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Legendofbutterflylovers 梁祝 1 高考新题型读后续写训练1 2 Myfatherisaliartome 3 Sometimesloveishiddenbehindactions whichmaybeunseentooureyeswithoutspecialattention Whathaveyoulearnedfromthevideo Selflesslove 4 5 6 7 8 第二节 读后续写 满分25分 阅读下面350字短文 根据所给情节进行续写 使之构成一个完整的故事 注意 所续写短文的词数应为180左右 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语 续写完成后 请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语 续写部分分为两段 每段的开头语已为你写好 若词数少于130 从总分中扣去2分 9 Briefinformation acoupleoflovers God thewomandoctor coupleofloversledan envy lifeinatown fortunate themanhadanaccidentandwasseverely injure Thewoman attend himdayandnight herloverwasstillsleeping hope shemadeadeal God tobeabutterflyforthreeyearsinexchangefortheman s recover wasahardchoicebuteasytomaketoawillingheart A enviable Unfortunately injured attendedto But hopelessly with recovery which 10 Summary Theplot 情节 ofthestory Development Ending Beginning Climax 高潮 A Themanwasbadlyinjuredandshowednosignsofrecovery B ThewomandealtwithGodtosaveherloverbutanothergirlappearedbetweenthem C Themanandthewomanhadanenviablelove A C B 11 Endingsofourstudents 12 Endingsofourstudents 13 Endingsofourstudents 14 logic 逻辑 15 白猫掉到河里 黑猫奋尽全力救它上岸 上岸后 白猫对黑猫说了什么 Continuethestory Youshouldfindthecluesinthestory 16 logic thetitle thegivenstory theunderlinedwords thetwogivensentences Theyarethecluestohelpyoucreateyourwritinglogically 17 underlinedwordsenjoyingthesunrisethesunsetconsciousnessthechurchGodtearsloveregretbecamethebutterflyflysweetheart stricken underlinedwords 选5个以上 who 人物 Godthebutterflywhere 地点 thechurchwhat 事件 enjoyingthesunrisethesunsetconsciousnesstearslovebutterflysweetheart stricken clues 线索 Icanhelpyou forthreeyears Yes Ido iwon tregretdoingthat Godalsofeltsad Doyouregretforwhatyouhavedone 18 logic thetitle thegivenstory theunderlinedwords thetwogivensentences 19 Paragraph1 Thebutterflyknewthatalltheseshouldhavebelongedtoher butnowtheybelongedtoanotherwoman Shecoulddonothingbutrestontheman sshoulderoffandon Singleissimple doubleistrouble triangleisterrible 利用已给信息将情节推向高潮 Howtodealwiththewomandoctor Whentogetmarried 20 Paragraph2 Godalsofeltsadandsighedtothebutterfly Doyouregretforwhatyouhavedone 利用已给信息得出一个完美结局 21 Creation Thepossibleversionsoftheending e b Themanandthedoctormarried andthewomanremainedtobeabutterfly Themanandthedoctormarried andthewomanleft c Themanproposedtothedoctor butGoduncoveredthetruthtothemanandgavetheseparatedloversahappyreunion d Themanproposedtothedoctor butGoduncoveredthetruthtothemanwhichinvolvedhiminadilemma Finally themanleft negative negative positive negative 22 2020 1 9 23 thetwogivensentences theunderlinedwords Thetwoleadyou helpyou andcontrolyoutogointherightdirection 24 Readingforbriefinformation Readingforsummary Readingforcreation Readingforwriting 25 Therewasonceaplacid平静的 温和的 沉着的andbeautifultowninwhichtherewereacoupleofloverswhowouldoftenstaytogetheronthetopofthemountainenjoyingthesunriseandbytheseaappreciatingthesunset Everyonewhoknewthemcouldnothelpenvyingthemandprayingfortheirhappylove 26 Competition 27 GroupA paragraph1 1 目睹 见证 vt 2 他说过的最甜蜜的话 提示词sweet 