四六级作文模版(议论文 图表)(1).doc

四六级作文 （一）、英语六级作文评分标准1本题满分为15分。2阅卷标准共分五等：2分、5分、8分、11分及14分。各有标准样卷一至二份。3阅卷人员根据阅卷标准，对照样卷评分，若认为与某一份数（如8分）相似，即定为该分数（即8分）；若认为稍优或稍劣于该分数，即可加一分（即9分）或减一分（即7分），但不得加或减半分。4评分标准：2分条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或在部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。5分基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。8分基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。11分切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。14分切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性好。基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错误。注：白卷，作文与题目毫不相关，或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想，则给0分。累记字数CET6100-119100-10990-9980- 8970-7969扣分注：1.如题目中给出主题句，起始句，结束句，均不得计入所写字数2.只写一段者：04分；只写两段者：09分（指规定三段的作文）3.为了便于阅卷人员掌握评分标准，现将各档作文分相当于百分制的得分，列表如下，称为得分率。其中9分的得分率为60（相当于百分制的60分）。作文分158 7 6 5 4 3 2 1得分率100948780746760544740342720147经原国家教委批准，四、六级考试已从1997年6月份起采用“作文最低”制计算成绩，其中足见国家对提高大学英语写作能力的重视程度。按规定，考生作文若为0分，无论其总分是否高于60分，均作不及格处理；若其作文分高于0分，低于6分，报导成绩时，需从总分中减去6分，再加上实得作文分。也就是说，要从总分中减去实得作文分与6分之间的差额部分图表作文(观察 描述 分析 预测) A Example-(from IV EE )Family Bank Deposits in Chinas Cities and TownsYearAverage Family DepositsTotal Deposits RMB（yuan)19851351134.8billion19907869757.3billion2000346002569.7billionThe period 1985-2000 saw a great increase in family bank deposits in Chinas urban areas.In 1985 ,the average family deposits was 1351 yuan while in 2000 it reached 34600 yuan. The total bank deposits in 2000 was 19 times as much as it was in 1985.Several factors may have contributed to this change. First, the family income has greatly increased and people have more spare money to deposit in the bank. Second, people want to deposit money to buy expensive items such as houses and cars. Third, banks are still regarded as the safest place to deposit money. More and more people are willing to deposit money in banks instead of other investments such as stock exchange and future investment. B What to describe- basic elements of the picture & general trend of the picture; a certain point stage or the extreme point stage; C Possible patterns:For general trend -FromAccording to the tablepie chartbar graph. It is interesting to find that.It is apparent that.According to the graph, the number of .shows the following pattern.The diagram reveals that.（The time period) saw a (dramaticsharpsteadyslow.)increasedecrease in.(aspact)曲线图.shows the sharpest rise of % 猛增In terms ofin the case owith respect to ., the number has declined increaseddropped slightlysharplysteadily from. The number of .remains unchangedsteady.The number of fluctuated dramatically over the period. 大幅震荡Between.and.,the number of fluctuated with an overall upward trend .总体上升的震荡。Decrease was evident between and . 下降明显Similarly, the number of increased more moderately from.to .,to roughly .缓慢上升The first month of showed an increasing trend, moving from (number) in(time period) to (number) in(time period). (Time period) saw a second suddensharpsteady increasedecrease, numberingAccompanying this fall and rise were a paralled increase in伴随起伏，有个平行的上升From upwards, a rise continued until自。一直上升表格For the perccentage of (eg, 2005)is only % larger than that of (eg, 2003)There is a greater increase in,increasing by % and % respectively.As far as concerned, there is a sharp increasedecreasedecline in the percentage of ,accounting for % of the total.As to , it ranked the highestreached the extreme It is striking to note thatWhat also impresses us is that 饼状图 is dividied into four major parts, namely,.The proportion fell inbut increased into a level as in account for % of the total populations.cover the largest portion, accounting for .%. 占第 位的是And the second largest part goes toAnd safely reached the third place,being %.and are % and %respectively. 分别占 .accounts for only %. The remaining % goes to .小幅占比occupy constitute % of the total. 占总额In the chart, takes the lions share, being %.When coming to ,we can see that the striking difference between and 区别很大D interpretationanalysis of the pictureSeveral factors may have contributed to The fluctuation can be explained byThe increasedecrease incan be attributed to.The peak is related toE conclusionpredictionOverall, the chart demonstrates thatFrom the diagram it can be safely conclude thatIn conclusionsummary,Based on the information presented in the tablegraphdiagram, I would expect.F Possible example : It is obvious in the graphic/table that the rate/number/amount of Y has undergone dramatic changes. It has gone up/grown/fallen/dropped considerably in recent years (as X varies). At the point of X1, Y reaches its peak value of (多少). The .in . was . times as much as it was in .Several factors may have contributed to this change.Mainly there are (多少)reasons behind the situation reflected in the graphic/table. First of all, (第一个原因). More importantly, (第二个原因). Most important of all, (第三个原因). From the above discussions, we have enough reason to predict what will happen in the near future. The trend described in the graphic/table will continue for quite a long time (if necessary measures are not taken括号里的使用于那些不太好的变化趋势).议论文一 说明利弊型/e.g. On AutomobilesThe Two-day Weekend 提纲：1。说明事物现状/ 2事物本身具备的优缺点（或另一方面） 3结合个人实际情况，表达观点或态度Nowadays, A brings us into a fantastic world where we can easily see the changes in our life. A is playing a very important part in our life.Just as people say that everything has both positive and negative sides, A is no exception. Its positive sides are as follows: First, A helps us to _. Moreover, A also enables us to _.However, A, just like anything else, has its negative side as well. It has also given rise to a series of problems. For example, it may bring us _. Needless to say, it will _.As far as myself is concerned, my attitude toward A is positive, because _. I would say that the advantages outlined above outweigh the disadvantages. (For me, _. But at the same time, _. The result depends on the balance between their advantages and disadvantages.) 