关于季节的英语作文(共五篇).doc

关于季节的英语作文(共五篇) 篇一：五年级英语作文Myfavouriteseason Myfavouriteseasonisautumn.Inautumn,itiscoolandwindy.Theskyisblue.Theleavesarecolourful.Icangotothefarmandpickmanyfreshapples.Ilikeautumnbest,beacauseIlikeMidAutumnDayvevymuch.Wecaneatmooncakes. 我最喜欢的季节是秋天秋天天气凉爽且多风天空是蓝色的树叶缤纷多彩我可以去农场摘很多新鲜的苹果我最喜欢秋天因为我非常喜欢中秋节我们可以吃月饼 Myfavouriteseasonissummer.Itishotandwindy.Insummer,Icanswiminthelake.Icaneaticecreamandwatermelons.Icanalsogotothenaturepark.Therearemanybeautifulflowersandcleanriversinthepark.Ilikesummerbest,beacauseIlikeChildrensDayvevymuch.Whataboutyou 我最喜欢的季节是夏天夏天天气炎热并且雨在夏天我可以在湖里游泳、吃冰欺凌和西瓜我还可以去自然公园里有漂亮的花和清澈的河流我最喜欢夏天因为我喜欢儿童节你呢 描述自己喜欢的季节首先要点明最喜欢一个季节；然后介绍该季节的气候特征；接下来说明在这个季节可以从事那些有趣的活动；还可以描述这个季节的某些节日常用的句型：Myfavouriteseasonis+季节its+表示天气的形容词Ican+动词原形+其他和Ilike+季节+best,beacause 篇二：八年纪下英语经典作文 1你最喜欢四季中的个季节呢请根据下面的提示和要求写一篇短文 提示： 1.Whichseasondoyoulikeandwhydoyoulikeit 2.Whatstheweatherlikein. 3.Whatdoyouliketodoin. 要求： 1.语句通顺语法正确书写规范 2.词数:80词左右 Therearefourseasonsinayear:spring,summer,autumnandwinter.Butspringismyfavouriteseason.ItusuallyesinMarchinmycity.Inspring,thedaysgetlongerandlongerandtheweatherbeeswarmerandwarmer.Thetreesbeegreenandtheflowersblossom.Onwindydays,Iliketoflykiteswithmyfriends.IalsolikegoingforawalkinthemorningbecauseIlikethefreshairoutside.Doyoulikespring 2我们身边有很多种植物你对它们了解多少呢请以“Plantsaroundus”为题根据下面的中文提示和要求写一篇短文 提示： 1.如果你仔细观察你会发现我们身边有各种各样的植物它们大部分是绿色的； 2.世界上的植物分为两种：开花植物(floweringplants)和不开花植物(nonfloweringplants)它们各有不同； 3.植物利用空气、水和阳光制造食物而且它们能净化空气人类的生存离不开植物要求： 1.语句通顺语法正确书写规范； 2.70词左右 PlantsaroundusIfyouobservecarefully,youwillfindtherearemanydifferentkindsofplantsaroundus.Andmostofthemaregreen.Therearetwotypesofplantsintheworld,floweringplantsandnonfloweringplants.Theyaredifferentfromeachother. Plantscanmakefoodfromair,waterandsunlight.Theyareveryimportant.Plantscancleantheair.Andnobodycanlivewithoutplantsontheearth.Soletsplantmoreplantstogether 3同学们你曾见过人们吃野生动物你身边有穿皮草的人现在又有多少动物正因此而濒临灭绝呢请根据下面的提示写一篇7080词的短文要求语句通顺、前后连贯、语法正确 提示： 1.现在越来越多的动物正濒临灭绝； 2.人们砍伐树木导致动物的居住地减少一些人为了金钱、毛皮(fur)和动物肉而猎杀动物他们用动物毛皮做成各种衣服用动物制成药物一些人甚至去吃野生动物； 3.动物是我们的朋友保护动物就像是保护我们自己所以尽全力保护它们吧 Moreandmoreanimalsareindangertoday.Peoplecutdownalotoftreestobuildhousesothatanimalshavefewerplacestolivein.Somepeoplekillanimalsformoney,furandmeat.Theymakeallkindsofclothesfromthefurandusetheanimalstomakemedicine.Afewpeopleeveneatwildanimals. Animalsareourfriends.Protectinganimalsisjustlikeprotectingourselves.Sotryourbesttoprotectthemtogether. 