雅思地图题之岛屿旅游设施建成前后的对比-智课教育出国考试.pdf

智 课 网 雅 思 备 考 资 料 雅思地图题之岛屿旅游设施建成前后的对比 智课教育 出国考试 雅思小作文中 地图题与流程图较为特殊 考生要给予充分的重视 学会分析图中信息 并合理组织文章结构才会赢得高分 今天 智课 教育小编带来的是雅思地图题之岛屿旅游设施建成前后的对比 一起来 学习一下吧 雅思作文题目 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task The two maps show an island before and after the construction of some tourist facilities Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant Write at least 150 words 剑9 test1 task1 范文 The two maps show the same island while first one is before and the second one is after the construction for tourism Looking first at the one before construction we can see a huge island with a beach in the west The total length of the island is approximately 250 metres Moving on to the second map we can see that there are lots of buildings on the island There are two areas of accommodation One is in the west near the beach while the other one is in the centre of the island Between them there is a restaurant in the north and a central reception block which is surrounded by a vehicle track This track also goes down to the pier where people can go sailing in the south sea of the island Furthermore tourists can swim near the beach in the west A footpath connecting the western accommodation units also leads to beach Overall comparing the two maps there are significant changes after this development Not only lots of facilities are built on the island but also the sea is used for activities The new island has become a good place for tourism 一 题目类型 地图题 2个图 二 题目简要内容 一个小岛旅游设施建成前后的对比 三 素材积累 central reception block 中央接待区 western accommodation units 西部居住单元 pier 码头 连接词 while and also furthermore overall not only but also 指示代词和替换表达 the same the first one the second one the one before construction the second map one the other one them which this track where 四 论据积累 无论是雅思小作文中的哪种题型 考生要根据图中所给信息来进行 描述 不要凭空捏造 那样只会画蛇添足 影响分数 五 结构分析 整体分析 通过地图 我们可以看到本图没有拆毁岛上原有的部分 而有增加 了一些变化 即岛屿中部和西部有两处可以住宿的度假屋子 环形围绕 人们可以通过人行道由西部的度假屋通往海滩 此外 在两个度假屋 中间坐落着餐馆和接待处 人们可以通过行车道通向岛屿南面的码头 在 码头附近还有帆船可供出海航行 文章可划分为四段 第一段改写题目指出两幅图的主要内容 第二段和第三段分别描写旅游设施建设之前和之后的变化情况 第四段总结两幅地图的主要差异 具体分析 首段 首段改写题目并介绍了地图的基本信息 The two maps show the same island while first one is before and the second one is after the construction for tourism 该句较为简单的介绍 但是句中存在语法错误 即while是表示对 比关系 first表示序数词 前面应加the 因此 此句应改为The two maps show the same island and while the first one is before the second one is after the construction for tourism 第二段 第二段简单的描述了图一 指出岛屿西部有一个巨大的沙滩以及岛 屿的总长度 Looking first at the one before construction we can see a huge island with a beach in the west The total length of the island is approximately 250 metres 但是描述的过于简单化 考生可以添加一些其他的内容进去 使描 述更充分 比如从图中我们也可以看到岛屿东西方有一些小树林 approximately 大约 近似 第三段 第三段描述旅游设施建设后岛屿的变化 即新增住宿区 餐馆 接 待处 码头 帆船等 第一句话为总的概述 Moving on to the second map we can see that there are lots of buildings on the island 接下来就是具体描述新增的东西都有哪些 1 住宿区There are two areas of accommodation One is in the west near the beach while the other one is in the centre of the island 2 餐馆以及接待处Between them there is a restaurant in the north and a central reception block which is surrounded by a vehicle track 3 码头This track also goes down to the pier where people can go sailing in the south sea of the island Furthermore tourists can swim near the beach in the west A footpath connecting the western accommodation units also leads to beach accommodation 住处 膳宿 pier 码头 go sailing 去航海 去航行 footpath 人行道 句中of 应改为to 表示毗邻关系 结尾段 结尾段首先指出旅游业建设前后岛屿发生的变化 然后指出不仅在 岛屿内有变化 海上也被充分利用起来 Overall comparing the two maps there are significant changes after this development Not only lots of facilities are built on the island but also the sea is used for activities The new island has become a good place for tourism 加粗句中有语法错误 not only为否定放在句首时 要使用倒装形 式 因此 本句应改为 Not only are lots of facilities built on the island but also the sea is used for activities 参考译文 这两幅图显示的是同一座岛屿 图一和图二分别显示了该岛在旅游 业建设之前和之后的情形 首先看建设之前的这张图 我们可以看到一个巨大的岛屿 西面有 海滩 岛的总长度大约为250米 现在来