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作文评分标准2分 条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。5分 基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。8分 基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。11分 切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。14分 切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好，基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。字数不足应酌情扣分：Part One 背诵范文1观点类作文对命运的两种看法自己的观点结论：命运掌握在自己的手中 My View on Fate(命运) Different people have different views on fate. Some people think that fate is predestined (注定)and nobody can change it, while others argue that everybody is the master of his fate and he can change it with his own hands. As far as I am concerned, I agree with the latter opinion. For one thing, I firmly believe all men are born equal and nobody is destined(adj. 注定的；命定的；去往的 v. 注定（destine的过去式和过去分词）) to always succeed or fail in his life. For another, if a person is diligent(adj. 勤勉的；用功的，费尽心血的) and determined, he will realize his dream no matter how poor, humble or unlucky he may be. Just think of Nobel, who invented dynamite after countless experiments during which lost his brother and got seriously injured himself.Taking all these factors into consideration, we may safely come to the conclusion that there is no such thing as destined fate in our life. Only if we hold on to our dream can we turn it into reality, just as the saying goes, “ Everybody is the architect of his own fortune.”2利弊类家教的好处家教的坏处结论 Advantages and Disadvantages of Family TutoringRecently more and more people begin to engage family tutors for their children. They argue that family tutoring brings several advantages. First, family tutoring can help weak students to keep up with others in class. Second, the society is developing at a high speed and family tutoring can help the child make preparations for the future competition.Family tutoring also brings many problems. Firstly, students may not welcome family tutoring at all because many of them are already overburdened. Secondly, the quality of the teacher and teaching remains a potential problem, as the main aim of most tutors is to earn money. Finally, the student may depend too much on family tutoring and overlook learning at school.From what has been discussed above, we can see clearly that the disadvantages are more obvious. Teachers and parents should help students improve efficiency both in and out of class experience tells us that the best students need no family tutoring. 3办法类毕业生关注找工作问题找工作的三个解决办法总结How to Get a Job After GraduationThe past decade has witnessed a more and more fierce competition in the job market. Consequently students voice growing concern over how to get a job after graduation. To this problem, in my mind, there are at least the following approaches.First of all, the main approach is to take part in grand recruiting fairs in big cities. The students hands in his resume and waits for the notice of an interview. Secondly, the student can go over the advertisements on newspapers, TV or the Internet to find a satisfactory job. Of course, he should also wait for replay after sending out applications. Finally, going