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段落谋篇-议论文单一论点式框架第一篇你堂兄建华在国外学习，你们经常用英文通信。他即将完成学业，不久前来信就是否回国工作征求你的意见。请根据下列提示回信：1建议他回国；2你的理由是： 1）学有所用，就业容易； 2）照顾父母。Dear Jianhua,Im very glad to have received the letter you sent me two weeks ago. Ive been thinking about the question you asked me. In my opinion, you should come back after you finish your studies abroad. For one reason, what you are studying is badly needed nowadays in China. It will be quite easy for you to find a good job. In fact, I know a few big companies in our city are hoping to hire people like you. For another reason, I think it will be much more convenient for you to look after your parents as they are getting old. Therefore, I think its a good idea for you to return. So what are you waiting for?注：In my opinion, you should come back after you finish your studies abroad.（大众化） It is after you finish your studies abroad that you should come back.（人有我精）框架第二篇请你结合自己的高中生活和真实感受，以A good teacher in my eyes为题写一篇短文。For what kind of teachers are good teachers, different people have different ideas.In my opinion, as a good teacher, he should be with the following qualities: First, he must be warm-hearted and is always ready to help others as well. Secondly, he should love his teaching job, be strict with his work, be patient with his students in class and so on. Thirdly, he should also have rich knowledge and make his class lovely and interesting. Finally, he should treat every student in his class equally.(文章缺乏首尾呼应的结尾)修改后默写篇For what kind of teachers are good teachers, different people have different ideas.As far as I am concerned, as a good teacher, he should be with the following qualities: to begin with, he must be warm-hearted and is always ready to help others as well. What is more, he should love his teaching job, be strict with his work, be patient with his students in class and so on. In addition, he should also have rich knowledge and make his class lovely and interesting. Finally, he should treat every student in his class equally. What mentioned above is a good teacher in my mind.单一论点式议论文框架第一段：1背景描述句（从句套从句）第二段：2论点提出句（强调句型）或：固定套语（ with the following qualities/reasons/aspects.）4 . 论据提出句A +延伸句（in fact / for instance, / that is to say）5 . 论据提出句B +延伸句（in fact / for instance, / that is to say） 第三段：6 . 首尾呼应句（What mentioned above is / in short, / in brief,）仿写第三篇为了使同学们与人交往时 举止更加文雅，你校学生会正在举办以“How to behave well ？ ”为主题的英语征文比赛， 请你写一篇短文。 短文要点如下：1.学生应该守时，守信，不撒谎，不说脏话；2.礼貌待人，热心助人；3.遵守交通规则；不在公共场所喧哗，不乱扔垃圾；4.请你就此话题再补充一至两点个人看法。Behaving well is the secret of getting on well with others.As a student, I think its very important to do everything on time and keep promises. Never lie to others or say dirty words. We should be polite to others and ready to help people in need. Wed better not talk loudly in public. Dont throw litter or spit about. And always remember to obey traffic rules.Finally, learn to work with others. We need good teamwork in our life.修改后默写篇How to behave well, which is a hot point that we are talking about recently. Behaving well is the secret of getting on well with others.We can behave well with the following aspects. To begin with, as a student, I think its very important to do everything on time and keep promises. What is more, never lie to others or say dirty words. In addition, we should be polite to others and ready to help people in need. Besides, wed better not talk loudly in public. Moreover, dont throw litter or spit about. Eventually, always remember to obey traffic rules.As far as I am concerned, we need to learn to work with others and good teamwork in our life. What mentioned above is my point of view on how to behave well. 仿写第四篇六月六日是“全国爱眼日”。为此，某中学生英文报拟组织一次征文活动。请你结合生活实际写一篇题目为如何保护眼睛的征文稿，内容要点包括：1、眼睛的重要性；2、保护眼睛的措施：（1）不要长时间看书报；（2）不要在太强或者太弱的光线下看书；（3）坚持做眼保健操； 范文：Eye is the window of our mind. We use our eyes to see everything around us. Without eyes, nothing is left beside you but darkness. How to protect our eyes? We can protect them with the following aspects. To begin with, its not right to keep your eyes working for a long time. What is more, youd better not read in a strong or poor light. In addition, dont read in bed or on a moving bus. Besides, remember to keep your books away from your eyes for about a foot and do eye-exercises every day. Finally, a balanced diet is necessary.What mentioned above is my point of view on how to protect our eyes. Follow my advice and form a good habit. Its time to say goodbye to thick glasses.