高考英语作文记叙文专题.ppt

高考作文专题之记叙文 1 1 记叙文是以叙述人物的经历或事物发展变化的过程为主的一种文体 2 在记叙文体的高考书面表达中 命题形式主要是提纲式或图画式 3 通常要求考生以第一人称或第三人称来写作 第一人称主要是写自己的经历 第三人称主要是写他人的经历或事迹 4 由于记叙文叙述的事情通常发生在过去 因而 其时态主要用一般过去时 5 记叙文通常是按照事情发生的先后顺序来表达内容的 2 假如你是李华 最近收到美国朋友Peter的信 他在信中讲到了高中生活印象最深的活动 并询问你是否愿意跟他分享给你印象最深刻的活动 请你回一封信 内容包括 1 简述给你印象最深的活动 2 谈谈活动的启发和影响 注意 1 词数100左右 2 信的开头和结尾已为写好 3 写作指导 一 审题1 本文是 类作文2 体裁是 3 时态是 4 书信类 记叙文 一般过去时 5 二 列出作文题目相关的内容印象最深刻的活动 运动会 野炊 爬山 郊游 篮球 乒乓球比赛 唱歌比赛 演讲比赛 去敬老院参加志愿活动 theSportingMeeting haveapicnic climbXXXMountain gohiking thebasket pingpongmatch thesingingcompetition thespeechcompetition gototheNursinghomeasavolunteer 三 确定要写的活动 Forexample 运动会 theSportingMeeting相关词汇 takepartin 100 200 1000 5000 metreracetherelayrace theshuttleracethehigh longjumptheTug of warcompetitionkeephealthy fitnevergiveup courage confidence friendship unity insistence 6 四 连词成句 连句成篇开头 这是一篇书信类的记叙文 所以必须要有书信的格式 称呼 正文 署名 1 Whatimpressedmemostisthat 从句 2 Everyonemayhaveexperiencedsomethingunforgettable goodorbad Iwillneverforgetthethingthat 3 ExtracurricularActivitiesplayanimportantroleinschoollife 7 正文 正文描述事件发生的经过 注意上下文的衔接1 Oneday Theotherday Onasunnyday myschoolheldaSportMeeting Itookpartintheeventof5000 meterrace ThereasonwhyIjoinedintheSportMeetingisthatIwantedtokeepfit healthy 2 Ourschoolheldavolunteering voluntaryactivitywhichaimstohelpoldpeoplewithhouseworkintheNursinghome Somepeoplehelpedoldpeopletowashclothes whileothersassistedthemtorepairsomefurniture 8 3 Timepassedquickly beforeweknewit itwastimetosaygoodbyetoothers oldpeople Onthewayback wenotonlysharedourfeelinghappily butalsowelearntalotfromeachother Meanwhile thevoluntaryworkcanpromoteoursocialawareness 4 ThemostimportantthingIlearnedintheactivitywashowtocommunicatewithothers 9 5 What sthemostimportantthingIlearnedfromtheactivityisthefriendship kindness 6 Withoutdoubt healthisthemostimportantthinginourlife 7 Takingpartinsocialactivitieswillnotonlyprovideuswithmorechancestomakefriendsandtochallengeourselves butalsomakeyourschoolliferichandcolourful 10 结尾 1 ItisanunforgettableexperiencewhichIwillrememberforever 2 Itissomeaningful movingthatIwon tforgetitforever 3 Bytakingpartinthisactivity Ilearn benefitalot 4 Simplethingscanmakeabigdifference 11 范文 DearPeter ThankyouverymuchforyourletterofMarch20 Itiskindofyoutosharetheactivitythathasimpressedyoumost AndIamwillingtotellyouthemostimpressedofmine WhatimpressedmemostistheSportMeetingoflastyear BeforetheSportMeeting Idecidedtotakepartinthe5 000 metrerace Everyonewasverysurprised BecausetheythoughtInotstrongenoughtorunthe5 000metres ButI mdeterminedtofinishit Duringtherace eachstepseemeddifficultforme Suddenly Ifelldowm breakingmyglassesandfellbehind ButIdidn tgiveup Istoodup putonmybrokenglassesandkeptonrunning 12 AlthoughIwasthelastonetocrossthefinishingline Iwonthecourageandhonor Ialsolearnedweshouldinsistoneverythingata