高考作文华丽变身.ppt

高考作文的华丽变身 句式篇 思考 什么样的作文会成为一篇好作文 无遗漏信息点 审题 篇章条理清晰 分段和过渡词句式多样地道的高级词汇和恰当的词组 思考 你能想到的好句式有哪些 推荐高考写作10种句式 一 主动句与被动句的互换 操作难度 写作效果 1 RiceisgrowninthesouthofChina people 2 Theyhaveprintedoneandahalfmillioncopiesofthedictionarysince1986 PeoplegrowriceinthesouthofChina Oneandahalfmillioncopiesofthedictionaryhavebeenprintedsince1986 二 将陈述句改为感叹句 操作难度 写作效果 1 Topreventthepollutionisveryimportant How 2 Sheisaclevergirl What Howimportantitistopreventthepollution whataclevergirlsheis 三 将陈述句改为倒装句 操作难度 写作效果 1 IcouldhardlyunderstandtheimportanceofEnglishatthattime 2 Wedidnotrealizeourmistakesuntilatthattime HardlycouldIunderstandtheimportanceofEnglishatthattime Notuntilatthattimedidwerealizeourmistakes 四 将简单句改为强调句 操作难度 写作效果 1 Smokingdidgreatharmtohishealth 2 Ourmoneyisearnedthroughhardworkbyourparents Itwassmokingthatdidgreatharmtohishealth Itisthroughhardworkthatourmoneyisearnedbyourparents 五 将两个简单句合并为并列句 操作难度 写作效果 1 Youcandoit Icandoit Oneofusmustdoit youImustdoit 2 Iwanttobuythisbike Idon thaveenoughmoney Iwanttobuythisbike Idon thaveenoughmoney Either or but 六 将两个简单句合并为复合句 操作难度 写作效果 1 同位语和同位语从句 常用于描述人物 地点等介绍性文段 1 LiuXiangisanexcellentathlete HewonthefirstprizeinMen s110HurdleRaceinthe2004OlympicGames 用同位语改写 wonthefirstprizeinMen s110HurdleRaceinthe2004OlympicGames 2 Thewordistrue Thepresidentwillgiveourschoolaspeech istruethepresidentwillgiveourschoolaspeech 2 定语从句 限制性 非限制性 1 The2008OlympicGameswillbeheldinBeijing anditssloganisOneWorld OneDream The2008OlympicGames 2 Inmyopinion theGreatWallandtheSummerPalacearewellworthvisiting Inmyopinion theGreatWallandtheSummerPalace 3 Yesterday wewenttotheEastGate andweboughtalotofclothes Yesterday wewenttotheEastGate WhosesloganisOneWorld OneDream willbeheldinBJ arethetwoplaceswhicharewellworthvisiting Whereweboughtalotofclothes 3 主语从句1 Hiswonderfulperformanceonthestageimpressedme mostwashiswonderfulperformanceonthestage 2 Itsatisfiedme Ourschooldininghallprovidesuswithalargevarietyofkindsofdishes ourschooldininghallprovidesuswithalargevarietyofkindsofdishes 3 Ilearnedfromthestorythataslongaswehavepatience confidenceandperseverance wecanrealizeourdreams aslongaswehavepatience confidenceandperseverance wecanrealizeourdreams Whatimpressedme Whatsatisfiedmeisthat WhatIhavelearntfromthestoryisthat 推荐句型 Whatsurprises astonished satisfied impressedmeisthat WhatIwouldliketosuggest advise putforwardisthat Whatmattersmostisthat WhatIlearn concludefromthestoryisthat 4 表语从句 推荐句型 isnolongerwhatitusedtobe 我的家乡不再像以前那样了 Myhometownisnolongerwhatitusedtobe 5 状语从句 推荐句型 结果 程度so that such that 让步nomatterhow what when where whatever however whenever wherever时间 wasdoing when 1 不管前面有多少困难 我们都要学会独立的克服他们 weshouldlearntoovercomethemindependently 2 我正沿着马路走 突然我听到有人叫我 IalongtheroadsuddenlyIheardmynamecalled Nomatterhowmanydifficultiesthereareaheadofus