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十二班11.What I Do on Weekly Saturday Outing 2. My Dream5十二班1.132.5李亮亮：写得不错，但单词与单词的间隔太大 Sept.23: I wanted to be a rich man when I was young. 纠正：younga child2.133闫晓彬：I also do other things except visiting the river. 纠正:I also do other things besides visiting the river; I also do other things as well as visit the river; I do more than visiting the river. Sept.23: The life without dream is not complete. Im very interested in those things that is not discovered by human beings.纠正：The life-Life; without后加a /is nothave not been3.129.5杨浩：I thought the teachers are the greatest men in the world. 纠正：arewere; men-people 4.114王伟领：The time goes away as wind. It takes away from me when I dont feel it. 纠正：Time goes by like wind. It steals away from me before I know it. Sept.23: Everywhere will keep my feetmark. 纠正：My footmark will be left in every corner of the earth. 5.133.5姚亚男：At 4 oclock to 7 oclock on Saturday afternoon is my happiest time in a week. 纠正：My happiest time in a week is between 4 and 7 oclock on Saturday afternoons. Sept.23: The news from reporters can tell us what happened in the world. 纠正：happenedis happening6.118.5刘格格：I am similar with the sights over there. 纠正：similarfamiliar Sept.23: But my favorite job is engineer. 纠正：is后加to be7.120.5姚坤林：I think my family is the most comfortable place. 纠正：familyhome Sept.23: Though its difficult for me to learn these projects, I dont give up. 纠正：projects-subjects8.119张玉展：The bookstore is too small and has little story books. I prefer to spend my left time in playing basketball. I like sports, excise can keep healthy. 纠正：littlefew; left timeremaining time; exercise前加and I believe that Sept.23: Its also another reason that I want to be a scientist. 纠正：Its-Theres 9.123赵晓伟：Be enclosed in the school for a week, I feel the Ru River is a good place for relax. 纠正：BeBeing; relaxrelaxation Sept.23: Hip Hop is fashion. 纠正: is后加in 10.117李京：It also let me remind about something good. 纠正：also let me remindalso remind me Sept.23: They can help the child becomes a brave, friendly, and knowledgeable citizen. 纠正：the child-children; a去掉；citizencitizens 11.115.5李文龙：These time help me to get relaxing. 纠正：Thesethe; relaxingrelaxed Sept.23: The doctor is the best career in the world. 纠正：the doctorBeing a doctor12.126王娇娇：There are some fishmen and visitors on boats. We only buy a little something to eat. 纠正：on boats-in the boats; something去掉Sept.23: I want to make many interesting cartoons , and let many children be happy. 纠正：let-make; be去掉13.115高燕京：I dont eat much too expensive snacks. At the end, I return to school in time. I spare some time washing my dirty clothes. 纠正：At the endIn the end; washingto wash Sept.23: Everyone should have his own dreams to guide himself to succeed. Dreams are very important for each person, especially who wants to succeed in something. 纠正：succeedsuccess; who前加those , wants-who want14.126付夏乐：From 4:00 pm to 7:00 pm is our Saturday outgoing days. Its very necessary for us to buy some lifes things. 纠正：Our Saturday outing time is from 4:00 to 7:00. veryquite; lifes thingsdaily nececities of life15.111袁肖鹏：On weekday, we have never time to play. It only 3 hours we must be school by 7:00. 纠正：weekdayweekdays; have nevernever have; It onlyIt lasts only 3 hours before we must be at school by 7:00 Sept.23: Poor writing. 16.115何飞飞：I also go shopping in bookstore. 纠正：go shopping-look around; in a bookstore Sept.23：I can make a contribution in improving environmental pollution, for example, ar pollution, water polloution, greenhouse effect and so on, all of them can be solved. 纠正：for examplesuch as; so on,-so on. all-All17.106柳柯蒙：This place is familiar for me. It is very necessary to have a relax and adjustment. 纠正：for meto me; veryquite; a relaxrelaxation Sept.23: Actors can be different person in different movies. 纠正：personpeople. 18.113王翩翩：We we return study second, we are learning with much interests. 纠正：We returned to study then. We learned with much interest. Sept.23: I wanted to show me. 纠正：memyself. 19.109.5赵亚楠：Every Saturday that is the most interesting day I spend in school days. 