3 蝴蝶难过得情不自禁地哭了 tears 4 变深 使加深 v 5 第三年的最后一天6 他们的爱已成为回忆 GroupB paragraph2 被打动的 受感动的 adj 揭露真相3 对于我为他所做的事我从来没有后悔过 提示词regret 用倒装句式 4 唤醒 vt 5 遭受许多挫折6 男人震惊了 越发觉得后悔和内疚 提示词thefeelingofregrets guilt 28 1 目睹 见证vt 2 他说过的最甜蜜的话 提示词sweet 3 蝴蝶难过得情不自禁地哭了 提示词tears see witness Thesweetestwordshehaseversaid Thebutterflycouldn thelpburstingintotearssadly Thebutterflycouldnolongerholdbackthetears 29 5 在第三年的最后一天 Onthelastdayofthethirdyear 4 变深 使加深vt vi deepen 6 他们的爱已成为回忆 Theirlovehasbecomememories Theirlovehasbecomeapast 30 Paragraphy1 Thebutterflyknewthatalltheseshouldhavebelongedtoher butnowtheybelongedtoanotherwoman Shecoulddonothingbutrestontheman sshoulderoffandon draft Itwasheartbrokentoseetheirlovedeependaybyday Timewentbyquickly OnthelastdayofthethirdyearwhenthedealbetweenGodandthebutterflywasalmostover themanproposedtohisgirlfriend Hetookoutabeautifulringandsworethesweetestwordshehaseversaid Hearingthis thebutterflycouldn tbreathe Herdarkeneyeswerefulloftears sheflewawaysilently Atthatmoment sherealizedthathewouldn tknowhersacrificesandtheirlovehasbecomeapast 31 2 揭露真相 1 被打动的 受感动的adj be by touched uncoverthetruth expose reveal moved impressed 3 对于我为他所做的事我从来没有后悔过 提示词regret 用倒装句式 NeverhaveIregrettedforwhatIhavedoneforhim 32 4 唤醒vt awaken arouse 5 遭受许多挫折 gothroughmanyobstacles suffermanystruggles 6 男人震惊了 越发觉得后悔和内疚 提示词thefeelingofregrets guilt Themangotshocked andthefeelingofregretsandguiltgrewstronger setbacksfrustrations 33 Paragraphy2 Godalsofeltsadandsighedtothebutterfly Doyouregretforwhatyouhavedone draft Thebutterflysaid No NeverhaveIregrettedforwhatIhavedoneforhim movedbyherwords Godwaslostinthought shehadgonethroughsomanystrugglesandsheshouldn tdeservethat So thedaybeforethemanandthedoctor swedding Goduncoveredthewholetruthtohim Obviously themanwasshockedandthefeelingofregretsandguiltgrewstronger Thelovedeepinsidewasawakened Herushedtothechurchtobegforthewoman sforgiveness Andhedeterminedthatthistimehewon tlethergo Hewilltakehertoenjoythesunriseandthesunsetforalifetime 34 Step3polish 润色 Step2draft 拟稿 Step1compose 构思 Readingforwriting 35 Paragraphy1 Thebutterflyknewthatalltheseshouldhavebelongedtoher butnowtheybelongedtoanotherwoman Shecoulddonothingbutrestontheman sshoulderoffandon draft Itwasheartbrokentoseetheirlovedeependaybyday Timewentbyquickly OnthelastdayofthethirdyearwhenthedealbetweenGodandthebutterflywasalmostover themanproposedtohisgirlfriend Hetookoutabeautifulringandsworethesweetestwordshehaseversaid Hearingthis thebutterflycouldn tbreathe Herdarkeneyeswerefulloftears sheflewawaysilentlyingreatgriefanddespair Atthatmoment sherealizedthathewouldn tknowhersacrificesandtheirlovehasbecomeapast 36 Howtopolishyourwords 小 心思 丰满人物内心Innerthoughtstoportraythefigures 37 Tip1 小 心思 丰满人物内心 悲伤 快乐 2016年10月高考作文23分 38 Tip1 小 心思 丰满人物内心 震惊 2017年6月高考作文23分 39 Howtodescribeyourinnerthoughts 1 Feelinghappy sad angry guilty depressed 2 Drivenbycuriosity asenseofsympathy 同情 或者是Deeplytouched movedby 3 fullofregret anger fear gratitude 感激 4 具体的动作描写standfrozen jumpwithjoy tremblewithanger withtearsfillingone seyes withone seyeswideopen等等 40 Let shaveatry 1 Godsaidtothewoman Doyouregretfor