历年高考英语不同层次作文分析.doc

1998(记述文)1998李明对电脑很感兴趣，。上个月父母为他买了一台电脑。现在他已学会如何操作。他可以利用电脑做很多事。注意：用第三人称叙述1999 （议论文）1 一些学生认为学英语很重要。2 一些学生则认为不必学英语。3 我认为。（观点，理由）2000 (记述文)1 我最难忘的一课。2 具体说明为何难忘。3 感想。2001 （说明+议论） 请你谈谈轿车大量进入家庭后，对家庭，环境和经济可能产生的影响。2002年(记述+议论）2003年（应用文）你的好友因家境一般买不起名牌而闷闷不乐。给他写封信，谈谈你的看法和建议。收信人：徐海青寄信人：黄平（不可用自己的真实姓名）写信日期：2003年6月8日2004年（应用文）老师要求你负责班级墙报（wall newspaper）工作并征求你的意见。在日记中表述你的决定并谈谈想法。2005年（说明文）古人云：“天生我材必有用”（There must be a use for my talent.）。通过描述你生活中的一件事，说明人各有所长，无论才能大小都能成为有用的人。2006年（说明+议论）南方大学北方大学学费8000元/年5000元/年招生人数20人10人优惠政策无加20分2007年（叙述+议论）以“礼物”为主题写一篇作文。该文章必须包括以下内容：1 你送礼物的对象及所送的礼物；2 该礼物对他/她可能产生的影响或带来的变化。2008年（叙述+议论）你班将组队参加学校组织的集体舞比赛（group dancing competition）， 班长希望大家积极参与。 对此谈谈你的想法。你的文章必须包括以下内容： 1.你是否会参加比赛 2.你做出该决定的具体理由2009年（应用文）某海外学校举办英语夏令营，开设了如下课程：园艺(gardening)，烹饪(cooking)，防身术(self-defence)，护理(nursing)。假如你是王跃华（不可以用自己的真实姓名）， 写一封申请信，报名参加其中一门课程的学习。信的内容必须包括：1. 你感兴趣的课程2. 你期望从这门课程中学到什么3. 为什么想学这些内容1998李明对电脑很感兴趣，。上个月父母为他买了一台电脑。现在他已学会如何操作。他可以利用电脑做很多事。注意：用第三人称叙述Liming is a senior high school student. He is interested in computer. He had always wanted to have a computer since he was a little child. Last month his parents bought him a computer and he was very happy.He started to learn computer at once. He studied very hard and read many books on computer. Whenever he had some questions, he never hesitated to ask his teacher in the school. Every day after school he practises using the computer for about two hours and now he can make use of computer to do many things. He can write compositions on computer and he can communicate with others through computer, he said he would continue to learn more about computer and practise more. He is sure that he can use computer well in the near future.思路清楚，语句通顺，并能适当，切题地扩充提示内容。文中运用所学过的词语，语句句型变化多，体现了该考生较强的表达能力。稍有小错。With the development of science, now computers are very popular. Li Ming is very interested in a computer. Last month, his parents bought a compute for him. He was very glad. But he didnt know how to operate. So he decide to learn by himself. He saved a lot of money to buy books. And he used his free time to study them. He worked hard and now he can operate a computer. He uses a computer to be able to do many things. He can draw picture with it. he also can study and play with it. so he do with his computer all day. But his father said:”Dont do with it all time. It is harmful to you.” He took his fathers advice. Then he become a indeed good boy who can operate a computer.句子通顺，表达基本达意。句型变化不多，有语法错误。Now the computer is very popular, because of the development of science. Li ming is very interested in computer, too. He thought that the computer can help to do much work. Its very useful. So his prents bought a computer for him last month. In order to learn how to operate the computer. He went to the school to learn how to use computer. After several months school life, he can get the information from foreign countries and make friends with foreigners by usign his computer. The computer has become his good friend. He use it everyday. By using the computer, he has learned much knowledge that he didnt learn before.句子尚通顺，但句型变化少，有些内容重复。错误较多，且有较严重的语法错误。1999 （100 120 words）1. 一些学生认为学英语很重要。2. 一些学生则认为不必学英语。3. 我认为。（观点，理由）From my point of view, it is important to learn English because English is one of the most useful languages in the world. In business papers, computer programs, international conferences or world negotiations, English is widely used.In addition, were living in a challenging society today, which is in great need of those with good English, so we need to learn more about the advanced science and technology from other countries. Without English well probably feel it a bit harder to communicate with developed countries if we hope to catch up with them. In this Information Age, the computer, one of the technological developments for communication, has its language based on English.Therefore, a good command of English can provide us with more opportunities that will lead to success. (For reference)Some studets think its important to learn English while others think theres no need to learn it. Of course, I agree with the first kind of students.With the reform and opening up policy put into practice, English is becoming more and more important. English is a strong weapon in our life. If we learn English well, we can communicate with a lot of foreigners and learn from them, which is helpful for us to learn more knowledge and gain more information. Furthermore, English is used as the first world language. From these points, English is really very important.In a word, as students, we must learn English well so that we can serve our country better in the future.