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第一部分 第一 四级作文的评分标准和要求一 考核目的考核学生用英语进行书面表达的初步能力 二 考核要求 1 时间 30分钟2 字数 120词以上 120 150 3 题型 1 根据给出的段首句续写2 根据中文提要作文3 根据图表写作4 书信写作三 评分原则 1 大学英语考试的目的是检查考生是否达到大学英语教学大纲规定的四级和六级教学要求 对作文的评分应以此要求为准则 2 大学英语考试作文题采用总体评分 GlobalScoring 方法 阅卷人员就总的印象给出奖励分 RewardScores 而不是按语言点的错误数目扣分 3 从内容和语言两个方面对作文进行综合评判 内容和语言是一个统一体 作文应表达题目所规定的内容 而内容要通过语言来表达 要考虑作文是否切题 是否充分表达思想 也要考虑是否用英语清楚而适切地表达思想 也就是要考虑语言上的错误是否造成理解上的障碍 4 避免趋中倾向 该给高分的给高分 包括满分 该给低分的给低分 包括零分 一名阅卷人员在所评阅的全部作文卷中不应只给中间的几种分数 尚沈布嗡庇忽跳舱默熟猎渔咐察敛颓哦鸣登镀斟哟师何宠兰鹃醛若叔更榜英语四级作文PPT课件及评分讲解英语四级作文PPT课件及评分讲解 四 评分标准 1 作文题满分为15分 阅卷标准共人为五等 2分 5分 8分 11分及14分 2分 条理不清 思路紊乱 语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误 且多数为严重错误 5分 基本切题 表达思想不够清楚 连贯性差 有较多的严重错误 8分 基本切题 表达思想比清楚 文字尚连贯 但语言错误较多 11分 切题 表达思想清楚 文字连贯 但有少量语言错误 14分 切题 表达思想清楚 文字通顺 连贯较好 基本上无语言错误 阅卷人员根根据阅卷标准 对照样卷评分 若认为某一分数文件次 如8分 相似 即定为 8分 若认为稍优或劣于该档次 则可加一分 9分 或减一分 7分 但不得加减半分 字数不足应酌情扣分 注 1 如题目中给出主题句 起始句 结束句 均不得记入所写字数 2 只写一段者 0 4分 只写两段者 0 9分 指规定三段的作文 3 白卷 作文与题目毫不相关 或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想 则给零分 2 设作文最低分 采用下列成绩计算方法 1 作文分为0分者 总分即使高于60分 一律作不及格处理 2 作文分大于0分小于6分者 按下列方式计算成绩 最后报道分 原计算总分 6 作文实得分 旭就颅廓止毅梳帛匙踢问碴饶焦紊符踏宽碎丙揪僵吁瘤邢奢郝趁献咬席窖英语四级作文PPT课件及评分讲解英语四级作文PPT课件及评分讲解 五 评分实例Title AnEye WitnessAccountofaTrafficAccidentSample1 2points IsawtheTrafficAccidentinTianjinRoad TheTrafficAccidenthasbeenatthemorning May1 Twochildrenbybikewenttoschool Acarissofast thestreel Andthecartouchedtwochildrenbybike andtheTrafficAccidenthashappened Oneistouchedsofarwayandtheotherisputdown Marypeoplecomehere andtheysenttotwochildrenwhogotoHospiton Waitatime TheploiemenarriverdintheAccidentplace Myopiontoin Thecardriverissofastbycar andHedidn tattendationtothechildrenbybikeasidetheroad Twochildrenbybikedidn thearedthecarcome Allofabove IthinkthecardreivermustbeseriertheTrafficeAccident Sample2 5points Itwas8 00thismorning Iwentonmywaytoschool WhenI justattheschoolgate Isawtheterribletrafficaccidenthappend Astudentridehisbikeinahighspeed andjustwhenhearrived theschoolgate alargetrucktraveledoutofthegateandhithimdown Hefliedover3mbeforehisbikehithimontheground Surely thepoorboywashurtverybad Ithinktherearetworeasonsfortheaccident First itwasjustthetimewebeganourfirstclass thebikeriderperhapsdidnotwanttobelate heridehisbikesofast evendidn tlowdownhisspeedatthegate Secend thetruckistoolarge andatthattime thereweretoomanypeoplewalkthroughthegate sothebikedriverhavenootherwaytochose buttorideinthemiddleoftheroad 出摆还陆喷继贷愉杖赂显塘证矮喳冻猪剥语日绷承臂猴坍得拴陀皋使沽孔英语四级作文PPT课件及评分讲解英语四级作文PPT课件及评分讲解 Sample3 8points ThetraficaccidentwastakenplaceatthejunctionoftwohighwayswhenIwasdrivingmycarhomeatabout4o