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考研英语写作教程 目录 考研英语写作介绍议论文反面信息图议论文正面信息图议论文争议信息图应用文考研英语写作遣词用句常见错误考研英语写作遣词用句升级练习 考研英语写作介绍 小作文形式 应用文内容 信件为主分值 10分字数要求 100词左右时间要求 大约20分钟 大作文形式 议论文内容 看图说话分值 20分字数要求 160 200词时间要求 大约40分钟 应试写作的三个层次 写得出写得对写得好 考研英语写作难点 大脑一片空白基本无话可说表达漏洞百出可读性相当差中式英语泛滥考官哭笑不得表达捉襟见肘词句鲜有亮点口语痕迹明显好似娓娓道来 考研英语写作要求 谋篇 观点突出结构合理谋段 论证充分言之有物谋句 正确多变关联谋词 准确多变 课程安排 总体介绍考研英语写作讲解议论文反面信息图写作讲解议论文正面信息图写作讲解议论文争议信息图写作讲解应用文写作考研英语写作遣词用句常见错误考研英语写作遣词用句升级练习学生例文讲解 议论文题目分类 反面信息图 199820002003200520062007正面信息图 2001200220042008争议信息图 2009图表数据题 19971999 第五档 A9 10 B17 20 很好地完成了试题规定的任务 包含所有内容要点 使用丰富的语法结构和词汇 语言自然流畅 语法错误极少 有效地采用多种衔接手法 文字连贯 层次清晰 格式与语域恰当贴切 对目标读者 即语言接受对象 完全产生了预期效果 第四档 A7 8 B13 16 较好地完成了试题规定的任务 包含所有内容要点 允许漏掉一两个次重点 使用丰富的语法结构和词汇 语言基本准确 只有在试图使用复杂结构或较难词汇时才有个别错误 采用了适当的衔接手法 层次清晰 组织较严密 格式与语域恰当贴切 对目标读者 即语言接受对象 产生了预期效果 第三档 A5 6 B9 12 基本地完成了试题规定的任务 遗漏一些内容 但包含多数内容要点 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的需求 有一些语法及词汇错误 但不影响理解 采用了简单的衔接手法 内容较连贯 层次清晰 格式与语域基本合理 对目标读者 即语言接受对象 基本产生了预期效果 第二档 A3 4 B5 8 未能按照要求完成试题规定的任务 遗漏或未能有效阐述一些内容要点 写了一些无关内容 语法结构单调 词汇有限 有较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误 影响了对写作内容的理解 未采用恰当的衔接手法 内容缺少连贯性 格式与语域不恰当 未能清楚地传达信息给读者 LoveIsaLamp Loveisalampindarkness andthemorethevoyageis thestrongerthelightis Likethelampvividlyportrayedinthepicture lovemayseeminsignificantinatimeofpeaceandabundance butitslightcomesintofocusinatimeofturbulenceandpoverty Thesaying afriendinneedisafriendindeed exactlyshowshowmanifestlovecanbeinurgentneedofhelp 19 Toillustratethispointofview IwilltakeTaoXingzhi oneofthegreatesteducatorsinChina forexample Hewasonlytoowillingtoimpartlovetowhoeverneededitmost Toimprovethesituationofmanypoorchildren Mr Taocommittedhimselftoestablishingaschoolespeciallycateringtothem EvenafterMr Tao sdeath thesechildrenstillboreinmindhiskindness hisgenerosityandaboveall hisunselfishness 19 Loveisneededeverywhere nomatterbigorsmall Itisthegoldenthreadthattiestheheartsallovertheworld Aslongaswereserveaplaceforloveinourheart itwillgrowandblossom andyieldfruitsthatcanmaketheworldmorebeautiful Let sdosomething anythingtogiveahandtoothers thelightofloveseemstomeanlittletoyou butmeansalottotheoneswrigglingindarkness 223ws LoveIsaLamp Loveisconsideredtobeaffectionofmankind butwhatistruelove Differentpeoplehavedifferentopinions Lookatthepictureabove thereanoillampgivingofflightallthetime withenergybeinguseduplittlebylittle Suchislikelove akindoflastingdevotioninsomeway Theoillampwouldrathersacrificeitselftohelpotherswhoareinrealneed 16 Ioncecameacrossanessaytellingofagraduatedevotedherselftotheeducationcause Aftergraduatingfromuniversity shecouldhavefoundagoodjobandgotahandsomesalary Insteadofdoingso shewentbacktoherhometowninamountainareaandbecameateacherthere Withoutmuchmoneyorcomfortablelivingconditions she however gainedrespectfromsociety Sheturnedoutquiteafewexcellentstudents moreimportantofall shesetagoodexampleofhowtobecomeausefulpersonforherstudents 16 Asweallknow loveisakindofdevotionandcommitment Toshowloveinvolvessacrificeoneselftobenefitothers Thegreatertheneedsare themoreworthwhiletheloveappearstobe justastheoillampinthepicture Trytohelpothersgenerouslyandshowyourlove thentheworldwillbefulloflove 219ws LoveIsaLamp Myunderstandingofthesymbolicmeaningofthepicurebelowisthatgivingyourhelptothosepeoplewhoareinthebiggesttroubleisthemostusefulforthemthananytime Whenpeoplehavesomedifficultywhichtheycan tdealwith thethingtheymostwantisyourhelpandyourlove yourhelpcanmakethemovercomeanythingandyourlovecanrenderthemmuchencouragement Itisalightinglampindarkthatthehelpandloveyougivethem 12 Severalyearsago someareassufferdisasterformtyhoon