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1 主谓一致 单复数 2 一个单句内出现一个以上的实义动词 3 两个独立单句间的连接问题 4 用词单一 无变化 5 文章结构混乱 观点叙述不清晰 缺乏层次感 6 开头和结尾分布不均 存在头重脚轻的现象 Mainproblems VIII 常见用词错误分析 8 1误解词义导致的用词错误 Theyoungmanalwaysputsonleathershoes Bothsaltandsugarareeasytomeltinhotwater Theypersuadedtheirsontotryagain buthejustturnedadeafeartothem Pleasefetchmesomewaterwhenyoureturnthisafternoon Itisuneasyforthechildrentodosuchathing Keys 1 wears 2 dissolve 3 advised 4 bring 5 difficult 8 2不符合用词习惯导致的用词错误 Weallhopehimtogetthefirstprize Mr Smithdeniedmyinvitationtoadinnerparty Whoisresponsibleforthisdepartment Shewillprobablybeelectedwomanchairman Therearejobsmoredangerousthantruckdriving foraninstance traininglions Reference 1 expect 2 declined 3 inchargeof 4 chairwoman 5 forinstance 8 3不考虑语境导致的语言错误 Theconclusionthatthescholarcometoisthatkidsshouldnothavetosufferforthesinsoftheirfathers Mrs Brownwasindignantwithherson becausehehadn tdonehishomework Whilereadingthetragedy thegirlcriedoveritspages Theice creammeltedawayintheplate Wouldyoumindopeningthegate Theairinthisroomistooclose SuggestedAnswers 1 children 2 angry 3 wept 4 melted 5 thedoor 8 4误用词性导致的用词错误 Myteacheradvicedmenottogooutaloneatnight Shedoesn tawareoftheimportanceofthestudyofEnglish Manypeoplepresentatthemeeting Todothisbeyondmypower Thisroadgoesstraightlyfromourschooltothecenterofthecity Keys 1 advised 2 isn tawareof 3 werepresent 4 isbeyond 5 straight 8 5汉语思维导致的用词错误 Excessivedrinkingwillinjureyourbody Throughinquiry welearnthathewaselectedtonewleadingpost Wearegoingtovisittheexhibitionnextweek Inthebasketballgame ourteamwontheBritishteam Weallenjoypublicmedicalcare Answers 1 health 2 On 3 tosee 4 defeated beat 5 freemedicalcare 8 6马虎大意导致的用词错误 Ifyoudon therefrommewithinamonth givemeacall ProfessorWanghadlaidinbedfortwoweeksbeforehestartedtoworkagain Thepoorqualityofthegoodsadverselyeffectedthesales Thearmyacrossedtheriverandgotsafelyover Ifyouexamineyoureverydayobservations youwillhaveabetterunderstandingofvariousformsofmotion Keys 1 hear 2 lain 3 affected 4 crossed 5 everyday Mistakes Words spelling inaccurateSpelling english colledge sophoman turemordenIfyouworkhard youcanbecomeyourromance Sing plur Clause Tense fallfeellaylieSentence unclear wrongsentencepattern illogic Forgiveandrespectisneededintruelove Shewasquite soshelikedtomakealoveboyfriends Informal Cus886Art Use an aLove afantastictopic mostofpeoplelikediscussingit esp truelove Inthepasttime therearealotofwritersandpoettriedtheirbesttopraiselove Butwhatislove Adverb also either maybeSynonym scene sceneryPartofspeech afraidof fear treasure precious It ssomysteryHowtoovercome more Sometips 将动词转化为介词E g 他带学生到工厂去参观Hetookhisstudentstothefactoryforavisit 将动词转化为过去分词或现在分词作状语E g 给我充分时间 我也能做好Givenenoughtime Icandoittoo E g 他拿了一本字典 开始准备功课Takingadictionary hebegantopreparehislesson E g 孩子们跑着来迎接我们Thechildrencamerunningtogreetus Sometips 直接把动词转化为与之对应的形容词 化动词为分词定语 E g 大学生不应该把他们辛苦挣来的钱都用来上馆子和约会Collegestudentsshouldnotspendtheirhard earnedmoneyondiningoutordating E g 讲座提供了很多信息 给我们留下了深刻的印象 Theinformativelectureimpressedallofus E g 我们现在的文化似乎追求的是工作时间要少 工资要高 生活要过得好Theaimsofourpresent dayculturesseemtobeshorterhours highersalaryandabetterlife Sometips 直接将动词转化为与之相关的名词E g 很重要的是善于听取别人的意见It