directly to an ideal company is a brave behavior, which sounds pretty rare among the job hunters.Personally, I would like to choose the second method in my own practice. On the one hand, I dont want to have a try at those companies which have not advertised in the mass media. The success rate is so rare that I cannot afford the time and energy. On the other hand, I would not like to go to those crowded recruiting fairs, which often provide only poor-paying posts which are neither challenging nor promising. As long as I am sure of making sufficient preparations and distinguishing myself during interviews, it is out of question for me to get the ideal job which I have been dreaming of.4时政类奥运将在北京召开奥运对中国的巨大影响作为大学生我们能为奥运做什么Beijing Olympics and IThe Olympics Games will be held in Beijing on August 8, 2008. All the Chinese feel very proud of this great event. As the historic sports meeting, Beijing Olympics will not only bring along splendid sport competitions, but also offer golden opportunities for the development of China.To start with, Beijing Olympics will great boost Chinas economic development. According to experts, the Olympic Games will raise our GDP by about 3%, and offer about 10,000 jobs. More importantly, Beijing Olympics will greatly enhance our international influence. During the games, large numbers of tourists will visit China and experience Chinese culture, thus improving the communication between Chinese people and people from all over the world.As college students, we should contribute our share to this historic event. For example, we can carry out Olympic education among citizens, familiarizing them with Olympic spirits and Olympic knowledge.5. 应用类-通知An English speech contest sponsored by the University English Club will be held on May 4th at the university auditorium to memorize the 86th anniversary of the May 4th Movement. Any of full-time student in this university is entitled to take part in the speech. The student interested in the activity is required to submit a draft of his/her speech before April 30th to the Speech Organization Committee Office at Room 1512 of the No.2 Student Dormitory. Please email your speech draft to . For further information please contact us at 99999999.Part Two 结构与模板作文开头部分1. 开门见山The Best Way to Stay HealthyThe best way to stay healthy is to develop a good quality of psychology. 2. 正反表态Advantages/Disadvantages of Advertising on TelevisionNowadays more and more advertisements are seen on TV every day. Some people think that advertising on TV can bring us a lot of benefits, but others hold the different opinions. In my opinion, I am in favor of the former.3. 让步法Will Phones Kill Letter Writing?Nowadays, young people choose to phone each other rather writing letters. Some are worried that letter writing will be useless in the future. Even so, I still maintain that letter writing will never be killed by phones. .4. 提问法Factors Influencing Young AdultsOf the different factors that can have influence on young adults, the family and friends stand out most. Which of the two is more important? My view is that it is friends who have the most important influence on young adults. 