高中英语开放式作文“两步走”.ppt

英语开放作文 两步走 大竹县石河中学杨涛 2009 InyourspokenEnglishclass yourteachershowsyouthefollowingpicture Youareaskedtodescribethepictureandexplainhowyouunderstandit 2008 InanEnglishspeechcompetition youareaskedtodescribethefollowingpictureandexplaintothejudgeshowyouunderstandit 2007 InyourEnglishclass youareaskedtodescribethefollowingpictureandexplaintoyourclassmateshowyouunderstandit Thecharacteristicsofanopen endingcomposition DescriptionandunderstandingOpenendingNotlessthan50wordsTense present Howtowriteanopen endingcomposition 1 Asimplebutnecessarydescription 2 Differentbutreasonableideas 主题明确 健康向上 逻辑清晰 交际得体 3 Goodlanguageandhandwriting 围绕主题来描述 暗示主题起好步 理解主题合情理 展开主题合逻辑 1 描述 围绕主题进行简要描述 结尾暗示主题 2 理解 主题明确 适当展开 1 向现实生活展开 结合自己 2 向正面展开 3 向反面展开 Howtoreadthepicture 看两者之间的关系看人物的动作特点看画面的内在含义 2007 Beijing 2008 Beijing 2009 Beijing 常见的第一段开头语 Ascanbeseenfromthepicture Aswecanseefromthepicture Whatavivid interestingpicture Atthefirstsightofthepicture weseeanuglyoldman but Inthepicture wecansee Whatattractsusinthepictureisthat 常见的第二段开头语 Thispictureintendstotellusthat Thispicturemakesanattempttoshowusthat Itisobvious clear evident apparentthat Personally Ithinkthat Inmypointofview thispicturetriestotellusthat Ithink that Whatimpressesusmostinthepictureisthat Inthispicture amotherbirdstaysinhernestinabigtree watchingherbabiesflyingaway Ithinkthemotherbirdmustbeveryproudforherchildren whoareabletofindtheirownfoodnow Butshemayalsofeelasenseoflosssincetheynolongerneedherday to daycareastheyusedto Thispictureshowsverywellthemixedfeelingsofparentswhenwatchingtheirchildrengrowup Formyparents thingswillbemucheasier Wewillsetupafamilyblogtopostourphotos journals andevenaudios OnceIleaveforcollege wecanconvenientlyshareourexperiencesandsupporteachothernomatterwhereweare Their nest willneverbeempty FromthepictureIcanseeapairofproudcompassesandahard workingpencil Thecompassesarebig drawingacirclewithease whilethepencilissmall drawingalinewithgreateffort Ithinkthecompassesarereasonabletobeproudbecausenooneelsecandothejobbetter Atthesametime however heshouldrealizethepencilhashisownadvantages Thepencilcandoothershapesbetterthanthecompasses evenpictures Soinmyopinion whileweareconfidentinourselves weshouldrecognizestrengthsinothersandshowduerespectforthem Whataninterestingpicture AWesternyoungman sittingatatable isreadytoeatabowlofnoodles HeisholdingtwoforksthesamewayasweChineseholdchopsticks Heistryingsohardtopickupthenoodlesthatheissweatingalot Atfirstglance Ithinkit sabitfunny forweChinesetakeforgrantedthatchopsticksarethetoolsforeatingnoodles Themaninthepictureistryingtocopyus Obviouslyheisdoingitthehardway Maybeusingoneforkwilldoabetterjob Inmyopinion wedon tneedtocopyother swaysofthinking Sometimesasimplerwayofdoingthingsmaybeabetterway Tryyourpen 2006北京高考题YouandyourAustralianfriendJimarevisitingacitywhereyouseethestreetsculpturesasshownbelow YouandJimarediscussingwhattheartististryingtosay NowyouaretellingJimhowyouunderstandthispiecesofartandwhatmakesyouthinkso 提示词 雕塑sculpture笔记本电脑laptop 某城市街头雕塑 Ithinktheartistwantstoshowchangesinthecity ThemanstandsfortheoldgenerationinChina heiswearingold fashionedclothesthatdatebacktothebeginningofthetwentiethcentury heislookingatthelaptopingreatcuriosity unabletofigureoutwhatitis Thegirl ontheotherhand istotallydifferent shehaslonghairandwearafashionableshortskirt Whilethemandoesn