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从2007届如皋联考谈看图作文 江苏省盱眙中学高三英语组 主要特点 书面表达 书面表达六步法 书面表达六步法 书面表达六步法 书面表达六步法 书面表达六步法 书面表达六步法 书面表达六步法 2007如皋联考书面表达 下面四幅图片描述的是李明和爷爷从养鸟到放鸟的一段经历 请根据图片所提供的信息以第三人称用英语写一篇短文 注意 1 短文必须包括所有图片的主要内容短文的内容要连贯完整 2 短文单词数100左右 开头已给出的单词不计入单词总数 One Saturday morning Li Ming and his grandpa were feeding the bird in the cage _ 写作过程 一审题 认真读题然后找出基本要素5W1H何 时 何 地 何 人 为何 如 何 做 了 何 事 星期天到星期一when在家和学校where李明who为笼中鸟感到悲伤why而劝说爷爷how放飞小鸟what 1 Title if possible 标题Setting the Bird Free 2 Person 人称第三人称 3 Style 文章题材记叙文 4 Tense and voice 时态和语态主动为主 二抓要点 确定主要行为配动词注意时态语态及搭配的副词介词等What happened The important points list them out or underline them to make sure you wont leave out one 要点要全 三扩展成句形成基本语义单位把要点变成完整的句子注意连词Who did what 内容要点并扩展成句 1 李明和爷爷喂笼中鸟 2 小鸟不开心 3 上学路上看见小鸟在飞 4 为笼中鸟感到伤心 5 说服爷爷放飞小鸟 6放飞小鸟大家都很高兴 四连句成文词与词搭配 句与句相连时间空间 细节连贯 呼应 五查错改错主谓一致吗时态正确吗时态正确吗有半截话吗要尽量剔除错误 六誊写卷面整洁不一定加分卷面潦草一定要扣分 One Possible Version One Sunday morning Li Ming and his grandpa were feeding the bird in the cage The bird was unhappy though it had enough food and water Li Ming did not know why The next morning on his way to school Li Ming saw some birds flying in the sky Then he thought of the lonely bird in the cage He decided to persuade his grandpa to set the bird free When he got home he said to his grandpa Birds also need friends To his delight his grandpa agreed The bird was set free Grandpa and the children were very happy to see the bird flying away into the sky 2006南京二模书面表达 请仔细观看以下六幅图用英语描述其内容并就图中教师的做法发表你的看法 注意1第一图的内容已给出 2字数120左右 3签名signature Ma Xiaohu was very careless and often made mistakes in his homework which made his teacher very angry One day his teacher had Xiaohu ask his father Ma Dahu to sign his name in his exercise book One Possible Version Ma Xiaohu was very careless and often made mistakes in his homework which made his teacher very angry One day his teacher had Xiaohu ask his father Ma Dahu to sign his name in his exercise book On his way home thinking he would be beaten punished again by his father Xiaohu felt very worried Suddenly a good idea occurred to him As soon as he got home he covered his eyes with a piece of cloth and kept writing the word Ma Xiaohuon a piece of paper He asked his father whether he could do it as he was doing His father did so Seeing this Xiaohu hurriedly put his exercise book under his fathers pen and got his signature When his father took off the cloth Xiaohu had already put the exercise book back into his school bag I think its wrong of the teacher to treat students like that As a teacher he or she should give students more love and care but not just punishment 看图作文解题过程 一审题认真读题然后找出基本要素5W1H何 时 何 地 何 人 为何 如 何 做 了 何 事 二抓要点确定主要行为配动词注意时态语态及搭配的副词介词等What happened 三扩展成句形成基本语义单位把要点变成完整的句子注意连词Who did what 四连句成文词与词搭配 句与句相连时间 空间 细节连贯 呼应 五查错改错主谓一致吗时态正确吗时态正确吗有半截话吗要尽量剔除错误 六誊写卷面整洁不一定加分卷面潦草一定要扣分 金陵中学2006届高三第三次模拟考试英语试题 书面表达满分25分 下面4幅图描述的是Tom和Mike的一次经历请你根据图画内容和文字提示写一篇120字左右的短文 注意适当发表个人观点 At present playing computer games is becoming more and more popular with people especially with school students Take Tom and Mike for example Every day One possible version At present playing computer games is becoming more and more popular with people especially with school students Take Tom and Mike for example Every day after school they go to the computer bar to play games till late at night and they often have a competition to see who wins more scores Once Tom didnt go home until eleven oclock at night When he got home he told his mother that he had been going over his lessons Poor momShe believed him and cooked two eggs for him Take more care of yourself as you work too hard my dear son But Toms face turned red at his