Thegovernmenthelpthemrebuildtheirfamilies In1999 asouthernprovincealsosuffersdisasterfromtheearthquake Manypeopledotheirbesttohelpthembydonatingmoney clothesandfood 12 Itisnecessarytotakesomemeasurestospreadlove Foronething weshouldencouragepeoplewhohaveloveandarehappytohelpothers Foranother weshouldenhancetheawarenessofpeoplethatloveisbenefitforsociety What smore Ithinkthatonlyinthiswaywillwehaveabrightfuture 200ws LoveIsaLamp Inthedarkness therealwaysaflame evenitisshiningorwavinginthewildwind itgivesoflightwhichleadsyoutoreachingthesunshine Andheatthatwarmsyourheartwhenyouaregoingthroughmostdifficultiesmomentsinyourlife Asweknow loveisthemostpreciousfeeling 8 Lovehasamagicstrength Itconquerevils Createsplendidfuture andchangetheworld Sowelove weneedanyonecontributetheirloves Becauseweneedsunshine andalsowantthewholeworldfullofthelove Justtakeeverythingeasy Showyoursmiletoguywhojustfailedtheexam andyouwillbebetterthenexttime bequietwhenyourroommatesaresleepingandyouwentbacklate Thisisabsolutelytrue accordingtooneofmyfriends afterrecoveringfromaheavyill herecalledlaterthathefeltgreatcomfortwhenmanyofhisclassmatescometoaskafterhim 8 Loveisineveryday Ifyouarecarefulenoughandthinkingmoreaboutothers youareshowingyourlove Thehelpgivingtoafriendintroubleisthebestyoucanoffer whatyouneedmost That sreallypreciousandnobleamongothers 321ws LoveIsaLamp Loveisalamp Thedarkeritis moreshinethelightis Thesayingisgreat Inmodernsociety loveplaysamoreandmoreimportantrole Inspecialcountries loveworkinaspecialway 4 Inourcountry foodusedtolayanessentialroleinourlives Withthedevelopmentofeconomic thetimepassed Wedon tthinkaboutourhunger Someonegivesyousomethingtoeat Sometimes youwillthinkthatthefoodissobad Theloveissocheap However alittlefoodbecomessopreciousinotherpoorcountry Thepeoplehavetolookforfoodeverywhereforhis hernextdinner There thefoodsuppliedfreelybecomessoimportantthatmaybeinwillbringsomeup 4 However whatisthewaytoshowourlove Ithinkwhenweshowourlovewemustbehumanity Weshouldgivelovetopersonwhoneedmost Thenlovebecomesprecious 158ws 高分秘诀 要点全词 句式多变错误极少行文流畅 逻辑承接词 格式正确 考研英语写作的步骤 审题正面 反面 争议 图表 构思头脑风暴行文三思而落笔检查ThefirstdraftofanythingisSHIT ByHemmingway 反面信息图的写法 描述图画加以评论 现象原因后果 得出结论 态度对策总结 描述图画 Thepictureshowsthat Alternativesof show 同义替换demonstrate display depict reveal present illustrate indicateAlternativesof picture 同义替换photo cartoon drawing修饰副词 vividly clearly 描述图画 Aswecanseefromthecartoon Ascanbeclearlyseenfromtheabovepicture Asisdisplayedinthedrawing Asitisdisplayedinthedrawing Thecartoonvividlydepicts 加以评论 现象原因后果 Itisclearthatthepictureimpliesacommonphenomenoninoursocietytoday Bydrawingthepicture thepainterintendstoinformusthat Apparently thepurposeofthispictureistoconveyamessage 加以评论 现象原因后果 Thekeymessageconveyedinthepictureisthat Thiskindofsituationcanbeseenin Thecartoonconveysasignal Thepicturedeliversamessage Thedrawingisasymbolthat 加以评论 现象原因后果 Whatthepicturereflectsmaybeacommon newphenomenoninChina inourdailylife intheyoungergeneration Thispicture cartoonconveysaclearmessage 加以评论 现象原因后果 Thereareatleast reasonsforthisphenomenon Whatmayaccountforthissocialphenomenon 加以评论 现象原因后果 Manyfactorscontributeto leadto bringaboutthisproblem Anumberoffactorsareresponsibleforthissocialphenomenon Thecausesfortheproblemarecomplicated 首先其次再次 Tobeginwith Firstly FirstandforemostSecondly Inaddition WhatismoreInthethirdplace Furthermore Lastbutnotleast 加以评论 现象原因后果 Theeffectscouldbeadverse serious negative Itwillhaveanegative undesirableimpacton Thiswillbringsomeseriousconsequences Thenegativeconsequencescanbeexpected 得出结论 态度对策总结 Asforme AsfarasIamconcerned Frommyview Fromapersonalpointofview