英语议论文写作指导(对比分析---正反观点).ppt

议论文写作指导对比分析正反观点 正反观点对比对同一件事情 人们常有不同的看法 即正反两种观点 在写作时 常使用一般现在时 写作格式一般是 提出问题 两种不同观点 对两种不同观点的论据 理由 逐项作对比 有时题目会要求说出自己的观点 可在结尾段加上自己的观点并简要说明理由 最好不要重复前面的已谈到的理由 写作方式一般采用集中比较 在写作时可用以下句型来组织完成整篇文章 正反观点对比常用句型 1 Wehavea heated discussionabout 我们对 进行了一次讨论 We vehadadiscussionaboutwhetheranentrancefeeshouldbechargedforparks 2 Wehavehadasurveyon 我们对 开展了一次调查 We vehadasurveyonwhetherstudentsshouldbeallowedtocarrymobilephonestoschools 3 Opinionsaredividedonthequestion 在这个问题上意见有分歧 4 Opinionsaremainlydividedintotwogroups 有两种不同意见 5 Othershavedifferentopinions 其他人有不同看法 6 Sixtypercentofthestudentsarefortheidea whilefortypercentofthestudentsthinkotherwise 有60 的学生支持这个观点 然而有40 的学生则不这样认为 7 Sixtypercentofthestudentsthinkitnecessaryto butfortypercentofthestudentsdon tthinkso 60 的学生认为 是必须的 而40 的学生则不这样认为 8 Ontheonehand Ontheotherhand 一方面 另一方面 在对某一观点作进一步论证时 可用下列句型 1 What smore 还有就是 What smore wecangetagoodknowledgeofthecultureandsocialcustomsofthecountrywherewestudy aswellasimproveourEnglish 2 Besides 除此之外 Somestudentscannotdisciplinethemselves Besides it sfartooexpensivetostudyabroad whichisaloadtothefamily 当然在提出多个论据时 也可用First Second Third 来列举论据 80 studentssupportit Theprogrammeiscreativeandunique Itprovidesastageforyoungpeopletoshowtheirtalents Itletsyoungpeoplegainmoreconfidencethanever 20 studentsthinkthattheprogrammemisleadstheyouthtosomedegree Letthemfeelsuccessdoesn tcomefromhardwork Beingyourselfisn tthesameasbeingdifferentfromothers Iamforthisprogramme Aslongasourstudyisnotdisturbed wecanwatchit 80 studentssupportit Theprogrammeiscreativeandunique Inaddition itprovidesastageforyoungpeopletoshowtheirtalents andhelpsyoungpeoplegainmoreconfidencethanever Onthecontrary 20 studentsthinkthattheprogrammemisleadstheyouthtosomedegree What sworse theywillfeelsuccessdoesn tcomefromhardwork Afterall beingyourselfisn tthesameasbeingdifferentfromothersinbehavioursorappearance Inmyopinion Iamforthisprogramme Aslongasourstudyisnotdisturbed wecanwatchit Deareditor Iamwritingtotellyouaboutmyclassmates opinionsaboutaTVprogramme SuperGirl Opinionsvaryfrompersontoperson 80 ofthemareforthisTVprogramme Theyarguethatthisprogrammenotonlyprovidestheyoungwithastagetoshowtheirtalentsbutalsogivesachancetothemtobuilduptheirself confidence What smore thisprogrammeiscreativeandadvocatespersonality whichmeetstheyouth sneed Onthecontrary 20 ofthemareagainstthisprogramme Reasonscanbelistedasfollows Foronething itmisleadstheyouthstosomedegree perhapstheywillmisunderstandthattheycansucceedwithoutanyhardwork Foranother beingyourselfdoesn tmeanbeingdifferentfromother sbehaviourorappearance However everycoinhastwosides thisprogrammeisnotanexception ithasit sownadvantagesanddisadvantages Yours LiMing 常见错误 拼写1 Theiropinionaredevidedonthisprogramme Theiropinionsvaryfrompersontoperson Theiropinionsaredividedonthisprogramme 