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英语填空式作文法苑 涛 樊 一 昕 丛书总策划思马得主 编中国出版集团PDF created with pdfFactory Pro trial version httpcom图书在版编目CIP 数据同等学力人员申请硕士学位英语填空式作文法思马得主编上海东方出版中心 2003思马得英语系列ISBN 7-80186-123-X 同 思 英语-写作-研究生-统一考试-自学参考资料 H315中国版本图书馆 CIP 数据核字2003 第 097359 号同等学力人员申请硕士学位英语填空式作文法出版发行 东方出版中心地址 上海市仙霞路 345 号电话 62417400邮政编码 200336经销 新华书店上海发行所印刷 常熟市大宏印刷有限公司开本 8501168 毫米 132 字数 200 千印张 8版次 2003 年 12 月第 1 版 2003 年 12 月第 1 次印刷ISBN 7-80186-123-X定价 1280 元版权所有侵权必究 PDF created with pdfFactory Pro trial versionhttpcom前言思马得独创的填空式作文法受到了读者的极大关注在众多图书排行榜中填空式作文法系列丛书的排名一直高居不下成为读者的最爱其原因在于它能够快速而有效地帮助考生获得高分从而使得英语考试中最难克服的作文变成了最容易掌握占用复习时间最少的部分在我们相继推出了 TOEFL GMAT IELTS 4 级 6 级 研究生英语入学考试填空式作文法之后应广大读者的要求同等学力人员申请硕士学位英语填空式作文法也应运而生了在阅读本书前我们先给你两个建议1 如果现在离考试的时间只剩一星期甚至只有 3 天了那么请你看完本书概述后立即翻到第五章填空式模板把每种题型的模板背下 23 个去准备你的铅笔和橡皮吧我们相信你便能获得高分2 如果现在离考试还有很长一段时间那么就请你慢慢地品味本书我们相信通过你的学习和努力一定能获得满意的成绩将作文简化为填空的方法是本书的特点所在也是你考取高分的一个非常好的捷径何乐而不阅读之呢思马得图书编辑部2003 年12 月PDF created with pdfFactory Pro trial version httpcom目录第 一 章同 等 学 力 人 员 申 请 硕 士 学 位 英 语 作 文 概 述第二 章写 作 步 骤第 三 章命 题 形 式第 四 章写 作 元 素第 五 章填 空式 模 板第 六 章精 选 范 文第 七 章常 用 词 汇 及 词 组第 八 章常 用句 型PDF created with pdfFactory Pro trial version httpcom第 一 章同等学力人员申请硕士学位英语作文概述根据国务院学位委员会关于授予具有研究生毕业同等学力人员硕士博士学位的规定和国务院学位委员会办公室 1994 年下达的关于在职人员以同等学力申请硕士学位外国语课程水平统一考试的通知的规定同等学力申请硕士学位英语考试要求考生在 30 分钟内按照题目说明中的要求写出一篇约 120150 个词的短文形式可为按所给提纲进行写作或看图作文描述图表写内容提要等由于时间有限对于大多数考生来说要获得高分并不容易所以在进入考场之前必须对文章的框架和写法有个总体把握使自己不致临场手忙脚乱本书归纳了近十年来同等学力人员申请硕士学位作文以下简称申请学位作文的命题规律并以此为基础将命题形式进行了分类另外还提供了大量的模板供读者选择练习考试时你只需选择符合命题形式的模板进行填空即可要想在写作中获得高分在着手学习之前必须清楚申请学 位作文的评分标准申请学位英语作文要求所写文字要切合主题意义连贯标点正确无重大语言错误其评分采用总体评分的原则不是把短文的内容和语言分开来计分而是从内容和语言两个方面综合考虑如果语言文字很好但是内容不切题 会被评为零分反之如果内容切题可是文字错误百出语句不通用词不当也不能得高分申请学位作文评标分 准强调语言的规范性与条理性以及文字的准确性和连贯性申请学位作文分 满 15 分分为以下五个评标分 准考生可照参 这样的准标 来进练行习从而对作文有一个总体的把握具体评分标准为1 15 分12 分标准 内容切题完整 表达思想清楚 文字通 性好顺 连贯 句子结构用词正确基本上无法 语 错误 句式有 化变 文章长度符合要求2 11 分9 分标准 内容切题完整 表比 楚达 较清 文字基本通 顺 连贯性较好PDF created with pdfFactory Pro trial version httpcom 句子结构用词有少量一般性错误 句式有一定变化 文章 度符合要求长3 8 分6 分标准 内容基本切 题 有些地方表 思想不 楚达 够清 文字勉强通 顺 语言错误比较多 文章 度符合要求长4 5 分3 分标准 内容基本符合要求 表 思想不 楚达 清 语句尚可理解但连贯性差 语言错误多有些是重 严 错误 文章 度基本符合要求长5 2 分0 分标准 没有理解题意 表 思想不 楚达 清只有少数句子可以理解注白卷作文与题目毫不相关或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达意思则给0 分为了使评标分 准形象化我们现在以一道作文题为例对应不同得分等分 级别给出范文和范文点评便于读者更好地体 会 研究这些范文 时 请注意得分及文章是否切 题范文DIRECTIONS For this part you are to write a composition of 120150 words on the following topic The GreatestInvention in the Past Century In yourcomposition you should clearly state your opinionand give reasons to supportyour argument Write yourcomposition on the ANSWER SHEET2001 年试题得分14 分In my view computer network is the greatest invention in thepast dazzling century for nothing has more fundamentally shaped ourlives than it has Thefollowing are the impacts it has exerted onusFirst it has facilitated our business and improved the efficiencyItsnow very convenient for you to manipulate keyboards to countnumbers process data and design pictures swiftly and accuratelySecond it has altered our way of living and mode of workingYou neednot get up at dawn to bustle up to the office Just with aclick of mouse in your own cozy room you can do whatever youre askedPDF created with pdfFactory Pro trial version httpcomto do in the office farawayLast but not least it has added joy to our daily lives You canemail friends chat with others download songs and surf on the