精校版2001-2015年全国卷英语短文改错(含答案).doc

20012013年全国卷英语短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。2001年（全国卷II）Like most of my schoolmates, I have either brothers nor sisters. In any other words, I am an only child. My parents love me dearly of course and will do all they can make sure that I get a good education. They did not want me to do any work at family; they want me to devote all my time to my studies so that Ill get good marks in all my subject. We may be one family and live under a same roof, but we do not seem to get much time to talk about together. It looks as if my parents treat me as a visitor and a guest. Do they really understand their own daughter? What things are in other homes, I wonder.2002年（全国卷II）Last week my parents and I took a two-day trip to Emei Mountain in Sichuan. As everyone knows, its famous mountain with all kinds of plants and animal. The weather was fine. It was about noon we arrived at the foot of the mountain. The three of them were very excited. As we climbed the mountain, we fed monkeys, visiting temples and told stories. On the way I was busy taking picture since the scenery was so beautiful. The time passes quickly. Evening came down. We spent the night in a hotel at the top of the mountain. The food was expensive and the service was good. I was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment my head touched the pillow.2003年（全国卷II）When I first learned write in English, I ran into many difficulties. The main problem was in that I always thought in Chinese and tried to translate anything into English. My teacher advised me to keep my diary. I followed her and should put down 100 words or so each day. Soon I began to enjoytalk to myself on paper as I was learning to express me in simple English. One day I wrote a little story and showed to my teacher. She liked it very much and reads it to the class. All said the story was a good one . Their word were a great encouragement to me. 2004年（全国卷II）Dear Ralph,Im a newcomer here of a small town. I would describe myself as shy and quietly. Before my classmates, it seems always difficult for me to do things well as them. Im sure they will laugh to me and see me as fool. So I feel unhappy every day. Besides, I have few friends. I dont know that they dont like to talk with me. Sometimes, we talked to each other very well in class, but after class we become stranger at once. I am trying to improve the situation since it doesnt seem to work. Can you tell me about what I should do? 2005 年（全国卷III）Dear Mr. Brown,I am writing to thank you with your kind help.Before you came to teach us, I had not interest inEnglish. My pronunciation was terribly. I couldonly speak a few words. But one and a half year later, I now think English fun to learn. I got a lot of from yourencouraging words. I will always remember what yousaid, “If you try to, you can be No. 1!” I hope youvehad pleasant journey homeand will come to Chinaagain sometimes in the future. I will write againand send you the photos we take together. 2006年（全国卷II）We had guests last night who have not stayed in a B&B hotel ago. They did not want breakfast because that they were going out early in the morning. They came back lately and had some tea. I came in the living room and saw one of them just go through the kitchen door but turn on the light. He was looking for a glass the cupboard. He had no ideas that the kitchen was not for guests. I just smiled to me and thought, “What can I do? We are guests after all.”2006年（全国卷III）An American and a Frenchman decided to cross the sea between France and Englandin the balloon in 1784. High over the water, they discover a hole in the balloon. The hole became bigger and bigger. The air keeps the balloon up was escaping quick and the balloon was coming up. The two men threw all their equipment into the water to make the balloon light.It started to rise higher again. So it was still too close to the water. Finally, the menthrew away most of his clothes to save themselves. The crowd waiting for to greet them in England was very surprised see this when the balloon landed in front of them.2007年（全国卷II）Dear Grandpa,Thank you for your letter. My school is organizing a basketball team and theres just a chance which I can join it. Im little of course, but terribly quick and bravely. While the others are jumping about in the air, I can run under my legs and get the ball. It will be lots of fun for practicing out in the playgroundin the afternoon with the tree around us all red and yellow and everybody laughing and shout.These are the happier girls Ive ever seen and Im the happiest in all! I meant to write long letter and tell you all the things Im doing at school, but the bell was ringing, so I just have to stop here. 2008年（全国卷I）Dear Alice,I have just got some good mews to tell to you. I win a national prize for painting last week. Myfather was so pleasing that he suggested I go to England for a holiday. Id like to staying there for half a month, visiting place of interest or practicing my English as well. Weve been writing to each for nearly a year now. I have often dreamed of talk face to face with you. I imagine youll be at vacation yourself by that time. Perhaps we could go out do some sightseeing together. 2008年（全国卷II）If I have the honor to be chose to work for the 29th Olympic Games, I will at first improve my English so that I can talk easily about foreign visitors. Second, I will learn more about history of the Olympicsas good as the 2008 Olympic Games. Third, since I was familiar with Beijing, I can help visitors find their ways in the city. Finally, I should be able to tell visitors about our history and culture or show them their great achievements. In short, I will do my best to help making the Games a success. 