九年级英语中考复习ppt课件.ppt

Writing ShuitouNo 1MiddleSchool ZhuRufang 1 TheHighSchoolEntranceExam 中考 iscoming 2 goodwaystogetrelaxed 3 discuss Isgoingouting 春游 agoodwaytorelaxforGrade9students Why Ithinkit s not goodforus Because 4 1 getclosetonature enjoythebeautifulnature 2 Openoureyesandincreaseourknowledge 3 begoodforourhealth 1 wastetime affectourstudy 2 feeltired 3 Worryaboutoursafety 5 Recentlyclass4hadadiscussiononifgoingoutingisagoodwayforGrade9studentstogetrelaxed 70 ofthestudentsthinkit sagoodway Theythinkit sagoodchancetogetclosetonatureandenjoythebeautifulnature Goingoutingcannotonlyopenoureyesbutalsofillthemwithmoreknowledge Goingoutingisgoodfortheirhealth 30 ofthemdon tliketheidea Intheiropinion goingoutingisawasteoftime andithasabadeffectontheirstudy Afterall goingoutingwillalsomakeusfeeltired What sworse iftheygoouttoastrangeplace noonecanbesureofthesafetyofeverystudentGoingoutingisofbenefitnotonlytoourhealthbutalsotoourstudy However itshouldbeorganizedwell 6 Recentlyclass4hadadiscussiononifgoingoutingisagoodwayforGrade9studentstogetrelaxed 70 ofthestudentsthinkit sagoodway theythinkit sagoodchancetogetclosetonatureandenjoythebeautifulnature goingoutingcannotonlyopenoureyesbutalsofillthemwithmoreknowledge goingoutingisgoodfortheirhealth 30 ofthemdon tliketheidea Intheiropinion goingoutingisawasteoftime andithasabadeffectontheirstudy Afterall goingoutingwillalsomakeusfeeltired What sworse iftheygoouttoastrangeplace noonecanbesureofthesafetyofeverystudent goingoutingisofbenefitnotonlytoourhealthbutalsotoourstudy However itshouldbeorganizedwell inaword besides first next ontheotherhand First Next Besides Ontheotherhand Inaword Writingskill 使用恰当连接词 能使文章上下衔接自然 紧凑 使文章更为地道 更具 英语味 7 Sometimestodorelaxingthingscanmakeyoufeelbetter 8 Tony Gina 9 Tony Gina 10 Tony Gina so that and than so however but so 11 Thebetterlearningway thebettergradeyou llget 12 TonyandGinaaretwomiddleschoolstudents Theybothworkhardbuttheyhavedifferentlearningways Tonyoftentiredinclass Hehardlylistenstotheteacher hemisslotsofimportantpointsthattheteachermakes Asaresult It stoodifficultforhimtofinishthehomeworkquickly Sohehastostayuplateanddoesn tgetenoughsleep However Ginalistenscarefulandtriestocatchwhattheteachersaysinclass Becauseofthis soshelearnsbetterthanTonyandshegoestobedearly Inmyopinion Ginalearnsbetterinclassandhasmorefreetimetoenjoyherself soIpreferherlearningway 改错 1 Tonyisoftentiredinclass Tonyoftengets feelstiredinclass 2 hemisseslotsofimportantpoints 3 Ginalistenscarefully 4 Becauseofthis shelearnsbetterthanTony 13 Enjoybeautifulwordsandsentences hardly stayuplate but asaresult so and however 1 pointsthattheteacher 定语从句 Writingskill 使用好词好句能使你的文章加分增加文采 14 TonyandGinaaretwomiddleschoolstudents Theybothworkhardbuttheyhavedifferentlearningways Tonyisoftentiredinclass Hehardlylistenstotheteacher hemisseslotsofimportantpointsthattheteachermakes Asaresult It stoodifficultforhimtofinishthehomeworkquickly Sohehastostayuplateanddoesn tgetenoughsleep However Ginalistenscarefullyandtriestocatchwhattheteachersaysinclass Becauseofthis shelearnsbetterthanTonyandshegoestobedearly Inmyopinion Ginalearnsbetterinclassandhasmorefreetimetoenjoyherself soIpreferherlearningway It stoodifficultforhimtofinishthehomeworkquickly triestocatchwhatthe teachersaysinclass misseslotsofimportantpointsthattheteachermakes Shelearnsbetterthan Tony 15 Ourschoollivesarenearlyending Whatdoyouthinkofyourschoollife Whatareimportantthingsinyourschoollife Doyouhaveanydreamsnow Whatarethey 16 17 activities 18 writing 三年的初中学习生活即将结束 在装载你收获的行囊 成长记录袋中应该增添一份你自己满意的答案 请以Myschoollife为题写一篇短文 记下你的校园生活 字数 写作指导 Beforewriting 细读试题 认真审题 19 写作指导 Whilewriting 3 Afterwriting 拟提纲 分好段落 连句成篇 检查全文 注意逻辑和文采 20 Don tgiveup you llbesuccessful 21 Homework 1 根据中考评分标准 四人一组互评作文并订正个自的错误及找出同组作文中好词 好句 记录在作文本 2 再为你的作文另写一段开头和结尾 22 Thankyou 23 附作文评分标准 供参考 第五档 很好 13 15分表达清楚 行文连贯 复合句运用自如正确 有文采 用上全部关键词 语言得体 基本无误或错误很少 第四档 好 10 12分表达基本清楚 行文基本连贯 尚能运用复合句 语言有少量错误 第三档 还好 7 9分只能运用简单句表达 语言有较多错误 但尚能答意 第二档 较差 4 6分能写出几个要点 但语言错误较多 影响了意思表达 第一档 差 0 3分白卷或文不对题 错误百出 不知所云 24 Recentlyclass4hadadiscussiononifgoingoutingisagoodwayforGrade9studentstogetrelaxed 70 ofthestudentsthinkit sagoodway Theythinkit sagoodchancetogetclosetonatureandenjoythebeautifulnature Goingoutingcannotonlyopenoureyesbutalsofillthemwithmoreknowledge Goingoutingisgoodfortheirhealth 30 ofthemdon tliketheidea Intheiropinion goingoutingisawasteoftime andithasabadeff