4本单元我们通过一些实验学习到了一些科学知识并了解了这些科学知识在生活中的应用请根据以下提示用英文给你的笔友Mike写一封电子邮件总结一下这段时间你所学到的知识 提示： 1.上周科学课上做了一些实验让我了解到； 2.科学非常有趣； 3.将来也许会做一名科学家 要求： 1.语句通顺语法正确书写工整； 2.7080词（邮件开头结尾已给出不计入总词数） DearMike,HowareyoudoingImadesomeexperimentsinthescienceclassandlearnedsomeinterestingtheorieslastweek.IlearnedthatairwasstrongerthanIthought.Ialsoknewthatwhenthecandleburns,itneedstheoxygenintheair.Sometimes,whatwethinkisnotright,butsciencecantelluswhatiscorrect. Inaword,scienceisinterestingandthepowerofscienceisgreatMaybeImgoingtobeagreatscientistinthefuture.WhataboutyouYours,Peter 5人类的生存离不开植物我们的周围有各种各样的花草树木但是你知道怎样种树请根据下面的提示以Howtoplantatree为题写一篇短文 提示： 1.春天是适合种树的季节； 2.首先挖坑确保(makesurethat.)挖的坑足够大、足够深然后放入树苗填土并用脚踩一踩(stampon)泥土最后浇水 要求： 1.语句通顺语法正确书写工整 2.7080词 HowtoplantatreeTreesareimportanttous.ButdoyouknowhowtoplantatreeNow,letmetellyouaboutit.Springisagoodtimetoplantatree.First,youshoulddigahole.Makesurethattheholeisbiganddeepenough.Thenputtheyoungtreeintoit.Covertheholewithsomesoilandstamponthesoil.Finally,wateritcarefully.Thisishowtoplantatree.Doyouwanttohaveatry 6同学们你们喜欢小动物动物是人类的朋友很多人都喜欢饲养小动物它们不仅可以给我们带来快乐还可以为我们做一些力所能及的事情请根据提示以MyFavouriteAnimal为题写一篇短文和大家分享一下你和宠物之间有趣的故事吧！ 提示： 1.Whatanimalsdoyoulike 2.Whatpetsdoyouraise 3.Whatsthestoryaboutyourpet 要求： 1.语句通顺语法正确书写工整； 2.80词左右(开头已给出不计入总词数) MyFavouriteAnimalsomethingaboutmypetdog.MypetdogiscalledBeibei.Heiswhiteandhelookslikeasnowball.Hiseyesarebigandblack.HelikestoplaywithmewhenImfree.Everymorning,BeibeibringsmyshoestomewhenIgetup.Aftersupper,helikestotakeawalkwithmeinthepark.Beibeialsohelpsmyfamilylookafterourhousewhenweareout.Beibeiisclever,isnthe 篇三：小学生英语作文大全(12篇) 1.假期去过的地方 Lastwintervacation,IwenttoBeijingwithmyparents.BeijingisinthenorthofChina.Wewenttherebytrain.InBeijingIvisitedtheTiananmenSquare.IclimbedtheGreatWall.Ihadagoodtimethere.IloveBeijing. 2.假期计划 IamgoingtogotoBeijingthissummerholiday.BeijingisinthenorthofChina.Itsveryfamous.Iamgoingtogotherebytrain.InBeijingIamgoingtoclimbtheGreatWall.IamgoingtovisittheTiananmenSquare. 3.描述图片中人物正在做的事情 Lookatthispicture.Therearefivepeopleinit.Amyisreadingabook.Samislisteningtomusic.Damingisflyingakite.Tomisplayingwithtoys.Simonisridingabike.Theyareveryhappy. 4.喜欢的动物Myfavouriteanimal Ilikedogsverymuch.Ihaveapetdog.Itsverycute.ItsnameisDudu.Itsblackandwhite.Ithasgottwobigeyesandasmallnose.Itlikeseatingmeat.Itcanrunfast.Itsveryclever.Ioftenplaywithit. 