中考英语高分作文100篇.doc

中考高分作文100篇第一篇：写作要求现在我们周围的环境污染越来越严重。作为一个中学生，我们应节约资源，保护环境，从我们身边的小事做起，做一个“低碳生活”的中学生。请以“My Low-carbon Life”为题，写一篇短文描述自己的“低碳生活”。内容包括：1。地球的污染越来越严重，我们能看到森林被砍伐、水污染和空气污染。2。你是怎样从身边小事做起，做到“低碳生活”的。如：每天步行上学、离开教室及时关灯和电扇、充分利用纸张、节约用水等。3。号召更多的人加入到“低碳生活”中来。作文要求：1。不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。2。语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文的题目已经给出，不计入总词数。My Low-carbon LifeThe environmental pollution is worse and worse today。优秀满分范文My Low-carbon LifeThe environmental pollution is worse and worse today。 Many trees are cut down， and water and air are polluted。 As a student I try to have a low-carbon life to save energy and reduce pollution。Firstly， I often walk to school。 It can reduce air pollution。 Secondly， I always turn off the lights and fans when leaving the classroom。 Thirdly， I always make full use of paper and other school things and never waste water。I wish more students to join me and make the earth more and more beautiful。第二篇：写作要求每当朋友之间即将分手的时候，耳边常常会响起这首歌“朋友啊朋友！你可曾想起了我，如果你正享受幸福，请你忘记我”。请你以Friends为题，写一篇90词左右的短文，可以围绕主题适当展开，阐述交友的重要性和好处。优秀满分范文FriendsWhat are friends？ We often talk about the topic with others。 I think friends are those people who can help you when you are in trouble。 Dont forget the saying， “A friend in need is a friend indeed。” Friends can tell you your mistakes， though what they say is hard for you to listen to。 You can share your happiness， trouble and worry with friends。 Someone also says， “You cant walk any step without a friend。” So I think friends are very important to us。 I would like to make as many friends as possible。第三篇：写作要求最近，你们班就“是否应该帮助陌生人”展开了讨论，同学们就这一话题意见不一，你的看法如何？根据所提供的信息，以“Should We Help Strangers？”为题，写一篇短文。原因赞成帮助他人是美德；帮助他人就是帮助自己；反对怕陷入麻烦；怕被误解；你的观点？（至少两点）要求：1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；2）必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥；3）词数：100左右（征文的开头已给出，不计入总词数）；4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。参考词汇：美德virtueShould We Help Strangers？Recently our class had a discussion about whether we should help strangers.Different students have different opinions。优秀满分范文Should We Help Strangers？Recently our class had a discussion about whether we should help strangers.Different students have different opinions。Some think we should try to help strangers。 Helping others is a virtue，and helping others is helping ourselves.We may come across some trouble and need others help some day.If everyone isnt willing to help us just because we are strangers to them，its hard to imagine what our world will be like。However，some are afraid that helping others can sometimes bring us trouble.Sometimes we are just misunderstood and even have to pay the cost of kindness。In my opinion，we should try our best to help others when they are in need of help，but we should also protect ourselves from getting into trouble.If everyone tries a little kindness，our world will be full of love。