sveryimportanttobeagoodlistenerE g 很多家长担心 如果没有电视 他们的孩子会要求他们和他们一起玩 ManyparentsareworriedthatwithoutTV theirchildrenwouldlikethemtobeplaypartner 总之 少用动词 写地道的英语句子 Sometips Itistimetogo hehurriedaway 加连词连接两个句子Itistimetogo andhehurriedaway Itistimetogoandhehurriedaway 直接将逗号改为句号 变为两独立单句Itistimetogo Hehurriedaway Sometips 除 以外Inadditionto aswellas besides利用Takeadvantageof makethebestof utilize makeuseof profitfrom尤其是 最重要的Aboveall especially mostimportantofall考虑到 估计到Allowfor takeintoconsideration takeintoaccount对 负责Answerfor undertakeresponsibilityfor beliablefor takechargefor意识到 知道Beawareof beconsciousof havingknowledge Sometips 根据 基于 在 基础上Bebasedon upon onbasisof简言之Inbrief inasfewwordsaspossible inaword要不是 表示假设Butfor without无论如何Inanycase rate price cost forloveormoney anyhow 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IntroductionBringoutthetopicorphenomenonGiveyourpersonalviewMainbodyListthereasonstosupportyourideaConclusionStrengthenyouropinionagain Introductionparagraph 引出现象或某事件的常用句子Recentlytheissueof hasbeenbroughttopubicattention Recently hasbeenbroughtintofocus hascaused arousewidepublicconcern Currentlythereisawidespreadconcernthat Nowadays thereisagrowingpopularityof 当今 越来越流行 Nowpeopleingrowing increasingnumberarecomingtorealizethat Oneofthepressingproblemsfacingournationtodayis Thedate statistics materialprovesthat Theviewishighlysupportedbysomescientiststhat Peopleusedtothink butthingshavechangedsomuch Asisshowninthetableabove Recently hasdramaticallyincreased Alongwiththeadvanceofthesociety moreandmoreproblemarebroughttoourattention oneofwhichisthat Associetydevelops peopleareattachingmuchimportanceto Recentlythephenomenonhasarousedwideconcern somepeopleareinalarmthat Introductionparagraph 陈述自己对这一事件的看法和观点的句子Thepointatissueisthat Somethink harbortheideathat taketheattitudethat while I Nowitiscommonlyheldthat butIdoubtwhether Asfaraslong rangebenefitisconcerned Ibelievethat AssureasthesunwillrisethatIwillsupportthelatterNothingismoreimportantthan Ikeep holdafavorablepositionOpinionsonthe varyfrompeople I Iamgreatlyconvinced assuredthat 我深信 IfIamfacedwith Ipreferto Formypart Istandonsideofthelatteropinionthat Frommypersonalanglealone theformerpointcoincideswithmineandthefollowingfactorsgiveevidencetomyopinion Inreactiontothephenomenon somesay Admittedly but Mainbody 引出原因的常用句子Thereismuchtobesaidinfavoroftheviewthat Thereissometruthintheideathat Ithinkseveralfactorscontributeto Anadvantageof isthat Agoodcaseinpointis Noonecandeny ignorethefactthat Thereisnodenyingthefactthat Onnoaccountcanwedenythefactthat Thereisnodoubtthat Thereareseveralreasonsaccountingforthis Severalfactorscometogethertomakethis Toaccountforthisphenomenon wecancomeupwithseveralreasons Tothisproblem inmymind thereareatleastseveralapproaches Therearenumerousreasonswhy andIwouldliketoexploreafewofthemostimportantoneshere Mainbody 论证观点Thereissufficientevidencetoshowthat Itistruethat butonevitalpointisbeingleftout Obviously hasitsabsoluteadvantages However alsohasitsdrawbacks theadvantagesforAoutweighthedisadvantagesofit 利大于弊 Whatsurprisesmemostisthat Someexpertshavelongremindedusofthenegativeeffectsof Thereismuchtobesaidontheperspectivethat Take foranexample itisaveryobviouscase TheadvantagesofAaremuchgreaterthanthoseofBAwithoutBislike