Internetto have fun in your leisure timeTo sun up if there were no computer network our life would bevery different范文点评 内容切 题 紧紧围绕文章的中心问题上世纪伟最大的发明进行分析和讨论 表达思想清楚 文字通 性好使用了一些 接 如 whatever with 等顺 连贯 连 词 句式变化多 样 如顶点小说 www.hjsm.cc In my view Its now very convenient for you toIt has facilitated 等 基本上没有言 语 错误得分11 分The greatest invention in the past century is TV TV brings usmuch enjoyment and information If there were no TV life would begreatly differentFirst TV makes us well informed of the latest eventsaround theworld TV makes the world smaller and smaller Almost as soon as ithappens we can get the information Everyone is more concerned withthe big things than ever beforeSecond the advertisements on TV give us a closer look at thegoods we need For example an ill person can get some informationof the new medicine on TVThird TV plays an educational role to some extent Nowadaystherere many educational program on TV The audience can learnlanguages computer skills through itFourth TV can rich our life Watching TV is a good entertainmentAftera days hard work we can sit in front of TV and watch someentertaining program Thats a good way relaxTV is great inventionWecan take advantage of it and enjoy a happier life with it范文点评 内容切 题 表达思想比较清楚 文字基本通 理性 好用了 接 First Second Third 等顺条 较 连 词 句式有一定变化 If there were no as soon asPDF created with pdfFactory Pro trial version httpcom 有少量拼写错误和法 语 错误得分8 分In my view the greatest invention in the past century is InternetItchanges our lives greatlyFirst it make world smaller Wherever we stay we can get the latestinformation just happened around the world rapidly and exactly byinternetSecond it makes the world friendlier We can talk with differentpeople in different places If we like we can make friends with anyoneThird it is convenient for the man to stay at home dealing with thework We can buy goods order the tickets pay the bills look forthe jobs and etcFinally it makes our lives colorful We can download songs andfilms We can enjoy ourselves by play on-line games范文点评 容切 但 述不 充分 不 完整内 题 论 够 结构 够 有些地方表达思想不够清楚 文字基本通顺 句式单一有不少法 语 错误 文章长度基本符合要求得分5 分There are many great inventions in the past century such as TVcomputer But I think the greatest invention in the past century istelephoneThere are many advantages in telephone Our world is a modernsociety Telephoneis an internuncial tool and takes important effectin our life Almost every family has one telephoneMore and more people like use it Because it is convenience Ifyou have urgency you can use telephone seek help Now people are verybusy they havent enough time If they want to do business with theirclients they can use telephone It can save time Young men are verylazy and they dont like writing a letter at present They like usetelephone to make contact with their friends or their parents YouPDF created with pdfFactory Pro trial version httpcomcan stay at home and know everything which you need through telephonePeople think telephone change their life and make it better andbetter In a word telephone is the greatest invention in the pastcentury范文点评 基本切 但表 思想不 楚题 达 清 论述缺乏条理语句不通 顺 连贯性较差 有 多重法较严 语 错误 句式单一得分2 分I think the greatest invention in the past century is mobiletelephone My ideal career is mobile telephone Because it isconvenient for people When birthday or Christmas or new year youcan call your father your mother your brotheryour clients andblessing them happy