英语记叙文的写作ppt课件.ppt

记叙文 记叙文用于记叙过去发生的事件或经历 以写人 叙事为主要内容 它可以包括历史 游记 报道 回忆 故事 琐事等 这样的文章也要有中心 一般从第一或第三人称角度出发 表达自己或他人的经历或感受 使读者对事情十分明了以获得强烈感受 记叙文通常以一般过去时为主 根据上下文用各种时态 1 记叙文写作的注意事项 一 交代背景文章的开头应概括地介绍事件发生的时间 地点 人物以及事件等二 详略得当过多不必要的细节会冲淡文章的主题 因此 在细节的选择上应注意选择与主题密切相关的内容 从而点明文章中心 三 条理清晰记叙文一般按照时间顺序或空间顺序来描述 要求层次清晰 条理清楚 2 例文 Atrafficaccident 首段 首段概括交代事件发生的时间 地点 人物等信息Aweekago Iwitnessedatrafficaccidentinarainydayonmywaytoschool whichstillsticksinmymind 3 例文 Atrafficaccident 中心段 交待细节 注重在how 交待细节时应注意的事项 过多不必要的细节会冲淡文章的主题 4 中心段细节描写练习 请找出下文与主题无关的细节AnaccidentThisafternoonIwentoutinthecountrytoseemygrandparents AfterIgotoutthereIdecidedtotakeashortdrive IdrovedowntoEastGreenwich whichisabouteightmilesfromCentreville WhilecominghomeIwasobligedtofollowtherailroadforamileortwo WhenIhadgoneabouthalfamileIheardaterriblewhistlingaheadofme Oncomingneartowherethesoundcamefrom Idiscoveredthatanexpresstrainhadrunintotherearendofafreighttrain Fortunatelynoonewasseriouslyhurt althoughIheardonmansaythathenevergotshakenupsobadlyinhislifebefore Theengineoftheexpresstrainwassomewhatdisabled asthecow catcherwasbrokenandthehead lightandthesmoke stackwereknockedoff Nooneseemedtoknowthecauseoftheaccident 5 例文 Atrafficaccident 中心段 交待细节 注重在how 交待细节时应注意的事项 过多不必要的细节会冲淡文章的主题 因此 在细节的选择上应注意选择与主题密切相关的内容 从而点明文章中心 从首段也可看出文章重点在trafficaccident和stickinmymind 6 例文 Atrafficaccident中心段赏析 Itwasabout7 00onFridaymorning Oct 31st 补充说明时间 IwaswalkingthroughthepedestrianoverpassnearmyschoolwhenIwasshockedbythescreechofacar 事情的起因 Isawamanknockeddownbyablackcar Soonmanycarswerejammedthere IgotthereandfoundthatbesideablackBenzlayamiddle agedmaninapoolofblood 交代一些细节 Thestreetturnedchaotic 事情的大致经过 Afteramoment thepoliceandanambulancearrived Thevictimwasinstantlysenttothehospital 事情的结果 注意空间的移动 Igotthere 7 例文 Atrafficaccident结尾段赏析 结尾段 可适当发表一点议论Inmyopinion thepedestrianshouldhavetakentheoverpasswhencrossingthestreet Besides thedrivermighthavedriventoofast regardlessofsuchbadweather Anyway Ibelieveaccidentsmaybeavoidedifwebecomeawareoftheimportanceofsafety 结尾 8 记叙文常用句式 首段 交代主题 ItwasthemostexcitingmomentthatIhaveeverexperienced Allthroughmyseniorhighschool Icouldn tforget Intheyearsthatfollowedtheeventfrequentlyfloatedinmymind oftenrecurredtomymemory kepthauntingme Lastweek whenIwasonmywayhomesomethingterriblehappened Iquicklyturnedaround justintimetoseethewholeprocessoftheaccident 9 记叙文常用句式 首段 交代主题 补充交代时间Theeventtookplace happened occurredintheearlymorning Thewholestoryhappenedthe first dayIenteredtheseniorhighschool 10 记叙文常用句式 主体部分 一 作者心理活动的描写Icouldhardlybelievemyeyes IfeltasifIwereontopoftheworld Iwascompletelyshocked Iwasburstingwithjoy 11 记叙文常用句式 主体部分 二 人物外貌和性格的描写Heisofmediumheight Heisgood looking ordinary looking Sheisplump slim withfairskinandcurlyhair Helookshandsomeinasportssuit bluejeans Heisofmild badtemper Atfirstglance youwouldsayheistheperfectimageofanobedientboy butdeepdown heisnotthatwayatall 12 记叙文常用句式 主体部分 三 物体的描写Itcomesinavarietyofcolors shapes Itconsistsofseveralintegratedparts Itisshapedlikeacircle Itisflatinshapeandsmallinsize Attachedtothebottomis 13 记叙文常用句式 主体部分 四 景物的描写Thereisawonderfularrayofflowersalongthestreet