5.喜欢的季节 Myfavouriteseasonisspring.Inspring,itswarm.Therearelotsofbeautifulflowers.Icanenjoythem.Icanhaveapicnicinthepark.Icanflyakite.Icandolotsofinterestingthings.SoIlikespring. 6.我的爱好 Collectingstampsismyhobby.Ilikestampsverymuch.Ihavegotlotsofstamps.Somestampsareaboutanimals.Somestampsareaboutfamousmenandwomen.IhavegotChinesestamps.ButIhaventgotEnglishstamps.Collectingstampsisinteresting. 7.喜欢的节日 MyfavouritefestivalisSpringFestival.AtSpringFestival,Icanplaywithmyfriends.Icaneatlotsofdeliciousfood.Icangetsomemoney.Wehaveaspecialmeal.Itsabigfamilydinner.IloveSpringFestival. 8.梦想 Ihaveadream.IwanttobeanEnglishteacher.BecauseIlikeEnglish.IthinkEnglishisinterestinganduseful.IcanspeakEnglishwell.NowIstudyveryhard.Ihopemydreamwilletrue. 9.我的学校 Myschoolisverybigandbeautiful.Inourschooltherearesometallbuildings.Thewallsarewhite.Thewindowsarebright.Inourschooltherearelotsofpupilsandteachers.Thepupilsstudyhard.Theteachersworkhard.Ilovemyschool. 10.喜欢的运动 Playingbasketballismyfavouritesport.Becauseitsveryinteresting.Ihavegotabasketball.Iplaybasketballeveryday.Myfriendslikebasketball,too.Ioftenplaywithmyfriends.Ihopetobeabasketballstar. 11.我的朋友Myfriend Ihaveagoodfriend.HernameisAmy.Sheistwelveyearsold.Shehasgottwobigeyes.Sheistall.Sheisfriendly.Shelikesreadingbooks.ShecanspeakEnglishwell.Shewantstobeateacher.Wealllikeher. 12.自我介绍 MynameisAmy.Iamtwelveyearsold.Ihavegottwobigeyes.Iamtall.Iamfriendly.Ilikereadingbooks.IcanspeakEnglishwell.Icanplaybasketball.ButIcantswim.Iwanttobeateacher. 篇四：年4月大学英语B统考十套模拟题作文范文 大学英语B模拟题作文范文 （一） HappyThingsinMyChildhood 1.介绍主要童年趣事； 2.描述一件主要趣事 Ihadahappytimeinmychildhood.Ididmanyinterestthingsthen.Herearesomeofthem. Ispentmychildhoodtimeinmyhometown,asmallvillagelocatedinsouthernChina.Thereisasmallandcleanrivergoingaroundmyvillage.SomylittlefriendsandIoftengotoplaythere.ThinkwhatwedidattheriverWeswimmedintheriver.Wecaughtkindsoffishes.Weplayedfootballfromdawntothedark.Amongthesethings,Ilikefishingbest.Yes,wecalleditfishing,althoughwedidnthaveanytoolsandskills.Whatweonlyhadwasourhands. （二） MyFavoriteSeason 1说明自己最喜欢的季节； 2陈述喜欢这一季节的原因可以描写这一季节的景色或是记述在这一季节最让人难忘的经历 Therefourseasonsinayear,amongwhichIlikesummerbest.WhyIhavethreereasonshere.Firstly,thatisbecauseIcanwearlessclothesinthesummerseason.Ihatethefeelinghavingtoomuchclothesonmybody. Secondly,Icanswiminsummer.Ilikeswimming.WhenIamswimminginapool,Ifeellikeafish,whichinmyeyeisthefreestanimalonthisplanet.Ihavebeenwantedtobeeafishfrommychildhoodtime. Finally,naturalscenesareattheirmostbeautifultimeinsummer. （三） MyFavoriteFormofEntertainment 1.