常用句型1. When it comes to , some think/believe/hold 2. There is a public debate today that 3. Recently, . has been brought into focus.4. Like a coin has two sides, there is a positive aspect and a negative aspect to 5. Nowadays, it is heatedly discussed topic to many people that .6. . has aroused much public concern in 7. In my opinion/Personally .8. From my point of view, I think .9. My view is that .10. As for myself/For my part, I would like to say .11. As far as I am concerned, I .12. We can assume 作文主体部分段落的展开主题句: 本段要说什么问题; 具体; 简洁扩展句: 说明和支持该主题 表示各种逻辑关系的过渡词连接各个句子1. 列举时常用词语: for example, for instance, such as, like, thus, takeas an example, to illustrate.2. 分类时常用词语：to begin with, first, second, furthermore, besides, in addition, moreover, finally, 3. 因果关系常用语汇: because of, so, owing to, thanks to, thus, as a result of, hence, for this reason, consequently, is caused by, lead to, result in4. 比较常用语汇：at the same time, similar to, accordingly, both, similarly, the same as, in the same way作文结尾部分1. 总结归纳Advantages/Disadvantages of Advertising on TelevisionFrom the above, we can see that TV advertising is beneficial both to manufacturers and consumers because of the information it provides.2. 再次强调Factors Influencing Young AdultsGenerally speaking, in most cases, friends are the most important influence on young adults.3. 提出建议GlobalizationIn order to survive the competition of globalization, we must go along with the historic tide of globalization, and actively cope with the opportunity and challenge that the economic globalization brings.常用句型1. In summary, 2. In short, .3. In brief, .4. To sum up, .5. In conclusion, .6. All in all, .7. On the whole, .8. In a word, .9. From what has been discussed above, we may draw the conclusion that.10. Thus, it can be concluded that.11. Taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that .12. We can conclude from the foregoing reasons and examples that .常见作文模板Nowadays ,there are more and more . It is estimated that Why have there been so many ? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows. The first one is that .Besides,. The third reason is.To sum up ,the main cause of .is due to . .It is high time that something were done upon it. For one thing ,.On the other hand ,. All these measures will certainly.For most of us today, .From above ,we can find that the reasons why .are as follows.The primary reason , I think,is Second, .The third reason is .Therefore, .These days we often hear that .It is common that.For one thing ,.For another,.What is more, .Since ., it is natural that .To solve the problem is not easy at all ,but is worth trying .We should do something such as .to improve the present situation ,and I do believe everything will be better in the future .Different people have different views on _. Some people think that _, while others argue that _. As far as I am concerned, I agree with the _ opinion. Taking all these factors into consideration, we can reach a conclusion that Recently it has become a common phenomenon for .Although it may Personally, I agree with On the one hand, On the other hand, .In a word, .Nowadays, It has become such a serious problem in our society. To put an end to such a serious problem, in my opinion, calls for the efforts from all sides. First of all, . Moreover, . Last, .As long as , we believe we will find a satisfactory solution to the problem!