社会问题(现象)式 A一个社会问题或者现象 B 产生的原因 C对社会和我们生活的影响 D 如何杜绝。(如果是问题的话)E 前景的预测。 Nowadays, there exists an increasingly serious social/economic/environmental problem. (X has increasingly become a common concern of the public). According to a survey, 调查内容说明这种现象的情况。(或者是一个例子)。 There are a couple of reasons booming this problem/phenomenon.下面参照辩论式议论文写法。 X has caused substantial impact on the society and our daily life, which has been articulated in the following aspects. 参照辩论式议论文的写法。 A dozen of measures are supposed to take to prevent X from bringing us more harm. 同上Based on the above discussions, I can easily forecast that more and more people will 二 阐述主题型e.g. The Role of Migrant WorkersThe qualities of the Cross-century TalentsThe Greatest Invention in the Past Century提纲：1。提出主题或说明现状 2分要点进一步分析主题 3联系实际给出建议或结论We are now living in a time when A is developing at a great speed. With the development of A, our country have improved not only its economy but also their peoples living conditions.When we take a closer look, we will find how closely our life is connected with A. On the one hand, it enables us to _, especially when _. On the other hand, it contributes a lot to _. Without A, our society cannot make such rapid progress.Since A is so important to our daily life, we should try to make as much contribution as possible to the development of it. As adult students, we must _.阐述主题时，注意论述的层级性 并列 To begin with-Furthermore-Finally递增 As is known to all-Whats more -Most importantly递减 First and foremost-Secondly-Last 三 对比观点型e.g. Why We Work (live to work vs. work to live)Which Is More Important, Wealth or Health?Should Firecrackers Be Banned?提纲： 1.现象简述 2一些人支持A，原因一；些人支持B，原因 3. 自己的观点（第二段）Peoples ideas on A differ vary from person to person. While some people take it for granted that _, others consider that _.As far as I am concerned, I agree to the former opinion. First, nobody could deny the fact that _. Next, there is an element of truth in saying that _. Finally, the most important point is _.For the above reasons, I strongly suggest that _. （第二段又例) Some people are in favor of the idea of doing X. They point out the fact that .(支持X 的第一个原因。)They also argue that. (支持X 的另一个原因。)However, other people stand on a different ground. They consider it harmful to do X. They firmly point out that .(反对X 的第一个理由。) An example can give the details of this argument. (第三段又例）Objectively speaking, there .is some truth in both arguments.X is not wrong in itself . I personally think the (dis)advantages of X overweigh the disadvantagesadvantages. What matters most is to make full use of X, maximizing the advantages of X and minimizing the disadvantages of X.四 解决方法型e.g. The Problems I Have in My English StudyHow I Finance My College Education提纲：1。给出的现状或论点 2怎样解决（或先分析原因，再提出解决方案） 3. 自身体会Nowadays, more and more young people begin to be aware of the importance of A. So do I. However, to solve the problems of _ is no easy task.The main obstacle is _. Besides, we have to confess that _. After repeated failures and persistent efforts, I finally understand that _. (Then, how should we face this problem? Here are some suggestions that may be of some help to you.) In order to _, we must _. Of course, to _ is also necessary.To conclude, _. As long as we try our best and follow the principles, we will surely _. 段首句1. _, just like many other things, is preferred by _. While being attacked by the idea that _, some people consider _. They point out that _.2. _ is now _, and at the same time _. These two factors have caused _. Then what shall we do to solve _ in the face of such a situation?3. Man is now facing a big problem _, which is becoming more and more serious. First, _. Second, _.4. Nowadays although more and more people _, still there are some who think _. They may think _.5. _ has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. It has brought us a lot of benefits but created some serious problems as well.6. In present days, _ has become _. However, there are both positive and negative points associated with it.7. There is an old saying, _. It is the experience of our forefathers. However, it is correct in many cases even today.8. People tend to take hostile attitude towards _ and _. We will know which is better that the other if we see both sides of the story in the following paragraphs.9. Some people prefer to _. In their opinion, _. In addition, _. Nevertheless, nowadays, _ has become more and more common.10. In recent years, there is a general tendency to _. According to a study, there is _, compared with _ last year. Why _?中间段落句1. Just as people say that everything has two sides and this is no exception. Its good sides are as follows.2. A great number of solutions are being offered. Some people suggest that _. Others argue that _.3. Its an urgent task for us to change this unfavorable situation: _.4. Factors can be of many different kinds. Some attribute it to _.While others owe it to _. Below are a few types of situations which may lead to _.5. However, just like anything else, _ also brings us some problems. For example, _. To make things worse, it _.6. There are several measures for us to adopt. First, we can _, since there are a number of advantages in _. Another solution is to _.7. In order to _, you must have a good command of _, otherwise how can you _? Even if you want to _, _ is important as well. With _, youll encounter fewer troubles.8. It is high time that something was done about it. For example, _. In addition, _. All these measures will certainly _.9. In fact, some strong points of _ are reasonable as well. One of the most dominant is _. A good case in point is _. Another advantage might be given easily here: _.10. In order to get _, you should first of all _. When you fail, you should never lose heart. Instead, you must _. In addition, you should _. Finally, it is important for you to _. If you follow these principles, you will certainly achieve _ someday.结尾