tknowanythingaboutthelaptop sheplayswithitskillfully Thestrikingdifferencesbetweenthetwoshowrapidchangesinpeople slifeinChina 2009海淀二模 Inthepicture aboyistryinghardtopushforwardthehourhandoftheclockwhileanoldmanismakingagreatefforttopushbackwardtheminutehandofthesameclock Bothofthemaretryingtheirbest butintheoppositedirections Thepictureshowsdifferentattitudesoftheoldandtheyoungtowardstime Theoldwishthattimecouldslowdown becauseforthem timeislife Thyknowwellhowimportanttimeis Astimeflies theirlifewillgraduallycometoanend Ontheotherhand theyoungwanttimetospeedupjustbecausetheyareeagertogrowupsoon Theyhaven trealizedtheimportanceoftimeastheolddo However timetreatseveryoneequally Itcangoneitherfasternormoreslowly Andjustasthesayinggoes Timeandtideswaitfornomen Therefore asyoungpeople weshouldmakethebestofourpresenttimetofulfillourdreamsorwewillregretitinthefuture 2008海淀二模 Inthepicture aboyisabsorbedinfishing whileothersareleaving empty handed Finallyhiseffortspayoff andhegetsonbigfish Actually therearestillmorefishinthewater Ifthosewhoareheadingbackcouldstaylonger theywouldsurelygetagoodcatch Sofromthechildren sdifferentbehaviors wecanseethatsuccessneedsaperson spatiencebecausepatienceplaysanimportantroleintheprocessofachievinggoals Sticktowhatwearedoing andthegainwegetwillbebeyondimaginationjustlikethefishleftinthepool 2009海淀高三二模 Inthepicture wecanseeacircleofbricksstandingnexttoeachother Thefirstbrickontherightisfallingdown causingthefallingofthenextone Intheend thewholecirclewillberuined Thepictureconveysamessagethatthesuccessofaprojectdependsoneachindividualstep Wheneachindividualstepisgivenfullattention itisquitelikelythatthewholeprojectwillbeasuccess Inthesameway amistakeinonestepmayleadtoacompletefailureofthewholeproject asisshowninthepicture Soeachindividualstepcanmakethedifferencebetweensuccessandfailure Weshouldtryourbesteverystepoftheway 北京四中模拟题 Inthispicturewecanseethatthemanisdreamingtohavechancestosucceed toownabighouseoracar tobetravelinginmanyplacesintheworldandsoon Buthenevertriestorealizethemonlylyingtheretohaveaday dream Inoursocietytherearealsosomepeoplelikehim Theywanttohaveachancebuttheyneverworkhardandmanagetocatchit Chances successandotherthingswillbegiventothehard workingpeople Everyonewantstosucceedandhaveabetterlife sofromnowonlet stryhardnomatterhowmanydifficultiesandfailureswewillmeetontheway 2008海淀一模 2009海淀一模 Asisshowninthepicture apersoniswalkingontheChinesecharacter I withconfidence Althoughthereisalongwindingroadtogo he shestillpersistsinhis herownway Inmyopinion thepicturetriestotellusthatlifeislikeajourney duringwhichwemaymeetdifficultiesandchallenges Whateverdifficultieswemayface weshouldholdontoourowndreams Itisweourselveswhoinfluenceoursuccess happinessandfuture Wearesupposedtobeself determinedandself confident Thuswecanachieveourgoals Inthepicture fourpeoplearetryingtofillavatwithwater Twomenarecarryingwaterwhiletwoothersarepouringwaterintothevat However withsomanyloopholesatthebottomofthevat they llneverstoreanywater becausenoonetriestofilltheholes Ks5uItremindsmeoftheproblemsinourstudy Whilestudying wealwaysgogreatlengthtoreadmorebooks todomoreexercises However afterwefinishtheexercises weseldompayattentiontothemistakeswe vemade nordowetrytocorrectthemandputthemdown Therefore a hole isleft Daybyday the holes orrathertheshortages getmoreandmore Nomatterhowmanybookswe veread wehavenevera