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Writing aliens Brainstorming DavidBates telescope 1 ReadAliensLandSpaceshiponpage45 2 Youwillwritethenextparagraphofthestory Pre Writing Discussion 1WhoisDavidBates HowlonghasDavidBateshadatelescope Isheinterestedinobservingthemoon Isthefirsttimehe sseenalienslandingonthemoon Imaginethatheoftenseesaliensonthemoon Whendidhefirstseealiens Whatwashisfeelingwhenhefirstseealiens What stheappearanceofaliens pleasedescribeit Imaginehewenttothepolicewhenhesawthealiens whatdoyouthinktheysaytohim HowlonghasDavidBateshadatelescope Imaginethatheoftenseesaliensonthemoon Whendidhefirstseealiens Imaginehewenttothepolicewhenhesawthealiens whatdoyouthinktheysaytohim Discussion 1WhoisDavidBates Isheinterestedinobservingthemoon Isthefirsttimehe sseenalienslandingonthemoon What stheappearanceofaliens pleasedescribeit Whatwashisfeelingwhenhefirstseealiens Somekeywords 3daysago oneday thenextday forayear sincethen assoonasDavidBateisamanwhoisinterestedin toone ssurprise amazement astonishment believewhathesaidDavidBateshashadatelescopefor Thefirsttimehesawaliensonthemoonwas whenhewenttothepolicestation thepolice While Writing Requirements要求 Words about100Time 15minutes usingyourimagination makeupavividstory 整理论点 下笔成文 理清思路 15 9 12 0 6 3 15minutes TotalTime 3 usingcorrecttense 时态 4 usingjoiningwords Payattentionto 1 accordingtothestructure 2 writingwordscorrectly 5 goodhandwritingandpunctuation 标点 1 Doyoushowaclearstructure 2 Doyouuseproperjoiningwords 3 Doyouusecorrectformsofwords 4 Doyoushowgoodhandwriting punctuation 5 Doyouhavecreativeideas MarkthecompositionwithA B CorD Post Writing Attention Underlinethegoodpartswith andcorrectthemistakestogether Ifallabovearedone youwillgetA 写好英语记叙文的基本方法是 首先明确所要记叙的要素 即上面所述的五个W和一个H 即 What Who When Where Why How然后 确定以第几人称的视角以及何种顺序展开记叙 以保证记叙的条理性 最后 多在塑造人物 展开情节上下功夫 使文章能引人入胜 Wehavelearned Summary HowtowriteEnglishnarration 记叙文 well 一 Rewritethepassage Homework 二 Imagineyouandanalienbecamegoodfrien