第四篇：写作要求某英语报开展“How to Deal with Our Study Problems”征文比赛，请你根据提示的内容，简要描述并适当发表自己的观点，写一篇英语短文。内容要点如下：1。 尽管我们常常感到有压力，但是应该找到合适的方式来解压。可以选择穿像蓝色和白色一样的冷色调来使我们自己感到放松；2。 我们应该足够细心，因为“失之毫厘，谬以千里”；3。 也应该在课业和业余爱好之间取得平衡，试着安排好自己的空余时间；4。 任何时候都不要失去信心。通过努力学习，我们会取得大的进步。5。 有问题时，我们要求：1。 内容须包含所有要点，语句通顺，意思连贯；2。 词数90个左右；3。 第5点的内容需展开合理想象，用2句话补充完整。优秀满分范文How to Deal with Our Study ProblemsAlthough we often feel stressed， we should find suitable ways to deal with stress。 We can wear calm colours like blue and white to make us feel relaxed。 We should be careful enough， because “a miss is as good as a mile”。 We should also achieve a balance between schoolwork and hobbies。 Try to plan your spare time well。 Dont lose heart at any time。 You will make great progress through hard work。 When having problems， we can ask people around us for help。 Its not wise to keep our worries to ourselves。第五篇：写作要求学校英语社团在举办征文比赛，请你根据以下提示内容，写一篇题为“The Person Who Has Influenced Me Most”的英语文章。内容要点如下：1。 对我影响最大的人是我的妈妈，她四十几岁；2。 她总是耐心倾听我的问题，并建议我如何解决它们；3。 作为一名医生，她常说再怎么仔细也不为过。她总是加班，把她的大部分时 间都奉献给了工作；4。 所以，我认为她不仅是位好妈妈，也是名好医生。5。 我希望 要求：1。 内容须包含所有要点，语句通顺，意思连贯；2。 词数90个左右；3。 第5点的内容需展开合理想象，用2-3句话补充完整。优秀满分范文The Person Who Has Influenced Me MostMy mother is the person who has influenced me most。 She is in her forties。 She always listens to my problems patiently。 And she advises me how to solve them。 As a doctor， she often says she cant be too careful。 She often works extra hours。 She has devoted most of her time to her work。 So I think she is not only a good mother but also a good doctor。 I hope I can be a person like her。 I also hope she will pay more attention to her own health。 Shed better have more time to relax herself。 第六篇：写作要求假设不久前你们学校为贫困地区的孩子们筹款举办了一次慈善行活动。请据此在制定的位置上，以“Walk for children in poor areas”为题，为某中学生英文报写一篇报道，内容要点如下：1。 目的：为贫困地区的孩子们筹款2。 10月23日，星期六3。 路径：学校市中心4。 简况：学生把自己分成四人一组，出发前计划好了一切，步行很艰辛，但活动过程中大家互相帮助，互相支持。最终在许多人的帮助下，筹得善款5万多元。5。 感受：每个人都很累，但都很高兴，因为注意：1。 报道须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯；2。 第5要点的内容须用至少2句话展开合理想象，作适当发挥；3。 词数80个左右。优秀满分范文Walk for children in poor areas Not long ago， our school organized a charity walk to raise money for children in poor areas。It was on Saturday， 23 rd October。 We walked from the school to the centre of the city。 Before the walk， we grouped ourselves into a team of four and planned everything well。 It was a hard （tough） work。 But during the walk， we supported and helped each other。 With the help of many people， we raised over （more than） 50，000 yuan in the end。 We all felt tired， but we were very happy。 Because it was a meaningful experience and it was an excellent chance to learn team spirit。第七篇：写作要求“保护环境，人人有责”，你想成为一名绿色使者吗？请行动起来吧！其实，环保就在我们身边。请以“How to Be a Greener Person” 为题，写一篇短文。注意：1。表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；2。短文词数90 左右。