纠正：that去掉；dayone ; spendhave spent; inof all Sept.23: Poor writing. I want to do something meaningful, and keep hard working for coming true. 纠正：keep hard working for coming truekeep working hard to make it come true.20.132彭珂望：After enclosing a week in school, I think the bank of the river is a very relaxing place. 纠正：enclosingbeing enclosed Sept.23: Astronaut can fly in the space. 纠正：Astronaut 前加An; in the space中的the去掉21.103李银鹏：My school allows us going out every Saturday. 纠正：going outto go out Sept.23: A country want to get strong, it must have lots of good teachers. 纠正：A前加If; want-wants; 22.90.5李豪迪：I think school life is very well. 纠正：wellgood Sept.23: I believe my choose. There will be a great scientist in the future world, that is me. 纠正：believe my choosebelieve in my choice/thatwhich23.119.5孙棒棒：I think the time from 4:00-7:00 on afternoon is the happiest. 纠正：on afternoonon Saturday afternoon Sept.23: I want to have many inventions. 纠正：have-make24.110.5徐轩：We like going to the riverside that it is about 100 meters from here. There are many trees on everyside of river. 纠正：it去掉；everysideeither side Sept.23: I think the mans life is bored without artist. 纠正：the manhuman; boredboring; artist-artists25.113.5张程浩：Many others may be interests in going into the business. 纠正：interestsinterested Sept.23: I want to found a charity, it can raise money for local charities. 纠正：itwhich 26.107贾文博：although Im very familiar with there, when I stop the north either end of a bridge, I can see many people are fishing and boating. Although去掉。When前加句号；stop后加at; 去掉either; athe; are去掉 Sept. 23: I can help many people out of poor. 纠正：poorpoverty 27.98.5马俊浩：I think only 100 meters far of Ruhe is a very relaxing place. 纠正：only 100 meters far of Ruhe-the Ru river 100 meters away. Sept.23: As a doctor, there will be many patients find me to treat. 纠正：findto come to; to treatfor treatment28.115.5赵锦哲：能够运用所学的内容。Reading the book can open my eyes and make me knowledgeable. 纠正：the bookbooks Sept.23: Teacher is a great job. 纠正：TeacherBeing a teacher.29.115付佳鑫：I hope that day. I think they are must happy. 纠正：I expect that days coming; are must-must be Sept.23: That work isnt fit me. 纠正：isnt fit medoesnt fit/suit me或者isnt fit for me或isnt suitable for me30.119.5耿晨光：After in school a week, Im really tired, so I need relaxed. 纠正：After后加being; need后加to be Sept.23: If the world have do doctors, there would be many sick, and many people will dead. 纠正：havehad; sick后加people; will deadwould die31.103.5孙书豪：I dont go to some interesting place. Sept.23: Thats my favorite thing except playing basketball. 纠正：except-besides32.108魏方方：This is only once belong to ourselves time every week also. 纠正：This is the time belonging to us only once a week, too. Sept.23: If I were a teacher, I will be happy every day. 纠正：were-am33.105王秀秀：Sept.23: So I decide: from now, I will study harder. 纠正：So I decide I will study harder from now on. It near to our school. I can do many things I liked. 纠正：near前加is; I likedas I please.34.115.5姬帅豪：Im very like this time. We study one week at school is very tired. 纠正：I like this time very much. We feel very tired after studying at school for one week. Sept.23: It is filled with interesting. 纠正：interesting-fun35.106.5李世佳：I will be like a happy bird out of the cage want to fly in the sky; a person of us sings a song with talking. My dear parents is care about me. I believe in my life wil be colorful. 纠正：out of the cage want to fly in the skywanting to fly out of the cage into the sky. Sept.23: I want to be a computer programmer, the society is cutthroat and needs to control the computers. 纠正：the society is cutthroat and needs to control the computers.facing the cutthroat society, which needs to be controlled by the computers. 36.99高举：one hundred meters distance Ruhe; buy something useful bring to school. 纠正：100-meter-long Ru River; bring前加to Sept.23: I hope to go for high education overseas, that must be very relaxing. 纠正：that mustwhich is sure to 37.94沈秀明：It is my the most happy at four to seven oclock on Saturday. I also go to library for opening my eyes. 纠正：The time from 4 to 7 on Saturday afternoons is the happiest time for me. I also go to the library to open my eyes. I see patients are saved by doctors. 