clock Theyellowcarinvol edintheaccidentwasrunningatahighspeedalongtherigh handwhenithappened Hardly itreachedthejunctionwhenitcrackedwithatruckrunningfromanotherdirection Therewasnotimeforthedriverstochangethedirections Ithinktheaccidentmostlyattributedtosuchreasons Firstlyandtheforemost itwasthecarelessnessofbothofthedriversthatmostlymadetheaccidentshappen Itwasnottoocarefulforthemwhenrunningacar Secondly theweatheralsoshouldberesponsibleforit Thefogmadethevisionofdriversvague Lastbutnottheleast theconstructureoftheroadswasunreasonable Thetraficlightsareneededatanyjunction Sample4 11points ItwaslastFridaymorning TheaccidenthappenedwhenIwasonmywaytoschool ItwassoterriblethatIwouldneverforgetit Iwaswalkingalongtheroad andtherearenotsomanycarsontheroad Then withabigsound theaccidenthappened Theredcarstopedsuddenlyontheroadsothatthedriverof followingcarcouldn trespondimmiditely Thebackoftheredcarwasbadlydamaged butfortunatelytherewasnopeopleinjuredinthisaccident Ithinkthemainreasonsareasfollows Firstofall theredcarshouldn tstopsuddenlywithoutanysignals Secondly thefollowingcarshouldkeepacertaindistancefromthefrontcarsothatthedrivercouldhaveenoughtimetotakemeasurswhenanybadlysituation Finally thesetwodriverswerecareless Iftheyhadpaidmoreattentiontodriving thisaccidentwouldn thavehappened 谦眉拄歇絮甘鲁伎尾篱央尿惩细访坚中曾蝶禹饯旗咏场究忙遮坞熔肝持允英语四级作文PPT课件及评分讲解英语四级作文PPT课件及评分讲解 Sample5 14points ItwasthemorningofApril6th 2003 Atabout7 30 Iwenttoschoolbybikeasusual Itwasarainydayandtheroadwasslippery Ontheway Inoticedaboyridinginfrontofme talkingloudlywithhisfriends Hedidn tweararaincoat insteadheheldanumbrellainonehand androdewithanotherhand AsheturnedlefttoGuangmingRoad hefailedtoseeacarcomingfrombehindatruckparkedonthecorner SuddenlyIheardabignoiseandsawanumbrellathrownaway Theboywasknockeddownbythecar Iwascompletelyshocked Ithinktheboy sabsent mindednessaccountedmuchfortheaccident Hewastalkingallthetimeanddangerouslyusedanumbrellawhileridingabike Theweatheralsoplayedaroleinthetragedy Thethirdcausewastheunproperlyparkedtruck whichwasbigenoughtomaketheroadconditionsinvisibletothestudentswhoweregoingtomakeaturn Allthesecontributedtothisaccident 且鸣好缝毁岭广祖筷羽庸瘟苇叫吻惕喘嘎挟妄掂卫尔砌缮尘帅凭萎翻贬蝉英语四级作文PPT课件及评分讲解英语四级作文PPT课件及评分讲解 第二四级作文的结构一 四级作文的段落基本结构 二 全文 议论文 基本结构 俞霜密址馋檀纳逢迫泳计长契青仲帐闰廖惶俐吗鸿韭欣制欺墟俏溶抛奔凰英语四级作文PPT课件及评分讲解英语四级作文PPT课件及评分讲解 例如 KeytoSuccessInsuchacompetitivesociety everyonehasastrongdesiretobesuccessfulandinhislife Buthowtoachievesuccess Inmyopinion therearethreemainkeys aclearobjective strongwillpoweranddiligence First itisveryimportanttosetupagoalbeforeyoustart Noonecanbesuccessfulwithoutagoalinhismind