Letsmatch!,InSeptemberorOctoberInJanuaryorFebruaryonthe5thdayofthefifthlunarmonthonthe15thdayofthefirstlunarmonth,TheSpringFestivalTheDragonBoatFestivalTheLanternFestivalTheMid-AutumnFestival,Whenwetalkaboutafestival,Whatelsecanwewrite?,Beforewriting,zongzi,mooncakes,Thingstoeat,Thingstodo,Thestories,Thestories,Ithinkitsrelaxingtoadmiringthemoon.,Homeisthewarmestplace,Wecanspendtheholidaywithfriends,Icangetluckymoneyandgiftsthen,Ithinkitsinterestingtowatchtheracesthemostimportingthingistogettogetherwithfamilies.,Whydoyoulikeit?,Dividetheparts,Beginning,Body,Ending,Awriting,Beginning:name,date,Body:thingstoeat,activities,story,TheSpringFestival,inJanuaryorFebruary,dumplingszongzisharemooncakeswithrelativesadmirethemoongivebestwishesThisfestivalisinhonorofQuYuan,oneofthegreatestChinesepoets.Itcelebratesthebeginningofnewyear,Ending:feeling/reason,NotonlycanIspendmoretimewithmyfamilies,butIgetmuchluckymoney,MyfavoriteChinesefestivalistheDragonBoatFestival.ItisoneofthemostimportantChinesefestivals._.TheDragonBoatFestivalisinhonorofthepoetQuYuan.Itissaidthat_.Onthatday,familymembersgettogetherandhaveabigmeal.Afterdinner,theyenjoythedeliciousfruitsandzongzi,watchingtheexcitingdragonboatraces.TheoldalwaysteachkidshowtomakezongziandtellthestoryofQuYuan._.IliketheDragonBoatFestival_.,D.hekilledhimselfbyjumpingintoMiLuoriver.,A.Weallagreethatitisthemosttouchingstory.,B.becausenotonlycanIspendtimewithmyfamiliesbutalsoIcanknowaboutChineseculture-thesymbolofChina.,C.Itiscelebratedonthe5thdayofthefifthlunarmonth,C,B,A,D,MyfavoriteChinesefestivalistheDragonBoatFestival.ItisoneofthemostimportantChinesefestivals.Itiscelebratedonthe5thdayofthefifthlunarmonth.Itissaidthat“Eastorwest,homeisthebest.”TheDragonBoatFestivalisinhonorofthepoetQuYuan.Onthatday,familymembersgettogetherandhaveabigmeal.Afterdinner,theyenjoythedeliciousfruitsandzongzi,watchingtheexcitingdragonboatraces.TheoldalwaysteachkidshowtomakezongziandtellthestoryofQuYuanWeallagreethatitisthemosttouchingstory.IliketheDragonBoatFestivalbecausenotonlycanIspendtimewithmyfamiliesbutalsoIcanknowaboutChineseculture-thesymbolofChina.,Body,Ending,Makethesentencesbetter,Istudy.Istudyhard.Istudyhardeveryday.Itrymybesttostudyhardeveryday.ItrymybesttostudyhardeverydaysothatIcangetgoodgrades.,1.Ilikereadingbooks.-Ilikereadingbooks,suchasnovels,shortstories,magazinesandnewspapers.2.Weshouldpracticemore.-Asweallknow,“Useitorloseit”.Soweshouldpracticemore.3.Ioftenjoininmanyactivities.-Ioftenjoininmanyactivitiesinordertocommunicatewithotherstudentsbetter.,Improvement,Howtomakeitperfect,Notonlybutalso;Sothat;evenif;Inmyopinion;asforme;AsfarasIknow,1.Practicemakesperfect.2.Eastwest,homeisthebest.3.Homeiswheretheheartis.,1.Peolestartedthetraditionofadmiringthemoonandsharingmooncakeswiththeirfamilies.2.Behindallthesethingsliesthetruemeaningof.,恰当使用连接词;合理运用名言警句；使用经典例句高级词汇及句型；,MyfavoriteChinesefestivalChinahasmanytraditionalfestivalseveryyear.Asforme,theSpringFestivalismyfavorite.Itfallsonthe1stdayofthe1stlunarmonth.Beforethefestival,myfamilyusuallycleananddecoratethehouse,buynewclothesandputupSpringFestivalcouplets.Wearesobusy.DuringtheFestival,wehavealotofdeliciousfoodeveryday.Amongthem,Ilikethedumplingsmadebymymotherbest.Atnight,Mygrandmatellsmylittlesisterthestoryofmonsternian,fatherandIplaythefirework,“Asthenewyearbegins,letusalsostartanew”.Allofthepeoplemakepromisesforthecomingnewyear.Whatsmore,Icangetluckymoney.ItistheChinesecustomthattheoldwillgivechildrenluckymoneytowishagoodluck.ThatswhyIlikeitmost!,MyfavoriteChinesefestival,写作话题：Festivals,holidaysandcelebrations(节假日活动),MyfavoriteChinesefestival,Writing,主要人称：_主要时态：_,thepresenttense(一般现在时),Thefirstperson(第一人称),Appreciating注意有无语法错误.人称错误.时态错误。,Summary,在西方节日当中，你最喜欢哪一个？请你从中选取你最喜爱的