高考英语写作指导.doc

高考英语写作指导（1）2008浙江人们完成工作的方式通常有两种：独立完成与合作完成。两种方式各有特点。请你以”Working Individually or Working in a Team”为主题，按照以下要点写一篇英语短文：1、 独立完成：自行安排，自己解决问题2、 合作完成：一起讨论，相互学习3、 我喜欢的方式及理由注意：词数100120，文章的题目和开头已给出（不记入词数）高考范文：There are basically two ways to get work done. One is to work individually. In this way, people can decide for themselves when to start work and how to do it. Whats more, they will be able to learn how to solve problems on their own.People may also choose to work in a team, where they can learn from each other and help each other. Besides, they may work out better ways to get work done by discussion.Personally, I prefer to work in a team, which offers me a chance to learn how to get along with others and to share my experiences with them. As the work can be divided among several people, it can be done efficiently. Teamwork is always important.外籍教师Greg的范文Teamwork vs. Individual WorkThere are basically two ways to get things done. The first way is to work in a team, while the second way is to work individually. These two methods of getting things done are different. One involves personal skilsl while the other involves social skills and a variety of other skills that are not directly related to getting the work finished. Some people say that doing things individually is faster because you dont have to worry about other people getting in your way. Even though teamwork involves a lot of work in terms of organization and socializing, in the end I feel it allows any given goal to be accomplished faster than otherwise. Working through teamwork divides up the work in such a way that it allows people to be more efficient as a group than they would be individually. Thus I feel that teamwork is more effective than working individually.2008安徽假定你是李华。David是你的美国笔友。他对中国鼓励使用环保购物袋很感兴趣，来信向你询问此事。请你给他写封回信，主要内容如下：感谢他的关注简要介绍相关情况谈谈你的感想注意：1、词数100左右，信的格式已为你写好 2、可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 3、参考词汇：环保购物袋environment-friendly shopping bag 关注-concern高考范文：Educators Sample:Dear David,Im glad that youve noticed our efforts directed toward environmental protection. Thank you for your concern.As too much use of plastic bags has caused serious white pollution, our government encourages us to use environment-friendly shopping bags. These bags are made of a variety of materials that can be easily treated when they become rubbish. Besides, they can be reused. More and more people in China have realized the advantages of such bags and started using them.I believe that the wide use of these shopping bags can greatly improve our environment. This is one of the many steps we are taking to make our country an even cleaner place.Charlie Woods Sample:Dear David,Nothing gives me greater pleasure than hearing your passionate interest in protecting the environment, especially in your approval of the efforts we are taking here in China. The world could use more people like you.One of our primary initiatives (plan, strategy) here is making plastic bags a thing of the past. Considering the irreparable (beyond repair) harm they inflict upon the environment, the government and environmental groups alike are encouraging the use of environmentally friendly shopping bags, also known as tote bags. These bags are sturdy, reusable, and best of all, biodegradable (capable of being broken down). If only half the people in China were to use these bags, we would save an incredible amount of white pollution in plastic bags.We must remember though, that shopping bags are only one small way to help improve our environment. If we were to change many of our habits in small beneficial (helpful) ways, our world would be a much better place for us to live. Yours, Li Hua 高考英语写作指导（2）2008全国II 假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写封回信。要点：1、参加中文学习班；2、看中文书刊、电视；3、学唱中文歌曲；4、交中国朋友注意：1、词数100左右；2、可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3、开头语已为你写好 June 8,2008Dear Peter,Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.Best wishes, Li Hua高考范文Educators Sample:Dear Peter,Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as youll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspapers, and magazines in Chinese whenever possible.Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so youll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. You can also make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.Try and write me in Chinese next time.Best Wishes,Li Hua外籍教师Charlie Wood 的范文Dear Peter,Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well. It would be my pleasure to offer you some suggestions. To begin with, in order to receive professional training, I recommend attending Chinese classes, or hiring a private tutor a couple times a week. Secondly, since it is important to practice Chinese every day to make improvement, you should attempt to read Chinese newspapers and magazines as well as watch Chinese TV. In addition, learning Chinese songs provides you with a good way to memorize words and grammar concepts. Finally, you can apply your learning by making Chinese friends and discussing Chinese culture and language with them. I hope you find my suggestions useful. Please feel free to write me in Chinese when you are ready. Best wishes,Li Hua 2006广东高考Writing根据以下图画，写一篇英语短文，描述今昔通讯方式的变化，以及这些变化给人们生活带来的影响。注意：1、词数100左右 2、生词：通讯：communicate (with sb.) vi. Communication n. 互联网： the Internet n.