初三英语写作训练.ppt

初三英语写作训练 什么是好篇章结构 三段式作文 Middle正文 Ending结尾 concludingsentence结论句 对全文的总结和概括 结尾画龙点睛 首尾呼应 supportingsentences支持句 用例子 实事或数据围绕主题开展叙述 讨论 注意使用连接词 topicsentence主题句 说出文中的要点 核心问题 写好开头 好的开始是成功的一半 Beginning开头 开头万能句型 1 playsanimportantpartinthe 2 Asweallknow becomesmoreandmore 3 Aseverybodyknows isoneofthemost in 4 Manypeoplesaythat ButIdon tthinkso 5 Iwillneverforgetthe 造主题句训练Makeatopicsentence 1 SmokingAsweallknow smokingisabadhabit Manystudentssaysmokingisfun butIdon tthinkso Aseverybodyknows smokingisbadforourhealth TheSpringFestivalIwillneverforgettheSpringFestival TheSpringFestivalplaysanimportantpartinourlife ManypeoplesaythatChristmasismorepopularthantheSpringFestival ButIdon tthinkso LearningEnglishAsweallknow Englishbecomesmoreandmorepopular important Manypeoplesayit sdifficulttolearnEnglish ButIdon tthinkso TobeavolunteerAsweallknow the16thAsianGamesiscomingsoon Iwanttobeavolunteerforit Avolunteerplaysanimportantpartinourlife ASchoolTripIwillneverforgettheschooltriplastweek 写好结尾画龙点睛 首尾呼应 1 与开头呼应 再次重申自己的观点 注意避免重复句式 2 结尾经典词组 句型 Atlast Finally 最后Inaword 总而言之Inshort 简言之Wehopethat 我们希望Let stryourbestto Ibelieveifwecan willbe Whata How 根据主题概括训练Makeaconcludingsentence1 KeepinghealthyLet stryourbesttokeephealthy Inshort it simportanttohavegoodhabitsandkeephealthy HelpingothersIbelieveifwecanhelpothers theworldwillbemoreandmorebeautiful ProtecttheenvironmentLet stryourbesttobeagreenconsumer Inoneword it snecessaryforustoprotecttheenvironment Trips XiamenHowbeautifulXiamenis WhynotconsidercomingtoBeijingandenjoyingyourself 开头 结尾的实战训练 书面表达在日常生活中你主动帮助你的父母做家务活吗 请你根据提示用英语写一篇80字左右的短文 描述你平时所做家务以及你对家务的看法 提示 1 扔垃圾2 扫地3 帮助妈妈做饭4 洗衣服5 为花浇水6 饭后洗碗要求 语句通畅 语法正确 不得逐句翻译 满分作文 25分 Asweallknow it simportanttohelpparentsdohouseworkduringourdailylife Ioftenhelpthemdohousework Ithrowtherubbishawayandcleanthefloorinthemorning Ihelpmymothercooklunch Aftersupper Ialwayswashdishes Ithinkitcanmakemyparentsfeelmoreenjoyableafterwork Ialwayswashclothesformyfamily Besides wateringtheflowersisalsomyduty Ilikethemverymuchandtakegoodcareofthem Inaword themorehouseworkIdo thehappiermyparentswillbe 即总括又阐明看法 常用于第一个推展段落开头的字词 Everybodyknowsthat Itistruethat Thereasonwhy isthat Whatismoreseriousisthat Wehavereasontobelievethat Itcanbeeasilyseenthat 常用于第二个推展段落开头的字词 语气与第一个推展段不同或相反 Butitisapitythat However Ontheotherhand 正文 语言简洁 层次分明 1 长句短句交叉使用最好 2 基础一般的同学要尽量使用简单句 文章算不上完美 但很实用 基础好的同学要恰当写些从句提高档次 3 把握要点 层次清晰 4 注意句子与句子 段与段之间过渡自然 行文连贯 注意适当使用连词 例如 and so or but become 正文 巧用连接词 赋予语言灵气 需要熟记的连接词有 1 按事情发展的先后或时间顺序1 Firstly Secondly Thirdly 2 first then next afterthat next finally3 soon suddenly atthatmoment assoonas fromnowon atthesametime not until before after when while during 2 表示并列notonly butalso both and either or neither nor on the onehand ontheotherhand3 表示举例或补充1 forexample2 besides what smore what sworse 4 表示转折