GRE写作argument 提纲.doc

appreciate 1931. The result of the survey lacks creativity, because many teachers in other subjects were excluded from the survey.2. The author fails to establish the close relationship between the quantity of homework and the grades.3. The two different areas may have different educational situation.2381. The result of the survey lacks creativity, because the survey did not include all the students in MVC.2. The comparison between A and B is uncompleted, hence we can hardly evaluate the result of seniors job employment.3. The author fails to establish the close relationship between the fact that GMC has more business courses and more job counselors and the fact that 90 percent of its graduating seniors had offers from prospective employers.4The author fails to convince us that the computer technology course will contribute to seniors employment.1801. The result of the survey lacks creativity, because the survey was too limited.2. Are these companies comparable? scope of business / the quality of the employee3. The assumption that $500 is a cheap tuition is open to doubt.4. The author fails to convince us that all the members at Acme Publishing Company need to improve their reading speed.1581. For lack of the data that total amount of garbage sites and people living near them, the creativity of the survey is open to doubt.2. The argument treats a lack of proof that the garbage sites will cause some extent of health hazard as constituting sufficient proof that it will not cause any significant health hazard.1471. It is possible that many other companies have already been marketing in such particular video games. Can the custom afford the video game? How many players can access to the most up-to-data computers?2. 导致销量下降 ignore neglect overlook / The arguer ignores other possible factors that may also lead to the decline in the sale of their video games. /3. No evidence could indicate that players 10 to 25 years also will also prefer such video game.4. The arguer has not considered the other features that may also influence the quality of video game. (只考虑了most) / story line / character design / background music/ sound effects/ 1441. The arguer fails to convince us that funding for education is not a priority for most people, because we do not know the base amount of donation each group received the year before last.2. Granting that funding for education is not a priority for most people, we can not insure that it is the perception suggested by the arguer that result in the differences in donation rate.3. more people 有问题的 wealth individuals, be willing to 意愿不知道4. 调查的范围1451 direct evidence/ The author fails to establish the close relationship 2 What fraction of people who snore actually suffer from the apnea.3 People who actually suffer from the apnea may also do exercise during day although they are tired.4 The assumption that people who snore will necessarily eat more and exercise less than normal is unwanted. 2391. The survey does not provide the complete information that effects of a curfew in W./other types of crime, time of crime/ It is possible that many crimes convicted in town square were not reported.2. Are these two comparable? 251. False analogy/ Maybe Ocean View is a tourist town, while Hopewell is a inland land.2. The best way绝对化 The arguer neglects other possible methods that may improve the Hopewells economy more effectively./ Other possible methods 其它行业3. The author does not convince us how the golf course and resort hotel actually affect the economy of Ocean View.4. comparability233 selective comparison/incomplete comparison1. May the traffic in Route 101 is much busier than Route 66. /whether, soil situation, maintenance. 2. The author unfair assumes that A companys work is superior than B.3. No evidence about the performance of the new quality-control manager is provided.4. false analogy/ road & access road2161. The arguer fails to convince us that the housing costs in Clearview are not expensive. 2. Non-neighboring towns maybe enjoy even lower real estate taxes.3. commodity price/food/transport4. The promise may not accomplish during a short period of time.5. A does not indicate B./The number of physicians does not necessary indicate the quality of health care.101. The increase in the number of dairy farm does not necessarily indicate the increase in the supply of milk.2. What is the actual price of milk after adjustment of inflation?3. cost, demand and supply4. 不良后果, 对策必要性necessary, 降低成本，降低taxes2351. Record music & rock-and-roll / record music & music like / irrelative concept./A is not a good indication of B/ The sells of record music are not a good indication of whether people prefer rock-and-roll.2. The arguer false assumes that older do not prefer rock-and-roll.3. 听众数量减少4 The fact that local citizens are interesting in becoming better informed about politics before the election does not follow that they will be interesting in continuous news program all the time.2061. 整体局部: Throughout the country/several major cities & P; softball and soccer & athletic competition.2. 数据模糊，区分differentia between 受伤严重性/ The arguer does not provide any detail information concerning the severe of injury.3. The arguer fails to consider the positive effects of the athletic competition. 分析好处237 same as golf1411 Can the consumer distinguish the products produced by CCC?1701. 成本与收益profit-cost & revenue/ If the cost of process is very expensive, the Gulf Coast oyster producers will be profitless.2. 不利影响 The process may damage taste of the oyster, and it may also kill some beneficial nutrition.3. The arguer fails to convince us that installing the process mentioned above will necessarily lead to increase the safety of Gulf Coast oyster.信息不完整，要考虑效果、效能4. 没有细菌就会买?1821. Some customer maybe unhappy, but they do not complain for some specific reasons like lack of time and personal type.2. Some customer may prefer margarine because of its low price.3. many/ a number of 数据模糊4. 草率推广/ The customers in other regions are more fastidious about the taste of food.5. 信息不够完整 The author does not provide any information concerning the possible change in the profit of Happy Pancake House.2121. The arguer unfair assumes that it is about the body styles of the cars that was the response of the decline on the sells of the cars. 滞销因素：price/ performance/ fuel consumption/after sell service/2直接无因果 the number of newly licensed drivers - the demand for new cars3sporty cars（新型车）/ No evidence concerning the preference of new drivers in terms of style of cars is provided.4What percentage of whole consumer population the newly licensed drivers take?1541. The author fails