2 Itmakepeoplefeelthattheycansuccesswithoutmakeanyeffort Itmakespeoplefeelthattheycansucceedwithoutmakinganyeffort Itmakespeoplefeelthattheycanachievesuccesswithouthardwork 3 Itwillmisledtheyounginsomeways Itwillmisleadtheyounginsomeways inaway tosomeextent tosomedegree 4 Iteffectsourstudy Itaffectsourstudy Ithasabadeffect influenceonourstudy 5 Onthecountry somestudentagainstedtheprogramme Onthecontrary somestudentsareagainsttheprogramme somestudentsarenotinfavourofthisprogramme somestudentsdonotenjoythisprogramme 搭配 词性 Intheotherhands 20 studentsdon tagreetothem Ontheotherhand 20 ofthestudentsdon tagreewiththem Ontheotherhand otherstudentshavedifferentideas 2 Lettheyoungertofindmoreself confident Lettheyoung theyouth youngpeoplegain buildupself confidence Helptheyoungbemoreself confident equiptheyoungwithself confidence 3 Thisprogrammeisnotonlycreationbutpersonality Thisprogrammeisnotonlycreativebutunique Thisprogrammeiscreativeanditappealsto advocatespersonality 高级 句式 Thereare80 studentssupporttheSuperGirl 80 studentssupporttheSuperGirl Thereare80 studentswhosupporttheSuperGirl Thereare80 studentssupportingtheSuperGirl 2 Itprovidesthestagetoyoungpeopletoshowourtalents Itprovidesyoungpeoplewithastagetodemonstratetheirtalents Itprovidesastageforyoungpeopletoshowtheirtalents offeropportunitiesto givechancesto Deareditor Iamwritingtotellyouaboutmyclassmates opinionsaboutaTVprogramme SuperGirl Opinionsaredivided 80 ofthestudentsareinfavorofthisprogramme Theysaythatthisprogramme SuperGirl appealsthatweshouldhavepersonalities Itnotonlyoffersusastagetoshowourselves butalsoletsusfindmoreconfidence Onthecontrary otherstudentshavedifferentideas Theyholdtheviewthatthisprogrammewillmisleadteenagersinsomeway becausesomepeoplehaveafeelingthatwecansucceedwithoutanyhardwork ThoughSuperGirladvocatespersonalities itdoesn tmeanthatthisprogrammehasnothingincommonwithothers Fromwhathasbeenmentionedabove wecanreasonablydrawtheconclusionthateverycoinhastwosides Inmyopinion SuperGirlisjustlikeadouble edgedsword Havingweighedupbothsides Ifindthatitsbenefitsfaroutweighitsdisadvantages Wemustmakeproperuseofthisprogrammeforthesakeof 出于 起见 keepingtidewithsociety Yourstruly LiMing 最近 你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论 讨论的主题是 公园要不要收门票 请你根据下表提供的信息 给报社写一封信 客观地介绍讨论情况 注意 1 信的开头已为你写好 2 词数 100左右 3 参考词汇 门票 entrancefeeDearEditor I mwritingtotellyouaboutthediscussionwe vehadaboutwhetheranentrancefeeshouldbechargedforparks 2002年高考题范文 DearEditor I mwritingtotellyouaboutthediscussionwe vehadaboutwhetheranentrancefeeshouldbechargedforparks 提出问题 Opinionsaredividedonthequestion 60 ofthestudentsareagainsttheideaofentrancefee Theybelieveapublicparkshouldbefreeofcharge Peopleneedaplacewheretheycanrestandenjoythemselves Changingentrancefeeswillnodoubtkeepsomepeopleaway Whatismore