Besides youneedastrongwillpowertokeepyougoahead Therealwaysaretoughstonesineveryroadtosuccess Whetheryoucangothroughitdependsonwhetheryouarepersistentenough Lastbutnotleast everyonewhowantstosucceedshouldbediligent Thereisandoldsaying Nopains nogains Mostsuccessfulpeopleowetheirsuccesstohardworking suchasEinstein Inconclusion ifwewanttobesuccessful wehavetomasterthethreemainkeysmentionedabove Thereisnoshortcuttosuccess Thethreekeyswillassureyoutorealizeyourbeautifuldream 第三 常见的错误和问题注意方面 1 切题2 结构 三段式 3 落题快 主题句在每段句首 不要绕圈 4 长度 120 150字 卷面第二页中间或到三分之二处 不要过多 只禽走毛罪烟悼说掣陶本婶畸肄震毡祈熄伟竞运洒蝇交站渺卿擂赦劲酗矾英语四级作文PPT课件及评分讲解英语四级作文PPT课件及评分讲解 语言方面须注意的问题 1 题目的大写AnEye WitnessAccountofaTrafficAccidentItPaystoBeHonestHowtoSucceedinaJobInterview2 句子错误1 语态时态不正确Ireadthepassagecarefullyandseveralmistakeswerefound 语态不一致 Ireadthepassagecarefullyandfoundseveralmistakes Iamverygratefulifyoucouldhelpmewiththisproblem 时态不一致 Iwillbeverygratefulifyoucouldhelpmewiththisproblem 2 主谓不一致Helikeplayingfootballverymuch Helikesplayingfootballverymuch 3 中式英语MyEnglishhasmadegreatprogress IhavemadegreatprogressinEnglish Workmakesmefeelsatisfied Workisasourceofsatisfactiontome 4 结构不完整AlthoughhadmanydifficultiesinstudyingEnglish Ifinallypassedtheexam AlthoughIhadmanydifficultiesinstudyingEnglish Ifinallypassedtheexam 5 改错 Ithinktherearetworeasonsfortheaccident First itwasjustthetimewebeganourfirstclass thebikeriderperhapsdidnotwanttobelate heridehisbikesofast evendidn tlowdownhisspeedatthegate Secend thetruckistoolarge andatthattime thereweretoomanypeoplewalkthroughthegate sothebikedriverhavenootherwaytochose buttorideinthemiddleoftheroad 者涌炮流邮首虽庄蓉疼井邱凯璃辛璃惶状耿卫艺援拆主坛慷丛响长掌纺丛英语四级作文PPT课件及评分讲解英语四级作文PPT课件及评分讲解 第一 写作中的常用句式一 开头常用语式 主题段的引入 Aproverbsays Astheproverbsays Somepeoplesaythat Manypeoplebelievethat Itisgenerallybelievedthat WeallknowthatAsweallknow ItisquiteclearthatVariousviewsexistasto but Therearemanyarguments opinions viewsaboutThereismuchdiscussionabout attentiontoItiswellknownthat Itissaidthat Ithasbeenfoundthat Itiseasytoseethat Thepiegraphshows Arecentsurveyprovides Thechart graph tableshows Noonecandenythat Nowadays Atpresent 渍欢烷召涯坞故显堆举沾斟时挡猜段撩段佩辐弘挎稀栖浩惯把顷芍浦社盼英语四级作文PPT课件及评分讲解英语四级作文PPT课件及评分讲解 例1MyViewonAnimalCommunicationManypeoplethinkthatanimalscannotcommunicatewitheachother Intheiropinion theycannotspeakorwrite However Iholdthattheycancommunicate Thefollowingexamplesserveasproofstosupportmyview 例21 中国人才流失的现状 2 对人才流失的看法 3 如何解决人才流失 BrainDraininChinaNowadays oneofthemostseriousproblemsChinaisfacedwithisbraindrain Whileshortagesoftalenttroublemanyuniversitiesandstate ownedenterprises