Theairisfilledwiththescentofroses Thetreesstoodthereonguardforgenerations withbranchesreachingoutlikeacanopyovertheroad Ifeelmiserablyinsignificantapproachingthemountain Evenjudgingbymodernstandards thetownwaslargeinpopulation Thecampushasauniqueatmosphere 14 练习一 TheDayMyClassmateFellIll 简单描述这位同学的生病情况 同学 老师和我是如何帮助他 她的 人与人之间的这种互相关爱给我的感受是 15 词汇拓展 扭伤twistone sankle giveawrenchtoone sankle sprainone sankleone ssprainedankle喉咙疼痛haveasorethroat痛苦的表情anexpressionofpainHerfacewascontortedwithpain 她痛得脸都变了样 量体温takeone stemperature轮流照顾某人takecareofsb byturns taketurnsatcaringsb 发高烧have runahighfever健康状况health condition请假askfora sick leave askforafour dayleave beonsickleave 16 范文一 Lastyear aterriblefluspreadacrossthewholeschool Oneofmyclassmate John JaneDoe becameavictimofit He Sheranahighfever andordinarymedicinedidn tworkonhim Thenewsquicklyreachedeverybodyinourclass SomeclassmatesrecordedtheEnglishlessonsforhimsothathe shecouldkeepupwithhis herstudies OurEnglishteachercalledonhim herattheweekendssometimes Withcareandhelp he shewassoonabletobeupandaboutandfinallycamebacktotheclass Fromthisevent Ilearntwothings Oneisthatwithlove noillnessordifficultyisterrible Theotheristhatloveandhelparetwo waystreets OurclassmatesofferedJohn JaneDoekindhelppartlybecausehe shehimself herselfhadalwaysbeenahelpfulperson SoIrealizethatwhenwehelpothers wearehelpingourselves 17 范文二 Inthesummersportsmeetinglastyear oneofmyclassmates John JaneDoe suddenlyfelltothegroundandhurtherleftfootwhenhe shewaspracticinghighjump His Herfaceturnedpaleandshowedgreatpain Seeingthis ourclassmatesimmediatelycametoheraid Theystruggledtotakehertothetemporaryemergencyroom Oneboyuntiedhis hershoeandappliedicerockstohis herwound Meanwhile girlscomfortedherinasoftvoice SoontheP E teachercame Hecheckedhis hersoundandtooksomeemergencymeasurestolessenherpain Fifteenminuteslater theambulancearrivedandshewassenttohospital Luckilyenough withourcareandconcern John JaneDoerecoveredquickly Suchanincidentimpressedeveryonepresent Irealizethatloveandcarearethebestmedicineforaninjuredperson 18 学生作品中的常见问题 在叙事时 一般用过去时 但在表述个人观点时可以用现在时 在叙述部分缺少所对叙述事件的结果 Lastweek myclassmate hadabadcold 不要用 或A B C 来表示人 可以取一个恰当的名字 或是用JohnDoe或JaneDoe来表示 某人 19 学生的优秀作品 一 LastFriday myclassmateJohnwasabsentbecausehesuddenlycaughtaheavyfluandranahighfever 时间 人物 事件交代清晰 Afterschool wethreevolunteerstudents togetherwithourclassteacherwenttoseehim Johnstayedinbedandhadarunningnose Hetoldusthathewasanxiousabouthisstudies Onhearingthat wepromisedhimwewouldtryourbesttohelp Therefore inthefollowingdays wearrangedourselvestoteachhimeverydayinturn hopingtoensurethathewouldcatchupwithuswhenhecamebacktoschool 条理清楚 因果关系合乎逻辑 细节描写恰到好处 Inmyopinion nooneisborntolivealone Weshouldlove careandhelpeachother Moreover friendshipcanhelpdefeatdifficultiesmoreeasily 班袁宛青 20 学生的优秀作品 二 Toughasthesufferingis wewillfeelmuchbetterwhenfriendsarearoundus Oneday whenwewereplayingbasketball anaccidenthappened Lannesgotwrenchedinhisankle Fromthepainfullookonhisface weknewitwasserious Withouthesitation FenixandIraisedhimupandhelpedhimwalktotheclinic