文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：draw， both sides of paper， plastics， water tap， collect， waste， can， sortHow to Be a Greener Person？Its our duty to protect our environment around us。 优秀满分范文How to be a greener personIts our duty to protect the inviyonment around us。 When we go to school， we should ride a bike or take a bus。 When we go out for activities， we shouldnt step on the grass。 We cant draw everywhere。 When we go shopping， wed better use a cloth bag。 At home we can save water and electricity。 When we leave a room， we should turn off the ligts。 At school we can collect wast paper and recycle things， such as bottles， cans and plastic bags。 We shoudnt listen to pop music or spit in pulic。 Lets do something to protect our environment。第八篇：写作要求“灿烂星空，谁是真的英雄？”做出惊天动地业绩的人是英雄，为追求真理献出生命的人是英雄，在平凡岗位上默默奉献的人是英雄一。Dr Norman Bethune 1.Natlonality（国籍）： Canada 2.Hobby： taking photos 3.Main stories： saved a lot of Chinese people； opened hospitals； invented medical tools二。Liu Xiang1.Nationality： China2.Hobby： singing3.Main stories： won the first4.Olympic gold medal in the men s 110m hurdles event in Athens； set a world record in the same event in Lausanne从上面信息卡中选择一位英雄，以The Hero in My Heart为题写一篇短文。要求：包含所选信息卡上的内容；适当拓展，如学英雄的感想、行动等；不能出现表明你身份的信息；词数80左右，不含已给出部分。The Hero in My HeartAs we know， most people have heroes in their hearts。 For me， 优秀满分范文1The Hero in My HeartAs we know， most people have heroes in their hearts。 For me， Dr Norman Bethune is the hero in my heart。 He was a great doctor from Canada。Dr Bethune was good at performing operations。 And taking photos was his hobby。 In 1938， he came to China。 He opened hospitals and invented medical tools。 He worked so hard that he saved thousands of Chinese people。 He didnt stop to take care of his own injured hand and died。I am deeply moved by his stories。 So Ill work hard today and do my best to help others。优秀满分范文2The Hero in My HeartAs we know， most people have heroes in their hearts。 For me， Liu Xiang is the hero in my heart。 He is a famous Chinese sportsman。Liu Xiang is good at running。 In 2004， he won his first Olympic gold medal in the men，s 110m hurdles event in Athens。 Then， he set a world record in the same event in Lausanne。 Besides training and taking part in competitions， Liu Xiang also likes singing and he sings well。 With his hard work， he is winning competitions one after another。 This encourages me to study harder from now on。第九篇：写作要求请以“My Favourite Great Book”为题， 根据下面的问题写一篇80个词左右的短文， 注意适当表达自己的看法。1。 Who is the writer of the great book？2。 What is the main idea of the book？3。 Who are the important characters？4。 Whats the theme of the story？优秀满分范文My Favourite Great BookMy favourite great book is The Adventures of Tom Sawyer by Mark Twain。 Tom Sawyer is a lively and clever boy。 He lives with his aunt Polly。 