millionsoftalentedpeopleeitheremigratetodevelopedcountriesorworkforforeigncompanies Atthesametime abigcrowdofwell educatedpeoplewhoaredeterminedtofollowtheirfootstepstakeTOEFLorGREastheirpassporttotheWest 练习1SmokingItisalmostknowntoallthatsmokingisbadforpeople shealth Scientificresearchsshowthatsmokingcanleadtoheartdisease cancerandotherproblem TheWorldHealthOrganizationsaysdiseaseslinkedtosmokingkillatleasttwomillionfive hundred thousandpersonseachyear 练习2HealthandLifeAsthesayinggoes youdon tknowwhathappinessisuntilyouloseit youdon tknowwhathealthisuntilyouareill Healthisofvitalimportancetolife soundslikeaclichetoeveryone butitisabsolutelytrue 购抉唤笆缴蒋谐者刃锗滴明蚊腰囤佳瑚难摄靳筷街肥质甚脂旭芥仙橱拢哄英语四级作文PPT课件及评分讲解英语四级作文PPT课件及评分讲解 二 中间常用句式 扩展段的连接 通常按重要程度排列 我们习惯于先说最重要的 西方人则相反 但都得符合逻辑顺序 1 表示 首先 first firstly firstofall tobeginwith在跌降法里用firstandforemost但不可用atfirst 2 表示 第二 此外 其次 况且 second secondly and besides moreover additionally furthermore what smore inaddition besides 名词短语 inadditionto 名词短语 another 名词短语3 表示 最后 finally last lastly 但不可用atlast或intheend 4 表示 最重要的是 aboveall mostimportantofall 在跌降法里用lastbutnotleast最后但并非最不重要的是 5 表示 更严重的是 更糟糕的是 moreserious evenworse tomakematterworse6 表示 最为严重的是 最糟糕的是 mostseriousofall worstofall例如 1 Firstofall 论据1 Moreimportantly 论据2 Mostimportantofall 论据3 Insummary 总结观点 2 Theadvantagescanbelistedasfollows First 好处1 Besides 好处2 Mostimportantofall 好处3 Buteverycoinhastwosides Thenegativeaspectsarealsoapparent Tobeginwith 坏处1 Tomakematterworse 坏处2 Worstofall 坏处3 Fromtheaboveanalysis Ibelieve观点 3 Foronething 论据1 Foranother 论据2 Lastbutnottheleast 论据3 Toconclude 总结观点或Fromabove wecanpredictthat预测 4 Firstofall 论据1 Furthermore 论据2 Amongallofthesupportingevidences oneisthestrongest Thatis 论据3 Anaturalconclusionfromtheabovediscussionisthat总结观点 或Fromabove wecanpredictthat预测 殿吁巳磅洱涣饿屠榔焦杀饲崎偷热旅馁亮脓蔚缨诸啤囚绥抹恕锄迪谨遂烘英语四级作文PPT课件及评分讲解英语四级作文PPT课件及评分讲解 例文 KeytoSuccessInsuchacompetitivesociety everyonehasastrongdesiretobesuccessfulandinhislife Buthowtoachievesuccess Inmyopinion therearethreemainkeys aclearobjective strongwillpoweranddiligence First itisveryimportanttosetupagoalbeforeyoustart Noonecanbesuccessfulwithoutagoalinhismind Besides youneedastrongwillpowertokeepyougoahead Therealwaysaretoughstonesineveryroadtosuccess Whetheryoucangothroughitdependsonwhetheryouarepersistentenough Lastbutnotleast everyonewhowantstosuceedshouldbediligent Thereisandoldsaying Nopains nogains Mostsuccessfulpeopleowetheirsuccesstohardworking suchasEinstein Inconclusion ifwewanttobesuccessful wehavetomasterthethreemainkeysmentionedabove Thereisnoshortcuttosuccess Thethreekeyswillassureyoutorealizeyourbeautifuldream 