托福作文_写作错误.ppt

AcademicWriting 7类常见错误 1 省略 Wealthyparentsshouldn tspoiltheirchildren Shouldn tI mCan tHe s Shouldn t shouldnotI m IamCan t cannotHe s heis hehashewas 2 Informallanguage Today newspapersreportlotsofcrimesinhorribledetails lotsofahostofavastnumberofnumerousagreatdealofagreatamountof 可数 不可数 3 Spelling 英美词汇差异 Theimpactoftourismonthesetraditionalneighbourhoodsmustbeanalysed Theimpactoftourismonthesetraditionalneighborhoodsmustbeanalyzed 英式美式seze ceanalyseanalyzecivilisecivilizepractisepracticeglobaliseglobalize v 英式美式ourorcolourcolorneighbourneighborfavouritefavorite n 英式美式长短storeystorydialoguedialogarchaeologyarcheologyjewellryjewelrytravellertraveler 词汇长短 4 词汇没有特色 例句1Seriouscrimesharmpeople slives severe offense criminalact damage destroyundermine jeopardize individuals man mankind serious crime harm people 例句2TheadvantagesofspaceresearcharemorethanitsDisadvantages 例句2TheadvantagesofspaceresearcharemorethanitsDisadvantages bemorethan outweigh 例句3OurworldisbecomingmoreandmorereliantonmodernTechnology moreandmore increasingly adjonarise 5 句子无衔接 1 Theenvironmentisbecomingworse Wemustworktogethertodealwiththissituation 分析句间关系加衔接词 Theenvironmentisbecomingworse therefore wemustworktogethertodealwiththissituation 2 Opinionsfromdifferentpeoplewillhelpusfinishourworkbetterandfaster theiropinionscanserveasasoundinformationchannel whichleadstoabettersolutiontoaproblem 2 Opinionsfromdifferentpeoplewillhelpusfinishourworksbetterandfaster becausetheiropinionscanserveasasoundinformationchannel whichleadstoabettersolutiontoaproblem 6 感情色彩过于强烈loveletter式写作 So weshouldmakesurethatglobalizationdoesnotharmourowntraditionalculture 改 So不要和should连用 感情强烈 therefore 7 宗教作为引言 WemustbefriendlytoothersbecausetheBiblesays treatyourneighborsasyouwouldliketobetreated 引言 名人名言 公认的观点Bible圣经 信仰 非逻辑推理 满分网免费赠书活动 限时抢报价值298元的TOEFL SAT作文批改卡免费领取猴哥SAT词汇蓝