现代人越来越重视娱乐； 2.娱乐方式丰富多彩而我最喜欢的是 3.我选择的原因 Inmodemsociety,peoplepaymoreandmoreattentiontoentertainmentthanbefore. Therearemanyformsofentertainment,butmyfavoriteformofentertainmentiswatchingTVinmysparetime.Afteradayofhardwork,IlookforwardtoagoodrelaxationandwatchingTVisagoodmeansofrelaxation.ThepleasantmusiconTVcankeepmeawayfromtensionandfatigue,TheexcitingmoviesandTVplayseriescanmakemeenjoydifferentkindsoflifeasifIantheactorinit,andtheEducationTVserviceoffersteachingprogramsonallsubjectstome.Inaword,watchingTVreallyentertainsmealot. （四） 1.你学习英语的主要理由； 2.说明学习英语给你带来的益处 WhyIStudyEnglishIlearnEnglishforinmodernsociety,Englishbeesmoreandmoreimportant.Therearetwopointsonthis.OneisthatweshouldworkhardtolearningEnglishwellinordertofollowthepresentinternationaldevelopment.TheotheristhatwestudyEnglishonlyforcollege,soweneedntlearnitandafterthegraduationwewontbeabletouseit.IagreewiththefirstonebecauseEnglishisalanguagespokenbybillonsofpeopleandnowisplayinganimportantrolewithininternationalbusinessandtrade.AndEnglishisthespokenlanguageintheUN.Soitisofimportancetolearnitwell.Weshouldknowwellabouttheworld.learningitwellwillhelpyoushowyourselftotheworld （五） 1.简单介绍中国新年即春节； 2.你最喜欢的新年庆祝活动 TheChineseNewYearTheChineseNewYearisanimportantfestivalforChinesepeopleallovertheword.ItisalsocalledTheSpringFestivalorTheLunarNewYear. Theexactdateofthefestivalonthewesterncalendarchangesfromyeartoyear.HoweverTheChineseNewYeartakeplacefromJanuary1sttoFebruary19th. OntheChinesecalendareveryyearhasananimalsname.Theseanimalsarerat,ox,tiger,rabbit,dragon,snake,horse,ram,monkey,rooster,dogandpig.AChineselegendsaysthesetwelveanimalshadarace,thefirstyearwasnamedaftertherat,thewinner.Theotherelevenyearswerenamedaccordingtotheordertheanimalsarrivedintherace.Thecleverratjumpedontheoxsback,andthenatetheendjumpedovertheoxsheadtoarrivefirst. TheChinesebelievethatthepeoplebornontheparticularyearhassomeoftheanimalscharacteristicsofthatanimal/ （六） 1.网络教育的优势； 2.