如何写好英文句子.ppt

如何写好书面表达句子 1 Awayofsaying I msorry 2 Pattingthestomachbeforeameal 3 Thebreadmymothermakesismuchbetterthanwhatyoucanbuyatthestore 4 Tomakefriendsintheschoolwhichwasnotfarfrommynewhome Practice 判断是否是句子 N Y N N 无论字数多少 只要有主语和谓语 动词 而且能表达完整的意义的一句话就是一个句子 1 Iamtired 2 Pressingone spalmtogetherandrestingone sheadonthebackofone shandwhileclosingtheeyesasifsleepingmeans Iamtired 双手合拢 闭上眼 把头靠在手背上像睡觉的样子 意思是说 我累了 1 Comeinandsitdown please You 省略主语 或主谓语 的句子 2 Whataterribleday Whataterribledayitis 1 Workinghard youwillmakegreaterprogress 2 Workhardandyou llmakegreaterprogress 3 Ifyouworkhard youwillmakegreaterprogress 努力学习 你就会有进步 1 辨别下列句子种类 简单句 并列句 复合句 1 Workinghard youwillmakegreaterprogress 简单句 只有一个主语 或并列主语 和一个谓语 或并列谓语 2 Workhardandyou llmakegreaterprogress 并列句 由并列连词把两个 以上 的简单句连在一起 并列连词 and notonly butalso neither nor but so for or 否则 3 Ifyouworkhard youwillmakegreaterprogress 复合句 简单句中的某一个成分由一个句子来充当 复合句种类 名词性从句 定语从句 状语从句 典型错误 1 Theoldmanlikestakeawalkinthevillageaftersupper Theoldmanlikestakingawalkinthevillageaftersupper 2 Ienjoytalkwithhimoveracupofcoffee Ienjoytalkingwithhimoveracupofcoffee 一个简单句不能同时有两个谓语 记住 在英语中 一个句子必须且只能有一个谓语或并列谓语 1 要赶上别人 你最好更努力 2 这事故是怎么发生的 Howdidtheaccidentoccur happen comeabout 二 常见的五大句型 主语 不及物动词 occur happen breakout takeplace comeabout rise Tocatchupwithothers you dbetterworkharder 常见的系动词 be seem appear become go get grow turn look sound feel taste smell 2 主语 系动词 表语 他烧的饭菜味道很不错 Whathecookstastesdelicious 2 集邮听起来是个好主意 Collectingstampssoundsagoodidea 3 主语 及物动词 宾语 他不知道Bill是否已逃脱 HewonderedifBillhadmanagedtoescape 2 我原不想这么粗鲁 Ididn tmeantobesorude 3 我外甥每天下午练习弹钢琴三个小时 Mynephewpractisesplayingthepianoforthreehourseveryafternoon 4 主语 及物动词 间接宾语 直接宾语 give offer teach tell read bring pass lend write throw send ask make buy do get cook sing 1 MymotherwouldreadmeastorybeforeIwenttobed MymotherwouldreadastorytomebeforeIwenttobed 2 Buymeamorningnewspaper please Buyamorningnewspaperforme please 5 主语 及物动词 宾语 宾补 Angrily hefoundhismoneystolen 2 ThegrowthinpopulationmadeNewYorkthelargestcityintheUSA 3 你认为一天内完成这任务可能吗 Doyouthinkitpossibletofinishthetaskinoneday 4 他让我在大门口等了一小时了 Hekeptmewaitingforanhouratthegate 高考书面表达部分句型 N2003 It sasmallflatof25squaremeters withabedroom abathroomandakitchen N2000 Thecardidn tstopbutdroveoffatgreatspeedheadingwest 浙2006 Someothershavejusttheoppositeopinion N1998 Thefarmworkersgaveusawarmwelcome N2001 Thegovernmentcalledonschoolstoreducethelearningload 浙2006 Thereasonisthatittakeslesstimetounderstandthewholestory N2000 IwaswalkingalongParkRoadtowardstheeastwhenanelderlymancameoutoftheparkontheothersideofthestreet N2002 40 thinkthatfeesshouldbechargedbecauseyouneedmoneytopaygardenersandotherworkers 浙2005 butthemostcommonwayistoholdabirthdayparty atwhichfriendsgettogethertohavefundrinking singinganddancing 记住 如果是一个复合句 主句和从句都应该分别有自己的主语和谓语 典型错误 1 Thosewhoeattoomuchwilleasilyill Thosewhoeattoomuchwilleasilygetill 2 Whenhewalkinginthepark hefeltalittletired When hewas walkinginthepark hefeltalittletired 浙2006 IthinkIcanstayathome readingquietlyinasituationofmyown and 浙2006 Inaword toreadtheoriginalworkisbetterthantoseethefilmbasedonit 浙2004 Besidesplentyofexamples ithasmanynotestellingyouhowtouseaword 三 写作中的句型转换 把其中一句改为分词短语Hehadfinishedsupper