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Howtocompleteanarrativearticle 记叙文 2020 2 5 1 Who When Where What Why How Reading Style Narration记叙文 2020 2 5 2 Who When Where What Why How Arthur oneday whenhewasonthewaytowork ParkAvenue neartheFirstNationalBank Abankrobbery Arthurhelpedayoungman but wasmistakenforthebankthief thesuitcaseinhishand 2020 2 5 3 MainIdea Oneday atParkAvenue Arthurhelpedayoungmancarrya whenhewasonthewaytowork Suddenly heheardthesoundofanalarmandrealizeda happenedinthebank Whenayoungwomanlookedathissuitcasestrangely hethoughthemightbe forthebankthief Afterreadingthepassage whichadjectiveimpressedyoumost suitcase mistaken robbery 2020 2 5 4 第二节 读后续写 满分25分 阅读下面短文 根据所给情节进行续写 使之构成一个完整的故事 注意 所续写短文的词数应为150左右 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语 续写部分分为两段 每段的开头语已为你写好 续写完成后 用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语 theunderlinedkeywordsthegivensentencesandtheplot 情节 coherentandlogical连贯 逻辑 若词数少于130 从总分中扣去2分 2020 2 5 5 Theunderlinedkeywords ParkAvenueTheyoungmansuitcaseinthebackseatloudnoiseofanalarmthebankrobberytheshoutspeoplethebankthief Tip1 Thekeywordsthatstandforthemostimportantinformation themaincharacterandthemainobjectshouldbechoseninyourwriting 2020 2 5 6 Given NewStrategyParagraph1 Ashewasrunning Arthurheardtheyoungmanshoutingbehind Stop stop Paragraph2 ThetaxistoppedinfrontofthePoliceStationandArthur Tip2 Focusonthegivensentenceofparagraph2first Andsomeinformationinitmustbementionedinparagraph1 Tip3 Usethekeynounsinthegivensentencestoinfermoreinformation 2020 2 5 7 Paragraph2 ThetaxistoppedinfrontofthePoliceStationandArthur Arthurtookataxiandwenttothepolicestation InParagraph1 Arthurmighthavesaidsomethingtothetaxidriver Forexample Sir pleasetakemetothepolicestationquickly Ihavesomethingimportant urgenttoreporttothepoliceman WhatwillArthurdointhepolicestation InParagraph2 theremaybeaconversationbetweenArthurandthepoliceman Whoelsemaygotothepolicestation asurprisingend Tip4 Writeproperconversationsbetweentherelatedcharactersineachparagraph 2020 2 5 8 KeyWords ParkAvenueTheyoungmansuitcaseinthebackseatloudnoiseofanalarmthebankrobberytheshoutspeoplethebankthiefParagraph1 Ashewasrunning Arthurheardtheyoungmanshoutingbehind Stop stop Twocharacters ArthurandtheyoungmanArthurmightrealizethattheyoungmanwasthebankthief Arthurtookataxiandwenttothepolicestation Theyoungmanwantedtogethissuitcaseback Theremaybesomemoneyorsomethingelseinthesuitcase Theyoungmanmay not bethebankthief Paragraph2 ThetaxistoppedinfrontofthePoliceStationandArthur Para1 Para2 Para1 2 Tip5 Usethecharactersandtheiractionstoinfermoreinformation MainIdea 2020 2 5 9 Haveatry Paragraph1 Ashewasrunning Arthurheardtheyoungmanshoutingbehind Stop stop Arthurmightrealizethattheyoungmanwasthebankthief Arthurtookataxiandwenttothepolicestation Arthurmighthavesaidsomethingtothetaxidriver Forexample Sir pleasetakemetothepolicestationquickly Ihavesomethingimportanttoreporttothepoliceman coherent correct logical reasonable richinvocabularyandsentencepatternUnderlinethekeywords 2020 2 5 10 PolishyourwritingParagraph1 Ashewasrunning Arthurheardtheyoungmanshoutingbehind Stop stop Arthurrealizedthattheyoungmanwasthebankthief Hecontinuedrunning stoppedataxiandgotintoit Hesaidtothetaxidriver PleasegotothePoliceStationassoonaspossible Ihavearobberytoreporttothepoliceman Thenthetaxiwentaway Whichkindismoresuitable therefore however inaddition besides what smore furthermore onthecontrary ontheotherhand unfortunately suddenly allofasudden tohisjoy worriedabout withthehelpof addsomedetails Usedifferentstructures coherence content language keywords Usetransitionalwords 衔接词 2020 2 5 11 Givemysuitcasebacktome Whenheheardthis Arthurimmediatelyrealizedthattheyoungmanwasthebankthief Paragraph1 Ashewasrunning Arthurheardtheyoungmanshoutingbehind Stop stop