英语2018二轮复习写作部分.doc

英语二轮复习写作部分应用文（一）感谢信(2016福建漳州八校高三第三次联考)假设你是李华，临近高考了，你给高中英语老师Miss.Li写一封感谢信，内容要点如下：1感谢她给你的帮助；2你为高考做的准备；3你对大学的展望以及上大学后的打算。注意：1.词数100左右； 2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3开头已为你写好，但不计入总词数。Dear Miss Li，Long time no see.Thank you for your kind help with my study.Time flies，I am senior three now._ _Yours truly，Li Hua【我来构思】请列出要点提纲1. 为什么要感谢老师2. 你为高考做了哪些准备3. 你如何才能是你的大学生活丰富多彩？你将如何去做？【我来借鉴】欣赏并背诵满分作文Dear_Miss_Li，Long_time_no_see.Thank_you_for_your_kind_help_with_my_study.Time_flies,_I_am_Senior_Three_now. Because I was devoted to my study every day, I have learned much knowledge, which will definitely promise me a good performance in my college entrance exams. I hope that I can be admitted into my dream university, one with good equipment and learned professors, who can offer me guidance when I am in difficulty. Of course, there will be exams in college to check my study.I wont bury myself in books the whole day. Instead, Ill be active and join many associations where I can develop my social skills and my potential. I firmly believe that when we have a common ground I can make my college life more colorful.Yours_truly，Li_Hua【我来改写】依据括号内提示改写满分作文Dear_Miss_Li，Long_time_no_see.Thank_you_for_your_kind_help_with_my_study.Time_flies,_I_am_Senior_Three_now.Devoted to my study every day(每天投身于学习；用非谓语动词作状语), I have learned much knowledge, which will definitely promise me a good performance in my college entrance exams. I hope that I can be admitted into my dream university, which has good equipment and learned professors (拥有好的设备和博学的教授；用非限制性定语从句)who can offer me guidance when I am in difficulty. Of course, there will be exams in college to check my study. Ill be active and join many associations where I can develop my social skills and my potential instead of being buried in in books the whole day (而不是整天埋头于书本；用instead of 短语作状语). Instead, I firmly believe that only when we have a common ground can I make my college life more colorful (只有当我们有了共同的基础的时候，我才能使我的大学生活更加多彩；用倒装句).Yours_truly，Li_Hua【对点训练】【广东省深圳市2016年高三第二次调研】假定你是李华，你所在的“中国剪纸文化的传承（inheritance）和发展”课题研究小组刚刚获得今年的“中国大智汇创新研究挑战赛（China Thinks Big 2016）”二等奖。请你写信给你的外籍教师史密斯先生，感谢他一直以来对你们的支持与帮助。要点如下：1. 比赛时间：8月 18-20 日；2. 比赛地点：哈佛（Harvard）上海中心；3. 课题与收获；4. 感谢与祝愿。注意：1. 词数 100左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 信的开头与结尾已为你写好。Dear Mr. Smith,I am Li Hua, a student of yours. Yours, Li Hua【参考范文】Dear Mr. Smith, I am Li Hua, a student of yours. Im writing to share with you the good news that our research group has just won the second prize in China Thinks Big 2016. It was recently held in Harvard Shanghai Center, from August 18 to 20. Here could I give a very big “Thank you” for your continuous help and encouragement? In fact, the research on the Inheritance and Development of Chinese Paper-cutting has benefited us a lot. It enables us to know more about our traditional cultures. It also increases our sense of pride to do more to promote its inheritance and development. We do hope you can give us further instructions and wish you all the best! （二）申请信(2016株洲质检)假定你是李华，诺丁汉大学(The University of Nottingham)2017年计划在中国招收一批优秀高中毕业生，你准备报名。请你向该校招生负责人Dr Dan发一封电子邮件，包括以下内容：1简要说明你的意向及个人情况；2适当咨询申请入学的准备工作(如：笔试、面试的时间以及考查重点、学费等)；3具体询问学校的课程安排以及学生的在校学习、课外活动、业余生活、住宿等情况。注意：1.词数100左右。2文中不能出现可能透露考生真实身份的任何信息。【我来构思】请列出要点提纲1. 写信的目的自身的情况。2. 入学的准备工作有哪些。3. 学校的课程等与学校生活相关的事宜。【我来借鉴】欣赏并背诵满分作文Dear Dr Dan，Im writing to ask for some information about your school and how to be admitted to your university.As a senior 3 girl, I have always been considering going abroad for further studies, and I suppose it will benefit me greatly in the long term. Im an outstanding student and good at physics and biology, including English of course and I hope to grasp this opportunity to realize my dream.Something that puzzles me is that I dont know the exact time for the test and interview, and also I am confused about what I should prepare for the test. Besides this, I will be very grateful if you could introduce me something about the school life in your university, especially the afterschool activities, sparetime life and the tuition.Thank you so much and Im looking forward to your reply.Yours