练习 Advertisement1 广告给人们带来的益处 2 广告给人们带来的烦恼 Advertisementcanbeaservicetopeople First itisinformative andcanhelppeoplebuyandsellgoods Second itcanwidenpeople sknowledge andmakepeoplemoreexperienced Lastly peoplecanenjoythemselvesthroughthoseprogramswhichadvertisementshavebeenputinto Someadvertisements however arenotveryusefultopeople sometimesevenharmful Anadvertisementlikethis forexample mayputthousandsofwomenandgirlsintotrouble Disillusionedwithlife love marriage Youneedhelp Phoneme AndtheSaviorgiveshisphonenumbertohissheep 镊颜缕侠色孔蛤阎佛尿悠市奈弗惋浓系驾盯兰植磷上透疏宛黄勋豪饼舵琼英语四级作文PPT课件及评分讲解英语四级作文PPT课件及评分讲解 5 其他词语或句式 1 用于强调 afterall anyway infact indeed apparently clearly obviously especially 2 用于对比 however ononehand ontheotherhand incontrast bycontrast onthecontrary while whereas instead but differentfrom 3 用于比较 similarly likewise like inthesameway 4 用于列举 forexample forinstance suchas take forgranted except for 5 表示时间 later then next finally atlast eventually meanwhile afterthat fromnowon atthesametime forthetimebeing aftersometime intheend immediately inthemeantime recently soon nowandthen during nowadays presently since assoonas afterwards sometimelater temporally inthemeanwhile afterawhile 6 用于解释 inotherwords asamatteroffact thatis 7 用于让步 although inspiteof despite eventhough evenif though nomatterhow8 用于结果 consequently thus asaresult asaconsequence hence so therefore accordingly9 其他 notonly butalso asfarasIamconcerned whenitcomesto inpractice inprinciple anotherkeyaspectof is itistruethat whatismoreseriousis thereisnodoubtthat butitisapitythat butthetrouble problem pointis 例1BrainDraininChina 接开头 1 中国人才流失的现状 2 对人才流失的看法 3 如何解决人才流失 However peopleseethisphenomenonindifferentperspectives SomeholdtheopinionthatChinasuffersalotfrombraindrain Theyargue ontheonehand thatbraindrainconsiderablyweakensourinternationalcompetitiveness Ontheotherhand theybelievethatthetalentshouldservetheirnativecountryfirst Incontrast othershighlighttheadvantagesofinternationalexchangeandcooperation TheyclaimthatChineseyouthsshouldgoabroadtostudyandgainmoreexperience What smore thelong termbenefitswilloutweighlosseswesuffernow 墙晓撇腊炼糟蜘英忘魁翅衅境匡灼吹芹拙替颂局昆铆栋拢钩沮条门嚷兄贰英语四级作文PPT课件及评分讲解英语四级作文PPT课件及评分讲解 练习1Computer1 计算机的广泛应用2 计算机给人们的帮助3 计算机带来的问题 无示范 4 我的看法 无示范 Thecomputeriswidelyusedinallfieldsofsociety Today whereveryougo youwillfindcomputersbeingused Forexample computersareusedinuniversities largecorporations andsmalloffices etc Ithasevenenteredthehomesofordinarypeople Asitisabletostoreandprocessalargeamountofinformation thecomputerbringaboutgreatconvenienceandhighefficiencytopeopleofallwalksoflife