对比论点式框架第一篇暑假即将来临。你班同学讨论了假期计划，提出了 不同看法。请根据提示写一篇有关讨论的英语短文，并谈谈你的看法。优点缺点待在家中花费少，舒适方便不能亲身了解外界外出旅游增长见识，开阔眼界花费多，旅途不便参考词汇：眼界horizonThe summer holiday is coming. Our classes have had a discussion about what to do during the holiday. Some are in favor of staying at home. They think its both convenient and comfortable. Whats more, they can save money for other purposes. But it will lose the chance of getting to know the outside world.However, others prefer to go out for traveling. Since it can increase their knowledge and broaden their horizons. But they will spend more money and meet some difficulties while traveling. As far as I am concerned, it would be much better to stay at home, for I can do what I like, including reading books, watching TV, and helping my parents with the housework.注：It can increase their knowledge and broaden their horizons. （大众化） It can not only increase their knowledge but also broaden their horizons. ( 人无我有 ) 语法补充：1. not only but also 连接两个分句，并且 not only 位于句首时，第一个分句中的主语和谓语要部分倒装。例如：Not only does the sun give us light but also it gives us heat.Not only is this young man clever but also he is hardworking. 2. not only but also 连接两个主语时，谓语动词要和与其最近的主语保持人称和数的一致。例如：Not only the students but also the teacher was against the plan. / Not only the teacher but also the students were against the plan.框架第二篇当前不少文学作品被改编成电影。有人选择看电影，有人则喜欢读原著。请你以“Film or book, which do you prefer?”为题，按照下列要点写一篇英语短文看电影：省时、有趣、易懂读原著：细节更多、语言优美我的看法及理由 参考词汇： original work （原著）Some of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original. The reason is that it takes less time to understand the whole story. Besides, the film is usually more interesting, and it is easier to follow. Some others have just the opposite opinion. They think that they can get more detailed information from the original. Meanwhile, the language in the book is possibly more lively and beautiful. Personally, I agree with the second view. Actually I have more reasons for it. I think I can stay at home, reading quietly in a situation of my own, and whats more, I am able to better understand the authors ideas. In a word, to read the original work is better than to see the film based on it. 对比论点式议论文框架第一段：1. 背景描述句 （从句套从句）2. A论点提出句 （be in favor of / prefer to ）3. A论据提出句（一） （与论点因果关系）4. A论据提出句（二） （并列或递进关系）第二段：5. 承上启下句+B论点提出句（让步状语从句倒装）6. B论据提出句（一） （与论点因果关系）7. B论据提出句（一） （并列或递进关系）第三段：8. 自身论点提出句（As far as I am concerned, ）9. 自身论点支持句（与论点因果关系）10. 总结句（in a word, / in conclusion,）仿写第三篇假如你是李明，上周你班同学就毕业前我们该为学校做些什么?”进行了讨论。请你根据 下表提示，将同学们的建议用英语写一封信告诉你的笔友David，并谈谈你的想法及理由。一些同学建议全班筹钱，为校图书馆买书或其他东西另外一些同学建议无需 花钱；好好学习，让学校以我们为荣你的想法及理由Last week we held a discussion on what we should do for our school before we graduate. The students in our class have different suggestions. Some students think that we can collect money to buy some books for the school library or something else for the school. Other students think that its not necessary to spend money. We can study hard and make our school feel proud of us. In my opinion, we dont have to spend money. We can do something meaningful without money. For example, we can do some voluntary work to beautify the schools environment or try to get better results in the coming exams so that our school will be proud of us. Id like to know your idea. Could you give me some advice?修改后默写篇What we should do for our school before we graduate, which is a hot point that we are talking recently. The students in our class have different suggestions. Some students are in favor of that we can collect money to buy some books for the school library or something else for the school. Some others have just the opposite opinion.Other students prefer to spend money. Since not only can we study hard, but also make our school feel proud of us.As far as I am concerned, we dont have to spend money, for we can do something meaningful without money. For example, we can do some voluntary work to beautify the schools environment or try to get better results in the coming exams so that our school will be proud of us. Id like to know your idea. Could you give me some advice?仿写第四篇1下面是你班班会上以“中学生是否能佩带手机”为题进行讨论的情况。请你写一封信给21st Century报的编辑说明该情况，并附带表明你自己的观点。比例40%学生赞同60%学生不赞同理由1.便于同亲友联系；2.可以上网查资料；3.空余时间玩玩游戏调节大脑；4.储存有用信息。1.手机辐射对人健康有害；2.响铃影响自己和他人学习；3.属奢侈品；4.容易引起相互攀比。