faithfully，Li Hua【我来改写】依据括号内提示改写满分作文Dear Dr Dan，Im writing to ask for some information about your school and how to be admitted to your university.As a senior 3 girl, I have always been considering going abroad for further studies, which I suppose will benefit me greatly in the long term(我希望从长远来看它会对我有很大的好处；用定语从句). Im an outstanding student and good at physics and biology, including English of course and I hope to grasp this opportunity to realize my dream.What puzzles me (令我迷惑的是；主语从句)is that I dont know the exact time for the test and interview, and also I am confused about what to be prepared for the test（为这次考试准备什么；疑问词加不定式结构）. Besides this, I will greatly appreciate it (我将不胜感激；用appreciate句式)if you could introduce me something about the school life in your university, especially the after-school activities, spare-time life and the tuition.Thank you so much and Im looking forward to your reply.Yours faithfully，Li Hua【对点训练】(2016河南洛阳一高月考)假如你是李华，从报纸上看到中老年英语培训机构MidSenior ESCH面向高中毕业生招聘暑期兼职辅导员，负责学员课间服务事项。请根据下面的广告内容用英语写一份求职信。ASSISTANTS WANTEDValuable chances are open for high school graduates who are good at English. Their work is to tend the senior students during the break.Requirements attached：1.Good at English.2.Experienced priority.Contact us by email：.注意：1.词数100左右；2.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。Dear Sir/Madam， Yours sincerely，Li Hua【参考范文】Dear Sir/Madam，Id like to apply for the post of assistant which was advertised in the newspaper. I found this position quite appealing to me.Ive just graduated from high school. Luckily Im good at English and I can speak English fluently. In addition，I have previous experience. During my stay in middle school， I used to be a volunteer and looked after the old people in a nursing home on weekends.In short I believe my experience and fluent oral English will be a great help for me in doing the work. Im available for interview at any time. It would be appreciated if I can get your offer.Yours Sincerely，Li Hua （三）道歉信(2016全国)假定你是李华，与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店，因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：1表示歉意；2.说明原因；3.另约时间。注意：1.词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【我来构思】请列出要点提纲1. 向Bob道歉并说明原因。2. 补救的措施。【我来借鉴】欣赏并背诵满分作文Dear Bob，How is everything going? Much to my regret, I wouldnt be able to go to the bookstore with you.Im very sorry I have to pick up my best friend at the airport and it is quite out of expectation, so I will be fully occupied then. Since this is the first time for him to visit our city, he does have great trouble in finding his hotel. By the way, I will appreciate it if you could rearrange the schedule. How about 9 oclock this Saturday? If so, I will put everything else aside to make it up to you.Once again, I apologize for any inconvenience which was caused by me.Yours，Li Hua【我来改写】依据括号内提示改写满分作文Dear Bob，How is everything going? Not being able to go to the bookstore with you makes me so regretful(不能和你一起去书店使我如此的遗憾；用动名词作主语).Im very sorry I have to pick up my best friend at the airport, which is quite out of expectation(这很出乎意料；用非限制性定语从句定语从句), so I will be fully occupied then. For the first time to visit our city(第一次到这个城市；用介词短语和不定式作状语), he does have great trouble in finding his hotel. By the way, I will appreciate it if you could rearrange the schedule. How about 9 oclock this Saturday? If so, I will put everything else aside to make it up to you.Once again, I apologize for any inconvenience caused by me（由我导致的；用分词作状语）.Yours，Li Hua【对点训练】(2016浙江杭州二中月考)假如你是李明，你从朋友Chris处借的电子词典不幸遗失。现在，请用英文给他写封信，内容包括：1.告知词典遗失并致歉；2.描述遗失经过；3.说明暂时无法赔偿及原因；4.承诺一定赔偿并再次请求原谅。注意：1.字数:100词左右;2.信的开头与结束语已为你写好，并不计入总词数。范文：Dear Chris,Im sorry to tell you that Ive lost your new electronic dictionary. Now Im expressing my deepest apology for my carelessnessActually, I put the dictionary in my schoolbag after we met in McDonalds yesterday. But to my sorrow, it was stolen on my way home. I tried to get it back but failed. How angry and guilty I felt!This morning, I went to buy the same dictionary in some bookstores but ts very expensive. However, I promise that Ill tighten my belt these days to get you a completely new one by the end of this month. Please forgive me again and accept my sincere apology.Best wishes! Yours,Li Ming（四）介绍信(2016湖南东部六校高三联考)假如你是李华，你的加拿大网友Mike圣诞节期间打算来中国，他对中国传统文化非常感兴趣，希望你能为他推荐一些名胜古迹。