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第 4 页 共 4 页2013湖南高考英语作文2013年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试【湖南卷】Section C (25 marks)Directions：Write an English composition according to the instructions given below in Chinese.Section C (25 marks)部分C(25标志)Directions：Write an English composition according to the instructions given below in Chinese.方向:写一个英语作文根据下面的指示在中国。请以下词语为关键词写一篇英语短文。match 匹配winner 赢家 loser 失败者 result结果内容：1自己或他人的一次经历；2你的感受。注意：1必须使用所给4个关键词;2词数不少于120个；3不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。题型分析今年湖南的作文要求学生根据所给的四个词汇写一篇英语短文。短文第一个内容是关于自己或者他人的一次经历，属于记叙部分；而第二点则要求学生谈谈自己的感受，应该是属于议论部分，因此，本篇作文是“前叙后议”类。学生只要能抓住“比赛”“获胜者”“失败者”“结果”几个关键字眼就行，可以说这样文章给学生发挥的空间很大。学生在第一段写经历的时候要注意进行适当的扩展，使叙事具有完整性。表达自己的感受时要观点明确，积极向上，开门见山。审题要素写作时应注意下面几点：（1）注意第一段叙事的简洁性和完整性，不可过于简短也不可太过冗长。（2）注意时态的正确使用：第一段叙述经历时要用过去时。第二段表达自己的感受时可能会用到过去时和一般现在时。（3）分段明确，语言简练。注意恰当使用过渡词、逻辑词语，使各个要点间逻辑连贯，行文通顺。思路导引首先，叙述经历。（）其次，谈自己的感受。（return books）标准范文Mrs. Wilson,Im going out shopping, and wont be back until about 5:00 pm. I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library. At about 1 oclock this afternoon, Tracy called, saying that she couldnt meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to. She felt very sorry about that, but said that you could set some other time for the meeting. She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home. She has already told Susan about this change.Li Hua赏析：重点短语ask for help求助；providefor给提供；be anxious to急切地要做高级句型But I have some difficulties with and I have no idea of.但是我再有困难，我不知道12. 2013年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试英语（湖南卷）One Possible Version一个可能的版本In my life, there is an experience making me lost in thought. 在我的生命中,有一个经验让我陷入了沉思。Last month, I, together with my teammates, had a basketball match against another basketball team, hoping to win the match and earning great honor for our team.上个月,我和我的队友一起,对另一个篮球队对阵一个篮球比赛,希望赢得这场比赛,我们的团队获得殊荣。 Having put all our efforts to practice playing basketball whenever we had time, we were strongly desired to be the winner. 有把所有我们的努力练习打篮球只要我们有时间,我们强烈想成为赢家。However, not until the match was over did we realize that we became the loser at all. 然而,直到比赛结束了我们才意识到我们成为了失败者。All of us felt disappointed, believing that honor never belonged to us . It was our coachs words that educated us a lot. 我们所有人都感到失望,认为荣誉从不属于我们。这是我们教练的教育我们很多的单词。He claimed that instead of being focused on the result, we should focus more on the process and correct our mistakes, which would help improve us more in the future.他声称,而不是关注结果,我们应该更关注过程和纠正我们的错误,这将有助于提高我们更多在未来。 From this experience, I am convinced that a result is not everything. 从这个经验,我相信,结果不是万能的。Onl