高考范文1People used to communicate with each other through letters and public phones. But nowadays they use mobile phones and the Internet instead. This change in communication has good effects on our life and work. Compared with letters and public phones, mobile phones and the Internet are faster and much more convenient. If you miss your grandmother, you just take out you phone and say “hello” to her. If you want to place an order with a foreign company, you can e-mail the message. Itll be a matter of minutes before you get their reply. Arent we living in a smaller world?(101 words) 2More and more people rely on e-mail and mobile phones for communication rather than letters and public phones because the new tools seem faster and make work more efficient. However, this change has bad as well as good effects, especially their dependence on the Internet. Firstly, as we lack enough practice, we are losing the beauty of handwritten Chinese words which express the writer better while machine words all have the same looks. Secondly, our spelling becomes worse if we rely on the machine too much. Last but not least the PC screen does harm to our eyes. I prefer the old way of communication even though it is much too slow in the eyes of many.(117 words)外籍教师Greg给的范文：Communication has changed a lot over the past century. In the beginning of the last century, people used telephones to call each other and sent messages to each other using the mail system. However, this was sometimes slow and inconvenient. Letters sometimes took a long time to reach their destination, especially if they were being sent overseas. Telephones were also sometimes inconvenient since one always had to find a phone in order to make a call.Now, instead of using telephones and mail, people use mobile phones and the internet to communicate with each other. This has proven to be very convenient for people. Mobile phones can be used no matter where one happens to be, and e-mail communication is instantaneous even if the recipient is very far away. These changes in communication have made life easier for everyone. For us students, especially, modern technology has made keeping in touch with our friends much more convenient.写作基础练习Exercise I 请判断下列句子的结构类型：1. He is walking.2. The loud voice from the upstairs made him angry.3. The little boy is always asking the teacher all kinds of questions.4. She seemed depressed.5. My father bought me a stylish bicycle.6. Why do you keep your eyes closed?7. Will you tell us an exciting story?8. We must keep our classroom tidy and clean.9. I heard the couple quarrelling outside the room.10. Can you push the window open?Exercise II 判断下面各句是简单句、并列句还是复合句：1. We often play football on Saturday afternoon.2. The boy who offered me his seat is called Tom.3. There is a chair in this room, isnt there?4. My brother and I go to school at half past seven in the morning and come back home at seven in the evening.5. He is in Class 1 and I am in class 2.6. He was fond of drawing when he was a child.7. Neither has he changed his mind, nor will he do so.8. What he said at the meeting is very important, isnt it?9. The farmer is showing the boy how to plant a tree.10. Both Tom and Jack enjoy country music.Exercise III 将下面各句改为被动语态（可省略by短语）1. People speak English in many countries.2. We built this bridge last year.3. Xiao Liu has invited you to a lunch party.4. You must not take these magazines out of the reading room.5. Has anybody fed the birds?6. People will never forget the accident.7. They are repairing the car in the garage.8. Someone must take care of the children when we go out.9. They wont hold the meeting until next Friday.10. They gave him a medal for his wonderful work.11. They have chosen me to look after the dance music.12. They ought to have told you how much money you needed.13. Do you often clean your room?14. We saw a bus running towards us at that time.15. They had to put off the sports meeting because of the rain.高考英语写作指导（3）Writing Sample #42008 北京 假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，为校刊英语园地写一篇题为”Our spring Outing”的英文稿件。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，叙述上周你们班从准备春游到春游结束的完整过程。 注意： 词数不少于100； 提示词：游乐园amusement park垃圾箱binEducators Sample: Our Spring Outing Last Thursday, we had a class meeting to discuss where to go for our spring outing. We came up with several choices such as going boating, climbing a mountain, and going to an amusement park. Finally, we decided to go mountain climbing. The next day, we set off early in the morning. While climbing the mountain, we enjoyed the warm sunshine and a beautiful view. However, when we reached the top, we were shocked to see litter here and there. Afterwards, we put the rubbish into the nearby recycling bin and non-recycling bin respectively. We were tired but happy.外籍教师Greg Fan 的范文Spring OutingOur class went out to a mountain for our Spring outing today. Initially, many students had difficulty deciding where they wanted to go. Some wanted to go to an amusement park for the day. Other students wanted to spend the day in a more natural environment such as at a lake or on a mountain. In the end, the students more inclined towards nature won out - we decided to take a hike up a local mountain. The hike itself was just as we had expected it. The sun was shining, the flowers were blooming, and the whole class was smiling. When we reached the summit, however, we found large amounts of trash left by previous hikers strewn over the rocks. Our Spring outing took an environmentally-healthy twist as we started picking up all the loose trash. On our way back down, we even recycled as much as we could. Todays trip made everyone feel good. Not only were we able to spend time away from the city, but we were able to help the environment as well.2008 天津 假设2008年2月2日是你父亲的生日，下面三幅图描绘的是你给父亲买完礼物后坐地铁回家时经历的一件事。请根据图示，用英语写一篇日记记叙这件事，并谈谈自己的感受。 