2019中考英语二轮复习作文优享题（三）.docx

2019中考英语作文优享题（三）A2009年3月至今，北京八达岭野生动物园发生了多起游客违反入园规则而导致的人员伤亡事件，这些悲剧发人深省。俗话说“没有规矩，不成方圆”，作为中学生，我们应该遵守哪些规则，请结合下图和要点提示，写一篇英语短文。要点提示：1.遵守交通规则；2不插队；3遵守入园规则；4补充两点其他的规则。要求：1.文中必须包含所有提示要点，可适当发挥使行文连贯；2条理清晰，字迹工整，词数不少于80；3文中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息。提示词汇：jump the queue(插队)；fence(围栏)Were living in a harmonious society but sometimes we can see some bad behaviors around us.As teenagers，we should follow these rules.Firstly，we must obey the traffic rules whenever were in the street.Secondly，we shouldnt jump the queue if were in public places.Next，we need to follow the zoo rules because its safe to do so.Then，we mustnt spit or throw rubbish here and there.Lastly，we ought to say no to smoking and fighting that arent allowed at school.In a word，as long as we pay attention to those rules，we can live happily. B下面是21世纪报中学生版（21st Century School Edition）刊登的一封读者来信，请你以编辑的身份给这位中学生写封回信。Dear editor,I have a big problem now. You see, I am a little shy. Sometimes I really dont know whom I should ask for help when I am in trouble. I am always afraid that I will disturb them. What should I do? Can you give me some advice? Yours, Lucy 注意：1、回信的内容要包括以下要点： (1) 首先要学会与人交流，多交朋友；(2）可以求助于同学和朋友，因为年龄相仿，容易相互理解；(3）可以求助于老师和家长，因为他们充满爱心，有丰富的经验。2、为了使文章连贯，可适当增加内容。3、词数75左右。信的开头与结尾已写好，不计入总词数。Dear Lucy,What you said is common with some middle school students. Here is my advice._ _ _.Hope you can get out of your trouble soon. Yours, Peter 【参考范文】B. One possible versionDear Lucy, What you said is common with some middle school students. Here is my advice.First, you should learn how to communicate with others and make as many friends as possible. Then when you are in trouble, you can ask your classmates or friends for help because theyre the same age as you and you can understand each other easily. Besides, you can also tell your teachers or parents about your trouble and ask for their help. You see, they are full of love and have rich experience. Im sure, theyll help you a lot Hope you can get out of your trouble soon. Yours, Peter C请根据杂志KIDVOICE的内容，以KidsandLearning为题，用英语写一篇短文，发表你的看法KIDSHAVEANOPINIONTOO!Hi!ImSigmundFriend，theeditor（编辑）ofanewmagazineKIDVOICEWelikehearingfromkidsWeknowyouvegotthingstosayWewanttohearfromyouHereisatopicyoumighthaveanopinionabout注意：1对所有要点逐一陈述，适当发挥2词数80左右，文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数3文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等KidsandLearningAllkidswanttobegoodatlearning【参考范文】KidsandLearning AllkidswanttobegoodatlearningSome children are good at learning，but some children are good at playing，and they are not good at learning，why？This is because some children know how to balance learning and studying阐述观点 First，just as the saying goesAll work and no play makes Jack a dull boy，谚语开头，易得高分a good learner should know to play properly，if he or she plays happily，he will try to learning wellBesides，all learning decrease the interest of studySecond，students should make a proper time list，and try to follow the listLast，parents and teachers should give tips to the students so that students can have a good knowledge of the study观点层层递进All in all，only when we balance the relation between playing and learning，can we be good at learning高分句型【解析】这是一篇图画作文，让我们写一篇关于kids and learning的作文，这需要我们根据提示信息，并发挥我们的思维力和创造力，对这些内容逐一陈述有题目可知，写这篇作文应用第三人称，时态为一般现在时内容包括：第一部分阐述观点，孩子是否擅长学习；第二部分，孩子应如何处理好学习与玩之间的关系 重要的短语和句型： be good at擅长 just as a saying goes正如谚语所说 have a good knowledge of对有个很好的了解 All in all，only when we balance the relation between playing and learning，can we be good at learning总之，只有处理好了学习与玩耍的关系才能学习好 only whencan we只有当我们才会倒装句型 Just as the saying goesAll work and no play makes Jack a dull boy，只学习不玩耍，聪明孩子也变傻 just as 正如；适当引用谚语会得高分写图画作文时，我们最好不要遗漏图画所给的重要信息，注意不要生搬硬套，注意语句的连贯与衔接行文要注意简化，不要抱沓冗长，最好能够写短的简单句，这样比较能够得分，同时注意写作文时使用一定的连接词，比如，whats more last but not the least等等写作文完成时要注意检查修改，以避免遗漏，如果有条件的话，最好能够先打个草稿，再抄到答题纸上，这样更容易得高分最后，注意去使用一些句型和短语，使整篇短文意思连贯流畅，方能成就一篇好作文D学校英语社团在举办英语征文比赛。