whileCwithoutDislike E g peoplewithouteducationarelikeflowerswithoutsunshine whileeducationwithoutteacherislikefishwithoutwater Itisnaturaltobelievethat butweshouldn tignorethat conclusion Itissafetoconcludethat Itcanbesafelysaidthat Itishightimethateffectivemeasuresshouldbetakento Itishightimethatweputconsiderableemphasison Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove wemaysafelydrawtheconclusionthat Takingintoaccountallthesefactors wemaysafelyreachtheconclusionthat Wecannotemphasizetheimportanceof toomuch 再怎么强调 的重要性也不为过 sthcannotbeoveremphasized Itisnecessarythatstepsshouldbetakento Inconclusion although hasitsnegativeeffects itcantoagreatextentbringusmoreadvantages Wedo infact havealongwaytogotoreachourfinalgoal but Onlywedo canwe 实用性句子分享 Therehassprungupaheateddiscussionastowhetherweshould ornot Thosewhoareinfavoroftheidea Theremarkableimprovementofpeople slivingstandardBefacedwithnewopportunitiesandchallenges Acontroversialissue一个有争议性的问题AtotallydifferentargumentSomepeople whileothers Besupportedbysoundreasons有充分的理由支持Beindispensableto 对 必不可少Positive negativeeffectsonLeadto giveriseto contributeto resultin导致 引起Acomplicatedsocialphenomenon复杂的社会现象Senseofcompetitionandcooperation竞争与合作精神Senseofresponsibility achievement责任感 成就感Widenone shorizon broadenone svision开阔眼界Financial psychologicalburden经济 心理负担Fromanotherperspective从另一个角度Makejointefforts作出共同努力 Layasolidfoundationfor为 打下坚实的基础Comprehensivequality综合素质Bedevotedto 致力于 投身于Unshakableduty不可推卸的责任Satisfy meettheneedsof 满足需要Areliablesourceofinformation可靠的信息源Convenientandefficient方便快捷Inallaspectsofhumanlife在人类生活的方方面面Asymbolofsocietyprogress社会进步的体现HolddifferentattitudestowardsthisissueTheincreasinglyfiercesocialcompetition日益激烈的社会竞争Short terminterest眼前利益Interestinthelongrun长远利益Keeppacewith catchupwiththelatestdevelopmentof 跟上 的最新发展Everycoinhasitstwosides nogardenwithoutweeds有利有弊Viewson varyfrompersontopersonAttachgreatimportantto 重视Focustimeandenergyon Expandone sscopeofknowledgeBothphysicallyandmentally身心两方面 VIII 常见用词错误分析 8 1误解词义导致的用词错误 Theyoungmanalwaysputsonleathershoes Bothsaltandsugarareeasytomeltinhotwater Theypersuadedtheirsontotryagain buthejustturnedadeafeartothem Pleasefetchmesomewaterwhenyoureturnthisafternoon Itisuneasyforthechildrentodosuchathing Keys 1 wears 2 dissolve 3 advised 4 bring 5 difficult 8 2不符合用词习惯导致的用词错误 Weallhopehimtogetthefirstprize Mr Smithdeniedmyinvitationtoadinnerparty Whoisresponsibleforthisdepartment Shewillprobablybeelectedwomanchairman Therearejobsmoredangerousthantruckdriving foraninstance traininglions Reference 1 expect 2 declined 3 inchargeof 4 chairwoman 5 forinstance 8 3不考虑语境导致的语言错误 Theconclusionthatthescholarcometoisthatkidsshouldnothavetosufferforthesinsoftheirfathers Mrs Brownwasindignantwithherson becausehehadn tdonehishomework Whilereadingthetragedy thegirlcriedoveritspages Theice creammeltedawayintheplate Wouldyoumindopeningthegate Theairinthisroomistooclose SuggestedAnswers 1 children 2 angry 3 wept 4 melted 5 thedoor 8 4误用词性导致的用词错误 Myteacheradvicedmenottogooutaloneatnight Shedoesn tawareoftheimportanceofthestudyofEnglish Manypeoplepresentatthemeeting Todothisbeyondmypower Thisroadgoesstraightlyfromourschooltothecenterofthecity Keys 1 advised 2 isn tawareof