注意：1. 词数不少于100； 2. 可适当加入细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：地铁9列车）-subway train February 12th, 2008-10-18_Educators Sample:February 12th, 2008Today is fathers birthday. I went to buy a gift to make his day. The subway train taking me home was crowded, but I was lucky to get a seat. I sat there quietly imagining fathers smiling, satisfied and happy face receiving the gift. The train stopped at the next stop and an old lady with two large suitcases got on. Seeing her so tired. I offered my seat to her although I felt exhausted myself. The old lady thanked me and I smiled back at her.Maybe that was another gift for father. I also realized how much sweeter the journey would be if you make it smoother for others!外籍教师Charlie Wood 的范文February 12th, 2008Dear Diary,Today marks my fathers 50th birthday, a watershed(milestone) year after living on this earth for half a century. For a long time, I have wanted to do something special for him to express my thanks for his years of hard work, sacrifice, and fatherly love. Riding home on the subway with his gift wrapped tightly in my arms, I envisioned(imagined) his reaction after opening it, picturing the joy and appreciation on his face. After fully escaping to this vision in the comfort of a rare subway seat, an old lady boarded(got on) the train laboring with two heavy bags. The thought of my father getting old coupled with my giving mood caused me to promptly(immediately) offer her my seat. The sincerity of her thanks told me I was giving two gifts today. It made me see that sometimes gifts are more about the thought than any material thing! Actions speak louder than words indeed. 1 用as a result of扩写句子1) Jimmy was wild with joy.2) The subway stopped.3) He passed the test at last.4) The little boy died in the hospital.2.用asas possible扩写句子1）You should learn much.2) You are allowed to borrow many books.3) He ran fast to catch the early bus .4) The lady eats little to lost weight.5) I often go to see my grandparents.3.用as if扩写句子1） He heard a noise.2) The sky is dark.3) The woman treated the young girl very well.4) The song sounds familiar to me.4.用as long as扩写句子1） You can go swimming.2) We shall say no more about the matter.3) My parents dont care what job I do.4) You can go out and play.5. 用as soon as 扩写句子1） Ill ring you .2) The boy stopped making faces.3) I shall tell him the news.4) Ill go with you .6.用 if/less扩写句子1） All the students of our class will climb the hill next Sunday.2) You will not be allowed to go skating.3) She will die.4) I am going without him.高考英语写作指导42008 上海Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 你班将组织参加学校组织的集体舞比赛（group dancing composition）,班长希望大家积极参加。对此谈谈你的想法。你的文章必须包括以下内容：你是否会参加你做出该决定的具体理由。Educators writing As is known to us all, there will be a group dancing composition in our school next month. Of course, our class will not miss it. Our monitor called on all of us to take an active part in it. Personally thinking, a group dance is quite a good form of entertainment as well as exercise, which brings us not only mental benefits but physical ones. Besides, dancing a group dance call s for teamwork, one of the qualities we will need for our future careers. Thirdly, by practising it, our classmates can develop a better relationship between each other, helping each other and encouraging each other. Last but not the least, this is a good chance for us to win honor for our class. For all the reasons above, I have decided to join in it. I want to prove to be an honor to the class.外籍教师Greg的范文Our school is planning to hold a series of dance performances and my class has been asked to choreograph （为 设计舞蹈动作）a dance and perform it as part of this series. As a result, I am left with the question of whether I want to take part in such a dance. Since the dance, as humiliating(丢脸的, , 羞愧的)as it might be, is part of a larger endeavor(努力，尽力) to help the school bond more closely, I am reluctantly（不情愿地）willing to take part. I am a horrendous（可怕的, 惊人的） dancer, and I will probably make more than just a fool out of myself, but I think in the end, I might learn something from it. Who knows? I have had very few opportunities to dance before, and this might be the chance for me to finally improve my technique. This is also in front of the entire school, so if I do pull this off I could impress everyone in the whole school. Of course, if I mess up（搞糟, 陷入困境, 粗暴地处理）, I will look like an idiot（白痴; 口傻子; 极蠢的人）for the rest of my career here英语周报书面表达一例：随着中国经济的快速发展和国际地位的提高，越来越多的外国人对中国文化产生了兴趣，并开始学习汉语。有人预言将来汉语会取代英语，成为国际语言。请以Will Chinese become the global language?为题，写一篇词左右的作文阐明你的观点。Student Sample #1:（同学作文）Nowadays, Chinese culture is appealing to more and more foreigners and the Chinese language is becoming more popular than before. Some people predict that Chinese will become the global language.From my perspective, however, Chinese will not take the place of English in the near future. Firstly, despite the fact that China has developed at a high pace, Chinese is not used as widely as English. Next, it cannot be denied that most official languages are English, so it will be difficult changing it. Above all, China remains a developing country. Compared with the English speaking countries, like England and America, our motherland is not strong enough.Therefore, we should strive to make our country more prosperous, then, it wont be a dream that Chinese can become the global language.Student Sample #2:（同学作文）With its rapidly developing economy and improving status in the world, China has fascinated a growing number of foreigners who are interested in its culture as well as its l