小学六年级英语毕业作文指导pep教材.doc

。英语写作注意事项： 1 标题的写法2 标点的使用：常用句号，意思表达完整就用句号。3 大小写： 句首，专有名词（人名，地名，星期，月份等等）中文人名的写法：姓名分成两部分，每一部分的首字母要大写。实词，即名词 形容词 副词等 首字母要大写。虚词，即介词 冠词 连词等要小写。但是首字母一定是大写4 审题清楚，时态保持一致，句型结构不能随中文意思创编，尽量用拼写有把握的单词。5 字数要求5080字，语言力求准确，无语法错误。对创新点要求不高，如果真要体现水平，可以选一两句你认为有创意又保证正确的句子。6段与段之间 -齐头式：段与段之间空一行 缩进式：一般缩进2-4字符作文篇目一 My Friend样式一： I have many friends. My best friend is John. He is ten. He has small eyes and big ears. He is cool. Sometimes he is active. He likes summer best, because he likes swimming very much. He often plays football with his classmates on the weekend. I like John very much.样式二： I have a good friend. She is ten. She has big eyes and long hair. She is cute, sometimes she is quiet. She likes spring best, because she likes flying kites very much. She often plays football with her classmates on the weekend. Guess! Who is she? Yes! She is Amy. I like her very much.可选的句子： His / Her favourite color/animal/class/ is _. His / Her birthday is _. His / Her hobby is _. He /She usually goes to school by _. He /She is 2 cm shorter than me, but stronger.可以描写的方面：外貌、性格、姓名、年龄、生日、爱好、周末活动等等时态：一般现在时 （单三形式）作文篇目二 My Teacher样式一： I have many teachers. My favourite teacher is Miss Green. She is a math teacher. She is tall and thin. She has small eyes and a big mouth. She is strict and active. She likes summer best, because she likes swimming very much. She often climbs mountains on the weekend. We all like Miss Green very much.样式二： I have many teachers. Who is my favourite teacher? Guess! She is a math teacher. She is tall and thin. She has small eyes and a big mouth. She is strict and active. She likes summer best, because she likes swimming very much. She often climbs mountains on the weekend. Yes! She is Miss Green. We all like her very much.可选的句子： Her class is very funny/ interesting. Her class is so much fun. Her favourite _ is _. Her hobby is _.可以描写的方面：外貌、性格、称呼、学科、爱好、周末活动等等时态：一般现在时 （单三形式）作文篇目三 My Family样式一： I have a happy family: my father, my mother and me. My father is a doctor. He is tall and strong. He is very active. My mother is a teacher. She works in a school. She is kind. She likes reading magazine after dinner. Im a student. Im very active. I like riding a bike on the weekend. I love my family!样式二： There are three people in my family. They are my father, my mother and me. My father is a doctor. He is tall and strong. He is very active. My mother is a teacher. She works in a school. She is kind. She likes reading magazines after dinner. Im a student. Im very active. I like riding a bike on the weekend. I have a happy family!可选的句子：I love my parents and they love me too!I have a happy and warm family! I love my family! My mother is 2 years younger than my father. Her hobby is playing the piano.可以描写的方面：外貌、性格、爱好、职业、周末活动、比较等等时态： 一般现在时 （单三形式和第一人称并用）作文篇目四 My Room样式一： My room is small, but its very nice. There is a bed, a desk and a closet. There are two end tables near the bed. I can see a computer and a blue lamp on the desk. Near the desk, there is a big closet. There are many clothes in the closet. My room is nice and clean. I like my room very much.样式二： I have my own room. Its big and clean. There is a bed, a desk and a closet. There are two end tables near the bed. I can see a computer and a blue lamp on the desk. Near the desk, there is a big closet. There are many clothes in the closet. I like my room very much. 可选的句子： There is a bed and an end table. There are two end tables and a desk.There is a picture on the wall. There are some clothes in the closet.The computer is on the desk. The books are in the shelf. Near the bed, I can see a pretty lamp. I can listen to music and play the piano in my room.My room is quiet. I can read books in my room.