请你根据下表所列的内容要点，用英语以“Learn to smile”为题写一篇短文，参加比赛。学会对自己微笑: e$ J5 c( Y* R/ J W& d生活中会有不愉快的事，如考试不及格（请再举一个例子）；使你自信；击败你的人有时是你自己。* W B4 i# O2 D& F9 f: G1 f4 A$ j学会对他人微笑1 U% C8 H8 # I使人与人更亲近* * c$ j2 h3 S( h4 E微笑是一种语言/ P; T# f4 e$ L+ Y6 F1 I人人都能懂9 U- L, / i1 V$ 2 K注意：-词数80左右。短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；参考词汇：自信-confidence (n.), confident (adj.); 打败-beat (beat, beaten) (v.); 短文须包括所有内容要点，不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。Learn to smileSmile is an attitude (态度) to life._ _ _ _ _【参考范文】Learn to smileSmile is an attitude to life. In our life, there may be something unpleasant. For example, you fail in an exam; or another time, you are misunderstood by your friends. These unpleasant things may make you feel bad. Then what will you do? Why not learn to smile? Smiling to yourself can bring back your confidence. Sometimes, the greatest enemy is yourself; thats to say, sometimes, you are beaten by yourself. We should also learn to smile to others. It will help us to get closer to others. So, smile is the most widely understood language.E目前，我国实施城市化进程中，给从乡村（镇）迁入城市的大多数孩子带来诸多的问题，特别在交朋友方面尤为突出。假如你是Know，你的朋友Tony 发电子邮件请教你关于如何交朋友的问题，请你给他回复一封电子邮件提几点建议，词数约80左右。内容包括如下：1、 在小区内玩耍时，你可以主动与他们交流成为新朋友，并告知家长；2、 请求父母带你去图书馆或一些公共场所，既可认识更多伙伴又可参加文体活动；3、 在星期天，可外出郊游等。总之，多参加交流活动，克服困难，保持耐心。要求：1、涵盖所有要点，意思连贯，符合逻辑。 2、卷面整洁、书写规范工整。不得逐字翻译。(可能用到的词：First, Second, Third，In conclusion) Dear Know,I need some advice on how to make friends! I have just moved to a new city. I am 13. I dont know anybody here and I want to make some friends. Whats the best way? Where can I meet people? Yours, TonyDear Tony,There are lots of things you can do._ It takes time and patience(耐心). I hope you will find a best friend soon!Yours,【参考范文】One possible version:Dear Tony,There are lots of things you can do. First, you can ride your bike in your neighbourhood and try to find some kids. When you find some, you can go up and talk to them. You should also let your parents know that you want to make friends because they can help you. Second, you can ask your parents to take you to the library or some（public） places where there are lots of kids. You could try joining an art class or a sports club. These are all great ways to meet people. Third, you can try making friends in it if you go outing to take part in activities on Sundays.（you can try making friends at churches(教堂) too if you go to church on Sundays.）In conclusion(Whats mre),try to be active wherever you are, but just be yourself and dont try so hard. It takes time and patience(耐心). I hop you will find a best friend soon! Yours,F（购物）随着互联网的发展，网购在人们的日常生活中也越来越普遍。但是有一些店家不够诚信，不少人因此上当受骗。请你就网购的利弊写一篇短文。内容包括：优点：1.方便的(convenient); 2.全天不打烊，24小时营业； 3.不用出门。缺点：1.看不到实际商品，容易上当受骗； 2.不能试穿； 3.不能享受和家人或朋友一起购物的乐趣。作文要求：1. 不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。2. 语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。Shopping online is quite popular in our daily life now._【参考范文】书面表达Shopping online is quite popular in our daily life now. Shopping on the Internet has a lot of advantages. First, it is convenient. People dont have to waste a lot of their time to choose the things they want to buy. Second，the shops on the Internet are open all the time. You dont need to worry about the time. All you need to do is to sit in front of the computer and click the mouse. However, shopping online also has its disadvantages. The first disadvantage is that the consumers cant see the goods or try them on personally. Sometimes, the real goods may not be the same as what they have seen on the computer. You may be cheated by the pictures on the Internet. The second disadvantage is that you will lose the fun of shopping with your family or friends. In a word, we should not be addicted to shopping on the Internet