2009年（全国卷II）Hi Susan,Im sorry that I wasnt able to return to your bike on time yesterday. I mean to give it back to you before four in the afternoon, and I was hold up on my way back. Just before I turned corner of Park Street, I happened to see a accident. The little girl was hurt and her mother needed help. So I helped them going to the nearest hospital. I stayed here for one and a half hour and made sure that the girl was all right. When I got back, it were already 6 pm. I hope you understand.2010年（全国卷I）It was a chance of a lifetime to win the firstprize on the Story Writing Show. All I had to dowas towrite a story or present it. My teachershave been telling me how great my writing was.So if they had said was true, I would have a chanceof winning the prize. What were better, I had usefulhelp. There was Uncle Chen, gentleman livingnear my house, who was a very much famous writer.He agreed to reading my story and give me someadvices on how to write like a real writer.2010年（全国卷II）Christie was one of my best friend at high school. At that time, we often spend time together. Thank to her help, I made great progress in my study. Last year, she decided to study to abroad. In other words, we would be separated long time. Before her leaving off, I prepared a gift to show my best wishes to him. She said it was the best gift she has ever had. From then on, weve kept touch with each other through e-mails. I look forward to see her again in the near future.2011年（全国卷I）One of my unforgettable memory of my school inXinjiang is that of lunches we brought from our homes.I hold my lunch-box in my hand when I was going toschool. The smell from it was very good. Since the lunchbell finally rang, my friends and me met under a tall treeand had our lunches. My best friend Aigulie was usedto share her Nang with me. Nang is a specially kind ofcake in Xinjiang. I likethem very much. NowAigulie andI study at different colleges or we can only see each otherduring the summer vacation. I think over her a lot and I missthe food and the good time we had together.2011年（全国卷II）Dear George,Its been a week after we left your family and we are now back home. Thank you very much forshowing them around your city and providing us for the wonderful meals. After we said goodbye to you, we went to Washington D.C. , that we stayed for three days. My brother was so much fond of themuseums there that he begged my parents to staying another couple of day. However, my father had toreturn to work on Monday so we fly back last Saturday afternoon. It was really a nice experience. If youd like to make trip to our city some day, I will be better than happy to be your guide. 2012年（全国卷I）Every one of us can make a great efforts to cut off the use of energy in our country. To begin with, all of us can start reducing to the use of oil by driving only when we have a real need. That wont easy, I know, but we have to start anywhere. Whats more, we can go to work by bike once and twice a week, and we can also buy smaller cars that burn less oil. Other way is to watch our everyday use of water and electric at home. For example, how many times have you walked out of a room and leave the lights or television when no one else was there? 2012年（全国卷II）Dear Editor,Im writing to tell you opinion about water saving. Water is important. We, as well as animal, cannotlive without water and neither agriculture or industry can go without it. Yet it seemed water is becoming less and less. Many countries in the world find we dont have enough water. To deal with a problem, I think, we should first go all out to plant trees though trees will help save water. Next, no drinking water should left running. Third, we should find ways to reuse the water using in washing,especially bath water for which is quite a lot, and that will save much water.2013年（新课标1）I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. I wasonly four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now. I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known. 2013年（新课标2）The book Im reading of talks about afternoon tea in Britain. It is said to have started in the early 1800s. Have tea in the late afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner, that might not be served until 8 oclock at night. This custom soon becomes another meal of day. Interesting, it had a connection by the British porcelain（瓷器）industry. Tea in China was traditionally drank from cups without handle. When tea got popular in Britain, there was a crying need for good cup with handles to suit British habits. This made for the grow in the porcelain industry.2013年 (全国一卷）My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month. It is in the downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport. We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath. What I liked best were the free high-speed Internetconnection in the room. I checked my email messages every day. I also shared for my friendsmany photos taking in Beijing. The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dish. It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing.2013年 (全国二卷）Two years before, I traveled to Brazil and I rented for a car.Unfortunate, I had an accident and hit another car, and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week. I called my parents, so I did not tell them what had happened. I knew that they will be worried about myself because I was so farther away, and that my mother would not sleep if she knew. Therefore, I told them interested stories and how I was enjoying Brazil. As a result, nobody knew truth. I still think that it was the right thing to do.2014年 (全国一卷）Nearly five years before, with the help by our father, my sister and I planted some cherrytomatoes（圣女果）in our back garden. Since then for all these year we had been allowing tomatoes to self-seed where they please. As result, the plants are growing somewhere. The fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste. There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors. Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problem. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost!2014年 (全国二卷）My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m. They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didnt need to do so many homework. Therefore, we have more time with after-school activities. For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sport for one hour every day. My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and treesaround the classroom buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest or sat by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends.2015 (全国一卷）When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have beenshown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in isgetting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out. We must found ways to protect your environment. If we fail to do so, well live to regret it.2015 (全国二卷）One day, little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent. It was very crowded. Tony saw a toy on a shop window. He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop. After looks at the toy for some time, he turned around and found where his parents were missing. Tony was scared and begun to cry. A woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a shop. Five minutes later. Tony saw parents. Mom said, “How nice to see you again! Dad and I were terrible worried.” Tony promised her that this would never happen again.2001年（全国卷II）76. eitherneither 77. 去掉any 78. 在can后面加to 79. diddo 80. familyhome 81. subjectsubjects 82. athe 83. 去掉about 84. andor 85. 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