浙江高考英语新题型“概要写作”.ppt

高考新题型之概要写作 Summary whatthesummarywritingis thecriteriaofagoodsummary howtowriteagoodsummary 1 2 3 5 Afterthisclass youwillbeabletoknow 普通高等学校招生全国统一考试英语科考试说明 概要写作 提供一篇350词以内的短文 要求考生基于该短文写出一篇60词左右的内容概要 满分25分 词数少于40的和多余80的 从总分中减去2分 评分原则 1 本题总分为25分 按5个档次给分 2 评分时 先根据所写概要的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次 然后以该档次的要求来衡量 确定或调整档次 最后给分 3 词数少于40的和多于80的 从总分中减去2分 评分时 应主要从以下四个方面考虑 1 对原文要点的理解和呈现情况 2 应用语法结构和词汇的准确性 3 上下文的连贯性 4 对各要点表达的独立性情况 Narration 记叙文 Exposition 说明文 FormsofLiterature Argumentation 议论文 Argumentation 议论文 Topic Supportingideas Conclusion 概要写作 满分25分 阅读下面短文 根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要 Para1 Gettingridofdirt intheopinionofmostpeople isagoodthing However thereisnothingfixedaboutattitudestodirt Para2 Intheearly16thcentury peoplethoughtthatdirtontheskinwasameanstoblockoutdisease asmedicalopinionhaditthatwashingoffdirtwithhotwatercouldopenuptheskinandletillsin Aparticulardangerwasthoughttolieinpublicbaths By1538 theFrenchkinghadclosedthebathhousesinhiskingdom SodidthekingofEnglandin1546 ThusbeganalongtimewhentherichandthepoorinEuropelivedwithdirtinafriendlyway HenryIV KingofFrance wasfamouslydirty Uponlearningthatanoblemanhadtakenabath thekingorderedthat toavoidtheattackofdisease thenoblemanshouldnotgoout Para3 Thoughthebeliefinthemeritofdirtwaslong lived dirthasnolongerbeenregardedasaniceneighboreversincethe18thcentury Scientificallyspeaking cleaningawaydirtisgoodtohealth Cleanwatersupplyandhandwashingarepracticalmeansofpreventingdisease Yet itseemsthatstandardsofcleanlinesshavemovedbeyondsciencesinceWorldWar Advertisementsrepeatedlyselltheidea clothesneedtobewhiterthanwhite clothseversofter surfacestoshine Hasthehatefordirt however gonetoofar Para4 Attitudestodirtstilldifferhugelynowadays Manyfirst timeparentsnervouslytrytowarntheirchildrenofftouchingdirt whichmightberesponsibleforthespreadofdisease Onthecontrary MaryRuebush anAmericanimmunologist 免疫学家 encourageschildrentoplayinthedirttobuildupastrongimmunesystem Andthelatterpositionisgainingsomeground Thereisnothingfixedaboutattitudestodirt Step1 Read topicsentence structure supportingideas Findoutthetopicsentenceofeachparagraph think believe consider regard argue support beconvincedthat inone sopinion fromone spointofview Youmayneedtopayattentiontosomewordslike Para2 Intheearly16thcentury peoplethoughtthatdirtontheskinwasameanstoblockoutdisease asmedicalopinionhaditthatwashingoffdirtwithhotwatercouldopenuptheskinandletillsin Aparticulardangerwasthoughttolieinpublicbaths By1538 theFrenchkinghadclosedthebathhousesinhiskingdom SodidthekingofEnglandin1546 ThusbeganalongtimewhentherichandthepoorinEuropelivedwithdirtinafriendlyway HenryIV KingofFrance wasfamouslydirty Uponlearningthatanoblemanhadtakenabath thekingorderedthat toavoidtheattackofdisease thenoblemanshouldnotgoout ExamplesofsomeEuropeancountries Para3 Thoughthebeliefinthemeritofdirtwaslong lived dirthasnolongerbeenregardedasaniceneighboreversincethe18thcentury Scientificallyspeaking cleaningawaydirtisgoodtohealth Cleanwatersupplyandhandwashingarepracticalmeansofpreventingdisease Yet itseemsthatstandardsofcleanlinesshavemovedbeyondsciencesinceWorldWar Advertisementsrepeatedlyselltheidea clothesneedtobewhiterthanwhite clothseversofter surfacestoshine Hasthehatefordirt however gonetoofar Para4 Attitudestodirtstilldifferhugelynowadays Manyfirst timeparentsnervouslytrytowarntheirchildrenofftouchingdirt whichmightberesponsibleforthespreadofdisease Onthecontrary MaryRuebush anAmericanimmunologist 免疫学家 encourageschildrentoplayinthedirttobuildupastrongimmunesystem Andthelatterpositionisgainingsomeground