内容：观点明确, 理由充分，条理清楚语言：语法正确, 语言流畅, 用词得当组织：分段自然，过渡词恰当(with, furthermore, in a word)2000 ( 100 120 words )1. 我最难忘的一课。2. 具体说明为何难忘。3. 感想。Last winter I went to Santa Barbara C.A. U.S. to spend three weeks time studying with America high school students. There, I learned a lot of new things and I will never forget that astrology class.That morning we went to the local museum to have my first class abroad. During the class, we had a discussion on whether we should go on our space project or set all the money aside for other use. With the advanced teaching materials and the experienced teacher we had a general idea of our space achievements and the failure as well. To my surprise, I first relized that with the population explosion, the enegy crisis and the polution, the earth is faced up with more difficulties than ever before. And without space project we couldnt find new enegy resources, new food to eat ( )even new planet to live.This class is the most important one to me, not only because its my first class abroad but also because it made me relize how important space exploration is to us.虽然有些拼写错误，但文章内容较充实，语句流畅，并能点明作文主题。I will never forget that English lesson which I had at Grade Two.On that day, we took our English books and waited for our English teacher as usual. But to our surprise, she entered the classroom without the English book, but a radio and some paper instead. she dilived the paper and told us that we would hear an English song and she also asked us to fill in the blankets in the paper while lisening to the song. How wonderful! It was the first time for all of us to have such a test. We tured very excited and listened to the song very carefully. What surprised us most was that we master the new words more quickly that ever before.I like this lesson. It was a new way for us to learn English words. It also helped to develop our interest in English.I will never forget that English lesson.虽然有一些语言错误，但文章内容较好，语句较流畅，并写了感想。An English lesson will keep in my mind forever. It happened when I was a student in Grad Three in high sshool. That morning, our monitor told us that our English teacher had been ill and he wouldnt have the lesson. But when the English lesson begained, our English teacher appeared in the classroom. He looked very tired. His face was very plate. It was clear that he had serous illness. During the English lesson, he didnt sit down and have a rest. His voice wasnt as loud as before, but we all could hear clearly. At that time , everyone in our class all were struck by his action.He was a very good teacher. He was always devoting himself to his caree. We all liked him very much. He liked us as well. I wont forgert him and wont forget the English lesson.能基本表达意思，但内容不是很充实。句子结构基本正确，但都是简单句，并有较多的拼写错误。One of my unforget lessons is English. I thanked my English taeches for what he gave us. In the lesson I can learn not only grammar, vocabulary but also how to study.There are three reasons fot it. First, my English teacher didnt always tacher us to read books. He often tells us some foreign story and teaches us how to use English to think and to talk to others. Second, when he entered the classroom, he often brought some foreign books to let us read. It can help us to form interest in English. So we can study English more easy. The last one is that he often asked some questions to us in Englisb and we should answer it also in English. It made us speak English better.Mow I was graduated. He will not teach us any more. I hope that I will meet more and more teachers like him in the future.文章所写的内容是有关一位英语教师而不是一堂课，因此与作文题目不符，有背作文的迹象，并有较多的语言错误。2001 April (100 120 words )国际青年艺术节（the International Youth Art Festival）即将举行。作为一名志愿者，谈谈你的打算。