可以描写的方面：家具、电器、摆设、室内活动、方位、颜色等等作文篇目五 My School样式一： My school is small, but its very beautiful. There are many classrooms in the school. You can see a TV, a shelf, some fans and lights in our classroom. The library is on the 4th floor. We can read story books there. The computer room is on the 5th floor. We can play computer games there. We often play in the garden and do sports on the playground. I like my school very much!样式二： My school is nice and clean. There are many classrooms in the school. In our classroom, you can see a TV, a shelf, some fans and lights. We can read story books in the library. Its on the 4th floor. We can play computer games in the computer room. Its on the 5th floor. We often play in the garden and do sports on the playground. I like my school sooooo much!可选的句子：There is a beautiful garden in my school. We can play games there.I can see many desks and chairs.We learn Chinese, math, English and science in our classroom.There are many blue desks, a computer and a nice shelf in our classroom.There are many good teachers in our school. They are strict but very kind.可以描写的方面：各种教室、教室里的东西、课程、数字、楼层、校园活动等等作文篇目六 My Favourite Season样式一： There are four beautiful seasons in a year. Spring is colorful with flowers and songs. Summer is red and always hot. Fall is golden and farmers are busy. Winter is white and the days are long. Four seasons are all nice. But my favourite season is spring. In spring, it is always warm and sunny. I can wear my shirt and jeans. I can fly kites and go hiking with my friends. I like spring best.样式二： Summer is good, but its too hot. Winter is beautiful, but its too cold. My favourite season is spring. Spring is colourful. It is always warm and sunny in spring. I can see green grass and many beautiful flowers. The fish are dancing in the river. The birds are singing in the sky. In spring, I can wear my shirt and jeans. I can fly kites and go hiking with my friends. My birthday is in spring, too. I love spring!可选的句子：Spring is colorful. Fall is golden and the farmers are busy. Spring is green with flowers and songs. The fish are dancing in the river. The birds are singing in the sky. My birthday is in spring.可以描写的方面：季节、天气、景物、动物、衣服、食物、颜色、季节性的活动作文篇目七 My School Day样式: Monday is my favourtie school day. I am very busy. I get up at 7:00. I go to school at 7:30. We have Chinese, math, Englsih and P.E. in the morning. I like P.E. class very much. At noon, we have lunch in the canteen. In the afternoon, we have art class. We can sing and dance in the art class. I like it! After school, I do sports with my classmates. What a busy school day!可选的句子：In the library, I can read books. It is quiet there. In the beautiful garden, I can watch the flowers. What a happy school day!可以描写的方面：星期、课程、各种教室、中餐、校园活动、时间安排等等作文篇目八 My Weekend样式一：(一般现在时) My Weekend I like my weekend. On the weekend, Im always very happy. On Saturday, I often go to the library. It is quiet in the library. I can do homework and read books there. On Sunday, I usually visit my grandparents. Sometimes I have a picnic with best friends. Im busy on the weekend, but Im happy.样式二：(一般将来时) My Weekend PlanIm going to have a happy weekend. On Saturday, Im going to the library. I am going to do homework and read magazines there. Then I am going to go shopping with my sister after lunch. On Sunday, Im going to have a picnic with my classmates. That will be fun. Then I am going to visit my grandparents with my mother. It will be a busy weekend. And a happy weekend, too. 样式三：(一般过去时) My Last WeekendI had a happy weekend. On Saturday, I went to the library. I did my homework and read some magazines there. Then I went shopping with my sister after lunch. On Sunday, I went to the park with my classmates. We had a picnic together. Then I visited my grandparents with my mother. It was a busy weekend. And a happy weekend, too.