His aunt is strict with him， so he runs to an island in the middle of the Mississippi River with two friends， Huck and Joe。 With Huck， he goes looking for treasure； with Becky， he gets lost in a cave。 And finally Tom and Huck find a box of gold。 Tom is the hero of the story， but there are other important characters。 Becky is pretty with fair hair。 Huck is Toms best friend， and Injun Joe is the bad man of the story。The theme of the story is to do with children growing up and becoming more serious。第十篇：写作要求某英文报社正就青少年与父母关系这一话题开展题为“How to keep a good relationship with parents”的征文活动。请你根据以下要点， 写一篇80个词左右的英语短文参加此次活动： 1。 父母规矩太多， 过于强调学习成绩， 不理解自己等问题；2。 你对这些问题的看法；3。 你与父母保持良好关系的做法。How to keep a good relationship with parentsIn my opinion， I have too many rules at home。 My parents never allow me to go out优秀满分范文How to keep a good relationship with parentsIn my opinion， I have too many rules at home。 My parents never allow me to go out with my friends at night。 They dont allow me to choose my own clothes， either。 And they pay too much attention to my exam results。 I think my parents dont quite understand me。However， I try my best to understand them。 Although they dont allow me to make my own decisions and give me too much pressure， I know that it is because they really love me and want me to have a bright future。In order to keep a good relationship with my parents， I study hard， listen to them， talk to them as friends， tell them my troubles， and help them do more housework。第十一篇：写作要求Mary在学校参加了一个Buddy Club， 从那以后，她改变了很多。请你结合下面所给的提示，写一篇英语短文。In the pastNowPersonalitiesshy， quiet， get nervous easilybrave， outgoingHobbiesreadingreading， singingAbilitiesgood at dancing， singing要求：1。 覆盖要点，可以合理增加细节；2。 80词左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数。Joining a club sometimes changes a person greatly。优秀满分范文Joining a club sometimes changes a person greatly。Mary used to be a shy and quiet girl。 She used to get nervous easily and her face often turned red when she spoke with strangers。 She liked nothing but reading alone in her free time。 However， she has changed a lot since she joined the Buddy Club。 Now， Mary is so brave and outgoing that she isnt afraid of speaking out in public anymore。 Whats more， she has lots of hobbies， such as singing， writing and dancing。 She is good at them as well。People sure change all the time， right？ What we should do is to learn from Mary。 Change ourselves and choose to be the best of ourselves。第十二篇：写作要求以“My Weekend Housework”为题写一篇短文，谈一谈上星期天你做过的家务活，并介绍你喜欢做的家务活和不喜欢做的家务活。用英语写一篇70词左右的短文。要求：内容完整，意思连贯，符合逻辑，表达正确。优秀满分范文My Weekend HouseworkOn last Saturday morning I got up at about seven oclock。 After breakfast， I went to the store and bought some food for the family。 I like doing the shopping。 I think its fun。 Then I swept the floor。 I didnt do the laundry and the dishes。 I dont like do any washing。 In the afternoon I cleaned the yard。 