I am proud to be selected volunteer for the International Youth Art Festival. I believe that I can contribute most in following aspects.First, as I can speak English, Japanese and a little German, I can be a good receptionist to serve the guests from various parts of the world.Second, I can be a good interpreter in the festival. In our school, I have attended a class of art appreciation. In this class I have learned basic knowledge of classic and modern art. So if I can be an interpreter, I would make a vivid introduction of art to visitors.Last but not least, I am full of energy and passion. As a volunteer, I know that there will be a lot of detailed and direct contact with visitors. Such task requires a lasting energy and passion. I am the person who can meet such requirements. So I would show the best part of me to those coming visitors.2001 ( over 120 words )请你谈谈轿车大量进入家庭后，对家庭，环境和经济可能产生的影响。Because of the Reform and opening policy, our country is developing quickly. People are richer today than in the past. And now many people can afford to buy their own cars. But large quantities of families buying cars will have disadvantages as well as advantages.To families, cars will make peoples life more convenient. They wont have to wait for a bus or walk a long way any more.To the economy, producing cars will encourage the development of industry. With a highly developed industry, our country will be more competitive.But, on the other hand, large quantities of cars running in the streets will do great harm to the environment. Cars will let out CO2, NO2 and some other harmful gas, most of which can do harm to the atmosphere. So enough attention should be paid to this problem.In summary, cars will bring us great benefits but we should also try to avoid its bad effect at the same time.本文有较完整的组织结构。第一段和最后一段前后首尾呼应，点明主题。中间三段紧扣主题，从三个方面谈了可能产生的影响，每个方面都有所展开。能较好地使用连接词，句子通顺，语言错误较少。基本上达到写作的测试要求。2002 April ( over 120 words )根据所给图表，简要描述某城市近年每百人手机(mobile phone)用户增长情况，并试分析其增长原因。The chart above indicates that there has been a surprisng increase in mobile phone consumption in the past four years in the city. Between 1995 and 1999 the number of mobile pnone users increased by 10 percent each. In 2001, the number almost doubled that of the previous three years. It is predicted that the number will skyrocket in the years to come.The reasons for the increase can be various.First a mobile phone is convenient to people, especially business people. Because of its small size, light weight and portability, you neednt go to a phone booth to make a phone call. One user says, “With a mobile phone, I can make a phone call to do business without worrying about the time and the place. This saves me time and trouble.”Besides, mobile phones are finding their way into ordinary families. Mobile phone lovers talk with their friends, family members whenever they like.Of course there are some other people buying mobiles phones merely to follow the fashion or show their social status.Whatever reason it may be, I think the increase will continue into the future because they make our life convenient and the world smaller.With the development of science, more and more people become to use the mobile phone. In 1995, there are 1% people who use mobile phone in a certain city. But in 1997, the number increased to 10% and in 1999, there were 20% people using mobile phone. And now 50% people have his own mobile phone. How come so many people use mobile phone? First of all many people are living a better life than before. So they can afford a mobile phone. Secondly, the mobile phone is very useful and convenient. People can put them in the pocket. They can use them at any time. So nowadays, more and more people have a mobile phone.能将图表中的信息转换成文字，内容较充实。语法结构和词汇应用基本正确。能使用词句间的连接成分。句子结构较多样，词汇丰富。From this chart we can conclude that the number of the mobile phone owners has been shooting up.Explanations to such phenomenon can be various. But the main reason still lies in the development of modern science and technology.Living a quick-paced life needs advanced technology. Mobile phones are a natural outcome of modernization of human life. Thanks to those bold dreamers and diligent creators, we can enjoy the miracles in the age of science.In adition, it is customers who bring prosperity to the mobile phone industry, and it is the renovation of their thinking modes that boost the consumption. More and more people are coming to realize that they should conquer the accelerated speed of the modification of society or they themselves will be conquered.Back to our original topic, still science and technology are the root of increase , but from the analysis, we may also get a glimpse at the psychological condition of the “modern people. 