可选的句子：I often go to the library. Im going to the library. I went to the library. I can ride a bike in the park. Im going to ride a bike in the park. I rode a bike in the park. I always play football with dad. Im going to play football with dad. I played football with dad. Im happy. I will be happy. I was happy.可以描写的方面：星期、时间、周末活动、活动场所、活动的伙伴、心情等等PEP小学英语五年级上册各单元作文范例及点评My English Teacher Miss Tang is my English teacher. Shes very pretty. She is tall and thin. She has two big eyes and a small mouth. Her hair is long. She likes cats very much. And she likes singing and dancing, too. Her English is very good. We often play games in English classes. She is very kind to us. We all love her.【要领点评】 这篇作文的题目是“我的英语老师”，是一篇介绍人物的作文。小作者开门见山，直接点题，首先介绍了英语老师的姓名，然后逐一介绍了她的外貌特征、喜好、英语水平、上课特点以及师生情感等。 小朋友们在写作文时，要注意使用自己最熟悉的词组，以免写出一些错句子。写作时要注意意思连贯、语句通顺、标点正确、书写清晰、规范等。My Days of the week Im a student and I am in Grade 5.I get up at six oclock every day. I have breakfast at half past six, and go to school at seven oclock. I have classes from Monday to Saturday. I have an English class on Friday and I have a PE class on Tuesday. I dont have to go to school on school, and I like to go swimming on that day.【要领点评】 这篇作文的题目是“我的一周”，小作者没有说一些空话，而是从自己的亲身经历写起，叙述了自己一周七天的所作所为，并特别强调了星期天的喜好，写得自然、流畅。 小朋友们写作文时要注意人称及谓语动词的变化，要依据提示，结合自己的实际，写自己身边熟悉的事情。My Favourite Food Do you know what this is? Guess! Its colour is yellow. Its long and thin. It looks like a small boat and crescent. Oh, it is a banana. Do you know what that is? Guess again! Its colour is orange. Its round. It looks like a small ball and a small lantern. Oh, it is an orange. I like then a lot. I like ice-creams. I like to chew gum. Chocolates and candies are yummy. I like them very much. How about you? Whats your favourite food?【要领点评】 My Favourite Food 是一篇很成功的文章，小作者并不是简单地列举出自己最喜欢的每一种食物，而是有详有略地进行介绍。整篇文章用词准确、语言流畅、没有语法错误。另外，文章中出现了一些生词，可见小作者是用心查字典了。I can help do houseworkI am a girl. My name is Li Ling. Im in Class Three, Grade Five. Im helpful at home. I can water the flowers, empty the trash and sweep the floor. After meals, I can help my mother do the dishes. On Sunday, I can wash the clothes. What about you? Are you helpful, too?【要领点评】 本篇作文的题目是“我可以帮助做家务”，作者主要叙述自己在家帮助做的事情，介绍自己的名字，所在年级及在家能做的家务，很详细，到位。 小朋友们在写作时，应尽量写一些亲自经历的事情，这样会避免在作文时显得太空，因为只有自己经常做的事情印象才会特别深刻。写作时还要注意大小写和时态。In The Kitchen This is the kitchen of my family. Its big and nice. Look! My mother is cooking in it. This is a microwave and that is a stove. There is a big table here. There are many things on it. What are these? They look yummy! Oh, theyre strawberries. And what are those? They are grapes.【要领点评】 这篇作文的题目是“在厨房”里，作者根据自己家的厨房情况。介绍厨房里有微波炉和电炉，有一张大桌子和桌子上的物品等，以及妈妈在做饭，非常真实。 小朋友们，可以从观察自己身边的事、物写起，利用所学的句子，描述身边熟悉的东西来训练习作。My Village My village is very beautiful. There are many houses in the village. Near the village, there is a forest. A small river is in front of the village. The water in it is very clean. We can see some fish in the river. Near the river, you can see a mountain. Some flowers and grass are on the mountain. I like my village. Welcome to my village!【要领点评】 本文以“我的村庄”为题描述了自己家乡的风景。介绍了村庄的房屋、森林、河流及大山，使人看了这篇作文后确实感觉到“我的村庄”的美丽。小朋友们在写作时，可仔细想一下自己的村庄或所在城市的特点，尽量使用本单元学过的单词或短语进行叙述。英语文章标题大小写原则1.题目的第一个单词，最后一个单词要大写；2.冠词都不需要大写；3；一般实词（名词、动词、代词、形容词、副词）首字母大写，虚词（介词、冠词、连词）和不定式中的to首字母小写。3.字母多于三个(不含三个)的介词、连词首字母要大写，如between、without、alongside、underneath等；4.名词、动词、形容词、副词、代词、感叹词首字母；5.大写所有英语中要求大写的单词。如月份、人名、地名等等。6. 复合词，如：well-known的大写形式应为Well-Known.7. 标题末一般不加标点符号，但如果标题是直接问句，需要加问号。8. 文章中引用书刊标题时应用斜体，引用文章标题应加引号。这几条原则的