Arthurrealizedthattheyoungmanwasthebankthief Hecontinuedrunning stoppedataxiandgotintoit Hesaidtothetaxidriver PleasegotothePoliceStationassoonaspossible Ihavearobberytoreporttothepoliceman Thenthetaxiwentaway addsomedetails Usedifferentstructures Usetransitionalwords Givemysuitcasebacktome Hearingthis Arthurimmediatelyrealizedthattheyoungmanwasthebankthief Sohecontinuedrunninguntilhestoppedataxi Thenhequicklydashedintoitandsatinthebackseat Outofbreath Breathlessly Arthursaidtothetaxidriver 2020 2 5 12 Paragraph1 Ashewasrunning Arthurheardtheyoungmanshoutingbehind Stop stop Arthurrealizedthattheyoungmanwasthebankthief Hecontinuedrunning stoppedataxiandgotintoit Hesaidtothetaxidriver PleasegotothePoliceStationassoonaspossible Ihavearobberytoreporttothepoliceman Thenthetaxiwentaway addsomedetails Usedifferentstructures Usetransitionalwords Themomenthegottherequest thetaxidriverdrovestraighttothepolicestationwithouthesitation Thenthetaxidriverdrovestraighttothepolicestationwithoutdelayjustasaroyalsoldierreceivedthegeneral sorder likeanarrow aflashoflightning aflyingfish astrongwind straighttothepolicestation leavingcloudsofdustbehind 2020 2 5 13 Paragraph1 Ashewasrunning Arthurheardtheyoungmanshoutingbehind Stop stop Givemysuitcasebacktome Hearingthis Arthurimmediatelyrealizedthattheyoungmanwasthebankthief Sohecontinuedrunninguntilhestoppedataxi Thenhequicklygotintoitandsatinthebackseat Outofbreath Arthursaidtothetaxidriver PleasegotothePoliceStationassoonaspossible Ihavearobberytoreporttothepoliceman Themomentthetaxidrivergottherequest hedrovestraighttothepolicestationwithouthesitation addsomedetails Usedifferentstructures Propertransition 2020 2 5 14 2020 2 5 15 Psychologicalactivity 心理活动 Youareeagertogetbackyoursuitcase Noway It syou thebankthief thathaverobbedthebank Iwillhelptocaptureyou Arthurthoughttohimself evenwithasmileonhisface Hecouldimaginehimbeingaherocheeredbycrowdsofpeopleonbothsidesofthestreet Insteadofstopping hequickenedhissteps stoppedataxiandthrewhimselfinthebackseatwiththesuitcase 2020 2 5 16 Haveatry Paragraph2 ThetaxistoppedinfrontofthePoliceStationandArthur InParagraph2 theremaybeaconversationbetweenArthurandthepoliceman Theyoungmanwantedtogethissuitcaseback Theremaybesomemoneyorsomethingelseinthesuitcase Theyoungmanmay not bethebankthief coherent correct logical reasonable richinvocabularyandsentencepatternUnderlinethekeywords 2020 2 5 17 Whatkindofendingwouldyoupreferforthisstory surprisingandinterestingAfunnythinghappenedtoArthurwhenhewasonthewaytoworkoneday Someoneorsomethingthatisfunnyisamusingandlikelytomakeyousmileorlaugh Tip6 Sometimes thegeneralkeywordcanguideustoimaginereasonably 2020 2 5 18 ReadAsk6basicquestions who When Where What Why How 3 Getthemainidea4 Infertheending theplot theunderlinedwords thegiventwosentences Begintowrite languagerequirements structure style vocabulary 6 Polishyourwriting7 Handwriting neatandclear Stepstocompleteastory 2020 2 5 19 ThetaxistoppedinfrontofthePoliceStationandArthurranintoit shouting There sabankrobberyandIknowthebankthief SoonafterArthurtoldhisstory thepolicemenstartedforthebankimmediately Havingarrivedatthespot theywereamazedtofindthatthepeoplewhogatheredbeforethebankwerenowcrowdingaroundtheyoungman whoseemedquiteupset Finally Arthurrealizedthathehadmadeamistake Theloudnoiseofthealarmwasincorrectlymadebythebanksystemandnothinghappenedtothebank buttheyoungmanwasworriedthatsomeonehadrobbedhissuitcase 2020 2 5 20 Para 2 ThetaxistoppedinfrontofthePoliceStationandArthurthankedthedriveranddirectlywentin JustasArthurwasdescribingwhathadhappenednearthebankontheParkAvenueandreportedtheyoungmantothepolice heheardavoiceoutside Help Help TothesurpriseofArthur itwastheyoungman HehadfollowedArthurinanothertaxi Itturnedoutthattheyoungmanwasinnocentandinsidethesuitcaseswerejustsomeclothes Arthurfeltembarrassedbutthepolicemant