谚语类模板There is a famous saying, which means . Lets take . for an example. .Judging from the examples given above, we can come to a conclusion that .文 - 汉语汉字 编辑词条文，wen，从玄从爻。天地万物的信息产生出来的现象、纹路、轨迹，描绘出了阴阳二气在事物中的运行轨迹和原理。故文即为符。上古之时，符文一体。古者伏羲氏之王天下也，始画八卦，造书契，以代结绳(爻)之政，由是文籍生焉。-尚书序依类象形，故谓之文。其后形声相益，即谓之字。-说文序仓颉造书，形立谓之文，声具谓之字。-古今通论(1) 象形。甲骨文此字象纹理纵横交错形。文是汉字的一个部首。本义:花纹;纹理。(2) 同本义 figure;veins文，英语念为:text、article等，从字面意思上就可以理解为文章、文字，与古今中外的各个文学著作中出现的各种文字字形密不可分。古有甲骨文、金文、小篆等，今有宋体、楷体等，都在这一方面突出了文的重要性。古今中外，人们对于文都有自己不同的认知，从大的方面来讲，它可以用于表示一个民族的文化历史，从小的方面来说它可用于用于表示单独的一个文字，可用于表示一段话，也可用于人物的姓氏。折叠编辑本段基本字义1事物错综所造成的纹理或形象：灿若锦。2.刺画花纹：身。3记录语言的符号：字。盲。以害辞。4用文字记下来以及与之有关的：凭。艺。体。典。苑。献（指有历史价值和参考价值的图书资料）。采（a文辞、文艺方面的才华；b错杂艳丽的色彩）。5人类劳动成果的总结：化。物。6自然界的某些现象：天。水。7旧时指礼节仪式：虚。繁缛节（过多的礼节仪式）。8文华辞采，与“质”、“情”相对：质彬彬。9温和：火。静。雅。10指非军事的：职。治武功（指礼乐教化和军事功绩）。11指以古汉语为基础的书面语：552言。白间杂。12专指社会科学：科。13掩饰：过饰非。14量词，指旧时小铜钱：一不名。15姓。16 皇帝谥号，经纬天地曰文；道德博闻曰文；慈惠爱民曰文；愍民惠礼曰文；赐民爵位曰文；勤学好问曰文；博闻多见曰文；忠信接礼曰文；能定典礼曰文；经邦定誉曰文；敏而好学曰文；施而中礼曰文；修德来远曰文；刚柔相济曰文；修治班制曰文；德美才秀曰文；万邦为宪、帝德运广曰文；坚强不暴曰文；徽柔懿恭曰文；圣谟丕显曰文；化成天下曰文；纯穆不已曰文；克嗣徽音曰文；敬直慈惠曰文；与贤同升曰文；绍修圣绪曰文；声教四讫曰文。如汉文帝。折叠编辑本段字源字形字源演变与字形比较折叠编辑本段详细字义名1右图是“文”字的甲骨文图片，资料来源：徐无闻主编：甲金篆隶大字典，四川辞书出版社。1991年7月第一版。“文”字的甲骨文字绘画的像一个正面的“大人”，寓意“大象有形”、“象形”；特别放大了胸部，并在胸部画了“心”，含义是“外界客体在心里面的整体影像、整体写真、整体素描、整体速写”。许慎说文解字把“文”解释为“错画也”，意思是“对事物形象进行整体素描，笔画交错，相联相络，不可解构”，这与他说的独体为文、合体为字的话的意思是一致的。“说文解字”这个书名就表示了“文”只能“说”，而“字”则可“解”的意思。“文”是客观事物外在形象的速写，是人类进一步了解事物内在性质的基础，所以它是“字”的父母，“字”是“文”的孩子。“文”生“字”举例（以“哲”为例）：先对人手摩画，其文为“手”；又对斧子摩画，其文为“斤”。以手、斤为父母，结合、生子，其子就是“折”（手和斤各代表父母的基因）。这个“折”就是许慎所谓的“字”。“字”从宀从子，“宀”表示“独立的房子”，子在其中，有“自立门户”的意思。故“字”还能与“文”或其他“字”结合，生出新“字”来。在本例，作为字的“折”与作为文的“口”结合，就生出了新的字“哲”。2同本义 figure;veins文，错画也。象交文。今字作纹。东汉许慎说文五章以奉五色。春秋左丘明左传昭公二十五年。注：“青与赤谓之文，赤与白谓之章，白与黑谓之黼，黑与青谓之黻。”美于黼黼文章。荀子非相茵席雕文。韩非子十过织文鸟章，白旆央央。诗小雅六月斑文小鱼。明 刘基诚意伯刘文成公文集3又如：文驾（彩车）；文斑（杂色的斑纹）；文旆（有文彩的旗帜）；文绣（绣有彩色花纹的丝织品；刺花图案）；文织（有彩色花纹的丝织品）；文鳞（鱼鳞形花纹）。4字，文字（“文”，在先秦时期就有文字的意思，“字”，到了秦朝才有此意。分别讲，“文”指独体字；“字”指合体字。笼统地说，都泛指文字。） character饰以篆文。南朝宋范晔后汉书张衡传分文析字。东汉班固汉书刘歆传夫文，止戈为武。左传宣公十二年距洞数百步，有碑仆道，其文漫灭。王安石游褒禅山记文曰“天启壬戌秋日”。明 魏学洢核舟记文曰“初平山尺”。5又如：甲骨文；金文；汉文；英文；文迹（文字所记载的事迹）；文书爻（有关文字、文凭之类的卦象）；文异（文字相异）；文轨（文字和车轨）；文狱（文字狱）；文钱（钱。因钱有文字，故称）；文状（字据，军令状）；文引（通行证；路凭）；文定（定婚）。6文章（遣造的词句叫做“文”，结构段落叫做 “章”。） literary composition故说诗者不以文害辞。孟子万章上好古文。唐 韩愈师说属予作文以记之。宋 范仲淹岳阳楼记能述以文。宋 欧阳修醉翁亭记摘其诗文。清 纪昀阅微草堂笔记7又如：文价（文章的声誉）；文魔（书呆子）；文会（旧时读书人为了准备应试，在一起写文章、互相观摩的集会）；文移（旧时官府文书的代称）；文雄（擅长写文章的大作家）；文意（文章的旨趣）；文义（文章的义理）；文情（文章的词句和情思）；本文（所指的这篇文章）；作文（写文章；学习练习所写的文章）；文魁（文章魁首）；文价（文章的声价）；文什（文章与诗篇）。8美德；文德 virtue圣云继之神，神乃用文治。杜牧感怀诗一首9又如：文丈（对才高德韶的老者的敬称）；文母（文德之母）；文武（文德与武功）；文命（文德教命）；文惠（文德恩惠）；文德（写文章的道德）；文薄（谓文德浅薄）；文昭（文德昭著）。10.文才；才华。亦谓有文才，有才华 literary talent而文采不表于后世也。汉 司马迁报任安书11又如：文业（才学）；文英（文才出众的人）；文采风流（横溢的才华与潇洒的风度）；文郎（有才华的青少年）；文彦（有文才德行的人）；文通残锦（比喻剩下不多的才华）。12文献，经典；韵文 document;classics;verse儒以文乱法。韩非子五蠹言必遵修旧文而不穿凿。说文解字叙13辞词句。亦指文字记载 writings;record。如：文几（旧时书信中开头常用的套语。意为将书信呈献于几前）；文倒（文句颠倒）；文过其实（文辞浮夸，不切实际）；文义（文辞）；文辞（言词动听的辞令）；文绣（辞藻华丽）。14自然界的某些现象 natural phenomenon经纬天地曰文。左传昭公二十八年15又如：天文；地文；水文；文象（日月星辰变化的迹象）；文曜（指日月星辰；文星）；文昌（星座名）。16文治；文事；文职。与“武”相对。 achievements in culture and educa