纠正：are去掉38.125赵晓东：I never fell boring at all. I always goes to bookstore. 纠正：fell boringfeel bored; goes to bookstorego to the bookstore Sept.23: Ill have my dream hidden my deep heart. 纠正：my deep heartdeep in my heart.39.101李四：From 4 to 7 oclock on Saturday afternoon is the happiest for me for a week. 纠正：From前加The time from; afternoon后加s; forin Sept.23: The reporters can learn a lot of knowledges纠正：knowledgesknowledge.40.111.5李世豪：I go to buy some magazine. 纠正：magazinemagazines Sept.23: I so liked painting that I wanted to be the most famous artist in the world. /For that, I worked hard on painting. 纠正：so liked paintingliked painting so much; hard onhard at41.116杨昆锋：I often enjoy myself though time is very little. I will buy some food to eat, playing sports with my friends and so on. 纠正：little-short; playingplay Sept.23: I must to be a person who has lots of knowledge. Its advantage for my enterprise. 纠正：must towill ; advantage前加an 42.114.5张梦菲：We can do everything what we want to do, as if a bird, we can fly everywhere. 纠正：what we want to dothat we want to; we can fly everywhere like a bird. Sept.23:Well done. 43.105张新飞：Then I maybe buy some books or some snacks. 纠正：I maybemaybe I; I may Sept.23: Everyone has a dream, so I also have a dream. 纠正：a dreamone44.128.5李珊：After enclosing a week, I think the river next my school is the best place to vist. 纠正：enclosingbeing enclosed; nextnext to; Sept.23: I will make the class activity and make the child got knowledges happily. I also have the other dream.纠正: activity-active; child-children; got knowledgesget knowledge. the other -another.45.105杨伟丽：Three hours as the windy same as quickly, but I like these times. 纠正：Three hours go by like wind. How much I like the time. Sept.23: I ever have a teacher who is very good. 纠正：ever haveonce had46.101闫瑞洋：Im very familiar with there, there have been fascinating sight. 纠正：therethe place, where there are fascinating sights Sept.23: Everybody has the dream for themselves, but it is different. 纠正：the dream-a dream; it isthey are47.117石书敏：I had a great time on last Saturday outing. It was a such beautiful place. 纠正：onduring the; a suchsuch a Sept.23: I think I can bring people a lot of happy. 纠正：happy-happiness48.94郭晓光：I go to bookstore for buy many books. We read books in the class I feel very well. 纠正：go to后加the; forto; We read books in the class I feel very wellI feel very good when reading books in the classroom. Sept.23: Poor writing. I want to visit around the world when I grow up. 纠正：visit-travel49.119.5刘光亚：We all have been enclosed in school for a week. 纠正：We all haveWe have all ; in schoolin the school Sept.23: I thought I must be the president of China when I was a child. I think I can become a teacher when I grow up.Just like my teacher is the head of the class纠正：be thebecome/up.Justup, just/is the headis the去掉50.100刘晓利：My friends and me went to the nearly river named the River River. 纠正：meI Sept.23: I will try my best to give their healthy. 纠正：give their healthymake them healthy51.91闫秋秋：Although sight is familiar for me, but I really want to go there. 纠正：sight前加the; forto; but去掉 Sept.23: To be a doctor, I will help people out of danger and make them happy. And do this, I will very happy.Tobe a teacher, I can help many students.纠正：To beBeing/ dodoing; will后加be;/ to be a teacherbeing a teacher52.86.5冯炳昊：I go out to play. Time goes early. 纠正：Time goes earlyTime flies. Sept.23: They will be make up of the city. 纠正：be make up ofmake up 53.111孙萌：Its the happiest a day in a week for all of the students. 纠正：a day in a week-day of the week Sept.23: I can visit around the world. 纠正：visit-travel54.117李佳佳：on the seven oclock, we have to go back to school. Sept.23: I want to learn piano when I study music classes. 纠正：piano前加the; music前加in 55.96舍灵婉：运用所学内容较好。during my once a week of happy time; I have to return the school. 纠正：once a week of happy time-weekly happy time; return 后加to Sept.23: I think its very 光荣的. 纠正：very 光荣的quite an honor.56.107杨备备：Because I enclose five days, I want to go out to excite. 纠正：enclosehave been closed; to exciteto get excited Sept.23: All the world will be filled with my foot. I am sure to success.