高中英语说明文写作(景点和城市介绍).ppt

ExpositoryWriting 说明文写作 Thepurposeofexpositorywritingistoexplainorgivethereaderinformationtohelphimunderstandtheworld MountTaiiscrownedasthemostfamousofChinasfivegreatmountains namely MountTaiinEastChina theHengshanMountaininSouthChina theHuashanMountainintheWestChina theHengshanMountaininNorthChinaandtheSongshanMountaininCentralChina MountTaiissituatedincentralShandongProvince stretchingover200kilometers NorthofthecityofTaianstandsMountTai shighestpeak risingto1 545metersabovesealevel Thismountainimpressesvisitorswithitsmajestic m d est k adj 壮丽的 宏伟的andprecipitous pr s p t s adj 险峻的appeal itssummitYuhuandingoverlookingthesurroundingvalleysandperilous per l s adj危险的peaks ToreachMountTaissummit wewillfeastoureyesonthecharmingsceneryandappreciatetheancientarchitectualworksofvariousstyles DearJim I mhappyreceiveyourletterandknowyou recomingtoChina OfthetwotripstotheYangtzeRiverandMountTai botharehighlyrecommended Personally IpreferthetouralongtheYangtze thelongestriverandoneofthemotherriversofChinesecivilization YoucanlearnalotaboutthehistoryofChinaandChinesepeople Moreover thesceneryalongtheriverisamazing withmanywell knownsightseeingspots That swhyIthinkthetripalongtheYangtzewillbeabetterchoice Hopeyou llhaveagoodtimeinChina 中国加入WTO后 有一大批外国人来我直辖市 重庆市参观 假设你是导游 请根据以下内容 向外宾简单介绍我市的情况 写作内容 要求 1 80词左右 2 开头已给出 不计入总词数 Ladiesandgentlemen WelcometoChongqing nowletmeintroduceourcitytoyou 第一关 正确审题 1 审语境 2 审人称 3 审时态 中国加入WTO后 假设你是导游 假设你是导游 外宾简单介绍我市的情况 读懂语境 第一人称 PresentSimpleTense 一般现在时 第二关 语言知识 relatedwords phrases相关词汇 短语relatedsentencepatterns相关句型 中国加入WTO后 有一大批外国人来我直辖市 重庆市参观 假设你是导游 请根据以下内容 向外宾简单介绍我市的情况 写作内容 相关词汇和短语 位于面积多变交通便利发达饮食特色小吃 lie belocated besituatedareachangeabletransportationconvenientandadvancedfoodsspecialfoods 火锅名扬天下旅游业景点风光旖旎四方游客 hotpotbefamousallovertheworldtouristindustryplacesofinterest scenicspots touristattractions beautifulscenerytouristfromdifferentplaces 相关句型 1 某物位于 sth lie belocated besituated in at on 某处 2 面积 的表达 Theareaof 某地 is squarekilometers 某地 coversanareaof squarekilometers 3 某地有 人口 某地hasapopulationof 4 在 的东部 南 西 北 中 的表达sth is in to ontheeast south of 某处 B A B A B A AisintheeastofB A在B的范围之内 AistotheeastofB A在B的范围之外 且不接壤 AisontheeastofB A与B相邻接 第三关 组词成句 重庆位于中国西南 2 它的总面积是8 24万平方千米 3 它的人口近3千万 4 重庆的天气多变 时常下雨 5 重庆的交通便利发达 6 重庆的特色小吃很多 火锅名扬天下 7 重庆的景点很多 风景旖旎 吸引了四方游客 Sth belocated besituated in at on 某处 Theareaof 某地 is squaremeters 某地 coversanareaof squarekilometers hasapopulationof 2 它的总面积是8 24万平方千米Itcoversanareaof82400squarekilometers 重庆位于中国西南ChongqingislocatedinthesouthwestpartofChina 3 它的人口近3千万 Ithasapopulationofnear30million 4 重庆的天气多变 时常下雨 Chongqing sweatherischangeableandrainsalot 6 重庆的特色小吃很多 火锅名扬天下 Chongqinghasmanyspecialfoodsandamongthemhotpotisveryfamousallovertheworld 5 重庆的交通便利发达 Chongqing stransportationisconvenientandadvanced 7 重庆的景点很多 风景旖旎 吸引了四方游客 Chongqinghasmanyscenicspots Ithasbeautifulscenery Itattractsalargenumberoftouristsfromdifferentplaces Ladiesandgentlemen WelcometoChongqing nowletmeintroduceourcitytoyou ChongqingislocatedinthesouthwestpartofChina Itcoversanareaof82400squarekilometers Ithasapopulationofnear30million Chongqing sweatherischangeableandrainsalot Chongqing stransportationisadvancedandconvenient Chongqinghasmanyspecialfoodsandamongthemhotpotisveryfamousallovertheworld Chongqinghasmanyscenicspots Ithasbeautifulscenery Itattractsalargenumberoftouristsfromdifferentplaces 10 15 1 monotonoussentencepatterns 句式单一 多简单句 少复合句 2 Notcoherent 不连贯 Anyproblemswiththispassage 第四关 合并单句 Tips连接词定语从句3 名词性从句4 状语从句 Chongqing whichcoversanareaof82400squarekilometers islocatedinthesouthwestpartofChina ChongqingislocatedinthesouthwestpartofChina Itcoversanareaof82400squarekilometers 定语从句 2 Chongqinghasmanyspecialfoodsandamongthemhotpotisveryfamousallovertheworld 定语从句 Therearemanyspecialfoodshere amongwhichhotpotisveryfamousallovertheworld AsChongqinghasmanyscenicspotsandbeautifulscenery itattractsalargenumberoftouristsfromdifferentplaces 3 Chongqinghasmanyscenicspots Ithasbeautifulscenery Itattractsalargenumberoftouristsfromdifferentplaces 状语从句 第五关 连句成篇 Linkingwords 连接词 first second third besides inaddition also asfor Ladiesandgentlemen WelcometoChongqing nowletmeintroduceourcitytoyou Chongqing whichcoversanareaof82400squarekilometers islocatedinthesouthwestpartofChina Ithasapopulationofnear30million Theweatherhereischangeableandrainsalot Asforthetransportationhere itisveryadvancedandconvenient Chongqingisalsoknownforitsdeliciousfoods Therearemanyspecialfoodshere amongwhichhotpotisveryfamousallovertheworld Inaddition asChongqinghasmanyscenicspotsandbeautifulscenery itattractsalargenumberoftouristsfromdifferentplaces IhopeyoucanenjoyyourstayinChongqing Thankyou 15 20 中国加入WTO后 有一大批外国人来我直辖市 重庆市参观 假设你是导游 请根据以下内容 向外宾简单介绍我市的情况 写作内容 经验总结仔细审题 列举大纲 围绕要点 写