Hewentouttohaveawalkthen Havingfinishedsupper Afterfinishingsupper hewentouttohaveawalk A 合并为简单句 三 写作中的句型转换 2 把其中一句改为介词短语Hewasbroughtin Hishandsweretiedbehindhisback Hewasbroughtinwithhishandstiedbehindhisback B 合并为复合句1 TheChineseartistsweretoperformherethatnight Thenewscheeredeveryoneofus 用同位语从句 ThenewsthattheChineseartistsweretoperformherethatnightcheeredeveryoneofus 2 Inrecentyears Beijinghasbeenadvancingveryfast Allthismakespeople slivesconvenient pleasantandcolorful 用非限制性定语从句 Inrecentyears Beijinghasbeenadvancingveryfast whichmakespeople slivesconvenient pleasantandcolorful C 把复合句改为简单句 Shewasanxioustofindajobaftershefinishedherstudies Havingfinishedherstudies Afterfinishingherstudies shewasanxioustofindajob 1 把从句改为分词短语 C 把复合句或并列句改为简单句 2 把其中一句改用介词短语 Wearehavingclassesandthedoorsareopenallthetime Wearehavingclasseswiththedoorsopenallthetime 四 在整篇文章中 避免只使用一两个句式 要灵活运用诸如倒装句 强调句 主从复合句 分词状语等 1 Thoughheiswealthy heworkshard Wealthyas thoughheis heworkshard Inspiteof Despitehiswealth heworkshard 四 在整篇文章中 避免只使用一两个句式 要灵活运用诸如倒装句 强调句 主从复合句 分词状语等 2 Hedidn tgetupuntil7o clock Itwasnotuntil7o clockthathegotup Notuntil7o clockdidhegetup 3 Assoonaswearrivedatthevillage wewerewarmlywelcomedbythevillagers 尝试多样化表达 Onarrivingatthevillage wewerewarmly Themoment minute instantwearrivedatthevillage wewere Wewerewarmlywelcomedbythevillagersimmediately directly instantlywearrivedatthevillage Nosooner Hardlyhadwearrivedatthevillagethan whenwe 五 using advancedwords 使用词组 习语谚语 表强调的词来代替一些单词 以增加文采 1 Don tworryaboutyourexpensesforuniversityeducation andwewilltrytohelpyou andwewillmakethegreatesteffort doourbest tryeverymeanstohelpyou 2 Atthattimethetaxidriverhadtoaskthetouristforhelp Atthattimethetaxidriverhadnochoicebuttoturnto couldn thelpbutturntothetourist Icameupwithagoodidea 3 Ihadagoodidea Agoodideaoccurredto struck cametome 简单句 分词短语 介词短语 复合句 把复合句改为简单句 把从句改为分词短语 把从句改为介词短语 三 避免只使用一两个句式 要灵活运用诸如倒装句 强调句 主从复合句 分词状语等 四 使用高级词汇代替一些单词 以增加文采 一 写对每一个简单句 二 句型转换 写好书面表达句子 1 Theyarrivedattheschool Theyfeltthehappyatmosphere Practice 合并下列句子 Whentheyarrivedattheschool theyfeltthehappyatmosphere Arrivingattheschool theyfeltthehappyatmosphere 2 Iwillbegivenanotherchance Iwillsucceed 3 HewantstoimprovehisEnglish Hestudieshard IfIamgivenanotherchance Iwillsucceed Givenanotherchance Iwillsucceed InordertoimprovehisEnglish hestudieshard 听到这个消息 他们变的很激动 thenews theygotexcited 2 尽管被告知许多遍 他仍然重复这个错 manytimes hestillrepeatedthemistake 3 除非被邀请发言 你应该在会议上保持沉默 Unless tospeak youshouldkeepsilentatthemeeting Hearing Havingbeentold invited 用非谓语动词形式填充 用非谓语动词形式翻译 1 面对困难时 他从不放弃 2 引入市场后 该产品大获成功 3 做完作业后 他回家了 Facedwith Facingdifficulties henevergivesup Introducedtothemarket theproductmadeagreatsuccess Havingfinishedhishomework Afterfinishinghishomework hereturnedhome Ontheothersideofthestreetstandsaclocktower 她怀里抱着个婴儿在校门口等人 用介词短语 Sheiswaitingforsomeoneattheschoolgatewithababyinherarms 街的另一边有一座钟塔 用倒装结构 尝试多样化表达方式 一 就受到欢迎 AssoonasLienZhanandhiswifearrivedattheairport theywerewarmlywelcomed Onarrivingattheairport LienZhanandhiswife LienZhanandhiswifewerewarmlywelcomeddirectly themomenttheyarrivedattheairport Nosooner HardlyhadLienZhanandhiswifearrivedattheairportthan whenthey 2011年一位用行动宣讲环保概念的年轻人 低碳哥 Low carbonBrother 在网上走红了 他的主要做法有