After that I folded my clothes and made my bed。第十三篇：写作要求实现有效的沟通，建立良好的人际关系，不仅要善于表达，更要善于倾听。请你根据表格中所提供的信息，写一篇题为“Being a Good Listener”的英文演讲稿。注意：1。词数90左右。短文开头和结尾部分己为你写好，不计入总词数；2。短文需包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；3。短文中不要出现具体的学校姓名利人名。Being a Good ListenerGood afternoon，everyone！Today Id like to share my ideas of“Being a Good Listener”with you。 Thank you for your listening！优秀满分范文Being a Good ListenerGood afternoon， everyone！Today Id like to share my ideas of “Being a Good Listener” with you。Good listening can always show respect and build good relationships with people。Parents should listen to their children， so they will understand them better and trust each other。 Teachers should also listen to their students so that they can increase their understanding and improve relationships。 Students should listen to their classmates， then their friendship will be increased and they will help each other。Wed better be patient while listening。 Dont forget to keep silent while listening。 In a word， good listening can really make us get closer to each other。Thank you for your listening！第十四篇：写作要求为了进一步增强中学生的安全意识，提高自我保护能力，某校开展了以”安全”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你根据以下要点提示写一篇演讲稿。1。慎重交友 2。遇险报警 3。安全饮食 4。 其他（1-2点）注意：1）内容必须包括所给的全部要点，可适当发挥2）表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；3）词数80左右。文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：be careful， on line， danger， call。for， go badHow to keep safe？ As teenagers we should always keep safety in mind。 But how can we keep safe？ Here are some of my suggestions。 First， 优秀满分范文How to keep safe？As teenagers， we should always keep safety in mind。 But how can we keep safe？ Here are some of my suggestions。 First， we should be careful when we make friends， especially on line。 Second， if we are in danger， we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe。 Also，we ought to eat healthily and safely。 Eating food that goes bad will do harm to our health。 Last but not least， summer is coming， and we must remember its dangerous to swim in the river。 In short， safety must come first ！第十五篇：写作要求你喜欢阅读吗？请你以 “Reading-A good Habit” 为题写一篇有关阅读的短文。内容包括：1。 你的阅读习惯（喜欢的书籍、阅读的时间地点、购书方式等等）。2。 阅读带给你什么益处（至少两点）。3。 号召大家都读书。作文要求：1。 不能照抄原文，不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。2。 语句连贯，词数80词左右。优秀满分范文Reading-A good HabitReading is a very good habit。 I like reading very much。 In my eyes， I think that forming a good reading habit is necessary for us。 It can not only improve our knowledge but also make us to think over more different things efficiently。Besides， we can do some reading every time when we are free。 For example， I often read some of my favorite books in my spare time both at home or in the library。 What I like most are story books because most of them are quite interesting。 Now I often buy my favorite books on line for its big discount。