Ifirmlybelievethat 得出结论 态度对策总结 Mysuggestionastothebestwaytocopewiththeproblemisasfollows Toeradicatetheproblem afewsolutionsshouldbeprovided NowIwouldliketopresentsomecountermeasurestodealwiththeproblem 得出结论 态度对策总结 Itishightimethatwetookeffectivemeasurestodealwiththeproblem Therefore itisimperativeforustotakesomecountermeasures Tosolvetheproblem acombinedeffortisreallynecessary 得出结论 态度对策总结 Onlyinthiswaycouldwesolvesuchathornyissue Onlyinthiswaycouldsuchathornyissuebesolved Onlybycooperationcouldwehaveabrighterfuture Abrighterfuturecanbeexpectedifthesesolutionscouldbetaken 2006 Aswecanseefromthetwophotosclearly BeckhamhascrazyfansinChina OneboywritesthenameofBeckhamonhisface andtheotherdoesthehairstyleofBeckhaminthebarber satthecostofRMB300 Whatthepicturereflectsmaybeacommonphenomenonintheyoungergeneration Teenagersexcessivelyadmirestars Manyfactorscontributetothisproblem Tobeginwith theunder agedarecurious immatureandna ve andcanneitherresistthetemptationaroundnormakeasoundjudgment Inaddition familyandschoolfocusonacademicperformance butignoremoralandvalueeducation Lastbutnotleast mediamisleadyoungstersbyalwayscoveringsomestaraffairs Asaconsequence theeffectscouldbeadverse Theattentionoftheadolescentcouldbedistractedawayfromstudy whichistheirsoletask andsomeofthemmaygoastray Asforme theyoungshouldnotworshipthestarsinsuchablindandcrazyway NowIwouldliketopresentsomecountermeasurestodealwiththeproblem Firstly thejuvenileshouldlearnthevirtuesfromstar suchashardworking Whatismore family schoolandthemediashouldguidethemproperly andinformthatstudydeservesmoretimeandenergythanstars Onlyinthiswaycouldwesolvesuchathornyissue 2005 Thecartoonvividlydemonstratesafamilyfootballmatch whichistotallydifferentfromaregularone Withoutstrikers only4goalkeepers whoaresonsanddaughteroftheoldfather areguarding4goalsrespectively Besides theoldfatheractsasaballtoreplacetherealone Itisclearthatthepictureimpliesacommonphenomenoninoursocietytoday theyoungergenerationtaketheirparentsasaburdenandrefusetotakecareofthem Whatmayaccountforthissocialphenomenon Thechildrenoftheoldparentsmayburythemselvesincareerormakingafortune andtheylosethebasicmoralandconscience Soitwillhaveanundesirableimpactonbothindividualandsociety Firstly theoldmayendtheirlifeinpainandsorrow Inaddition thetraditionalvirtuesinsocietymaybelost Frommyview suchabehaviorshouldbecriticizedandcondemned Tosolvetheproblem acombinedeffortisreallynecessary Firstofall theyoungergenerationshouldshouldertheresponsibilitytotakecaretheelderly Secondly thegovernmentshouldsetupasoundelderly caresystemandcovermorepensionandmedicalcareexpenses Onlyinthiswaycouldtheelderlyhaveahappylife 2000 Thedrawingvividlydepictstheshockingdifferenceinfishingbetween1900and1995 In1900 asinglefishingboatandnumerousfishcouldbeseenintheocean Totallyoppositely in1995 theoceanaccommodatedcrowdedfishingboats butonlyonefishwasinit Bydrawingthepicture thepainterintendstoinformusthathumanactivitieshaveadisastrousimpactonthenatureandleadtospeciesextinction Anumberoffactorsareresponsibleforthissocialphenomenon Firstandforemost profit orientedcommercialbehaviorspursuethesoleaimatanycost Besides thegovernmenthasloosesupervisionontheenvironmentandecosystem Thusthenegativeconsequencescanbeexpected Resourcesareonthedecline whichleadstoecosystemimbalanceandevenbreakdownfinally Asaresult humanbeingscannotsurviveonthisplanet AsfarasIamconcerned environmentandnaturalresourceprotectionshouldbeintoppriority Mysuggestionastothebestwaytocopewiththeproblemisasfollows Tobeginwith ourbehaviorsshouldbemoreenvironmentallyfriendly andsuchanawarenessshouldbepopularizedandupgraded Secondly