句子平行结构ppt课件.ppt

ParallelStructure平行结构 Itisimportantforengineerstothinklogically toanalyzecarefully andtomakedecisionsrealistically Ifyouwanttogetasatisfactorygradeinthetrainingprogram youmustbepunctual courteous andconscientious ParallelStructure Itisimportantforengineerstothinklogically toanalyzecarefully andtomakedecisionsrealistically Ifyouwanttogetasatisfactorygradeinthetrainingprogram youmustbepunctual courteous andconscientious ParallelStructure平行结构 Besureitemsareparallel Ordinarily and and but connectsamegrammaticalelements forexample twoormorenouns verbs adjectives phrases orclauses NOTPARALLEL Atcamp wemostenjoyedswimming hiking andhowtoplayvolleyball PARALLEL Atcamp wemostenjoyedswimming hiking andplayingvolleyball NOTPARALLEL OurdogJollyistiny arichbrowncoat andaperky 自信的 得意洋洋的 disposition 性情 PARALLEL OurdogJollyistiny wearsarichbrowncoat andhasaperkydisposition NOTPARALLEL Agooddriverobeysthespeedlimit isalert 警惕的 andshetakesnorisksontheroad PARALLEL Agooddriverobeysthespeedlimit isalert andtakesnorisksontheroad 1 a ThepathtothesummitofMt Taiisrough steep andchallenging b ThepathtothesummitofMt Taiisrough steep anditischallenging 2 a Theidealdogisloyal friendly andisingoodhealth b Theidealdogisloyal friendly andhealthy WritingTip 并列结构中的成分必须结构相同 Pleaserevisethefollowingsentences 1 Thedutiesofthejobincludebaby sitting house cleaning andpreparationofmeals 2 Jamesisamanofgreatcreativityandwhoisconsiderate 3 Janeisyoung enthusiasticandshehastalent SentenceStructureProblems 1 SentenceFragments残缺句2 Run OnSentence接排句3 MisplacedModifiers误置修饰语4 DanglingModifiers悬垂修饰语 句子的基本特点 在语法和逻辑上是一个完整的意义表达单位 有完整的主谓结构 至少有一个主语和谓语 1 Sincethereisalackofinterest Thereisagreatlackofinformation 2 Ilookforwardtoholidays Forexample ThanksgivingandChristmas 3 Havingnomoneyandbeinglonelyinthebigcity 4 Thetablewascoveredwithfreshvegetables Suchaslettuce carrots andspinach 句子的基本特点 在语法和逻辑上是一个完整的意义表达单位 有完整的主谓结构 至少有一个主语和谓语 1 Sincethereisalackofinterest thereisagreatlackofinformation 2 Ilookforwardtoholidays forexample ThanksgivingandChristmas 3 Havingnomoneyandbeinglonelyinthebigcity thewomancommittedsuicide 4 Thetablewascoveredwithfreshvegetablessuchaslettuce carrots andspinach Run OnSentence接排句 没有标点符合 也没有连接词 或者是用逗号连接两个完整的句子 1 Theboysscoredhigherinmathsthegirlsscoredhigherinverbalskills 2 Thegirlsscoredhigherinmath theboysscoredhigherinverbalskills 3 Educationisanelusive 令人困惑的 word itoftenmeansdifferentthingstodifferentpeople 用句号分隔 用分号分隔 用并列连词连接 用连接副词连接 使用从句 Thegirlsscoredhigherinmath Theboysscoredhigherinverbalskills Thegirlsscoredhigherinmath theboysscoredhigherinverbalskills Thegirlsscoredhigherinmath and buttheboysscoredhigherinverbalskills Thegirlsscoredhigherinmath however theboysscoredhigherinverbalskills Thegirlsscoredhigherinmath whiletheboysscoredhigherinverbalskills 用句号分隔 用分号分隔 用并列连词连接 用连接副词连接 使用从句 Educationisanelusiveword Itoftenmeansdifferentthingstodifferentpeople Educationisanelusiveword itoftenmeansdifferentthingstodifferentpeople Educationisanelusiveword foritoftenmeansdifferentthingstodifferentpeople Educationisanelusiveword indeed itoftenmeansdifferentthingstodifferentpeople Educationisanelusivewordwhichoftenmeansdifferentthingstodifferentpeople MisplacedModifiers误置修饰语 Hesoldtheoldcartothemanwithleatherseats MisplacedModifiers误置修饰语 Hesoldtheoldcartothemanwithleatherseats Pleasegivethebooktotheboywithbluecover MisplacedModifiers误置修饰语 Hesoldtheoldcartothemanwithleatherseats Pleasegivethebooktotheboywithbluecover Theideahementionedatfirstsoundedgood MisplacedModifiers误置修饰语 Hesoldtheoldcartothemanwithleatherseats Pleasegivethebooktotheboywithbluecover Theideahementionedatfirstsoundedgood Heonlysuggestedthreerulesforustofollow MisplacedModifiers误置修饰语 Hesoldtheoldcartothemanwithleatherseats Pleasegivethebooktotheboywithbluecover Theideahementionedatfirstsoundedgood Heonlysuggestedthreerulesforustofollow Hesuggestedonlythreerulesforustofollow Heonlysuggestedthem hedidn tinsistonthem DanglingModifiers悬垂修饰语要注意悬垂修饰语要与主语有逻辑关系 Lookingupatthesky thesunwentunderacloud Towritewell goodbooksmustberead Whileclimbingthehill therainbegantofall DanglingModifiers悬垂修饰语要注意悬垂修饰语要与主语有逻辑关系 Lookingupatthesky Isawthesunwentunderacloud Towritewell Imustreadgoodbooks Whileclimbingthehill Ifelttherainbeginningtofall Exercises correctthefollowingsentences 1 Joetriestocallhomeonceaweek Tobeintouchwithhisfamily 2 Ericwaslatetoworkheranalltheway 3 Withouttellinganyone evenhersister Mary goingtothepark meetingherfriends 4 Gettingma