你选择网络教育的理由 OnlineEducation Nowadays,thereistendencythatmoreandmorepeopledecidetotakecoursesonline.Lifeeducationhaveformeditsnewshape:onlineeducation. Frommypointofview,thereasonsforthisarethat:modernpeoplehaveanincreasingpaceoflifeandhavenootherchoicetotakebettereducation,andtheinternetsolvetheproblembyitsuniquesuperior.Ithavemanyscheduletotakeandreducethedistinctofspace.Besides,wecanmakeafacetofacemunicationbyinternetjustlikehavingaprivateteacher. Isupportthisnewwaytostudy.HowfortableitistolearnwhatIneedinanytimeIwantandbrowsenumbersofusefulinformationwithoutleavinghomeforastepIholdthepointthat,there mustwillbebroadfutureforonlineeducationtogrow.Anditwilldomanypeopleahelptogetfurtherdevelopment. （七）（八）（九）同前 （十） 选择一个你想旅游的地点并安排旅行计划你应包括下列内容： 1.说明你想旅游的地点； 2.说明你为什么选择这个地点； 3.描述你的旅行计划 Thiswinterholiday,IwanttogotoBeijing.Becauseitisverybeautifulcitywithalonghistory.AndIreallywanttovisittheGreatWall,itssofamous. Iplantotravelfourdays.Thefirstday,IwillgotoBeijingbyplane.Iwillarrivethereintheafternoon.Intheevening,IplantogoshoppingintheWangfujingStreettobuysomepresentformyfriend.Insecondday,IwillgototheSummerPalace.Thenextday,ImgoingtotheGreatWall.Atlast,Iwillebackbyplane,too. WrittenandeditedbyLiNing 篇五：英语作文范例 MyEnglishTeacher MissTangismyEnglishteacher.Shesverypretty.Sheistallandthin.Shehastwobigeyesandasmallmouth.Herhairislong.Shelikescatsverymuch.Andshelikessinginganddancing,too.HerEnglishisverygood.WeoftenplaygamesinEnglishclasses.Sheisverykindtous.Weallloveher. 【要领点评】 这篇作文的题目是“我的英语老师”是一篇介绍人物的作文小作者开门见山直接点题首先介绍了英语老师的姓名然后逐一介绍了她的外貌特征、喜好、英语水平、上课特点以及师生情感等 小朋友们在写作文时要注意使用自己最熟悉的词组以免写出一些错句子写作时要注意意思连贯、语句通顺、标点正确、书写清晰、规范等 MyFavouriteFoodDoyouknowwhatthisisGuessItscolourisyellow.Itslongandthin.Itlookslikeasmallboatandcrescent.Oh,itisabanana.DoyouknowwhatthatisGuessagainItscolourisorange.Itsround.Itlookslikeasmallballandasmalllantern.Oh,itisanorange.Ilikethenalot.Ilikeicecreams.Iliketochewgum.Chocolatesandcandiesareyummy.Ilikethemverymuch. HowaboutyouWhatsyourfavouritefood 【要领点评】 MyFavouriteFood是一篇很成功的文章小作者并不是简单地列举出自己最喜欢的每一种食物而是有详有略地进行介绍整篇文章用词准确、语言流畅、没有语法错误另外文章中出现了一些生词可见小作者是用心查字典了 IcanhelpdohouseworkIamagirl.MynameisLiLing.IminClassThree,GradeFive.Imhelpfulathome.Icanwatertheflowers,emptythetrashandsweepthefloor.Aftermeals,Icanhelpmymotherdothedishes.OnSunday,Icanwashtheclothes.WhataboutyouAreyouhelpful,too 【要领点评】 本篇作文的题目是“我可以帮助做家务”作者主要叙述自己在家帮助做的事情介绍自己的名字所在年级及在家能做的家务很详细到位 小朋友们在写作时应尽量写一些亲自经历的事情这样会避免在作文时显得太空因为只有自己经常做的事情印象才会特别深刻写作时还要注意大小写和时态 InTheKitchenThisisthekitchenofmyfamily.Itsbigandnice.LookMymotheriscookinginit.Thisisamicrowaveandthatisastove.Thereisabigtablehere.Therearemanythingsonit.WhataretheseTheylookyummyOh,theyrestrawberries.AndwhatarethoseTheyaregrapes. 