纠正：Our footprints will be left in every corner of the world. /to-of57.102张丹辉：I really very like my weekly Saturday outing. There is a river nearby the our school. 纠正：very放后改为very much; the our-our Sept.23: Another, I also become a doctor. 纠正：AnotherAlso; I alsoI want to58.105.5唐明珠：能够运用所学的句子。I think the time is me relaxing. 纠正：me relaxingfor me to relax Sept.23: I can help people and give them fair. 纠正：fair-fairness59.86刘旭阳：There is a lot of student going shopping, go playing. 纠正：There are a lot of students shopping and playing Sept.23: They are not come true. 纠正：are-have60.110黄涵：After to be enclosed a week, we feel very relaxing. 纠正：to bebeing; relaxing-relaxed61.97.5张申奥：I am very like clean. 纠正：I like being clean. Sept.23: Poor writing. /I think the teacher is the most interesting job for me. 纠正：the teacher-teaching62.98李爽：My mother and my father are ready some delicious food for me. 纠正：are readyhave got ready Sept.23: I dont want to look that many children suffer without knowledge. 纠正：look thatlook at63.96.5李珂：It make me relax after study in school a week. I might go with friend and wash clothes. 纠正：make me relax after studymakes me relaxed after studying. friend前加a Sept.23: I believe myself, I must be a great reporter when I grow up. 纠正：believe后加in; I must beand I will be64.107.5王笑丹：There always have many people go boating. I sometime to go library buy some books that I need. 纠正： haveare; gogoing; sometimesometimes; to去掉；to library buyto the library to buy Sept.23: I always think about whats my dream. 纠正：whats my dreamwhat my dream is.65.87.5任钊辉：Although the outing time is very short, but every time I spend very happy. 纠正：but去掉；spend very happyspend it very happily Sept.23: Everyone have dreams, do I. 纠正：havehas; do前加so66.29顿江涛：I often buy some snacks bring to school. 纠正：bring前加to Sept.23: They could do more things they like to do. /I can get my dream comes true easily. 纠正：do去掉；comesto come或者把getmake; comes-come67.75张晓琳：Our school will arrange go out school of all students. Its good for students the batter study. 纠正：arrange go out school of all students-arrange all students to go out of school; for students the batter study-for students better study. Sept.23: As a singer is so popular. 纠正：As-Being68.75李莹莹：I know where is supermaret , bookshop. The day get black. 纠正：I know where the supermarket and the bookshop are. The day got dark. Sept.23: Im very admire them. I can help many people out of sad. Everyone say “the doctor is an angel”. 纠正：Im very admire them.I admire them very much. sadsadness. Everyone sayAs people say69.62谢浩东：Of my school south, have a door. Some time, we can see there are many people fihing and boating. 纠正：Our school gate faces south. Some timeSome times; there are 去掉 Sept.23: To be a pianist is really great. Ill let persons fells happy. 纠正：Ill make people feel happy. 70.113赵洒洒: after enclose a week; my once a week fun time, going out make us relaxing; I can spend lots of money buy a beautiful clothes. Buy everyday exhaust things. 纠正：enclosebeing enclosed; My fun time to go out once a week makes us relaxed; buybuying; everyday exhaust thingsdaily necessities Sept.23: My friends think to be a doctor can make more money than police. 纠正： My friends want me to be a doctor so that I can make more money than to be a policewoman. 71.92.5张莉苗：Stand on the bridge can enjoy sun in the evening. 纠正：StandStanding; can前加you; sun前加the Sept.23: They are just like a lamp guiding us in the way of future. 纠正：inon; ofto the 72.96.5王洋洋：I think read books is very interesting. We are study somethings in the school for a week.Sept.23: I think teacher is a very relaxing and interesting job. 纠正：teacher前加being ；There food is delicious. Do you think this is interesting day? 纠正：There foodThe food there; interesting 前加an73.90尚玉婷：They wish I will be a good teacher. 纠正：wishhope; I can see the students like my children. 纠正：seetreat. 74.82田露露：I feel student is very happy. 纠正：student前加the Sept.23: I will be the well teacher in the world. 纠正：wellthe best75.96.5余昊泽：I can do everything if I want to do. I can going shopping in this time. 纠正：to doto; can goingcan go; in this timeat this time Sept.23: Its interesting for me and help me dont getting fat. 纠正：dont gettingnot to get76.90刘富根77.78白晓磊：These beautiful beauty make me full of h