三一口语4级自选话题稿---宠物蓝蓝.docx

云舟学校三一口语金牌导师点评4级优秀自选话题作文三一口语4级自选话题稿宠物蓝蓝My Petblue blue云舟学员：孙思桐 报考级别:三一四级 云舟指导老师：王桦云舟王老师点评：小作者非常喜欢小兔子，所以就以my pet为标题来叙述她和她的宠物小白兔蓝蓝的有趣故事。因为小作者对蓝蓝非常喜爱，所以在完成自选话题作业时也非常的认真，话题的准备的也非常的积极。所以帮助孩子们准备自选话题的时候,一定要选择孩子感兴趣的内容,不然就会变成了简单机械的背诵和填鸭式的教学.1. How did I get my little rabbit?I wanted to have a pet, since I was very young.One day my mother, my father and I went shopping on my birthday.We went to a market selling plants and animals,because they had promised me to buy a little pet as my birthday present. When we arrived there, I saw a lot of boxes and in the boxes there were a lot of cute pets inside. I suddenly stopped, when I saw a box with some little rabbits. There were black rabbits and white rabbits. they were so lovely. And I was so excited. Because I like little rabbits so much, and I like white rabbits best. So I told my mother that I wanted a little rabbit as my pet. Then I chose a smaller rabbit and my mother bought a little box as its home. Then we went home with my little lovely present. I thought it was my best present that I had got. Teacher which one do you like ,black or white?云舟王老师点评：首段叙述了小作者是怎样得到小白兔的，主要运用了四级的语法点-过去式。2. Whats the most interesting thing between me and my little rabbit?The most interesting thing between us was that one time my mother let me put my rabbit in its box, because it was late night. After putting it in its box, I went to sleep, too. But when I got up next morning, I found my little rabbit was not in its box. Then I looked for it everywhere, but I still couldnt find it. I was very worried about my little rabbit. Suddenly I heard some noise. I turned round, and found it eating my fathers shoes.Because it was so hungry. Luckily, my fathers shoes were OK. My father wasnt angry with it, either. Because my father also thought it was very funny. My little rabbit is so naughty and cute. I really love my little, naughty blue, blue.云舟王老师点评：此段主要写了小作者和小白兔，蓝蓝的有趣故事，在此段中主要运用的语法点是动词过去式和形容词的比较级，最高级。3. What am I going to have another pet in the future?I am going to buy a black rabbit, because “ blue blue”doesnt have friend to play. Because I have to go to school and after school I have a lot of homework to do. And at weekend I always have many extra-classes. So my little blue blue always stays alone at home. I think it sometimes feels lonely. I am going to call the black rabbit “black black” . I am going to buy a bigger box as their home. My mother said she is going to buy a black rabbit as my birthday present on my birthday. ,I am going to play with them, when I am free. And my little blue blue is going to be the happiest, because it is going to play with black black. It is not going to feel lonely any more. Teacher do you sometimes feel lonely?云舟王老师点评：此段主要运用的四级语法是频率副词和将来时 be going to。4.why do I love rabbits?I love rabbits , because rabbits have a pair of long ears, a short tail, small nose and big red eyes. It is so little and lovely that I can hold it with my palm. Rabbit is white.I love the color-snow white. My rabbits name is blue blue . My rabbit likes eating vegetable , cabbage and so on,I usually play with my rabbit, blue blue at night, because I usually have no time to play with it. I always sleep with my rabbit at the same time, but it always get up early than me. My little rabbit dislikes drinking water, so I usually feed it with some vegetables with more w