英语翻译练习8.doc

大家论坛外刊精读版 /forum-427-1.html翻译练习第8期本文摘自今日美国报6月11日news/world/story版，红色句子为今天的翻译练习，今天的练习有一定难度，大家准备好了吗U.S. students survive 9 days in New Zealand bushTwo U.S. students trapped in the New Zealand wilderness by a snowstorm trekked back out to safety after surviving their nine-day ordeal by rationing their meager supplies of trail mix and warming themselves in hot springs.Alec Brown and Erica Klintworth, both 21, returned to the city of Christchurch on Monday after meeting up with members of a search team famished but otherwise in good shape, police said.The two students, on a foreign study program in New Zealand with University of Wisconsin Stevens Point, had planned to hike and camp for a few days at some hot springs on the countrys South Island. But heavy rains and a snowstorm during the Southern Hemisphere winter prevented the couple from being able to cross a river and return.Unfortunately it rained and rained, day after day, and snowed, Brown wrote in an e-mail to the Associated Press Monday.He said the nights were tough to take because the rain and sleet pounded down on the tarpaulin covering their sleeping hammock and the river roared reminding them all the time of their predicament.When they realized they were going to be stuck they started rationing: a biscuit and jelly one day, Brown wrote and even less another.Browns mother Lisa, of Inver Grove Heights, Minn., said she panicked when she first found out her son was missing.Its too much for a mom, she told the AP. Especially when theyre that far away. I just felt so helpless.She had faith that Alec, an environmental science major, knew the outdoors well enough to survive, she said, adding that Erica, who is studying graphic design, is a strong woman.The couples ordeal began June 1 when friend Katie Jenkins, another UW student, dropped them off at a national park on the South Islands West Coast so they could hike in and camp for a few days.They were just going to the hot springs, to chill out and study for finals, Jenkins said, adding that she continued on with her own travels and didnt realize the couple were missing until eight days had passed, which is when she raised the alarm.版友答案汇总6月8日在承受住了9天的严酷考验之后 两名被暴风雪困在新西兰荒地中的美国学生经过艰苦跋涉回到了安全地带 他们通过定量分配本身就不多的什锦干果和在温泉中取暖挺过了这9天他们只是去泡温泉 去缓和情绪并且准备期末而已 詹金斯说 她继续了自己的旅行 直到8天过后她才意识到那两个人失踪了 这引起了她的警觉 詹金斯补充说xpress两个由于暴风雪被困于野外的美籍学生，在经历了九天的严酷考验之后，通过长途跋涉回到了安全的地方。-这个不是很好翻译啊，中间描述他们分配供给和温泉取暖的这一句放到哪里都觉得不够通顺，楼主有没有比较好的翻译呢，看楼上翻译的挺好，不过感觉还是挺别扭的。Jenkins说她们原本打算去温泉放松，并为期末考试做准备。然而她直到八天之后才发现少了两个人，于是就报了警。qaz11sc0616翻译：两个美国学生被一场暴风雪困在了新西兰荒野，他们在9天的严峻考验下通过定量分配他们粗陋的食物和在温泉中取暖存活下来，并且走回到了安全地。疑问:1.trekked back out to safety这种三个介词放在动宾之间，怎么去分析成分？虽然翻译上没多大问题。2.supplies of trail mix这个后置定语翻译不出来，做何解释？第二句相对来说简单些。Jenkins 说他们本来打算去泡温泉，去放松一下，准备期末考试。并且还说：她一直在旅行，直到8天过去，她才意识到这两人失踪了，这给她敲响了警钟讨论：trail mix今天之前也不懂查了下有道词典是“旅行什锦干果仁”或是“什锦干果”都行至于第一个问题应该可以这么解释back out to虽然是三个介词，但是连起来算是个固定搭配了，是“回到”的意思吴亚光嗯，第一句：一场突如其来的暴风雪将两名美国学生困在了新西兰的荒野中，在经历了9天的严酷考验后他们才艰难的返回了安全区，期间他们只能定量食用微薄的旅行什锦，在温泉中驱寒。第二句：当时他们正在赶往温泉地点，为的是能静下心来为期末考试做准备, Jenkins说到，之后她自己便继续自己的旅程，8天过去后她才意识到他们二人走失了，这才发出了警报。elf_lark今天好热闹啊，咱们的这个栏目越来越火咯1. 两名美国学生在再新西兰的一场风暴中受灾，没有干粮充饥，考温泉取暖，经过9天的严酷考验，他们艰苦跋涉，转危为安。2. 詹金斯说：“他们只想去温泉放松放松，然后复习期末考试。”他补充道，她继续旅行，直到第九天她才意识到那对夫妇失踪了，也就是这时候她发出的警报。超凡动力在经历了9天的艰险后，在新西兰荒郊野地里遭受了暴风雪而被困的两个美国学生经过艰苦跋涉后终于走到安全地方。在这9天里，他们限量供应他们贫乏的粮食储备，边走边在温泉里取暖。Jenkins说，他们正将走到温泉，去安静的学习和准备年终考试，她补充说，她继续自己的旅行，直到8天后，她