2020版高考英语二轮复习35分写作规范练（八）.docx

35分写作规范练(八)写作(共两节，满分35分)第一节短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。2019湖南岳阳市质检二One day, my little brother bought an ice cream in the street, enjoying to eating it. Unexpected, he saw his friend coming toward him, so he hurriedly hid the ice creams behind him. After he greeted his friend, they begin to talk. His friend had the dog with him. When he stopped to talk with his brother, his dog moved around. The dog was such glad to find the ice cream in my brothers hand and it began to eat it with greater pleasure. My brother felt embarrassed that he hadnt shared the ice cream for his friend, he gave the ice cream to the dog. Then he bought another two for his friend and himself.答案与解析：One day, my little brother bought an ice cream in the street, enjoying eating it. , he saw his friend coming toward him, so he hurriedly hid the ice behind him. After he greeted his friend, they to talk. His friend had dog with him. When he stopped to talk with brother, his dog moved around. The dog was glad to find the ice cream in my brothers hand and it began to eat it with pleasure. My brother felt embarrassed that he hadnt shared the ice cream his friend, he gave the ice cream to the dog. Then he bought another two for his friend and himself.删除toenjoy为及物动词，其后直接接宾语，enjoy doing sth.为固定搭配，意为“喜欢做某事；享受做某事”，此处to多余，故删除to。Unexpected改为Unexpectedly此处在句中作状语，修饰整个句子，应用副词，故将Unexpected改为Unexpectedly。注意首字母大写。creams改为cream根据语境可知，此处特指刚才买的那一个冰激凌，应用单数形式，故将creams改为cream。begin改为began根据本句的时间状语After he greeted his friend可知，此处表示发生在过去的动作，应用一般过去时，故将begin改为began。the改为a根据语境可知，朋友身边带着一条狗，此处是第一次提及，应用不定冠词修饰，且dog的发音以辅音音素开头，故将the改为a。his改为my根据上文中的my little brother可知，此处指“我的”弟弟，故将his改为my。such改为so此处glad为形容词，应该用副词来修饰，而such修饰名词，so为副词，修饰形容词，故将such改为so。greater改为great根据上下文可知，此处无比较意义，应用形容词原级，故将greater改为great。for改为withshare sth. with sb.为固定搭配，意为“与某人分享某物”，故将for改为with。在he前加so/andMy brother felt embarrassed that he hadnt shared the ice cream.和he gave the ice cream to the dog都是完整的句子，两个句子之间缺少连词；根据语境可知，弟弟因为没有与他的朋友分享冰激凌而感到很尴尬，所以/然后他把那个冰激凌给了朋友的狗。此处前后分句之间为因果关系或顺承关系，故在he 前加so/and。第二节书面表达(满分25分)2019大连一模假定你是李华，五月份要去美国参加“国际文化周”，你的美国笔友Tom来信询问你赴美相关事宜。请你给他写一封回信，内容包括：1活动时间、地点；2活动目的、内容；3其他个人安排。注意：1词数100左右；2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：International Culture Week国际文化周参考范文：Dear Tom，Im glad to receive your letter. To tell the truth, Im going to America to take part in the International Culture Week, which is scheduled to be held in New York this May. Aiming to promote cultural exchange among different countries, the committee of International Culture Week has planned plenty of exciting activities, such as various exhibitions, academic lectures and music shows.I would like to have some city sightseeing with