【要领点评】 这篇作文的题目是“在厨房”里作者根据自己家的厨房情况介绍厨房里有微波炉和电炉有一张大桌子和桌子上的物品等以及妈妈在做饭非常 小朋友们可以从观察自己身边的事、物写起利用所学的句子描述身边熟悉的东西来训练习作 Myvillageisverybeautiful.Therearemanyhousesinthevillage.Nearthevillage,thereisaforest.Asmallriverisinfrontofthevillage.Thewaterinitisveryclean.Wecanseesomefishintheriver.Neartheriver,youcanseeamountain.Someflowersandgrassareonthemountain.Ilikemyvillage.Weletomyvillage 【要领点评】 本文以“我的村庄”为题描述了自己家乡的风景介绍了村庄的房屋、森林、河流及大山使人看了这篇作文后确实感觉到“我的村庄”的美丽小朋友们在写作时可仔细想一下自己的村庄或所在城市的特点尽量使用本单元学过的单词或短语进行叙述 MySeasons Wehavefourseasonsinayear.Icandomanyinterestingthingsineachseason.Inspring,theweatheriscoolandwind,Icanflykiteswhenitswind.AndIcangohikingwithmyfamilywhenitssunnyandcool.Ilikehiking.SummerishotinthenorthofChina,butitsnotlongtime.Ioftengoswimming.Itcanmakemehealthyandstrong.Icanalsowearmybeautifuldresses.Fallisaseasonwithharvest.AndIcaneatdeliciousfruitsinthisseason.Icanwatchtheleavesfall.Winteres,itsoftensnowyinwinterinmyhometown.Whenitsnows,everythingiswhite.Wecanplaywithsnowandmakeasnowman,skateandski.Andwinterismyfavouriteseason,becauseoftheSpringFestival.Iloveseasons.Ilovethenature. 【要领点评】 写法：这篇短文是描述“我的四季”在写法上是根据春、夏、秋、冬四季的更替来写的先讲明每个季节的特征之后再写在这个季节中的主要活动或比较有代表性的活动同时讲一些自己的感受最后阐述自己最喜欢的季节在实际的写作的时候我们还可以先写出自己喜爱的季节及主要的活动内容之后再去讲其他几个季节还可以多讲解一下地域的季节特征和大自然中的其他景色如：秋天的田地里一片金黄农民在收割等等这样写出来的四季更贴近实际 时态：这篇习作讲的是“我的四季”是比较惯常的一些行为所以我们最好采用一般现在时和情态动词结合活动的写法即：在什么季节天气如何我们可以做什么 注意：在写作内容上不可以像以往的内容那么简单因为有四个季节所以要写明季节季节天气季节性活动活动的人活动的感受等要求句子顺序要正确在写作中还要注意关联词的使用如用了“因为”就不能用“所以”二者不可以同时出现词量要控制在80个词以内 MyBirthdayParty Everyyear,whenitsbirthday,myparentsholdapartyforme.Theyinvitemyfriendtoetomyhousetocelebratemybirthday.Icangetmanybeautifulgiftseveryyear.Inmyparty,wecandomanythings: 1.Lightthecandles. 2.Singa“HappyBirthday”song. 3.Makeawish. 4.Blowoutthecandles. 5.Cutoffthecake. 6.Eatthecake. 7.Openthepresents. 8.Singanddance. 9.Watchvideosorplayothergames. 10.Saygoodbyewitheachother. Thatsmybirthdayparty,isitinteresting 写法：这篇习作是按活动的顺序来写的记叙了生日晚会的各项具体活动比较全面比较以前几个单元的写作写法这个短文按活动顺序比较合适 时态：这篇短文可以用三种时态来写： 1、一般将来时：主要说明生日晚会份的各项计划都将如何进行 2、一般现在时：主要说明习惯上如何度过每个生日 3、一般过去时：主要说明你的生日晚会是如何进行的 句型：invitesb.todosth.邀请某人做某事 注意：由于这篇短文很有局限性所表达的大体上都基本相同所以在书写的时候要注意结合自己的实际活动与真情实感去写另外注意一些短语和单词的书写不要发生错误： eg.