雅思写作全面解读之勤奋与天份哪个更重要-智课教育出国考试.pdf

智 课 网 雅 思 备 考 资 料 雅思写作全面解读之勤奋与天份哪个更重要 智课教育 出国考试 雅思写作全面解读之勤奋与天份哪个更重要 考生们想要写出一篇 优秀的文章来就不妨和智课教育小编一起来学习学习吧 题目 It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents for instance for sport or music and others are not However it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician Discuss both these views and give your own opinion Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience 有人天生就有某种天份 比如体育和音乐的天份 但是有人说任何 孩子都可能被教成运动员和音乐家 讨论两种观点 范文介绍 This model has been prepared by an examiner as an example of a very good answer However please note that this is just one example out of many possible approaches 头脑风暴 这篇文章其实考察的是勤奋和天份哪一个对于成功更加重要 人人 都渴望成功 但是一些特殊的领域 像音乐 体育 文学和艺术创造等 杰出的人物多是需要天赋的 乔丹不一定是最勤奋的运动员 但是一 定是最有篮球天赋的 莫扎特从三岁时就显出了非凡的音乐天才 他时 常走到钢琴前面 按着琴键细听 并努力弹出他曾经听到过的音乐 但 是世间毕竟还是凡人为多 我们也常说小马过河酬勤 勤能补拙 成功 是99 的勤奋 1 的天份 所以支持勤奋明显是更站得住脚 经典语料库 1 acquire 学习 尤其是指知识和技能的获得 2 innatetalents 与生俱来的才华 3 inherit 遗传而得 4 nature 天份 5 nurture 后天的教育 6 excel 优秀 胜过他人 7 exceptional 优秀的 8 facility 便利 容易 9 via 通过 10 versus 于 相对 谋篇布局 Para 1 背景介绍 争议焦点 作者首段没有提出观点 自然过渡到 了论证的部分 也留下了想象空间 激发读者兴趣的 文无定法 Para 2 反方 支持勤奋 观点的合理性 Para 3 正方 支持天份 观点的合理性 Para 4 写作意图 客观辩证的让步正方法观点的合理性 综合正反 方观点的合理性提出自己的个性观点 Para 5 总结观点 明确提出支持反方观点 但是又让步了一下正方 观点的合理性 The relative importance of natural talent and training is a frequent topic of discussion when people try to explain different levels of ability in for example 插入语 sport artor music Obviously education systems are based on the belief that all children can effectively be taught to acquire different skills including those associated with sport artor music So from our own school experience we can find plenty of evidence to support the view that 用事实支持论点 a child can acquire these skills with continued teaching and guided practice However some people believe that innate talent is what differentiates a person who has been trained to play a sport or an instrument from those who become good players In other words 再解释 there is more to the skill than a learned technique and this extra talent cannot be taught no matter how good the teacher or how frequently a child practices I personally think that 写作意图 some people do have talents that are probably inherited via their genes Such talents can give individuals a facility for certain skills that allow them to excel while more hard working students never manage to reach a comparable level But as with all questions of nature versus nurture they are not mutually exclusive Good musicians or artists and exceptional sports stars have probably succeeded because of both good training and natural talent Without the natural talent continuous training would be neither attractive norproductive and without the training the child would not learn how to exploitand develop their talent In conclusion I agree that any c