thegovernmentshouldenactandenforcemorerigidlawsandregulations suchasthebanonfishingduringsomeperiodsoftheyear Onlybycooperationcouldwehaveabrighterfuture 2007 Aswecanseefromthecartoon inafield akickerisreadytoshoot whileakeeperisguardingthegoal Meanwhile thekeepersupposeshimselftobeadwarf andthekickerconsidershimasagiant whocoversthewholegoal Thepicturedeliversamessage somemayunderestimatetheirowncapabilitywhileoverestimatethedifficultyorchallenge Inaword theylackconfidence whichusuallyleadstofailureandexamplesabound Inthelong distancerunning someplayersmayconsiderthedestinationunreachableandstopinthehalfway Besides inthepreparationofNationalEntranceTestForMA MSCandidates somestudentswouldtakeitaslongandtoughexperienceandquitinthemidwayastheathletesdo Fromapersonalpointofview confidenceisofvitalimportance Therefore itisimperativeforustotakesomecountermeasurestoimproveconfidence Firstly itisadvisabletosetupanachievablegoal Asitisknown theconfidencewouldcomebackifthetaskisnotsodemanding suchasmemorizing50wordsadayinsteadof500 Inaddition itisofnecessitytocheerfortinysuccess Once50wordsarememorizedeachday weshouldremindourselves Icandoit Onlyinthiswaycouldtheconfidencebeimproved 2003 Asisdisplayedinthedrawing aflowerblossomswellinagreenhouse whichcanresiststorm Incomparison oncethegreenhouseisremoved theflowercannotwithstandanymoreandwitherssoon Apparently thepurposeofthispictureistoconveyamessage aflowerwhichisusedtothegreenhousecannotsurviveinthedifficulty andsimilarexamplesabound Achildover protectedbyparentscannotsurviveinthecut throatcompetition Likewise anindustrysurroundedbynationalpreferentialpolicycannotcompetewithforeignrivalsworldwide AsfarasIamconcerned inordertogrow almosteverythinghastobeputinthetoughenvironment Itishightimethatwetookeffectivemeasurestodealwiththeproblem Accordingly childrenshouldbeindependenttobereadyforthefuturecompetition anddowhattheyareabletodo suchascookingandhousework Asforthegovernment itshouldencourageenterprisestoexpand goglobalandparticipateinbusinessworldwide Onlyinthiswaycouldtheimmaturesurviveandsucceedwhentheyfaceplight 1998 Asisdemonstratedinthecartoon ahenismakinghercommitmentandclaimingtohaveroundandcompleteeggs whicharewithoutedgesandcornersandcontainallessentialparts Whatthepicturereflectsmaybeacommonphenomenoninourdailylife Itisridiculoustohavepromiseinallwalksoflife andexamplesabound Asitisfrequentlyseen businessmenimpressthecustomerbyexaggeratingtheresponsibilitytheyshouldtake suchasrefundablesystem Similarly banksemphasizesmileserviceandgovernmentauthoritiesclaimtoexamineandapproveapplicationwithinseveraldays Therefore thiswillbringsomeseriousconsequences Itistheresponsibilityofstores banksandgovernmentauthoritiestoprovidedecentservice Thesecommitmentsseemtoexceedwhattheyshouldoffer andcustomersandcitizensmaybehonoredandflattered However infact theirstatusdeclines Ifirmlybelievethatwedonotneedthesesuperficialwordsbuttheimprovementinallaspectstomeetthedemandofus Toeradicatetheproblem afewsolutionsshouldbeprovided Firstofall consumersshouldnottaketheseridiculouscommitmentsasthebonusfrombusinessmenandgovernmentauthorities Besides thegovernmentshouldenactandenforcemorerigidlawsandregulationstopreventthesepromisesandbehaviors Onlybycooperationcouldaharmonioussocietybeestablished Aswecanseefromthecartoon ahen issellinghereggsandclaimingtheyarebigandharmless Inherhand acertificateprovesthatnocontaminatedingredientisinhereggs Bydrawingthepicture thepainterintendstoinformusthatfoodsafetyhasbecomeaveryseriousissuenationwide Whatmayaccountforthissocialphenomenon Tobeginwith producers forthesakeofeconomicprofit