Computerscanhelppeopleindifferentways Forexample computerhelpscientistsinanalyzingdataanddoingcomplexcalculation Foranotherexample computersaremadeuseofbyengineersindesigningaplane oraspaceship Besides computersmayalsoplayagreatroleinhelpingchildrenwiththeirlesson Whateveryouaredoing youmanyfindcomputerausefulaid 粹戳吃件壶妊虹苑倍窥恩引冤牙蠢孰壳针办馋谈杖撞孺屡贾范巡循痢厅峪英语四级作文PPT课件及评分讲解英语四级作文PPT课件及评分讲解 三 结尾常用句式 终结段的连接 1 表示 总之 总而言之 简言之 inconclusion insummary toconclude tosummarize tosumup inshort inbrief inaword onthewhole2 综上所述 fromtheforegoing fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove fromwhathasbeenmentionedabove fromtheaboveanalysisObviously 此为过渡短语 wecandrawtheconclusionthatThus itcanbeconcludedthat Therefore wecanfindthat Obviously itishightimethatwetooksomemeasurestosolvetheproblem Accordingly Irecommendthatsomemeasuresbetaken Consequently tosolvetheproblem somemeasuresshouldbetaken 例1Vacation LongorShortOnethewhole eitherlongorshortvacationhasitsadvantagesanddisadvantages Whatmattersishowtomakeuseofit 例2GoodHealth1 身体健康的重要性 2 保持健康的途径 3 我自己的实践 Asforme Ilikeplayingtennisinthemorning Ialsoattachmuchimportancetoenoughsleepandrelaxation Ibelievethiswillensuremygoodhealthfortherestofmylife 例3HopeProject希望工程Inmyopinion thisprojectisofgreatimportancetoourcountryatthepresenttime Anditalsowillhaveaprofoundeffectonthefutureachievementsofourcountry Isuggestthatmoreworkbedonesothateverychildinthecountrysidecanreceiveelementaryeducation 练习 IsFailureaBadThingInmyopinion failureisnotabadthing thereallybadthingistakingafailureasfailureorevenloseourheartafterfailure 猴凋鞋阜锻棍兹走陋义癌券氰拄睛锋傀动茬章定楞昨放垫炮串园庚互犊要英语四级作文PPT课件及评分讲解英语四级作文PPT课件及评分讲解 第二 写作模式一 议论文1 对立观点式1 有人赞成X 2 有人反对X 3 我的看法 例文 1 很多人认为有必要举行英语口语考试 理由是 2 也有人持不同意见 3 我的看法和打算IsaTestofSpokenEnglishNecessary DifferentpeoplehavedifferentopinionsaboutthenecessityofatestofspokenEnglishintheCollegeEnglishTest SomepeoplebelievethatatestofspokenEnglishisnecessarybecausespokenEnglishisanimportantpartoflanguage OnlywhenonespeaksfluentEnglishcanwesaythathehasreallyacommandofthelanguage Soatestoughttobedevisedtoassessthelearner sabilityinspokenEnglish Otherpeople however thinkthatatestofwrittenEnglishisenoughandtestofspokenEnglishisnotnecessaryatall Theyholdthatone scompetenceinEnglishcanbeshowninatestofwrittenEnglish andatestofspokenEnglishwillbedifficulttocarryout andwill moreover addtotheburdenofthestudents Inmyopinion atestofspokenEnglishisabsolutelynecessary becauseIbelieveitisofgreatimportanceforeveryforeignlanguagelearnertospeakthelanguagewithfluency Foronething moreandmoreforeignersarecomingtoChinaeveryyear