Dear Sir,Im writing to tell you something about our discussion on the topic“ Whether Middle School Students Can Carry Mobile phones (Cell phones) at the class meeting.Forty percent students agreed, for they thought it was convenient for them to communicate with their relatives and friends. They also thought they could surf the Internet to search for some information and store some useful information in the meantime. Besides, they could play games for rest if they feel tired after a long times study. However, sixty percent of us were against it. They said the radiation of cell phones was harmful to health, and the ringing sound did somewhat affect the cell phone holders and others. Also, cell phones were luxurious things for middle school students and it was easy to lead them to compare with each other.As far as I am concerned, I agree with the majority. It is not suitable for middle school students to have cell phones. We can get in touch with others by other means and we can read more books to enrich ourselves.Best wishes.段落谋篇记叙文框架第一篇假设你是李华，正在美国探亲。2000年2月8日清晨，你目击了一起交通事故。警察局让你写一份材料，报告当时的所见情况。请根据下列图画写出报告。 It was 7:15 on the morning of February 8, 2000. I was walking along Park Road towards the east when an elderly man came out of the park on the other side of the street. Then I saw a yellow car drive up Third Street and turn right into Park Road. The next moment the car hit the man while he was crossing the road. He fell with a cry. The car didnt stop but drove off at great speed heading west. I noticed the driver was a young woman and the plate number was AC864. About two minutes later I stopped a passing car and took the old man to the nearest hospital. 注：时间状语从句中when和while的用法。框架第二篇下面四幅图片描述的是，星期一早晨李华在上学路上经历的一件事。请根据图片所提供的信息以第三人称用英语写一篇短文。 It was snowing heavily on Monday morning. Li Hua was at the bus stop, waiting for Bus No.601 to go to school. After a while, a bus came and she got on it. There were many passengers in the bus. Some were talking and some were looking out of the windows. Suddenly the bus stopped. The driver turned around and said, “Sorry. The bus has broken down. Please get off and help push the bus.” When they heard this, Li Hua and the other passengers got off the bus. They worked hard together, pushing the bus slowly forward. Soon the bus was running again. All the passengers were smiling and the sun was shining.记叙文写作框架1. 背景句（It is 交代时间地点）28. 按照时间顺序写作（动作之间的更替需用表示时间词连接 when/while/after a while）9. 正向结尾（呼吁）仿写第三篇下面4幅图片描高考资源网述的是是星期天上午在中山公园里发生的一件事。请根据图片把提供的信息用英语为你校的“英语园地”写一篇短文。注意：（1）短文须包括所有图片的主要内容。短文的内容要连贯、完整； （2）用五句话完成短文；w.w.w.k.s.5.u.c.o.m （3）参考词汇：货摊 stand(n)；抢夺 snatch(v)；逮捕 arrest(v)One Sunday morning, there were some people in Zhongshan Park. At a stand, a woman was buying an ice-cream when a young man behind her snatched her handbag away. Hearing the shouting “stop him”, a few people began to run after him. There was an old man sitting quietly on a bench nearby as the snatcher was running past him, the old man quickly picked up his umbrella and put it between the snatchers legs, so the young man fell down on the ground hard. Soon two policemen came in a police car and arrested him. At last, the woman thanked the old man, and the people around praised the old man for his cleverness段落谋篇应用文（一）感谢信写作策略第一段：表达感谢之情并说明原因第二段：提及自己曾受到对方的帮助第三段：再次感谢并表达回报愿望。常用句型1I am gratefulobliged to you for我非常感谢你的2I am greatly indebted to you for what you have done 我为你所做的一切表示感激。3I am thankfulobliged to you for your unselfish assistance during 感谢你在期间给予我无私的帮助。4I deeply appreciate your courtesy and we hope to have the opportunity of rewarding your kindness我非常感谢你的好意，并希望有机会回报你。5My appreciate to you for your generous help is beyond my wordsI wish I could repay it some day我无法用言语来表达对你的感激之情。但愿有朝一门能回报你的帮助。6Please accept my most cordial thanks for your timely help，which l will never forget请接受我诚挚的谢意，感谢你及时的帮助，我将难以忘怀。7Words fail me when I want to express my gratitude to you感激之情难以言表。8Again，I would like to express our warm thanks to you再次向你表示感谢。范文：Dear Mr. and Mrs. Smith,I am now back to China safe and sound（安全健康的）. In this letter I would like to convey my heartfelt（衷心的） thanks to you and your lovely children for your kindness and hospitality to host me when I was in New York. Your generous help and tender care made me feel warmly welcomed and transformed my first American trip into a beautiful memory. I do hope that your whole family pays a visit to China in future, so that I could have the opportunity to repay your frie