itwillbecomenecessarytobuildgatesandwalls whichwilldoharmtotheappearanceofacity 过渡句 观点一 论据一 论据二 Ontheotherhand 40 thinkthatfeesshouldbechargedbecauseyouneedmoneytopaygardenersandotherworkers andtobuyplantsandyoungtrees Theysuggest however feesshouldbechargedlow YourstrulyLiHua可以看出 这类文章的写作 首先要提出问题 即双方讨论的问题 接下来提出观点一 并用一系列论据进行阐明 说明完观点一之后 再提出观点二 继续用论据进行说明 如果需要说明自己的观点 可接下来说明自己的观点 观点二 论据一 论据二 对比类写作实战模版 议论文的框架 对比观点题型 1 要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法 1 有一些人认为 2 另一些人认为 3 我的看法 Thetopicof 主题 isbecomingmoreandmorepopularrecently Therearetwosidesofopinionsaboutit SomepeoplesayAistheirfavorite Theyholdtheirviewforthereasonof 支持A的理由一 Whatismore 理由二 Moreover 理由三 WhileothersthinkthatBisabetterchoiceinthefollowingthreereasons Firstly 支持B的理由一 Secondly besides 理由二 Thirdly finally 理由三 Frommypointofview Ithink 我的观点 Thereasonisthat 原因 Asamatteroffact therearesomeotherreasonstoexplainmychoice Forme theformerissurelyawisechoice 2 给出一个观点 要求考生反对这一观点Somepeoplebelievethat 观点一 Forexample theythink 举例说明 Anditwillbringthem 为他们带来的好处 Inmyopinion Ineverthinkthisreasoncanbethepoint Foronething 我不同意该看法的理由一 Foranotherthing 反对的理由之二 FormallwhatIhavesaid Iagreetothethoughtthat 我对文章所讨论主题的看法 3 不同观点列举型 选择型 Thereisawidespreadconcernovertheissuethat 作文题目 Butitiswellknownthattheopinionconcerningthishottopicvariesfrompersontoperson Amajorityofpeoplethinkthat 观点一 Intheirviewsthereare2factorscontributingtothisattitudeasfollows inthefirstplace 原因一 Furthermore inthesecondplace 原因二 Soitgoeswithoutsayingthat 观点一 People however differintheiropinionsonthismatter Somepeopleholdtheideathat 观二 Intheirpointofview ontheonehand 原因一 Ontheotherhand 原因二 Therefore thereisnodoubtthat 观点二 AsfarasIamconcerned Ifirmlysupporttheviewthat 观点一或二 Itisnotonlybecause butalsobecause Themore themore Practiceinclass 面对繁重的高中学习任务 高中生对参加学校活动有着不同的看法 请以TakingPartinSchoolActivities为题 用英文写一篇120词左右的短文 着重介绍两种不同的观点和态度 最后谈谈你个人的看法 很多学生持拥护态度 认为既可以学到实践知识 又可以得到放松 不少学生漠不关心 认为学生就应该学习 学校活动与学习无关 同时嘲讽积极参加学校活动的学生 标题和开头已给 不计入总词数 词数 120词左右 TakingPartinSchoolActivitiesAsforschoolactivities studentsmainlyholdtwoviews Mainerrors 1 时态 现在的时态2 Therearemanystudentssupportit Therearemanystudentswhosupportit Therearemanystudentssupportingit3 要有清晰的 完整的句子的痕迹Thoseinfavorof thinkitisgoodforus Becauseitcanhelpusgetrelaxed Mainerrors Thoseinfavorof thinkitisgoodforus becauseitcanhelpusgetrelaxed Thoseinfavorof thinkitisgoodforus Itisbecauseitcanhelpusgetrelaxed 清晰的句子的痕迹Itcanhelpusmakemanyfriends theywillgiveusmanyproposer Itcanhelpusmakemanyfriends Theywillgiveusmanyproposer Itcanhelpusmakemanyfriends andtheywillgiveusmanyproposer Mainerrors TakingPartinSchoolActivitiesAsforschoolactivities studentsmainlyholdtwoviews Manystudentsareveryenthusiasticaboutschoolactivitiesbecausetheythinkthatlearningfromtextbooksisnottheironlytaskandtheyshouldtakeanychancetogetsomepracticalknowledge