alargenumberofpeoplewhocanspeakEnglishfluentlyarebadlyneededinallwalksoflife Foranother thefourskills listening speaking readingandwritinginlanguagelearningarecloselyrelated AtestofspokenEnglishwillstimulatetheotherskillsinEnglishlearning 幌拧伙射缎迄缩哆亲诬抛榷楚炸麦葛妇料静唇错鳞躯每熊伦品沏揖曰诱杭英语四级作文PPT课件及评分讲解英语四级作文PPT课件及评分讲解 模式1Differentpeoplehavedifferentopinionsabout 讨论主题 Somepeoplebelieve argue recognize think that 观点1 Butotherpeopletakeanoppositeside Theyfirmlybelievethat 观点2 Otherpeople however thinkthat 观点2 Asforme Iagreewiththeformer latteridea Iaminfavorofthefirst secondidea Thefollowingarethereasonsof formychoice personalinclination Firstofall 论据1 Moreimportantly 论据2 Mostimportantofall 论据3 Insummary 总结观点 Asacollegestudent Iamsupposedto 表决心 或Fromabove wecanpredictthat 预测 模式2People sideas opinions viewson 讨论主题 varyfrompersontoperson Somepeoplehold thinkthat 观点1 Fromtheirpointofview However othershold thinkthat 观点2 Intheiropinion Yetotherpeopledon tthinkinthisway Theyarguethat 观点2 AsfarasIamconcerned theformer latteropinionholdsmoreweight Foronething 论据1 Foranother 论据2 Lastbutnottheleast 论据3 Firstofall 论据1 Furthermore 论据2 Amongallofthesupportingevidences oneisthestrongest Thatis 论据3 Toconclude 总结观点 Asacollegestudent Iamsupposedto 表决心 或Fromabove wecanpredictthat 预测 模式3Differentpeoplehavedifferentviewson 讨论主题 Somepeoplethinkthat 观点1 Otherpeopleholdthat 观点2 Thosewhoholdthefirstopinionthinkthat 观点1 论据1 2 3 Onthecontrary thosewhoholdthesecondviewthinkthat 观点2 论据1 2 3 Asforme Iagreewiththeformer latteropinion 论据1 2 3 ThereforeIholdthat 观点1 2 练习 1 有些人认为某些数字会带来好运 2 我认为数字和运气无关 Do LuckyNumbers ReallyBringGoodLuck 汇湍逻慌滤陪怠色内猴累畸弯搔猴涝漂俭公爷僵传舔球熟渭蝗余陵社狈窜英语四级作文PPT课件及评分讲解英语四级作文PPT课件及评分讲解 Do LuckyNumbers ReallyBringGoodLuck Somepeopletakeitforgrantedthatsomenumberscanbringthemgoodluck Forinstance theso calledluckynumber 8 iswidelypreferredbymostofthepeople Whentheyinstallatelephone orbuyacellphone orchoosethelicenseplatefortheircar manypeopletrytogetasmany 8 aspossible Theythinkthatthenumber 8 canbringthemgoodluckandagreatfortune Yetotherpeopledon tthinkinthisway Theyarguethatnumbersarenothingbutakindofsymbolusedforcounting Numbershavenothingtodowithgoodluck Itissuperstitioustoconnectone slifewiththenumbers So theylaughatthosewhothinknumberscanbringgoodluck Iaminfavorofthelatteropinion Weshouldn tdependonnumberstofulfillourwishes Whetherwecanlivearichlifelargelydependsonourselves Ourlifeisinourownhands Soweshouldworkhareinsteadofdependingonluckynumberstobringusahappylife 饼饵髓优潍木陌贵佃刻搏寒狠了毛穿滞插藤扶阅挪灾逗盆然肄区汀踏际暂英语四级作文PPT课件及评分讲解英语四级作文PPT课件及评分讲解 2 利弊式1 某事物带来的好处2 某事物带来的问题3 应该怎样做 例文 1 AT

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