概要写作(Nancy月考作文讲评).ppt

高考新题型之概要写作 Summary 普通高等学校招生全国统一考试英语科考试说明 概要写作 提供一篇350词以内的短文 要求考生基于该短文写出一篇60词左右的内容概要 满分25分 本题总分为25分 按5个档次给分 评分时 先根据所写概要的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次 然后以该档次的要去来衡量 确定或调整档次 最后给分 词数少于40的和多于80的 从总分中减去2分 评分时 应主要从以下四个方面考虑 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个重要方面 评分时 应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑 如书写较差以致影响交际 可将分数降低一个档次 概要写作评分解读 评分原则 本题总分为25分 分5个档次给分 complete correct coherent concise nocopying 4C原则 complete correct Howtopolishyoursummarytomeetthe4Crequirementsofcriteria completecorrectcoherentconcise WritingStep3 Makeasummaryandpolishit 学生习作常见错误1 Writingstep3 Meetthe4crequirementsofcriteria tobecomplete 学生习作常见错误1 Incomplete要点遗落 Thefirst thephenomenon thepopularityofcellphonesThelast properuse Writingstep3 Meetthe4crequirementsofcriteria tobecoherent 学生习作常见错误2 Cellphonesareoneofthegreatestinventionsofmoderntechnology Butjustastherearealwaystwosidesofacoin theyhavemanyadvantagesanddisadvantages Theirmainadvantageistomakeourlifeeasierandmoreconvenient Ontheotherhand theyhaveabadeffectonourlife Tobehonest whethertheyareausefulinstrumentoradangerousweaponisdecidedbyushuman Incoherence过渡不自然 Transitionalwords 学生习作常见错误3 Painandpleasurearearesultofmoderntechnology FromZH Class6 Theadvancedtechnologyhascausedadangerthatwekeepignoring Getcheaperandcheaper Notconcise引用原文词句 Nocopying不得直接引用原文的句子 Writingstep3 Meetthe4crequirementsofcriteria tobeconcise 学生习作常见错误3 Technologyhasadvantagesanddisadvantages suchascellphones FromWQ Class5 Weshouldmakefulluseofcellphones Notconcise内容理解有误 2 Tobeexact概括内容要准确 Tobebrief概括内容需精要 学生习作常见错误3 Suchas Toomanyexamples Notconcise使用太多细节 语言不够概括 3 Tobebrief概括内容需精要 Waystomakethesentencesconcise 4skills Arecellphonesausefulinstrumentoradangerousweapon Theanswerliesinourhands Arecellphonesahelpfultooloraharmfuldevice Itdependsonourselves It suptoourselvestousecellphonesinaproperway 句式变化法 Willcellphonesbringconvenienceordangertous Willcellphonesbenefitorharmus Itdependsonourselveswhethercellphoneswillbenefitorharmus Whethercellphonesareusefulordangerousdependsonourselves 词性转换法 学生习作常见错误4 Wedon tallowmobilephonestoinsteadofourlife FromWT Class6 Usecellphonesmodestly Incorrect语法词汇不准确 1 Varietiesofgrammaticalmistakes Writingstep3 Meetthe4crequirementsofcriteria tobeconcise 学生习作常见错误4 Itisharmfulforchildrenandleadtoworsethings suchasroadaccidents Soitneedsourselvestoletthecellphoneausefultechnology FromZLT Class4 Incorrect汉式表达 2 Chinglish中国式不地道英语 Howtopolishyoursummarytomeetthe4Crequirementsofcriteria CompleteCorrectCoherentConcise1 nocopying2 tobeexact3 tobebrief Writingstep4 Revise4 C WritingStep5 Clearlycopyyourdrafttothepaper Cellphonesareoneofthegreatestinventionsofmoderntechnology Butjustastherearealwaystwosidesofacoin theyhavemanyadvantagesanddisadvantages Theirmainadvantageistomakeourlifeeasierandmoreconvenient Ontheotherhand theyhaveabadeffectonourlife Tobehones