mothers praise Later he made up his mind to work really hard 重庆一中高2006级4月月考英语试题 眼下街谈巷议人们的热门话题总离不开三贵买房贵上学贵看病贵请根据下面图画写一篇英语短文简要说明图画中所表达的内容重点阐述这种现象带来的后果和你的观点题目自拟 注意1 短文应包含图中所提供的主要信息并做适当发挥使短文连贯完整 2 词数120左右 One Possible Version Its Time to Reduce Loads Nowadays we often hear people complain that it is expensive to buy houses to pay for the childrens education and to see the doctor which is really true As is shown in the picture some people are burdened with high expenses all their lives Some people even get stuck in heavy debt even though they make their efforts to earn money and save every coin Because of lack of money some people have no room to live in Some cant send their children to school And some others even have to bear the pain of diseases In my opinion the government should build up a perfect system to meet the basic needs of living The expenses on houses tuition and medicine should be cut down so that everyone can enjoy a better life Thank You Wish you every success Some effective sentences of the possible version as examples Mother couldnt say anything Before she could say anything I got my schoolbag ran out and got on my bike I got my schoolbag I ran out I got on my bike 1 4 2 3 Some effective sentences of the possible version as examples I realized it was Sunday today It was then that I realized it was Sunday today Possible version June 17 Sunday I often stay up late to go over my lessons for the college entrance examinations Last night I didnt go to bed until 12 oclock When I woke up this morning it was already 9 oclock I got dressed and washed myself quickly Then I rushed into the living room where Mother was preparing breakfast Before she could say anything I got my schoolbag ran out and got on my bike I rode as fast as I could It seemed only a few minutes before I got to the school gate To my surprise it was closed It was then that I realized it was Sunday today 结 论 审题抓点 造句成文 改错誉写 背诵精彩范文 看图写回信说明找房情况 100左右 应用文 NMET2003 100左右 100左右 100左右 100左右 100左右 词 数 讨论2008奥运会志愿者应该做什么 议论文 MET2006JS 根据提供的信息写 建设和谐社会倡议书 应用文 MET2005JS 根据表格提供的信息写回信介绍江城变化 记叙文 MET2004JS 根据表格提供的信息写回信介绍讨论情况 说明文 NMET2002 根据表格提供的信息写减负回信 说明文 NMET2001 题 材 内 容 文体 时 间 记叙为主稍加议论旁带说明 能力要求 first second then finallyat last soon immediately suddenly 时间顺序 合适的过渡性词汇 逻辑角度 I think Im afraid you know As we all know 过渡性插入语 whats more besides to make matters worse whats worse 递进顺序 though as even ifthough whether who whatwhen where ever 让步顺序 as long as so long as if unless 条件顺序 because since as thanks to as a result 因果顺序 but however while though otherwise 转折顺序 for one thing for the other thing on one handon the other hand 对称顺序 here there on one sideon the other sidein front of at the back of next to 空间顺序 六 步 法 抄 改 连 扩 抓 审 书面 表达 幻灯片 23 一审题 认真读题然后找出基本要素5W1H 何 时 何 地 何 人 为 何 如 何 做 了 何 事 二抓要点 确定主要行为配动词注意时态语态及搭配的副词介词等 What happened 三扩展成句 形成基本语义单位把要点变成完整的句子注意连词 Who did what 四连句成文 时间 空间 细节 连贯 呼应 词与词搭配 句与句相连 五查错改错 要尽量剔除错误 主谓一致吗时态正确吗时态正确吗有半截话吗 六誊写 卷面整洁不一定加分 卷面潦草一定要扣分 Li Ming and his grandpa were feeding the bird in the cage The bird was unhappy On his way to school Li Ming saw some birds flying in the sky He felt sad for the bird in the cage He persuaded his grandpa to set the bird free They were very happy to see the bird flying away in the sky 看图作文举例 Picture 1 go over go to bed nine oclock stay up wake up get up Picture 2 get dressed wash oneself rush into get my schoolbag prepare go to school breakfast brush teeth wash face Picture 3 ran out get on my bike ride to school as fast as Picture 4 get to to my surprise close realize Sunday find the school gate Some effective sentences of the possible version as examples I often stay up late I often stay up late to go over my