“吹蜡烛”要写成“blowoutthecandles”而不能写成“blowcandles” Myfamily Therearefivepeopleinmyfamily.Theyaremygrandma,grandpa,dad,momandI.LookGrandmaiswatchingTV.Grandpaisreadingabook.Dadiswritinganemail.Momiscookingdinner.Iamdoingmyhomework.Ilovemyfamily 【要领点评】 写法：这篇习作介绍了自己家的家庭成员以及此刻他们正在干什么表达了自己对家人的感情时态：由于本单元主要讲的是现在进行时态所以建议采用现在进行时态 句型：主语+be+动词的现在分词 注意：本单元的重点是现在进行时态注意在写句子时要保持时态的完整性即系动词和动词的ing缺一不可 Inthepark Itissunnytoday.Mymother,myfatherandIaregoingtothepark.Weliketheparkverymuch.Itisverybigandbeautiful.Therearemanytreesandflowersinit.Manypeopleliketogothere.LookAnoldmanissittingonthechair.Heisreadingabookcarefully.Twoboysarejumpingontheground.Theirmothersaretalkingwitheachother.Twobirdsareflyinginthesky.Theducksareswimmingintheriver.Theyareveryhappy.WhatisthecatdoingOh,itisrunningafteramouse.Itsapoormouse. 【要领点评】 写法：这篇习作是用现在进行时描绘出公园里的人和动物们正在进行的活动还运用了一般现在时叙述了公园美丽的景色 时态：这篇文章可以采用一般现在时和现在进行时两种时态由于本单元的语法项目是现在进行时因此描述的重点要放在现在进行时态上 句型：一般现在时：主语+谓语+其他 现在进行时：（1）What+be(am,is,are)+主语+v.ing+其他 （2）主语+be(am,is,are)+v.ing+其他 LiYingSHobby LiYinglikesEnglishverymuch.Sheworkshardatit.ShereadsEnglisheverymorning.ShelikesspeakingEnglish.Sheoftenlistenstotheradio.ShewatchesTVonlyonSaturdayevening. DoesshelikedancingNo,shedoesnt.Butshelikesdrawingandsinging.Herparentsloveher.Andalltheteachersandherfriendslikeher,too.Shesaysherhobbiesmakeherhappy. 这一篇写爱好的文章,小作者的写作思路很值得我们学习,他没有具体写到刘莹的某一种爱好,而是从学习到课余的多种爱好入手,对刘莹的各种爱好进行了粗线条地勾画.从“爱好”这个角度来看刘莹的话我们会觉得这个形象很饱满 小朋友们写这种“叙事写人”作文时可以从两个角度下手：一是具体地描绘；二是和上面小朋友一样粗线条地勾画二者各有所长另处在行文中使用一些问句使用一些转述的话可以使作文更有灵气避免了平铺直叙的缺点比如上文的“DoesshelikedancingNo,shedoesnt.”和“shesaysherhobbiesmakeherhappy.”就是十分不错的句子使读者眼前为之一亮 Dontbeagainstthetrafficrules IgotoschoolfromMondaytoFriday.Igotoschoolbybikeat7:30inthemorning.Imustcrosstwobusyroads.Ifthetrafficlightisredoryellow,IknowIcantcrosstheroad,soIwait. Ifthelightturnsgreen,Iknowitmeans“Go”,andthenIwalkacrosstheroad.Ialwaysrideontherightsideoftheroad.Iamneveragainstthetrafficrules. 【要领点评】 这篇作文的题目是“不要违反交通规则”小作者没有说一些空话而是从自己的经历写起叙述自己以什么方式去上学在上学的路上是做的很形象 小朋友们在作文时注意不要图大那样很容易使文章显得空洞而要写自己身边熟悉的事情要注意行文中字母的大小写、句子的标点符号等 ILoveMyFamily Hereisaphotolfmyfamily.Thesearefourpeopleinmyfamily.Theyaremyfather,mymother,mybrotherandI. Myfatherisadoctor.Heworksinahospitalfaraway.Hegoestoworkbysubway.Mymotherisateacher.Sheworksinaschoolnearmyhome.Shegoestoworkbybike.Afterwork,theylikereadingbooks.Whoisthetallboy