请你用英语给他发一封电子邮件，向他推荐一个或两个你所喜欢的名胜古迹。要点包括：1简介你推荐的名胜古迹；2叙述你推荐的理由；3表达你的祝愿。注意：1.词数100左右；2文中不能出现可能透露考生真实身份的任何信息。_Li Hua【我来构思】请列出要点提纲1. 你推荐的名胜古迹是哪里2. 你推荐此名胜的理由3. 你的美好祝愿【我来借鉴】欣赏并背诵满分作文Dear Mike，Im glad to know that you are coming to China during Christmas. The following is a brief introduction about some places of interest that I strongly recommend to you.The Great Wall of China is one of the greatest wonders of the world and is visible from outer space. Because of its rich history and magnificent appearance，the Great Wall attracts a lot of tourists，scientists，and historians.The famous West Lake is like a brilliant pearl which is embedded in the beautiful and fertile shores of the East China Sea near the mouth of the Hangzhou Bay. The view of the West Lake is simply charming. Different time and different weather make it a different scene.Look forward to your arrival. There are many other wonderful places here. Wish you a nice journey.Yours，Li Hua【我来改写】依据括号内提示改写满分作文Dear Mike，Im glad to know that you are coming to China during Christmas. The following is a brief introduction about some places of interest strongly recommended to you by me(我强烈向你推荐的；分词作定语).The Great Wall of China is one of the greatest wonders of the world， which is visible from outer space（在外太空就能看得到它；用非限定性定语从句）. Owing to/Thanks to/As a result of(由于；用because of 同意的短语替换) its rich history and magnificent appearance，the Great Wall attracts a lot of tourists，scientists，and historians.The famous West Lake is like a brilliant pearl embedded in the beautiful and fertile shores （镶嵌在美丽富饶的海岸；分词作定语）of the East China Sea near the mouth of the Hangzhou Bay. The view of the West Lake is simply charming. Different time and different weather make it a different scene.Look forward to your arrival. There are many other wonderful places here. Wish you a nice journey.Yours，Li Hua【对点训练】(2016皖南八校二模)星光中学(Xingguang High School)近期举行了一次登山活动。假定你是学校英语报记者，请写一篇短文，报道此次活动。内容包括：1时间与地点：4月10日，大青山(Daqing Mountain)；2活动的过程；3你对这次活动的评论。注意：1.词数100左右；2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【参考范文】In order to encourage the students to take outdoor exercise, our school organized mountain climbing on April 10. Hundreds of us took part in it.It was a nice day. At 8：00 am, we gathered at the foot of Daqing Mountain and set out for the top in high spirits. All the way we were chatting, singing and laughing, enjoying the fresh air and the beautiful scenery. When some fell behind, others would come and offer help. About 2 hours later, we all reached the top. Bathed in the sunshine, we jumped and cheered with joy.The activity benefited us a lot. Not only did it get us close to nature and give us relaxation from heavy school work, it also promoted the friendship among us. What a wonderful time!（五）求助信(2016临沂一模)假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Jamie发邮件告诉你他对中国传统文学非常感兴趣，但是在阅读时遇到了很多困难，比如很多汉字不认识，读不懂文章的意思等等，希望得到你的帮助。请用英文给Jamie回邮件。内容要点如下：1表示理解并给予安慰；2提出建议并说明理由。注意：1.词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。信中不能出现本人相关信息。【我来构思】请列出要点提纲1. 学汉语是有些难，即使对中国人来说也不容易，无需烦恼。2. 给出学习汉语的一些方法或建议。3. 祝其成功。【我来借鉴】欣赏并背诵满分作文I am more than glad to know that you are interested in the traditional Chinese literature. Its never easy to learn Chinese characters and essays. Even native Chinese speakers may find it hard to learn them well, so you dont have to feel upset. Here are some useful tips.First, turn to the Internet for help when you have a problem and there you can learn how to read and write the characters. Second, you can learn from Chinese people around and Im always here to help. But the most important is to keep on learning and reading. You are sure to make progress!Best wishes!Yours，Li Hua【我来改写】依据括号内提示改写满分作文 Knowing that you are interested in the traditional Chinese literature(知道你对中国传统文化感兴趣，用非谓语作状语), I am more than glad. Nothing is easier (没有什么更容易；用否定加比较级)than learning Chinese characters and essays. It is even hard for native Chinese speakers to learn them well(甚至于对说汉语的本地人来说学好汉语都很难；用形式主语), so you dont have to feel upset. Here are some useful tips.First, turn to the Internet for help when you have a problem, where you can learn how to read and write the characters（在那里你能学习读和写汉字；用定语从句）. Second, you can learn from Chinese people around and Im always here to help. But keeping on learning and reading (持续的学习和阅读；动名词作主语)is the most important. You are sure to make progress!Best wishes!Yours，Li Hua【对点训练】(2016昆明质检)假设你是李华，是一名高中生。