内容欠缺，图表分析不够，条理不够清晰，有点杂乱2003年你的好友因家境一般买不起名牌而闷闷不乐。给他写封信，谈谈你的看法和建议。收信人：徐海青寄信人：黄平（不可用自己的真实姓名）写信日期：2003年6月8日Dear Haiqin, Im writing to you to share my opinions on fashion with you, for I have just heard that you were unhappy because you couldnt buy something of famous brands. I shall say that it is natural for everyone to pay much emphasis on his image and it is true that fashionable clothes, shoes or something like that will make you more fashionable and eye-tatching. However, everyone has own family background, and it is really extravagant for you to buy these. Besides, it will also add to the burden of your parents. Whats more, beauty is just skin deep, and there are many things which can make you popular with others except fashion. A great amunt of knowledge, noble character and a warm heart will surely win you others respect and admiration. Good qualities is the treasure in your life which is more valuable than anything you wear. Never judge a book by its cover. I hope that you will remember the saying and become as happy as you used to be. (172 words) Yours, Huang Ping能够根据写作要求，以朋友的身份，首先表示了对海青闷闷不乐心情的谅解，然后又从外表和内在的关系上开导对方，读来亲切感人，内容充实，语言较流畅。虽然有些语法错误，但整体结构合理，句型较多样，词汇较丰富，Dear Haiqin,We havent kept in touch with each other for a long time. I want to know that everything is well to you. Recently I learned that you are not very happy. I know you want a good CD player for such a long time. You long for it very much. But as far as I suggest, you should consider you family first. You should know whether your parents can afford it. If it is not, you should learn to be considerate. And as a student, our first goal is to learn much more knowledge but not play first.On the other hand, these types off CDs are available on the market and the prices are lower, so you can choose a cheaper and practical one. An expensive is not always suit to you. If you are willing to take my advice, I will be pleased. I think you are a good boy.Remember my advice and write a letter to me. (161 words)Yours sincerely, Huang Ping尚能表达作文题要求，能使用简单的连接词，结构连贯。但句型较简单，词汇不够丰富。有些语法和拼写错误，但不影响意思的理解。有些表达明显按照中文思维，不符合英语习惯。2006年：下表提供了你所心仪的南、北两所大学南方大学北方大学学费8000元/年5000元/年招生人数20人10人优惠政策无加20分I am a senior three student and will begin to receive my high education from this September. So I am considering which university I should apply for.Among the universities all over the country, the Southern University and the Northern University are my favorite ones, and both have respective advantages. The expense of the Southern University is 8,000 yuan per year, 3,000 yuan more expensive than that of the Northern University. However, the number of students that will be admitted by the Southern University is twice as that of the Northern University, accounting for 20. As to the Northern University, what attracts me most is its beneficial policy that if I apply for it, I will get an extra 20-point in my college entrance examination. Its really a remarkable factor.Having thought twice, difficult as making the final decision is. I choose the Northern University. First, its cheaper studying there, so that my parents burden of money will relatively light. Second, 20-point is of considerable amount, which will certainly help me in my exam. Although it will enroll only 10 students, I have the confidence to be admitted.能根据题目要求， 对表格中所提供南北两所高校的不同方面进行比较， 从而作出决定，并根据个人的实际，比较具体地阐明了自己对各种条件的态度和想法。表达较流利，错误很少，展示出一定的遣词造句能力，是一篇较好的作文。Now there are two universities to choose. And the two universities are good. I like them, too. But as far as I am concerned, I will choose the North University.First, compared the South University, the North University is cheaper than the South University. My family is not very rich. So I think the North University is better. Secondly, the North University is easier than the South University. The North University can give you 20. The better policy give me confidence. Considering my study is not good, so I will choose the North University.Although the students of North University is less than the students of the South University, I will do my best to get it.In a word, I think the North University suit me. So I will choose the North University.虽然也按题目要求对两所学校的三个方面进行了比较，但是不能用正确的语法结构和词汇准确表达出意思，且内容不够充实，读上去很单调。在语言表达上有较多的语法、拼写及标点符号错误。Here are the