Step2 Makeanoutline Inthe16thcentury since18thcentury Peoplethoughtthatdirtontheskinwasameanstoblockoutdisease hasnolongerbeenregardedas cleaningawaydirtisgoodtohealth encourageschildrentoplayinthedirttobuildupastrongimmunesystem Step3 Rewritethesentencesinotherways Thereisnothingfixedaboutattitudestodirt different mixed various 反义转换 opinions views ideas 同义词替换 People sattitudestodirtvaryindifferenttimes towards 句型转换 Peopleholddifferentopinionstowardsdirtovertime Theattitudestodirtisnotalwaysthesame Intheearly16thcentury peoplethoughtthatdirtontheskinwasameanstoblockoutdisease Haveatry Intheearly16thcentury peoplethoughtthatdirtontheskinwasameanstoblockoutdisease think believe hold consider insist argue areconvinced 同义词替换 blockoutdisease prevent protect keepaway fromillness Onepossibleversion Inthe16thcentury peoplebelievedthatdirtprotectedpeoplefromgettingill dirthasnolongerbeenregardedasaniceneighboreversincethe18thcentury Scientificallyspeaking cleaningawaydirtisgoodtohealth washoff getridof benefits isbeneficialto doesgoodto contributesto Onepossibleversion Peoplebegantochangetheirattitudestodirtabout200yearsago Peoplehavebeentoldthatwashingdirtoffourbodycankeepushealthy Nowadays encouragespeopletoplayinthedirttobuildupastrongimmunesystem Onepossibleversion Nowadays somescientistsbelievethatexposuretosomedirtmayhelpourimmunesystem Peopleareencouragedto 语态转换 beexposedto believe support agree approve Peopleholdmixedopinionstowardsdirtonourskin Inthe16thcentury peopleofsomeEuropeancountries suchasFrance believedthatdirtprotectedpeoplefromgettingill Peoplebegantochangetheirattitudestodirtmorethan200yearsago Theyhavebeentoldthatwashingdirtoffourbodycankeepushealthy Nowadays somescientistsbelievethatexposuretosomedirtmayhelpourimmunesystem However Nevertheless But however people Addtwolinkingwordstomakethepassagecoherent Step4 Makethesummarycoherent nowadays Step5 Revise 67words Peopleholdmixedopinionstowardsdirtonourskin Inthe16thcentury peopleofsomeEuropeancountriesbelievedthatdirtprotectedpeoplefromgettingill However peoplebegantochangetheirattitudestodirtabout200yearsago Theyhavebeentoldthatwashingdirtoffourbodycankeepushealthy Butnowadays somescientistsbelievethatexposuretosomedirtmayhelpourimmunesystem 4 C complete correct concise coherent Step6 Clearlycopyyourdrafttothepaper Howtowriteasummary argumentation 1 Read 2 Makeanoutline 3 Rewrite 4 Makeitcoherent 5 Revise 6 neatlycopy Topic structure keysupportingsentences Homework FinishthesummarywritingofthefollowingPassage 阅读短文 根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要 Gettingupearlyhasbeenregardedasagoodhabitsinceancienttimes Manyyearsago peoplethoughtthatifwewenttobedearlyandgetupearly wewouldbeenergetic 充满活力的 thewholeday So gettingupearlyisofgreatimportancetousall Infact morningisthebesttimeofaday Inthemorning theairisthefreshestandpeopleareusuallyinthebestconditions 条件 Manyofusmayhavetheexperiencesthatwememorizesomethingsmorequicklyandaccuratelyinthemorningthananyothertimeoftheday Ifwedosomemorningexerciseoronlytakeashortwalkinthemorning wecanbuildourbodiesandbecomemuchhealthier Alsowewillhaveenoughtimetomakeaplanandgetreadyforourworkorstudyofthedayifwegetupearly However ifwegetuplate wewillprobablyhavetodoeverythinginagreathurry Letusremembergettingupearlyisagoodhabitandtryourbesttokeepit Ifwesticktogettingupearlyeveryday wewillcertainlybenefit 受益 alotfromit Gettingupearlyinthemorningisagoodhabitandveryimportant becauseinthemorningwecanhaveabettermemory healthierbodiesandbetterpreparationfortheday Inaddition morningexercisecanhelpuskeephealthy So itisbeneficialtous 参考范文 Itisimportanttogetupearl