雅思作文优缺—原因建议.doc

We have discovered to our greatest disappointment thatIt is quite disappointing to notice that.We have discovered to our greatest surprise thatIt is quite delightful to notice thatWe have discovered in recent years thatIt is quite common to notice thatIt is quite common to notice thatHowever/ therefore, some hold that but others believe that. As far as I am concerned I would not hesitate to stand on the side of the former / later point of view. We have discovered to our greatest disappointment/ surprise that however/therefore, some hold that.as far as I am concerned, I would not hesitate to support this point of view, (as far ashesitate to stand against this point of view).It is quite disappointing/delightful/common to notice that consequently, there rises a heated debate over the merits and demerits of such tendency, in this essay I intend to discuss the issue in detail. On one hand, . has always been of great help to us in many ways. In the first place, adv1.支持句in the second place, adv2支持句. What is more, adv3.支持句On the other hand, there are some negative influences brought about by. Disadv1支持句 in addition, disadv2支持句. What is worse, disadv3.支持句From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that .can be both helpful and harmful. However, its advantages far outweigh the possible drawbacks that it produces. (Only when the drawbacks of . are eliminated, can the problem be resolved properly.) 原因&建议It is quite disappointing to notice that, in recent years, . Hence, it is imperative that we pinpoint the causes of this phenomenon and explore effective solutions. From my own perspective, the causes are multiple. One of the primary causes is that原因1 It is universally true that ., 段落总结. Another factor that we must take into consideration is that 原因2. . The following suggestions should be taken into consideration when seeking solutions for the problems, first, 建议1. Second, it is necessary for. to 建议2. However, only when the suggestions above are put in practice can the problem be resolved properly.Why?How?Give an exampleWhat do you mean?We have discovered to our greatest disappointment that an increasing number of teenagers are involved in illegal activities recently. Hence, it is imperative that we pinpoint the causes of this phenomenon and explore effective solutions. From my own perspective, the cause are miscellaneous. One of the primary causes is that children are constantly spoiled by parents giving too much freedom. Parents are frequently found to be unable to give timely advice when their children are engaged in minor crimes which urge children to commit more serious ones. For example, such crimes of children as theft are often left in ignorance, which, in the long run, contributes to their more serious crimes in the later ages. Another factor that we must take into consideration is that domestic violence poses great threat to the healthy development of children. Parents, as the first and the most influential teacher, can impact their children significantly through their own deeds. For example, researches covering the behaviors of children indicate that children brought up in families with severe violence are more likely to be involved in illegal activities than the average ones. The following suggestions need to be taken into consideration when seeking solutions for the problem; first, parents should be instructed of a proper child-raising so as to prevent the latter from committing crimes in the adulthood. In addition, it is necessary that parents set an admirable example for their children to look up to. However, only when the suggestions above are put in practice can the problem be resolved properly.Admirable Desirable I am easy to get angryUniversity student are difficult to find a jobChildren are easy to commit crimes Health HealthyDifficult DifficultyThe book worth readingWorthy Domestic vio