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Part I Writing (30 minutes)Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of_. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below:1. My Opinion on Campus Lectures1. 大学校园里的讲座丰富多彩2. 听讲座的益处3. 你对在大学校园里听讲座的评论My Opinion on Campus LecturesIn recent years, more and more lectures are being given on campus. They are organized either by the departments or by the students unions with an aim to improve the students quality both mentally and academically. These lectures are usually in series and on different topics, such as arts, life, economy, psychology and world issues.Generally speaking, the advantages of good lectures are various. First they broaden the students knowledge horizon and cultivate interest in different fields. Second, they make the life of the students colorful and enjoyable.With these merits, lectures are just complementary and subordinate to our school work. If students spend too much time attending lectures, their regular study will be affected and disturbed. So, in my opinion, the students should, on the one hand, do their class work and homework well first, on the other hand, set as more time as possible to attend good lectures which are helpful to our life and study.2. Secondhand Goods1. 目前购买二手货的人越来越多2. 分析产生这一现象的原因3. 二手货交易可能带来的问题Secondhand GoodsIn recent years, second-hand transactions have become quite common. Nowadays there are more and more secondhand goods in the market, such as secondhand books, furniture, appliances, cars, and so on. Why do so many people like to buy secondhand goods?The following reasons can account for this phenomenon. Above all, secondhand goods are cheaper than new ones. This enables those people who have poor financial abilities to buy the things they want. Moreover, secondhand goods transactions make it possible for people to make good use of the goods which may be useless in their hands. Besides, Internet provides a more convenient and quicker transaction platform for secondhand goods.However, there are also some problems in secondhand goods transactions. For one thing, the quality of secondhand goods can not be promised and you can not enjoy the good after-sale service. For another, secondhand goods market lacks enough supervision and management, and there exist many dishonest business activities. In a word, I think secondhand goods transaction is a good trading way, but it needs further perfection of the rules.3. Self-help Traveling of College Students1. 大学生出去旅行经常会选择“自助游”2. 分析大学生选择“自助游”的原因3. 你的看法Self-help Traveling of College StudentsSo called self-help traveling refers that travelers themselves arrange travel route, travel time, and all the other matters during travel, without any guide and team leader. Nowadays this kind of traveling model is gaining more and more popularity among college students. According to the survey, over 80% of college students prefer self-help traveling to following a tour group.Why are college students so fond of self-help traveling? Above all, self-help traveling gives travelers more freedom and space. College students dont like being restricted. They want to arrange their travel as they wish. Moreover, self-help traveling provides college students a good chance to improve their adaptability and viability. Besides, the expenses in self-help traveling are controlled by travelers themselves. It is a good choice for those college students who have not much money for their disposal.As a college student, I enjoy self-help traveling very much, and I have benefited a lot from it. For one thing, I have appreciated many amazing scenery that those travelers who follow tour groups can not. For another, self-help travel helps me learn how to deal with people better.写作参考用语：1.individuals，characters， folks替换（people ，persons）2. positive， favorable， rosy （美好的）， promising（有希望的）， perfect， pleasurable ， excellent， outstanding， superior替换good3.dreadful， unfavorable， poor， adverse， ill （有害的）替换bad。如果bad做表语，可以有be less impressive替换eg.An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games， enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms. When it approaches to graduation ，as a result， they find their academic records are less impressive.4.（an army of， an ocean of， a sea of， a multitude of ，a host of， many， if not most）替换many.注：用many， if not most 一定要小心，many后一定要有词。Eg. Many individuals， if not most， harbor the idea that。同理 用most， if not all ，替换most.5. a slice of， quiet a few ， several替换some6.harbor the idea that， take the attitude that，hold the view that， it is widely shared that，it is universally acknowledged that）替think（因为是书面语，所以要加that）7. affair ，business ，matter 替换thing8. shared 代 common9. reap huge fruits 替换get many benefits ）10. for my part ，from my own perspective 替换 in my opinion11. Increasing（ly），growing 替换more and more（ 注意没有growingly这种形式。所以当修饰名词时用increasing/growing.修饰形容词，副词用increasingly.Eg.sth has gained growing popularity.Sth is increasingly popular with the advancement of sth.12.little if anything， 或little or nothing替换hardly13beneficial， rewarding替换helpful，14.shopper，client，consumer，purchaser， 替换customer15.exceedingly，extremely， intensely 替换very16.hardly necessary， hardly inevitable 替换 unnecessary， avoidable17.sth appeals to sb， sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb 替换sb take interest in / sb. be interested in18.capture ones attention替换attract ones attention.沪19.facet，demension，sphere代aspect20.be indicative of，be suggestive of，be fearful of代 indicate，suggest，fear21.give rise to，lead to，result in，trigger 替换cause.22. There are several reasons behind sth 替换reasons for sth23. desire 替换want.24. pour attention into 替换pay attention to25 .bear in mind that 替换remember26. enjoy， possess 替换have（注意process是过程的意思）27. interaction替换communication28. frown on sth替换 be against，disagree with sth29. to name only a few，as an example替换 for example，for instance30. next to / virtually impossible，替换nearly / almost impossibleLimiting the Use of Disposable Plastic Bags (I)Nowadays when we look around we may find a sea of disposable plastic bags. Disposable plastic bags used to be very popular among Chinese people for its convenient.The problems bringing by disposable plastic bags are various. In the first place, the disposable plastic bags are made of oil products and they cannot be reproduced; therefore, it is a waste of natural resources to produce plastic bags. In the second place, it causes serious environment problems such as the pollution of air, water and soil.Limiting the use of disposable plastic bags is beneficial. For one thing, a lot of materials and natural resources will be saved. For another, we can improve the environment an make everyones life better.Limiting the Use of Disposable Plastic Bags (II)It is a truth universally acknowledged that disposable plastic bags have made our life convenient. However, the appearance of the plastic bags also raises an issue: should we look for convenience at the cost of environment and health?Convenient as they are, the disposable plastic bags also cause many problems. First of all, deserted plastic bags can bring about “white pollution”. In addition, burned plastic bags may release poisonous gases an materials that can lead to various diseases. Finally, plastic bags are hard to decompose.Our government advocates limiting the use of disposable plastic bags. I am entirely in favor of it. I believe, in the near future, the plastic bags will be used less often and the environment we live in can be more life. In a word, it is high time for us to take effective actions to make a more beautiful and harmonious world.Limiting the Use of Disposable Plastic Bags (III)Disposable plastic bags were once widely used in China. In our daily life, most people used to take disposable plastic bags for shopping and other purposes. However, the excessive use of disposable plastic bags had caused a great damage to our environment and lots of harm to our life.On the one hand, the use of disposable plastic bags causes irreversibl