Besides afterlonghours study theycanrelaxthemselvesbyparticipatinginschoolactivities However alargegroupofstudentstakelittleinterestinthemandspendmostoftheirtimeonstudy Theybelievethattheyshouldmakefulluseoftimetostudyandthatschoolactivitieshavelittletodowiththeirfurtherdevelopment Thussometimestheyevenlaughatthosewhotakeanactivepartinschoolactivities AsfarasIamconcerned Ipreferthefirstview Ontheonehand wecanlearnagreatdealfromotherstudentswemeetinactivities Furthermore modernsocietyrequiresmanyqualitiesofyoungstudents so bookworms can tkeepupwiththetimes requiressth ofsb 要求某人某事 TakingPartinSchoolActivitiesAsforschoolactivities studentsmainlyholdtwoviews Somestudentsareinclinedtoapproveofit Theybelievethatbytakingpartinschoolactivities studentscannotonlylearnsomepracticalknowledge butalsorelaxthemselves However otherspaylittleattentiontoit Obviously theythinkstudyisstudents onlytask Whatthismeansisthatschoolactivitieshavenothingtodowithstudy Besides theysneeratthosewhotakepartinitactively AsforasIamconcerned theformeropinionholdsmoreweight Ontopoftheabove mentionedpositiveeffectsitmightbringabout theschoolactivitiesalsoenrichourschoollifeandhelpustounderstandeachotherbetter So wecannotemphasizetheimportanceoftakingpartinschoolactivitiesenough 如何把句子写得丰富些 很多学生持拥护态度 认为既可以学到实践知识 又可以得到放松 Somestudentsareinclinedtoapproveofit Theybelievethatbytakingpartinschoolactivities studentscannotonlylearnsomepracticalknowledge butalsorelaxthemselves Manystudentsareveryenthusiasticaboutschoolactivitiesbecausetheythinkthatlearningfromtextbooksisnottheironlytaskandtheyshouldtakeanychancetogetsomepracticalknowledge Besides afterlonghours study theycanrelaxthemselvesbyparticipatinginschoolactivities Homework 根据教育部通知 从2007年9月1日起 中小学生每天要跳校园集体舞 通知发出后 在社会上引起了热烈的讨论 假如你是李华 请根据下表提供的内容给 ChinaDaily 编辑写一封信反映讨论情况 并提出自己的看法和理由 注意 1 词数100 120 2 开头已写好 不计入总词数 参考词汇 集体舞groupdancing社交能力sociability Deareditor TheDepartmentofEducationannounced 能锻炼身体 丰富校园生活begoodforhealthandcanenrichourschoollife培养社交能力improvetheirsociability 不能达到锻炼身体的目的can thelpstudentstokeepfit DearEditor TheDepartmentofEducationannouncedinJune 2007thatfromSept 1 2007primaryandsecondaryschoolstudentswillhavedanceclass whichhasledtoaheateddebate Somepeoplethinkgroupdancingisgoodforhealthandcanenrichourschoollife Ithelpsstudentsunderstandeachotherbetter Alsoitcanhelpstudentsimprovetheirsociability Itisahealthymeansofcommunication Butotherpeopleholdtheoppositeview Theyfeelthatinthecountryside theteachersdon thaveenoughexperienceinteachingdancingandalsothereisn tenoughroomforstudentstolearndancing Lastbutnotleast groupdancingisjustaformoraperformance whichcan thelpstudentstokeepfit Astome groupdancingmayleadtoanincreaseofboysandgirlsfallinginlove witheachother oncetheyhavemorechancesforphysicalinteraction Yours LiHua Homework 假设你是林明 你班最近就 大学生是否应该经济独立 的话题展开了讨论