英语写作讲解 (2).ppt

英语写作讲解 现在正是春暖花开的春游时节 你校学生以 高三学生要不要参加春游活动 展开了讨论 请根据以下讨论结果 写一篇短文 并说明你的主张 Howtowriteagoodcomposition 学生作文展示ThereisanarguementonwhetherSenior3studentsshouldgospringoutingornot Finally wegetthefollowingresults About65 ofthestudentsthinkweshouldgospringouting Becauseitmayletustouchnature andwecangetfreshair Asweknow itisgoodforourhealth What smore goingspringoutingmakesourbrainsrelaxed whichhelpsusstudywell However about35 ofstudentsareagainstit Becausecollegeentranceexaminationiscoming wemightnothaveagoodtime Andithasabadeffectonourschoolwork Therefore theythinktheyshouldn tgospringouting 评语 文章信息完整 结构好 连贯流畅卷面整洁 书写工整 高考作文类型 对比观点题型要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法 写作基本步骤 仔细审题 列举大纲 围绕要点 写出句子 添加过度 确保连贯 先求正确 再求灵活 认真眷写 卷面整洁 分四段写 Para 1 Introduction 引入主题句Para 2 Point1有一些人认为 Para 3 Point2另一些人认为 Para 4 Conclusion我的看法 Theoutlineofthewriting 写作基本步骤 第一 仔细审题 列举大纲 写作基本步骤 第二 围绕要点 写出句子 1 gradethreestudentsofahigh middleschool2 Thereare65 studentsagreeit 3 Have65 studentsagreeit 65 ofthestudentsagreewithitbeinfavoroftheideabefortheidea4 Theythoughtgospringoutingcantouchthenature Theythinkwecangetclosetonaturebygoingspringouting GradeThree Senior3students 5 Theythinkgoingspringoutingcanmakethembreaththefresh fleshair 呼吸新鲜空气 breathesomefreshair 6 Itisbenefittotheirhealthy Itisbeneficialtotheirhealth 7 makespiritloose 精神放松 relaxoneselfrefreshoneself makesbrelaxed8 letourbrainhaveagoodrest大脑休息 resttheirbrains Chinglish 即 中式英语 9 begoodforstudyingbegoodforstudy10 1 Highexamwillcome 2 Becauseofcollegeentranceexaminationiscoming 3 Withcollegeentranceexaminationiscoming Withthecollegeentranceexaminationcoming Keywords 高三学生 senior3students 春游 gospringouting 讨论 discussion 接触自然 beclosetonature 呼吸新鲜空气 breathesomefreshair 精神放松 relaxthemselves 大脑休息 resttheirbrains 高考临近 withcollegeentranceexaminationdrawingnear 没心情玩 don tfeellikeplayingoutside 耽误学习 wastethetime 在我看来 inmyopinion Para 1 主题句的内容要明确具体 语言简洁 开门见山 句式力争多样性 Howwillyoustartyoupassage Introduction sample ShouldSenior3studentsgospringouting Wehavehadaheateddiscussion 巧用过渡句 过渡词 理顺文章的逻辑关系 Payspecialattentiontothetransitionsentences Opinionsaredividedonthequestion Differentpeopleholddifferent oppositeopinions 写作基本步骤 第三 添加过度 确保连贯 Point1 65 的人认为应该春游 亮明观点 Sentencepattern Mostofus about65 holdtheopinionthat ofthemareinfavoroftheideathat About65 ofthestudentsarefortheideathatSenior3studentsshouldgospringouting Reason1 接触大自然 呼吸新鲜空气 有利健康 Sentencepattern Theythinkitgoodtodosth sthdogoodtosthIntheiropinion itisofgreatbenefittodosth Eg Theythinkitgoodfortheirhealthtobeclosetonatureandbreathesomefreshair Reason2 活动使精神放松 大脑休息 有利于学习 注意 两个观点之间的连接 递进what smore besides moreover inaddition furthermoreEg what smore theycanrelaxthemselvesforawhileandresttheirbrainssothattheywillbemoreenergetic Conclusion 小段总结 进一步亮明观点 前后呼应 Eg Theythinkitwilldogoodtotheirstudy Point2 的学生认为不应该春游 亮明观点 注意 使用过渡句 自然衔接句子和段落 承上启下 Sentencepattern However otherspreferto Someothershavejusttheoppositeopinion Ontheotherhand Eg Ontheotherhand about35 ofthestudentsareagainsttheidea Reason1 高考临近 没有心情玩Sentencepattern Theysay believe holdtheopinion that Eg Theysaythatwiththecollegeentranceexaminationdrawingnear theydon tfeellikegoinganywhere Reason2 春游耽误学习 注意 两个观点之间的连接 Eg Besides theythinkgoingspringoutingwilltakeatleastadayoff Theycan taffordthetime Theythinktheyshouldfixtheirattentionontheirstudy ShouldSenior3studentsgospringouting Wehavehadaheateddiscussion Opinionsaredividedonthequestion About65 ofthestudentsarefortheideathatSenior3studentsshouldgospringouting Theythinkitgoodfortheirhealthtobeclosetonatureandbreathesomefreshair what smore theycanrelaxthemselvesforawhileandresttheirbrainssothattheywillbemoreenergetic Theythinkitwilldogoodtotheirstudy 参考范文onepossibleversion Ontheotherhand about35 ofthestudentsareagainsttheidea Theysaythatwiththecollegeentranceexaminationdrawingnear theydon tfeellikegoinganywhere Besides theythinkgoingspringoutingwilltakeatleastadayoff Theycan taffordthetime Theythinktheyshouldfixtheirattentionontheirstudy Inmyopinion I dliketosaythatweshouldgospringouting A 运用高级词汇或短语B 增加形容词或副词C 灵活运用各种句型 亮点点拨 ShouldSenior3studentsgospringouting Wehavehadaheateddiscussion Opinionsaredividedonthequestion About65 ofthestudentsarefortheideathatSenior3studentsshouldgospringouting Theythinkitgoodfortheirhealthtobeclosetonatureandbreathesomefreshairandwhat smore theycanrelaxthemselvesforawhileandresttheirbrainssothattheywillbemoreenergetic Theythinkitwilldogoodtotheirstudy Ontheotherhand about35 ofthestudentsareagainsttheidea Theysaythatwiththecollegeentranceexaminationdrawingnear theydon tfeellikegoinganywhere Besides theythinkgoingspringoutingwilltakeatleastadayoff Theycan taffordthetime Theythinktheyshouldfixtheirattentionontheirstudy becloseto energetic feel likegoing afford fixtheir attentionon heated fresh 表示观点对比类写作作文模版 Thetopicof 主题 isbecomingmoreandmorepopularrecently Peoplehavedifferentopinionsonthisproblem ofthemareinfavoroftheideathat Theyholdtheirviewforthereasonof 理由一 Whatismore 理由二 Moreover 理由三 However ofthemholdtheoppositeopinion Peoplewhoareagainstitdon tthinkso Firstly Secondly besides Thirdly finally Formypart theformerissurelyawisechoice 影响高考英语书面表达得分的几个因素1 语篇信息是否完整2 行文是否连贯流畅 语言是否得体 3 是否使用高级词汇4 是否使用复杂句5 卷面整洁 书写工整 Homework Improveyourcompositionandhanditintomorrow Thankyou Practicemakesperfect 表示观点对比类写作套语 A 总起 Opinionsaredividedonthisquestion Differentpeopleholddifferent oppositeopinions Peoplehavetaken adopteddifferentattitudestowards Peoplehavedifferentopinionsonthisproblem Peopletakedifferentviewsonthisquestion