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一 比较型作文（一）比较型作文一般分为说明式比较和议论式比较两种。说明式比较在比较过程中，作者不发表个人意见，在文中不体现个人取向，单纯以说明介绍为目的。议论式比较以比较事物优劣，阐明自己立场为目的，一般分为倾向型和中立型两种类型。（二）比较论说文一般有两种模式：1首段：明确摆出自己的立场。主体部分：通过运用比较，对比等手段，进一步说明自己取向或偏好的原因及正确性。结尾段：重申立场。2首段：只引出现象，对个人观点予以保留。体部分：进行对比。结尾段：自然而然地得出论点作文题目1.Making Friends with People of similar or different personalities?2.Advertisement or Quality of Products? 3.Living Alone or Living with Roommates?4.Compare Urban Areas with Rural Areas5.Reading Selectively or Extensively?6.Competition or Cooperation?7.Book Knowledge or Practical Experience?8.Communicating by Telephone or by Letter?首段I. 首段=引言句+主题句引言句：引出比较的对象，主题句：提出主题，明确表明作者的个人取向或偏好。引言句一般为与作文题紧密相关的社会背景，现实状况或是时下人们对某一事件或事物的普遍取向或偏好。主题句则开宗明义，明确提出作者的立场，观点，取向或偏好。II.首段常用句型1.It is widely accepted/ an undeniable fact that -It goes without saying that -There is no dobt that -It is true that - are getting their ways into our daily life.E.g. It is widely accepted /an undeniable fact that modern technology has benefited human beings.2. Nowadays, there are some/different ways to do-, such as A and B.But when it comes to-E.g. Nowadays, there are two ways to entertain ourselves, such as watching TV at home and going to movies when we are free.3. With the rapid development of , . is /are playing an increasingly important part in today4.There has always been/used to be a heated discussion over whether A is more important than B.5.Those who are in favor of A have their own reasons,while others argue/contend that -.Some people tend to favor -, but /while/meanwhile/on the contrary others -. E.g.Some people prefer traveling alone, but others like traveling with friends.6. Although A-, I like doing B -Despite the fact that a majority of people tend to/prefer to -, Im in favor of-I agree with the former one somehow.In my point of view, I like outdoor exercises much more than indoor activities.E.g.Although many people tend to favor TV program, I like going to movies.E.g.Despite the fact that a majority of people prefer to travel together with friends, Im in favor of traveling alone. 7.But in my opinion, both A and B are essential.Personally, I prefer to strike a balance between A and B.As for me, Im in favor of a combination of A and B.I prefer to combine A and B.A and B are of the same/equal importance. While I attach much importance to A, I wont give up any chance to do-E.g.While I attach much importance to indoor activites, I wont give up any chance to take part in outdoor activities.（五）模板1. It is generally accepted that- are an indispensable part of our daily life, but when it comes to-, there has sprung up a heated discussion as to-. As for me, I prefer to -2. People all know that -is very important, however, different people have different opinions towards-. Some people say wed better-, on the contrary, others believe that we would -. But as far as I am concerned, I prefer a balance between the two.3. It is often difficult for - to decide whether A or B. However, im my opinion, A is always better.4.Those who prefer A have their own reasons, while some other people prefer B. As for me, both A ans B have merits and demerits.5.Which is more important in life,-, or-? The answer may vary from person to person. But in my opinion, they of the same importance.6.- is very important both in the past and present. With the development of -,-.(Communication is very important both in the past and at present. With the development of transportation, letters can be sent much more quickly than ever before, but when the telephone appeared, most people have turned to it.)7.- are getting their way into peoples lives. Those who are favor of A argue that- while other people think -.8.Nowdays, the influence of - proves to be profound. And there has been a very controversial debate as to -.对比型作文结尾段落模式一 结尾段=呼应主题句+强调被肯定事物的积极作用等1.I prefer traveling individually, because for me to have a holiday tour is to enjoy and relax mysylf, and to relax thoroughly, freedom is of essence. If you lose the freedom of action, it is no longer a holiday in anything but name.2.From the above comparison and contrast, we can come to the conclusion that the city is still a better choice for childrens education, though some disadvantages do exist. Only in cities can children be well prepared for their future life and keep up with the trend of the world.3.I regard rooming together as a precious opportunity for it is the best way of learning cooperation and understanding. And I confidently believe that such experience will be helpful in ones later life.4.Therefore, I strongly advocate communicating by letter. And it will prove to be one of the ways to be independent from telephone when you pick up your pen to write a letter.5.In a word, determination is the key to success. With a strong determination one can not only bring his opportunities into full play,but conquer whatever hardships or dangers he may face.6.In a word, the best choice is a good major at a good university , but without great efforts we can hardly get such a choice. If we cannot obtain both, in my opinion, the first thing to consider is a good major.常用句型1)Taking into account all of these factors /Given the factors I have just outlined / From what has been discussed above/ Now after close examination/ For the reasons given above, it is not difficult to draw the conclusion /we may reasonably arrive at the conclusion/ I prefer/ I strongly recommend that_.2) In my opinion, we should place much emphasis on the importance of _.3) In short, I support the statement that it is better to _because_ .模式二 结尾段=让步句+呼应主题句1.Indoor activities are somewhat challenging as well, for example, chess and book reading can also develop our mind. However I still prefer outdoor activities, for they teach me how to be a strong man, both in health and in spirit.2.Of course, traveling alone has its own merits: you can change your destination at any time and stay in one place as long as you like. But I still like to travel with friends, because I think that the most important thing during travel is to get pleasure ans relaxation, and with friends, I can get all these things easily.常用句型1)In spite of the said advantages of_, I will choose _2)Of course, _ has its merits. But Im still in favor of traveling alone_.3)Both_and_have their own advantages. For example, _, while _.Comparing those two, however, I prefer to _.中立型 结尾段=呼应主题句+一句话总结（总结所比较对象最突出的优点，可用while,whereas连接）1.I prefer a balance of these activities. In my opinion, physical recreation is necessary for good health but intellectual pursuits provide more pleasure.2.Both book knowledge and personal experience are essential. While experience makes one more resourceful, book knowledge makes one more learned.Therefore, we need both _and _. The former_, and the latter_3. In my opinion, both sides are partly right. When we we should take into consideration all aspects of the problems and then make the right decision.4.Personally, I think nothing will be so rewarding than c