高一用短文改错专讲.ppt

HowtodoProof reading短文改错 他们为何丢分 1 动词的时态和语态错误高考链接 2012陕西高考 MyfatherandIstayedattheSouthLakeHotelforaweekwhenwevisitBeijinglastmonth 2008全国 Growingupisnoteasy Sometimesallthatisneedissomeonetorelyon 一 动词形 2 主谓不一致的错误高考链接1 Istayedthereforoneandahalfhoursandmadesurethatthegirlwereallright 2 Goodnightandremember you mydeardiary ismyonlysouvenire 纪念品 frommypastlifeandmyonlyfriend 3 非谓语动词错误高考链接 2012 新课标全国卷 Meanwhile IfoundoutthatwithmorepatienceIcouldmakemytoystolast 2011 新课标全国卷 IwasattheShanghaiRailwayStationbuyatickettoHangzhou Solution1 通读全文 明确文中时态主旋律 2 结合语境 灵活运用时态形式 3 仔细审查 主谓一致 4 认真推敲 把握非谓语 5 格外审视 主动与被动 Practice1 IfeelveryhappythatIcouldchangemyclothesatlast 2 TherewereafootballgameonTVlastSaturdayevening 3 Icameacrossacrew 工作人员 makeanewfilmwithoneofmyfavoriteactors 4 TeainChinawastraditionallydrankfromcupswithouthandles 把手 指名词单复数形式及可数名词与不可数名词的用法错误 1 Itfeltstrangetotravelwithoutanyluggages 2 InearlyJanuarythisyear therateofUFOreportswassteady aroundthreeperweeks 3 It sashametobreakyourwords Youshouldmeanwhatyousay 你要说话算话 二 名词数 Solution1 理清可数与不可数名词之间的区别与联系 2 记住固定词组中名词的特殊用法 3 根据语境辨别名词单复数 常见的绝对不可数名词 work works experience experiences success asuccess advice news information weather equipment fun furniture progress Practice1 Don tlosehearts youwillbesuccessfulintime 2 Ineedsomemoreinformations 3 Therearetwogirlsfrommycourse andIplantomakefriendwiththem 1 形容词和副词的误用Whenshedroppedmeoff Ipulledoutthetoyslowandgaveitback Igottothefinishlinefirst Iwontherace Ifeltveryproudlyofmyself 3 Hehasacomfortableroom apatientlynurse andagreatdealoftimetoread 2 级的混用和误用 Thedoctorsaysheisrecoveringfastthanexpected 三 还要注意形和副 Solution1 明确形容词和副词的功能 形容词修饰名词或跟在系动词之后 副词修饰形容词 动词或整个句子 2 理清短文中形容词和副词比较等级的关系 Practice1 Andwewillbehappinesseveryday 2 Iwillhaveaharmonyfamily 3 Wewillawareofthehappiness 4 Hisfatherlooksmuchmorehappierthanbefore 5 Heaskedangryifwehadfinishedthetask 6 Fortunate everyonewasabletoescapefromtheburningbuilding 这是考查最多的错误形式之一 主要有现在分词 过去分词 动名词和不定式错误 高考链接Icouldnottorunveryfastandfellbehind LiMengcameseemeeveryday SoIhelpedthemgoingtothenearesthospital Myclassmate Joseph isatpresentinhospitalwithabreakingleg 四 非谓语 细辨别 Solution1 纵观全文或全句 明确句中动词所做的句子成分 2 系统掌握非谓语动词的句法功能 3 前后联系 整体把握 Note1 谓语动词与非谓语动词的混用 2 非谓语动词之间的混用 3 在并列结构中谓语与非谓语的误用 Practice1 Iwillhaveafamilyconsistsofmyhusband mybabyandmeaftertenyears 2 Ithinkplaysportsandtakeexerciseareimportant 3 Iwillalsolearntocooking 4 I mlookingforwardtoseewhatIwilllooklikeintenyears 5 Wefedmonkeys visitingtemplesandtoldstories 6 IamwritingtoinviteyoutovisitChinaandspendingthesummervacationwithme 1 人称代词 物主代词 反身代词的使用 2 代词指代的人或事物前后不一致的错误 3 it作形式主语 形式宾语或指代时有缺漏 高考链接WiththehelpofKatia aroommateofme Hefounddifficulttolearnmathwell Afterthinkingforawhile Ilethercopymyanswers Butafterthetest allofuswerecalledtotheteacher soffice 五 代词格 细领悟 Solution1 顺藤摸瓜 理清文中代词的指代关系 注意联系上下文 2 系统掌握it的各种用法 3 准确把握不定代词在文中的正确使用 PracticeIwasalwayslearningtoexpressmeinsimpleEnglish 3 OnedayIwrotealittlestoryandshowedtomyteacher 4 Andaftermanyattempts shepassedherdrivingtestandtoldherhusbandthat Tocelebrate hewasgoingtodrivehimovertoFranceforaholiday 1 主要考查固定短语 固定介词的搭配 2 不及物动词带宾语时必须带介词 3 时间状语前有指示代词this that或one next last等修饰词时不用介词 高考链接TherewasoneonparticularI dreallywanted Thechairiscomfortabletosit Hepaidavisittohisgrandmotheronthatafternoon 六 介词短语须关注 习惯用法要牢记 1 冠词a an和the的用法错误 2 连词but and or so和although的逻辑性用法错误 高考链接Hewasrighthereinthefrontofme Iboughtmyticketbutturnedaroundtopickupmybagfromthefloor PracticeIwillteachmystudentsinclassroom Iwillhavegrownupasamiddleschoolstudents IwillbecomeaEnglishteacher Icameintothelivingroomandsawoneofthemjustgointothekitchendoorbutturnonthelight 七 冠词 连词常光顾 再啰嗦几句四不改原则1 单词拼写不改 2 大小写不改 3 词序不改 4 标点符号不改 解题步骤1 从语篇入手 理解文章大意 2 在理解大意的基础上 审查句子结构 3 从语法结构入手 审查句子结构 4 通读全文 1 短文改错以句为单位设置错误 每句中最多两处错误 2