Besides convenience we can play games withmobile telephone when you feel dull you can play it Somebody saymobile telephone has radiation harm our bodies Actually thisradiation is very faint no problem This is sign that the societyhas developed It also can send messages when something cant be saidon the phone you can use the messages to express yourself and oftenit does the thing And its cost is not very expensive most of us canaccept it范文点评 不能 楚表 思想清 达 用 词 结构错误很多无法让人正确理解 言支离破碎 述毫无 理语 论 条以上是对每一个得分等级范文的分析相信读者已经对申请硕学 士位作文考试的分评标准以及高分要 有了一定程度的了解我在此 如下领 们 总结 容切包括 目中要求的全部要点 是基本要求要做到 文章的中心内 题 题 这 紧紧围绕 问题进行分析行 进 充分的论述才能满足切题这一分评标准 文章通顺意思连贯表达清楚即把自己的意思表达清楚且无重大语法和用词错误上述 撰 申 位作文而言是最 的只要考生做到了上述 那得分两条对 写 请学 关键 两条 将至少在11 分以上 正确使用适 的引 和 接 使文章 和理 晰句 有力当 导词 连 词 结构条 清 语 紧凑 用词准确丰富能运用一些有鲜明特点但有一定难度的 词 这样往往能使文章形象生动突出作者观点上述最后两条读向 者提出了较高的要求如果能做到可有望拿到1215 分PDF created with pdfFactory Pro trial version httpcom第二章写作步骤申请学位考试作文要求在 30 分钟内完成在有限的时间里要写出一篇好文章就必须有一个很好的设计方案所以必须清楚作 写 步骤并且要合理安排时间这里我们主要介绍怎样运用填空式作文法在短时间内写出令人满意的文章具体步 和 安排如下骤 时间第一步审题确定命题形式首先认真阅读题目分析题目属于何命种题形式参见第三章接下来快速确立自己的 点及 据 在草稿 上 可以安排23 分观 论 并将它们写 纸 审题时间 钟第二步选择模板在确定命题形式之后依据本书介绍的题型迅速选择合适的模板参见第五章这一过程需要1 分 左右的钟 时间第三步进行填空将已构思好的具体容 内 填入模板中虽然整个框架已经由模板确定但要拿到11 分以上就必注意具体的作元素的用 第四章如多 句式 句 列句及合须 写 运 参见 种 简单 并 复句的运用使文章更为灵活长短句的交错出现使文章富有节奏感若干长句后出的 现一个短句可以明显地突出观点连接词运的 用可使文章连贯和富有层次通过举例对比等写作手法来展开文章可使文章更为生动懂 易 若能恰如其分地运用一些修辞如比喻 引用俗语或名人警句等就能起到画龙点晴的作用使文章熠熠生辉一 这 步骤需要2125 分 左右钟第四步修改文章在作 写 过程中由于精神紧张时间匆忙等原因难免会出现错误最后的修改工作是必不可少的千万不要忽 最后的一步修改文章主要考 以下 点视这 虑 两1 语法如主语和谓语在人称和数上要保持一致全篇时态保持一致动词搭配正确等等2 拼写作要 楚量避免 要注意字母的大小 不要 卷人留下写 时 书写清 尽 拼写错误 还 写 给评 连单词都不熟悉的坏印象因小失大PDF created with pdfFactory Pro trial version httpcom这一步骤需要35 分 钟具体作 写 步骤可用下表 图 示审题确定命题形式选定模板进行填空修改文章在我 一例行 明现 们试举 进说第一步 审题确定命题形式DIRECTIONS For this part you are to write a composition of 120150 words on Which Is More Important Wealth or Health In yourcomposition you should clearly state youropinion and give reasons to support your argument Writeyour composition on the ANSWER SHEET2000 年试题目分析 于比点型 第三章基本模式是先 述人 wealth 和从题 属 对 观 题 参见 阐 们对health 的不同看法然后表明自己的点 观 并说明理由最后重申主题提出建议第二步选择模板确定本 比点命 形式之后 一合适的模板本 每一 命 形式都题为对 观 题 选择 个 书对 种题 给出了若干个模板此处可以选择模板24 参见第五章第三步进行填空熟 的模板 到作文中 按照本 要求 空格的容 上在此我 行一将 记 填 并 题 将 处 内 填 们进次演示 了方便考生 我 另起一用左右 照的方式出示范A 代表要 述为 阅读 们将 页 对 给 阐的事物或主题模板Peoples ideas on_A differ from person As faras I amto person While some people take it for concerned I agree togranted that the former opinion First_others consider that nobody could deny the_ fact that PDF created with pdfFactory Pro trial version httpcom_ Next there is anelement of truth in saying that 据之一_ Finally the most 论important point is _ 论据之二论据之三For the above reasons I stronglysuggest that _重申主题提出建议一种观点另一 点种观根据模板填写的范文Peoples ideas on whether health orwealth is Amore important differ from personto person While some people take it forgranted that health is much more preciousthan wealth others consider that moneycan buy everything including health 一种观点As far as I am concerned I agree tothe former opinion First nobody 另一种观点could deny the fact that health is theprerequisite of wealth With a healthy bodywe have every thance to berich by workinghard Next there is an element of truth insaying that wealth cannot guarantee 论据之一happiness Today it is not unusual to seethat some teenagers fromwealthy familiescommit crimes just out of boredom of lifeFinally the mostimportant point is Moneyis NOT everything Money