waswalking when 七 将两个简单句合并为一个由which引导的非限制性定语从句操作难度 写作效果 1 Recentlymanymiddleschoolstudentsspendtheirmoneyonunnecessarythings Differentpeoplehavedifferentopinionsaboutit Recentlymanymiddleschoolstudentsspendtheirmoneyonunnecessarythings aboutdifferentpeoplehavedifferentopinions 2 Manyboyslearntosmoke Itdoesharmtotheirhealth Manyboyslearntosmoke which Whichdoesharmtotheirhealth 八 It作形式主语或形式宾语句型操作难度 写作效果 1 Youpretendtoknowwhatyoudon tknow It snogood 2 ItiseasytogetonwithPam Ifind It snogoodpretendingtoknowwhatyoudon tknow IfinditeasytogetonwithPam 九 分词结构代替状语从句操作难度 写作效果 1 Ifyouworkharder youwilldobetterintheexamnexttime youwilldobetterintheexamnexttime 2 Becausemyfriendwasfrightenedoflosinghisjob hesaidnothingtothepolice myfriendsaidnothingtothepolice Workinghard Frightenedoflosinghisjob 十 with引导的短语或者复合结构操作难度 写作效果 With 宾语 adj adv 介词短语 todo doing done常用句型withapopulationof withatotalareaof withalonghistoryof years 1 这个地区占地2000平方千米 人口10万 Thisareacoversanareaof2000squarekilometers 2 我们学校周围种了很多花和树 吸引了大量的学生来参观 itattractsalargenumberofpeople 3 没有做完作业 这个小孩不敢去上学 theboydarednotgotoschool 4 这两个男人早早就睡了 蜡烛烧了一个晚上 Thetwomenwenttobedearly withapopulationof100 000 Withsomanytreesandflowerssurroundingourschool withcandlesburninganightlong Withhomeworknotfinished 实战操练 最近 你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论 讨论的主题是 公园要不要收门票 请你根据下表提供的信息 给报社写一封信 客观地介绍讨论情况 注意 1 信的开头已为你写好2 词数 100左右 3 参考词汇 门票 entrancefee 1 60 的同学认为公园不应该收费 Sixtypercentofthestudentsthinkthattheparkshouldnotchargeentrancefees Sixtypercentofthestudentsholdtheviewthatentrancefeesshouldnotbecharged 被动句 Sixtypercentofthestudentshavetheideathatpeopleshouldbeallowedtoenterparkswithoutcharge Intheopinionof60 ofthestudents peoplecanenterparksforfree 2 公园是公众休闲的地方 Aparkisaplaceforthepublictorestandenjoythemselves Aparkisaplacewherepeoplerestandrelax 定语从句 3 如收门票 需建大门 围墙 会影响城市形象 Ifentrancefeesarecharged itwillbenecessarytobuildgatesandwalls whichwillaffecttheappearanceofthecity which指代上文 Withentrancefeescharged itwillbenecessarytobuildgatesandwalls whichwilldoharmtotheappearanceofthecity 4 40 的同学认为应收门票 但票价不宜高 40 ofthestudentsthinkthatentrancefeesarenecessary butthepricesshouldnotbehigh Thereare40 ofthestudentswhothinkthatentrancefeesshouldbecharged butfeesshouldbelow 定语从句 Intheopinionof40 ofthestudents entrancefeesshouldbechargedlow 5 门票收入支付园林工人工资 购买新花木 Theincomefromentrancefeesisusedtopaythegardenersandbuynewplantsandflowers Themoneyfromentrancefeesismadeuseoftopaygardenworkersandbuynewplants Withmoneyfromentrancefees thegardenersarepaidandnewplantsaswellasyoungtreesarebought With的短语 被动句 DearEditor Opinionsaredividedonthequestion 60 ofthestudentsareagainsttheideaofentrancefees Theybelievedapublicparkshouldbefreeofcharge Peopleneedaplacewheretheycanrestandenjoythemselves Withoutdoubt Charging