Butunluckily thedoctorwasout Weknewifwedidn ttakeactionatoncetheinjurywouldgetworse Soweplacedsomecold packonhisankle Soonafter thedoctorcamebackandgaveussomedirectionsandthenwetookhimtotheclassroom Wewillneverwalkalone Wheneverwegethurtandfalldown therearealwaysfriendswhowillgiveusahelpinghandbyourside Itisfriendshipthatlinksustogether Itisthemostpreciousfortuneinourlife 班周剑帆 21 学生的优秀作品 三 Asoldsayinggoes Afriendinneedisafriendindeed Itwassuchagroupoftruefriendswhomeltedmyheartgentlyanddeeplyatonetime Thisautumn Iunfortunatelycamedownwithinfluenzabecauseofnothavingwellpreparedforthechill Ikeptfeelingdizzyandhadaheadacheaccompaniedwithfever Myclassmatesandteacherstriedtoarguemeintotakingagoodrestathome nonethelessIwasterriblyconcernedaboutmissinglessons Theyhandedmeaglassofhotwater whichwarmedmyheartalongwiththeirsimplewords don tworry mydear we llhelpyou Atlast Iaskedforsickleavefor2daysandgotoveritsoon Withtheearnestaidofmyclassmatesandteachers Icaughtupwithothersbeforelong Doyouhavesuchafriend orareyousuchapersonwho salwaysreadytoofferahelpinghand Onlywhenwerealizethemeaningoflifeliesinwhatwegiveratherthanwhatwegetwillwenolongerbelonelyinthismagicalsociety Keepinmindthatloveisthebestpolicy 班方莹 22 学生的优秀作品 四 OnedayonaPElesson wewereenjoyingthebenignweatherandplayingsportsontheplayground Allofasudden wefoundthecentreoftheplaygroundchaotic Whenwegotthere weweresurprisedtoseeourclassmateJohnlyingonthegroundwithpainfulexpressions Withthearrivalofclinicteachers thestudentsaboutwereevacuatedandJohnwasinstantlysenttohospital BecauseofJohn sunexpectedillness myclassteacherandalltheclassmateswereintentoncallingonhim Afterwedecidedtovisithiminthehospital somestudentscarriedthenotesoftoday slessons someboughtwhatjohnlovedmost othersmadeacardbearingthesignatureofeveryoneinclass hopingthathecouldrecoversoon WhenwesawsmileclimbinguptoJohn sface wealltookanoptimisticviewofhiscondition Nowadays moreandmorepeoplebegantohaveglimmersofhopeabouttherelationshipamongthehumanbeings whichisthesametome However thesegmentsofthatdayfrequentlyfloatsinmymind whichchangedmyopinionofthiskindofcircumstanceinsociety Thereasonwhywehumanbeingscan livetogether insuchharmonyalongwithcreatingthisprosperouscityisthatwehavethefeelingsoflove 班王奥维 23 范文 TheMostUnforgettablePerson Allthepeoplewillmeetalotofpeopleintheirlife Amongthem somearejustknownalittle otherswillbetheirfriendsforever Andintheirminds therewillbeoneortwopersonswhowillbeneverforgotten Inmylife Ialsohavemetmanypeoplewhoarereallyworthmentioning ButperhapsthemostunforgettableoneIhaveeverknownisMyEnglishteacher Mrs Sun 24 范文 TheMostUnforgettablePerson continued Forthefirstthing shegivesmeaverygoodimpressionbecauseofherkindnessandsmilingfaces Inthefirstclass shetoldusthatshereallywantedtobeourfriendratherthanateacher Inreality shedoesaswhatshehaspromised Whenwemetwithsometrouble thefirsthelperappearinginourmindwouldbehersmilingface Weeventreatherasourelder 25 范文 TheMostUnforgettablePerson continued sister Oncethefatherofoneofourclassmates wasseriouslyill whichmadethisboyveryupsetanddepressed WhenMrs Sunknewthis shewenttoh