can buy many 论据之二things that meet our needs but it cannotbuy back a lost healthFor theabove reasons I stronglysuggest that people should keep healthy 论据之三everyday since health is a special kindof wealth and also the basisof happinessPDF created with pdfFactory Pro trial version httpcom重申主题提出建议第四步修改文章作 免 有些 所以文章完之后一定要行 修改尤其注意写 时难 会 错误 写 进 检查 时态人称和数的一致另外仔细看看拼写正确与否这里不再详述PDF created with pdfFactory Pro trial version httpcom第三章命题形式申请学位考试大纲要求考生能够掌握多体 种 裁的写作如命题作文书信看图写作等但从往年试题来看申请学位作文主要以命题论说文形式出现通常要求考生针对某一事物或社 象 行分析 表明自己的 度和 点我 去近十年的申 位作会现 进 评论 并 态 观 们对过 请学文进行了仔细的考察总结出四常 种 考题型说明利弊型阐述主型 题 对比点 观 型解决方法型为了丰富每命 种题类型的解释同时鉴于申请学位作文和大学语 英 四六级考试作文的相似性我们在以下的分析中选用了部分往年四六级作文题方便参加过四六级考的 试者借 去的作文 更好地掌握申 位作文的 法读 鉴过 经验 请学 写一 说明利弊型这种题型一般先提出一个社会现象或事物要求考生分析其利和弊分几个要点论述最后表明人看法有 只要求 一 角度利或弊行个 时 单从 个 进评论例1 1995 年试题Directions In this part you are to write within 30 minutes a composition On Automobiles as its titleYour composition shouldcontain the three keypoints given below with a length of 100 words orso Please remember to write clearlyKey Points 1 The benefits the car has brought us2 The problems it has caused3 Possible solutions例2 1996 年1 月四级试题Directions For this part you are allowed 30 minutes towrite acomposition on the topic The Two-dayWeekend You should write at least 100 words andyou should base your composition on theoutlinegiven in Chinese below1 双休日给大学生带来的好处2 休日可能大生 的双 给 学 带来 问题3 我应当怎样过好双休日二 阐述主题型这类题型大多是带一点说明色彩的论述文要求考生从一句话一个题 主 本身出发述其 涵 明其重要性 以考生自己的点或身 尾阐 内 说 并 观 亲 经验结 PDF created with pdfFactory Pro trialversion httpcom例1 1996 年试题Directions Migrant workers have made a great contribution to the prosperity of cities 外地民工 城市的繁为 荣作出了很大贡献In this part you are to write within30 minutes a composition of 100 words or so about TheRole of Migrant Workers 外地民工的作用You can agreeor disagree completely or partially to the abovestatement But no matter which position you take youshould give sound supporting reasons例2 1999 年试题Directions For this part you are to write a composition of noless than 120 words on The Qualities of theCross-Century Talents You should write according tothe three-point outline given belowPlease write itclearly on the ANWER SHEETOutline1 跨世 人才具 些素纪 应 备哪 质2 为什么需要具备这些素质3 才能成 跨世 人才怎样 为 纪例3 2001 年试题Directions For this part you are to write a composition of120-150 words on the following topicThe Greatest Invention in the Past Century In yourcomposition you should clearly state your opinionand give reasons to support your argument Write yourcomposition on the ANSWER SHEET三 对比观点型这种题型一般出 给 两个对立的观点让学生逐一分析最后说明自己的观点例1 1998 年试题Directions For this partyou are allowed 30 minutes to Writea composition of no less than 100 words under the titleof Why We Work Your composition should be basedon the following outline givenin EnglishOutline1 Some people live to work2 Other people work to live3 YouropinionPDF created with pdfFactory Pro trial version httpcom例2 2000 年试题Directions For this part you are to write a composition of120-150 words on Which Is More Important Wealth orHealth In your composition you should clearly stateyour opinion and give reasons to support yourarguments Write your composition on the ANSWERSHEET例3 1995 年6 月六级试题Directions For this part you are allowed thirty minutes to writea composition on the topic Should Firecrackers BeBannedYou should write no less than 120 words andyou should base your composition on the outlinegiven in Chinese below