你的英国笔友Frank因体型过胖，经常遭到同学的嘲笑，为此他感到非常郁闷。上周，他发来电子邮件向你求助。请根据下列要求用英语给他回一封电子邮件：1同情他的处境；2帮他分析遇到的问题；3给他提出一些建议。注意：1.词数100左右；2开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Frank，I am Li Hua. I am sorry to know from your email thatI hope my advice would be of use to you.Yours，Li Hua【参考范文】Dear Frank，I am Li Hua. I am sorry to know from your email that youre having such a bad time at the moment. I am writing to offer you some advice.Actually many of us may meet some problems in our life. So we should face them bravely. You tell me that you are laughed at by your classmates for your obesity. That is why you feel frustrated these days. I would advise you not to care about what others say about you. If you were not bothered by what they say, they might stop making fun of you. Besides, youd better expend some time in taking exercise so that you can lose weight. Nothing is more important than good health.I hope my advice would be of use to you.Yours，Li Hua（六）演讲稿(2016湖北八校高三第一次联考)高考临近，学习时间变紧，任务加重，很多同学内心压力大，学习效率低下。请为即将举行的班会写一篇英语演讲稿，谈谈你对怎样保持良好的精神状态，高效而健康地进行复习备考的看法。要点如下：1坚持锻炼；2合理计划；3注意饮食。注意：1.词数100左右；2不可逐条翻译；3可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；4开头语已为你写好。Dear classmates，Good afternoon!Today is December 8th.The college entrance exams are really around the corner now. 【我来构思】请列出要点提纲1.陈述现象2.提出措施坚持锻炼； 合理计划 注意饮食【我来借鉴】欣赏并背诵满分作文Dear classmates，Good afternoon!Today_is_December_8th._The_college_entrance_exams_are_really_around_the_corner nowAs time becomes limited and schoolwork begins to pile up，many students start to feel much stressedsome find themselves very unenergetic and not able to concentrate; some even fall asleep in class. What should we do to avoid those problems?First of all，physical exercise is the best way to reduce stress and help people relax. Therefore it is highly advisable that we have some physical exercise after some hours of mental exercise. Second，having a proper study plan is important too，since it can remind us what we should do next and is helpful for us to do our work more efficiently. Last but not least，we should pay special attention to our diet as well. Anyway，a balanced and nutritious diet can keep a busy mind smart and energetic. If we can do these three things mentioned above we will make our time of study and preparation work enjoyable, efficient and fruitful.Thank you.【我来改写】依据括号内提示改写满分作文Dear classmates，Good afternoon!Today_is_December_8th._The_college_entrance_exams_are_really_around_the_corner_nowWith time becoming limited and schoolwork beginning to pile up(随着时间变得紧迫和学习任务的增加；with短语作状语)，many students start to feel much stressedsome find themselves very unenergetic and not able to concentrate; some even fall asleep in class. What should we do to avoid those problems? To begin with, to reduce stress and help people relax, it is the best way to do some physical exercises (首先，为了减少压力和帮助大家放松，最好的方法是去做一些体育运动；用非谓语动词作状语和形式主). Therefore it is highly advisable that we have some physical exercise after some hours of mental exercise. Second，having a proper study plan is of great importance (是非常重要的；用of+抽象名词)too，since it can remind us what to do (去做什么；用代词+不定式)and is helpful for us to do our work more efficiently. Last but not least，we should pay special attention to our diet as well. Anyway，a balanced and nutritious diet can keep a busy mind smart and energetic.Only if we can do these three things mentioned above will we （只有做到以上三点我们才能；用倒装句）make our time of study and preparation work enjoyable，efficient and fruitful.Thank you. 【对点训练】(2016福建省五校高中毕业班统一考试)你校将要举行一次主题为“How to Communicate with Our Parents”的英语演讲比赛，请你用英语写一篇演讲稿。要点如下：1尊重并信任父母；2常与父母聊天；3换位思考问题。注意：1.词数100左右；2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：换位思考put oneself in sbs shoesHow to Communicate with Our ParentsHello，everyone，Id