Finally， I like to share my favorite books with our family or my classmates。 Since reading can benefits us a lot， its time for us to have our good reading habit now！ 全国中考语文试题研究中心的吕毅然老师搜集了2016年全国100多个考区的中考作文题，分析和归纳了2016年中考作文题的共性和特性。综合来看，命题彰显出“在稳定中求变化，在变化中显特色”；命题更加鲜活，更加多元，更加富有时代内涵；从而更加有利于考生写出最有意义的人生体验和对生活的思考。了解了2016年中考作文的命题特点，对2017年的中考备考具有重要的启示和指导意义。下面我们跟随吕毅然老师的思路一起去探讨中考作文中的命题奥秘！2016年中考作文命题全景观察综观2016年中考作文题，体现着稳中有变的规律，但仔细研读就会发现，中考作文命题，变的是表述的形式，不变的是命题的规律和写作的主题。综合起来看，2016年中考作文命题，有以下几个特点：一、命题作文比例持续升高，话题作文几乎退出历史舞台在2016年笔者收集到的100套试题中，全命题作文35道，半命题作文18道，材料作文11道，话题作文2道（河北卷与山东聊城卷），选题作文33道，主题作文1道（湖北宜昌卷）。通过这些数据，我们很容易看出，命题作文依旧占有绝对的优势，并有持续上涨的势头，话题作文已经被严重边缘化，材料作文依旧占有一席之地，选题作文的考区逐渐扩大。命题采用小作文和大作文结合形式的考区呈递增之势。全命题作文中，采用“提示导语+命题”形式的较多。提示导语的作用，在于给考生提供一个可资借鉴的思路。有了这一思路的提示，考生在审题时，就大大节约了时间。例如江苏南通市命题一直坚持“关注自身，走进内心，倾吐真言，记录成长”这一命题导向，多年来采用“诗意导语+全命题”的形式，今年的作文命题依然先推出导语：世间万物，彼此分享，将生命千丝万缕地关联。高山流水，春华秋实，我们分享自然的馈赠；诗书礼乐，衣食住行，我们分享人类文明、至爱亲情。分享与成长一路相伴。分享知识、见解、体验，激活思维，启迪了智慧；分享美食、雅趣、乐事，升华情谊，斑斓了岁月。分享是爱的给予式，令幸福加倍，痛楚减半，还原了生命原本的亮丽。这段导语诗意盎然，引领恰当，直击心灵，考生读后定会顿生亲切感、温馨感，以轻松的心态进入对文题“分享，为成长添一抹亮色”的构思。也有的全命题，题目简洁甚至只有一个单音节词，如浙江宁波卷“亮”，这个题目由对“亮”字的几个词典义项引出，这些义项可多角度激发考生思维，从而“联系自己的生活体验”写作。二、“自我”依然是写作的核心新课标有关于初中生作文要“表达自己对自然、社会、人生的感受、体验和思考”这一要求。因此，“自我”依旧是2016年中考作文命题关注的核心。不论是命题作文还是半命题作文、材料作文等，都直接或者间接地提示着要写“自我”。这一母题，又演化出以下几个子题来：一是自我成长。这里的“成长”，已经抛开了身体的成长这一浅层次，而是深入到精神层面，关注人生的经历，体验精神的成长。河北卷的“不可怕”、江苏连云港卷的“让自己美好”和山东淄博卷的“下次，你会做得更好”，透出对自我精神成长的关注和鼓励。二是感恩。人的一生，离不开别人的鼓励与帮助，学会感恩，会使人与人之间的爱无限传递下去，人与人之间的关系也会变得更加和谐愉悦。如“感谢你给了我更多”（山东日照卷）、“感谢有你相伴”（四川巴中卷）、“你是我最（ ）的人”（安徽卷）等。三是提倡亲自体验。李克强总理曾经说过：“喊破嗓子不如甩开膀子。”这句话告诉我们，在问题面前，行动远大于话语。今年的写作命题依然密切关注同学们动手去做、去体验的过程与感爱。如：“我毕竟走过”（重庆A卷）是一种人生的体验；“让我想一想”（江苏南京卷），为体验做好了准备；“学着这样做”（江苏泰州卷），则教给做的方法作文就是以我手写我心，心的感悟来源于生活，而亲自经历，则会有更深刻的体会。四是学会思考。既有对以往生活的追忆，对现实、当前的关注和感悟，也有对未来的理性憧憬和美好展望。对考生而言，分数很重要，“比分数更重要的”（江苏无锡卷）是什么？这一问题，肯定会引起考生的思考。湖北十堰的考题中，有这样的导语：“人在旅途，最美的状态为追赶。有了追赶，不安分的心有了可牵挂的念想，情感的波涛有了可依靠的港湾。于是你追我赶成了快乐的倾慕、成功的源泉和幸福的靠近。人在旅途，最美的状态为追赶，你追赶着，也被追赶着。”“追赶”什么？怎样追赶？这些也同样引人思考。可以说，中考作文几乎是围绕着“自我”而展开，通过自我与社会、人生、自然等方面的关系，考查同学们的生活体验和人生感悟。三、文体出现了特殊限制近三年的中考试题对文体的要求和限制有所增强，这和几年前一律放开的“文体不限”已有明显改观。今年的试题延续了这一特点，有些考区明确对文体的要求，如福建莆田卷要求写一篇记叙文；福建泉州卷要求写一篇记叙文或议论文；湖北黄冈卷要求写记叙文或散文，并且明确提出对于这两种文体的要求：记叙文要求文章叙事清楚，结构完整，内容充实；恰当运用描写、抒情等表达方式，写出真情实感。写散文要求叙事或抒情线索明朗，感情真挚。同学们在平时作文时，就应该注意文体应有的特征。如果文体特征不明显，那就成了四不像，很难得到一个高分。除了一般的实用文体及散文等文学作品体裁，我们还应当熟悉日记、书信、倡议书、演讲稿等应用文体的写作。如“给张山爸爸的一封信”（山东泰安卷），题目本身就明确了是写一封信；“因为（ ），我爱上读书”（山西卷），则要求写一篇演讲稿。这些新的变化，也应该引起我们的注意。四、写作的触角有了更广的延伸今年中考，考查的角度与以往稍有不同，这种不同，体现在引导考生关注自我的同时，还要去关注周围、身边的人。如果说“我们在一起”（山东临沂卷），范围还在同学、亲人之间的话，那么“凡人小事的背后”（湖南长沙卷），则直接引导考生要关注身边的凡人小事，从普遍人、寻常事中发掘出不普遍、不寻常的特质。这一新的延伸，对考生而言有一定的挑战性。五、命题出现新的亮点1。注重思辨的引领。教育的本质，不在于传授学生知识，而在于引导学生进行思考。今年的部分写作命题，引领考生透过想象更真切地把握事物的本质。河南卷，在阅读完“画家费尽心力作了一幅画，在即将完成时，不小心将一滴墨滴在画上，他沮丧极了，想要放弃这幅画。冷静下来后，他反复变换角度看那个墨渍，随后，在墨渍上涂了几笔，墨渍变成了一只飞鸟，与整幅画完美融合”这一材料后，让考生根据自己的联想或感悟来作文，这个题目告诉同学们的就是要学会“多角度思考”，定会有“柳暗花明又一村”的出现。2。传递正能量与美好的希望。这一理念是新课标关于“情感、态度、价值观”要求的全方位的具体体现。作