pursuetheirsoleaimatanycostbyaddingcontaminatedingredienttothefood Whatismore thegovernmenthasloosesupervisiononthequalityoffood whichmakescontaminatedmilkpowderandeggseasilyavailableinthemarket Thus itwillhaveanundesirableimpactonthehealthofcitizens Contaminatedfoodmayleadtosomeincurablediseasesandevendeath Asforme foodsafetyshouldbeintoppriority Itishightimethatwetookeffectivemeasurestodealwiththeproblem Firstandforemost manufacturersshouldberequiredtotaketheresponsibilityofthequalityofproductsandensuretheyareharmless Inaddition governmentshouldenactandenforcemorerigidlawsandregulationstocombatcontaminatedfood Onlyinthiswaycouldwesolvesuchathornyissue Asisdisplayedinthedrawing onawastelandwheretreeshavebeencutdown littlemonkeyscanonlyplayandjumponthelongarmoftheirparents insteadoftheforest Whatthepicturereflectsmaybeacommonphenomenonworldwide Humanactivitieshaveadisastrousimpactonthenatureandtotallydestroythehabitatsofanimals Thecausesforitarecomplicated Firstly profit orientedcommercialbehaviorspursuethesoleaimatanycostbydepletingnaturalresources Inaddition thegovernmenthasloosesupervisionontheenvironmentandecosystem ignoringorevenencouragingdeforestation So thiswillbringsomeseriousconsequences Agrowingnumberofspeciesareonthedangerlist whichposesathreattothesurvivalofhumanbeings Fromapersonalpointofview environmentandnaturalresourceprotectionshouldbegivendueattention Itisimperativeforustotakesomecountermeasures Tobeginwith ourbehaviorsshouldbemoreenvironmentallyfriendly andsuchanawarenessshouldbepopularizedandupgraded Secondly governmentshouldenactandenforcemorerigidlawsandregulationstoconserveourhome Onlybycooperationcouldwehaveabrighterfuture Thedrawingvividlydepictsthepuzzleoftheearth Inawhiteplasticbagcarriedbyawoman theearthisstrugglingtohaveabreath Whatthepicturereflectsmaybeacommonphenomenonworldwide Pollutionhasadisastrousimpactonthenature Thecausesforitarecomplicated Firstly forthesakeofconvenience disposableandnon degradableplasticbagsarewidelyused Inaddition profit orientedcommercialbehaviorspursuethesoleaimatanycostbypollutingenvironment Furthermore thegovernmenthasloosesupervisionontheenvironmentandpollution So thiswillbringsomeseriousconsequences Increasingpollution whichmeanscleanwaterandfreshairarenolongeravailable leadstoecosystemimbalanceandevenbreakdownfinally Asaresult humanbeingscannotsurviveonthisplanet Fromapersonalpointofview environmentpollutioncontrolshouldbegivendueattention Itisimperativeforustotakesomecountermeasures Tobeginwith ourbehaviorsshouldbemoreenvironmentallyfriendly andsuchanawarenessshouldbepopularizedandupgraded Secondly governmentshouldenactandenforcemorerigidlawsandregulationstoconserveourhome suchasthebanonfreesupplyofplasticbagsindepartmentstoresandsupermarkets Onlybycooperationcouldwehaveabrighterfuture Thecartoonvividlydepictsaninterestingphenomenon Atnight aboyislyingontheroofofhishouse Withapapermarked59 heisscaredofgoingintotheroom wherehisparentsarequarrellingbitterly Apparently thepurposeofthispictureistoconveyamessage nowadaysschoolchildrenareundertoomuchpressure Manyfactorsbringaboutthisproblem Firstofall parentspayexcessivelycloseattentiontotheacademicperformanceoftheirchildrenandimposegreatpressureonthem Inthesecondplace itistheimpropereducationsystemwhichjudgesthestudentsbyoneexaminationonlythatshouldtaketheresponsibility Asaresult theeffectscouldbeadverse Gradually childrenwouldhavesomementalproblems beingdepressedandisolated Itisalsopossiblethattheymaygoastrayandevencommitcrime Frommyview childrenshouldberelievedfromtheseverestress Tosolvetheproblem acombinedeffortisreallynecessary Familyandschoolshouldcon